Critique instead of Review

[Raymond]

In between the 2nd and 3rd novel in my Creepers Saga I'm writing a horror novel titled The Devil's Hour. I'm looking for some opinions critiques of the first 5 sections (7k words). Although any input in general will be helpful, specifically I want thoughts on -
1. Is the main character believable/likeable
2. Does the story "grab" you early on
3. Is this something, based on the opening, that you'd continue to read?
4. Is it too descriptive/not descriptive enough
5. Is the character development adequate
6. Does it move at a good pace
7. Would it be better in 3rd person that 1st person narrative
If you'd like to give your thoughts please leave a message here or email me at Raymond@nightmirrors.com

In exchange you will receive a free ecopy when the book is published and be thanked in the notes section of the book.

[G.G.]

Thanks for giving me the opportunity to read your first chapters. Now hurry up and finish it! I need to know the rest!

Seriously, I loved it. I sent you my thoughts by email. If you have any questions, feel free to ask.