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Title???
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Sep 24, 2008 03:29PM
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It IS good. I like it, it has a certain ring.
YESS EMO STUFF! Okay, I think that it sounds a bit like she turns into a sea nymph? that's just my opinion. Anyway, the title should be something like, Night Rider. Or, Dark Intentions. Or, Drowning Darkness. Something like that.
Dark Elf of the Night. I got nothing. How 'bout The Jade Elf of Darkness. Or, Dark Jade. Or Dark Waters. I Sort of like the last one.
Maybe you could call it, Elf at Twilight: Jade
Since she's neither 'dark' or 'light' and then the bad guy could be the Ninja of Darkness or something.
Haha! Ninja of Darkness, I'm gonna have to use that somehow!
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And saved by grace, you said, "The blank Daughter"
How about something like, The Gray Daughter. Or the Daughter of Mist. Or The Misty Daughter. because mist is made of water, but it lingers in the air, but it's close to the ground. It clouds your vision, but it is not bad either. it could definitly work for a metaphoric/symbolic title
hmmmm...okay, maybe the:Daughter of Twilight. 'Cause it's sort of misty at Twilight. Or,
Daughter of the Storm
cause storms use water, air, earth and all, and then some people think they're bad, and some people think they're good.
Or
Jade of the Storm
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oh, okay. But maybe (if Grace wants to make a series) the series could all start with Jade; and then afterwards have the title of the book on it. Like Daughter of the Storm.
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the first one's okay; it sounds a bit like Eragon though.I think the second one is okay as long as you don't overdo it.
help! ok so im writing a song, and i need help...okhere it is...
im in a cornmaze,
all confused inside,
-------------------(i dont know wat to put here)
but something keeps me in
I know I can't get out unless I escape,
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(mine didn't make much sense. LOL)Um...
But I don't know why!
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I long to get out.
It matches the sylable count better than my first one.
ok i've got one i almost finished a while back but never actually titled and haven't actually written the last chapter.here's the plot.during middle ages - this girl doesn't want to have an arranged marriage so she runs away from home. she ends up getting stabbed by this guy and almost dying. a dragon saves her even though it's against the rules of the dragons' society. this girl becomes friends with the dragon.
when the other dragons find out about the girl they want to kill her, but they have to punish the dragon too: so they banish them. except there's a problem. the girl and the dragon share magic so the girl can't die unless they kill the dragon. but they can't kill the dragon because even though she betrayed them she is still one of them.
how's that? any title ideas?
Hmm...Dragon Rider comes to mind, but that wouldn't work, cuz it's already a title of a book.The Dragon's Society?
What's the name of the girl? The dragon?
AaronFlickerflame
but u see the other dragons don't come into the story that much until the part about killing Aaron
you see why i have trouble with titles?
Ya, titles are hard. Especially when your sister is being disagreeable. *Cough, cough BRIGID* What is wrong (besides the length) with The Warrior Princess, The Emo Prince, The Orb, The Conspiracy, and the Crazy Man Who Controls it All?
LOL XD
LOL XD
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lol, and hey wen r u guys gonna write mor of untitled. IM WAITING! jk, no pressure. let the creative juices flow
sisters. . . goodness. You know, sometimes I love my sister, and then I hate her.
Anyway, back onto topic. I should probably read "untitled." sounds scary. :D
Anyway, back onto topic. I should probably read "untitled." sounds scary. :D
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yeah that's my fault. fiona wrote another chapter already, then we both got distracted by nanowrimo ... and now Injection is being a b*** to me and won't let me write anything else until i'm done. gaahhhh
LOL!!! injection is pointing a gun at your head brigid.....tick,tick,tick! lol jk. its alright though, finish injection!! i love it!!
oh and everyone look at my pick!! its the cover for Freeze!!
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and yeah ... injection is, like, holding me captive. i'm like, "can't i work on something else now?" and it's like, "NO!!! WRITE WRITE WRITE!!!!"
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and fiona, i love that title...but it is a bit lengthy. haha. XD
Injection, injection, injection, injection. I NEED YOU TO WRITE MORE!!!!
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I know . . . :D that was yesterday.
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it's so loooong ... i'm on page 240. it's the longest thing i've written in my entire life. lolz
wow did we get off the topic of titles or what?
titles titles titles.
well no one's asked for a title!
well no one's asked for a title!
and Kenzie i have the same question as Tale, How do you do that smiley?
