The First Generation

[Nermeen]

Hey :) This is my first time posting writing so I'm kinda scared but please read and enjoy - any comments are very much appreciated.

Oh, and the story is about a girl who is trained as a militant in the facility where everyone between the ages of 16 and 20 is trained to go on in their future life.
One of her missions is to eradicate a rebel group living outside the city. But when she gets there, she realises that it was nothing like what she was expecting.

And I don't want to spoil it so I'll shut up

https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...

[Elliott]

Ooh, I really like this! I left you a short review. :D

[Nermeen]

Alicia (Lav) wrote: "Ooh, I really like this! I left you a short review. :D"

Thank you! I'm gonna incorporate the reasons for leaving into the next bit, which I'm writing now but I can see why it's important that it gets done quickly and yeah, I will fix all the grammar :)

Yay! I'm so happy you like it though:)

[Colby]

I read and reviewed it. :)

[Nermeen]

Colby wrote: "I read and reviewed it. :)"

Thank you! I'm writing some background now so hopefully it will incorporate well and all make sense :)

But thanks for reading! It's so motivating haha :)

[Nermeen]

Chapter 2 :)

https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...

Hopefully, it kind of explains a bit more about the city...