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Rachel
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Nov 14, 2009 08:00PM
Okay I guess we've got what our characters are going to look like figured out. We need to move onto who next main characters are going to be and what the landscape, vegetation, and wildlife of her imaginary world is going to be like. Also Annie it would be very excellent if you could post a summary of all the stuff we have planned out so far. Thankies.
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decide what anthea's imaginary (and real) worlds look like, the exact ages of anthea and dante, the characteristics of anthea and dante, the appearance of the supporting characters, the characteristics of the supporting characters, a detailed plot line, decide the setting (exactly) and, eventually, write the story.
looks like a lot, but we can do it.
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it's so unrealistic, there is no vegetables or parents, none of the stuff kids hate in life like going to bed. It looks like, it's always good weather and all the houses are big and cheap and life is good there until her evil aunt and uncle take over. Then everything is chaos. Have i said to much? I like typing these big old paragraphs. So yeah, she has an awesome world to ecape to until her aunt and uncle ruin that too.
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I was thinking the world being more well...dark and more well more fictionish. Like the sky is a crazy red color with a purple sun and everything take on a red tint. Also house could be big or like huttish and in the center of the town there is a large black castle with large towers with big spires. Where her aunt and uncle rule over the town. The town is surrounded by a dark forest and deserts. Also Im sorry Kelc but yours just well reminds me of a dream a 9 or 10 year old would have.
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rachel, your idea for a different color scheme is excellent; i was thinking the same thing myself except for one thing. i was thinking that her real world would be dark and black and without much color, reflecting the anthea's life and moods.
her imaginary world, in contrast, would be full of color and sunlight. until, of course, her "aunt and uncle" characters come and the darkness and blackness spreads.
also, once her aunt and uncle are defeated and she finally returns to her real world, she can meet the guy (dante) and color will spread through that world and she will realize that the real world is not as bad as it seems.
what do you think?
Okay I get what your saying and when I was in creative righting I did a warm up where I described I bleak world everyone loved it so I know how exactly to do it.
