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I think that your book "American Victory" is amazing because it's inspiring as well as mind blowing. Your story has very great events and all the events are told in a very intense and detailed form where I or other readers apply thought and feeling into the texts. I don't have any cons for any part of your book and i personally have no suggestions nor ideas for a sequel to "American Victory".
Sincerely, Eric Rodriguez

I think your book is truly inspiring for the most part, and i love how realistic it its because you wrote it throw your suffering life. I think every thing has worked well. If you made a sequel. It should be with the main characters sister. And thanks for making such a absorbing book.

Your going through a lot right now . Your mom not caring about you . Taking Aphrodite's spot as Leader of the Dark Daughters. What I think you should do is not stress your mother, it seems like she doesn't want you to succeed in whatever your doing in school & as for Aphrodite taking her spot as leader again . Don't let her get it back , because who deserves it more at the end of the day? You do so keep your head high .

you are going through a lot in the hunger game because you do not know what is going to happen but don't be scared because you aim on that bow is impeccable.


If you're writing to the author, give them some advice on what has worked well in the book and what hasn't, and what might work well for a sequel.
If you're writing to a main character in the book, give them some insight or advice about how they might improve their situation or standing in the book and make things better for themselves or other characters.
I think your book jumper is a very good book the reason i think this is because is good is because it jammed with action and its funny. I really like the story you made up i think its great. I like all the charaters and what they do and how they act i think you put it togther perfect.

Just continue trying and don't give up, you'll find Pan eventually. You have your girlfriend and your friends supporting you. Even if the council says no, you have more people saying yes so don't give up.

Dear Kristina Snow,
Even though you may struggle now you'll grow up and everything will get better. If you'd just seek help, and take the time you will succeed. Remember, rome wasn't built in a day. I know you can do this you've gotten through so much more. I am just curious to know how do you possibly think that you can let this thing over come you. I've known you for a long time and, I know that you're better than this. It's best for you and for everyone else.
If you're writing to the author, give them some advice on what has worked well in the book and what hasn't, and what might work well for a sequel.
If you're writing to a main character in the book, give them some insight or advice about how they might improve their situation or standing in the book and make things better for themselves or other characters.