need feedback to my writings please! Hold me I am Falling(Part one of Falling series)

[Lolita]

Hey everyone. i have posted a novella on the site Hold me I am Falling(Part one of Falling series) if any one is interested in reading mmromace here is the description: “You are NOT falling … not on my watch. Never on my watch. ”
Life was good fort teenager Alex. He had a family that he loves, a girl friend and everything a boy could possibly ask for. But a visit from his brother one day blows everything and his life started to fall since then.A few miles from the ground Alex could stop himself from falling, and he starts to gather himself with the books he is reading, being assaulted by his own brother, losing his parents in a car accident, the orphanage and his Prostitution disappears when he starts reading. Providious meets Alex and falls in love with him. He marries him against the well of his family and end up with anger issues that could hurt Alex or himself. But one call, starts everything, one call encourages the fall of Alex. Could marriage successes between an abused raped man, and a man with anger management? Is their marriage going to survive? Will Providious hold him or will he let Alex just fall?

please if you read and liked what he you read vote or like the chapter you liked. please, remember that is is important to me in order to draw more readers and to know what you exactly think about my writing. comments are appreciated.

if there isn't anyone who is interested in mm here is other writings:Hold me I am Falling(Part one of Falling series)(mmromacne, contemporary,family drama)'completed'
On the ‏road to Alabama 'completed'(lgbt'gay', contemporary,tear-jerker)'completed'
CAMERON (lgbt'gay', contemporary)'currently posting'
BREAKING JACE (Breaking Beautiful)(contemporary, angst, lgbt'gay')'completed'
Alextavious, I, Descending from Eden(lgbt'gay, mythical, fantasy)'completed'
Alextavious,II, Seeking For Eden(second part, mythical, fantasy)'unfinished'

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