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message 1: by Vanessa Eden (new)

Vanessa  Eden Patton (vanessaeden) | 40 comments Emery stood atop the moss ridden hill looking down to the world below her.The new moon had given her village a soft blue hue.
The world was changing and evil was its lord. If you listened close enough you could hear the Indians chanting and their drums humming. They knew it too.


message 2: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) Ian walked through town, a sinister smile plastered on his face thou to the humans it was a frown of fear. His icy blue eyes, cold as the darkness and bright as the blue flames of hell. He watched the girl on the hill through his dark hood.


message 3: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) .


message 4: by Vanessa Eden (new)

Vanessa  Eden Patton (vanessaeden) | 40 comments A chill traveled from the center of her brow to the base of her spine. She was being watched and she knew it.
Emery knew she would never be able to gather the herbs to heal her ill father and mother, less she would be accused of witchcraft.
"who has their eye upon me" she thought to herself as she skipped and hopped down the rough terrain of the grassy hill. "Be it an Indian or...something else?"


message 5: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) or you're worst nightmare.... hissed a husky voice in her mind.
The man with the hood smiled as the ground started to crack and flames pooled out.


message 6: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) .


message 7: by Vanessa Eden (new)

Vanessa  Eden Patton (vanessaeden) | 40 comments Emery stopped dead in her tracks. 'what was that? ' she wondered, her heart was beating wildly in a rythem unknown to her.
She gathered herself and raced home, past the chaos and her brief moment of insanity...or so she hoped.


message 8: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) The man stood infront of her path, blocking her from entering. isn't it just beautiful


message 9: by Vanessa Eden (new)

Vanessa  Eden Patton (vanessaeden) | 40 comments she looked about the flames of her little town. it looked like the seventh circle of hell and it...was beautiful.


message 10: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) He smiled, hearing her thoughts. what's your name my dear?


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