First Chapter Thoughts

[L.E.]

Hi All,

This isn't exactly self-promotion but I didn't want to step on any toes so I thought I would post here.

I am just about to release my new book The Running Game, which is a futuristic crime thriller.

I've posted the first chapter on my blog and I would really love to just get a few thoughts on what people think and whether, based on that chapter, they'd want to read more.

There's a poll on the blog so if anyone has the time to just cast their eye over the chapter I'd be so grateful.

http://l-e-fitzpatrick.blogspot.co.uk...

Thanks

[Nicole]

I'd want to read more. I want to know who the guy is and why the bank blew up.

[Philip]

Really enjoyed it, looking forward to more.

[L.E.]

Thanks guys - those comments are great and have made me smile on this pre-coffee morning.