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Niran
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Sep 28, 2013 01:42AM
Eden crossed her arms and looked as he walked away. Suddenly the bell rang, but Eden felt that she wanted to follow Derrick. Not want, but needed to follow him. She looked around as people came out of their classes and the halls filled with students. Eden followed Derrick, making sure she wasn't to be seen.
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Derrick was unaware of her following him. He crossed the road in front of the school. One could tell, that he was going to end up doing something stupid. He started to walk down the road, hitting street after street, making his way to his house, where he was going to attempt suicide.
Where the hell was he going? Eden, confused and worried, continued to follow him. She felt something deep inside of her say that what he was doing was bad but she couldn't help but to follow her instinct and be nosy.
He left the door open as he walked in. He walked upstairs and grabbed his father's Revolver and loaded it. He then walked into his room and sat on the bed. He pulled the hammer back and squeezed on the trigger.
((Can we do an idea I got from a book?))
((Can we do an idea I got from a book?))
(( yeah of course, explain it)) Eden thought that she was on time, that she was fine and so was he. When she heard the gun shot she froze and looked up at the house. What had just happened? The door was left open so she ran as fast as she could until she saw Derrick.
((The plan I had was for you to walk in as soon as he shot himself. I can work with this though. The idea was that, Well you know he commited suicide, but miraculously they were able to save him. And He tries to adjust back into the life with no memory of wh yhe tried to shoot himself in the first place))
Derrick's lifeless body was lying on the ground in his own pool of blood. Blood and brain tissue covered the wall beside her. Derrick was basically no more. He was just laying there bleeding out. But he was still breathing.
Derrick's lifeless body was lying on the ground in his own pool of blood. Blood and brain tissue covered the wall beside her. Derrick was basically no more. He was just laying there bleeding out. But he was still breathing.
((Oh yeah! I love it! It could have skimmed his brain))Eden screamed and threw her bag to the floor before skidding to the floor near Derricks chest. She placed her head softly on his chest and felt and heard his heart. She grabbed her phone, she was shaking and her heart was racing.
"I-I need a-a ambulance", she said, speaking to 911," Please h-he just shot himself! B-but h-he's breathing!".
the EMTs arrived and took him away. They almost arrived immediately at the hospital. The surgen took him to OR and immediately started stitching him back together. It was an 11 hour surgery. All of it was intense for the doctors. One wrong move and he was a gonner
The whole process of getting Derrick in the ambulance and then to the hospital was nerve wrecking. Eden was scared and completely in shock. The doctors told her that there would be an immediate surgery and that it would be a long one. But Eden still sat in the waiting room, her hair was messy, her eyes had dark circles and her clothes were unkept and not tidy, stained with blood.
After the surgery was done, the doctors were astonished. He actually lived through it. The main doctor then tried to find Eden. He walked to the waiting room and said her name loudly and waited for a responce.
As soon as Eden heard her name she got up quickly," Y-yes? I-I'm Eden", she stuttered nervously. She walked towards the doctor, she couldn't tell what kind of news he was going to tell her. Her heart was pounding and she felt as if her whole body had lost its soul.
"Ms Eden, I can't say this in any other way. The lord really has something planned here. Astonishingly, we were able to save him. But there is a catch" he tells her
Eden sighed and let all of her stress go as soon as he said that Derrick was well and alive. But then her breathe caught, she looked at the doctor and asked," What do you mean 'a catch'?".
"Well he has minor brain damage, He's going to have a terrible studder problem, and he might not even remember who you are." he told her
Eden gulped, so many consequences just to live a life that ends anyway. She nodded anyway and said," Can I see him now?".
"Yes you can. Please don't stress him out. He is very delicate right now" he told her and led her to his room
Eden stopped at Derricks door and smiled," Don't worry, I'll be gentle". She smiled at the doctor," Thank you for everything". Then without another glance she opened the door and stepped in to see Derrick hooked up to wires and laying there with a white wrap around his head.
He mumbled and groaned in his sleep. He was still all drugged up from the medicine. His eyes would open every now and then and look around the room before going back out of it.
Eden immediately sat down next to him. She softly placed his hand in hers and would go to him softly. She didn't know what else to do, he would open his eyes a little and mumble but nothing to do with her.
After several minutes of the same routine, Derrick opened his eyes, He groaned and looked around. He locked his eyes on her. He smiled and asked, "I'm sorry, have we met?" he asked her softly, while still looking around the room
Eden smiled, she nodded and said,"Yes we have met. I'm Eden". He really didn't remember anything did he? It shouldn't have shocked her because the doctor had warned her, but it did shock her.
"Eden?" he pondered long and hard. He soon realized who she was. "Oh.. Look I told you I was sorry, why did you save me?" he asked as his temper started to rise
Eden was shocked," You remember me!?". Then she shook her head," No! I'm not mad at you, I'm glad you're okay. Derrick, you tried killing yourself! Why?". She couldn't believe he tried to do that, she couldn't believe he remembered her!
"Y-y-y-y-you are m-m-m-mad a-a-a" he stopped and sighed sadly at the frustration
Eden mentally punched herself. She stood up and shook her head," No! Not more talking, Derrick! Go to sleep, you need that right now", she said softly.
He shook his head and tried to get up. "I... Know... I.. shouldn't... have done that." he said slowly so he wouldn't studder.
Eden smiled," There's no need to worry about anything now". She stood up and slowly, softly traced her fingers over the creases in his face. "Relax, Derrick".
"N-No" he moved way from her. "T-This is m-m-my f-fault. " he told her, now standing up. His balance soon fails and he stumbles to the wall catching himself
Eden went to him quickly, she put his arm around her shoulders. She placed him back on the bed and ordered," Sit there, don't you dare get back up!". She gave him a look and said," Don't worry about that now okay?".
He lost all control and broke down crying, falling into the floor. He did'nt know why he was crying, but in a way it felt good to cry. He still didn't understand why she was there. She hated him at school. Why does she care now?
Eden caught him and fell with him on the floor, she cradled his head and said," I may not know you very well, and I know I may not know your life story. But I don't care, all I want you to know is that I'm here".
"I don't need y-you" he told her angrily and escaped her grip. He stood up and sat backed up. He was putting way to much stress on his body. He could die if he wasn't careful.
Eden stood, she walked away from him and gulped slightly. She nodded and said," Fine, I guess I'll go then". She headed towards the door but as she did she said," Get better soon, Derrick". Then she was out the room with a bang of the door.
"Wait!!" he ran after her catching up to her. "I'm sorry, I'm just a little out of it right now as you can see." he pointed at his head.
Eden turned around sharply,"What is wrong with you!?, she demanded. She shook her head and looked around," You shouldn't be out here, you're supposed to be resting". She grabbed his hand and started to lead the way back to his room.
"S-stay with me, p-p-please" he asked her
Edens eyes widened, she nodded and said softly," I'll stay with you". Then she continued," But we have to go back to your room, you can't be wondering around like this". She didn't know if this guy was crazy or just an idiot.
"Y-You're mad a-aren't you?" he asked her softly. He felt bad as he looked down and followed her
"No, I'm not. I'm not anymore", she smiled. They had finally made it to the hospital room, so she opened the door and led him there.
She closed the door behind her and nodded to the bed," Get in and relax".
He still felt a little hurt. He tried to say something else, but he studdered too much to get it out. This made him feel worse. Tears filled his eyes as he looked into hers. He quickly looked down, "I-I cant do anything r-right."
Eden looked at him sadly, she then went to him and put her hands softly on either side of his face. "Hey, it's okay. You just came out of surgery, you need to rest. I'll still be here". She looked into his eyes and then softly placed her lips on his, she pulled back and smiled.
"W-Why are y-y-you being s-so nice to me?" He asked softly putting his lips closer to hers, wanting another kiss. He felt he wanted another one. No, he needed another kiss. Not from anyone but her.
"Because I want to be", Eden replied. She pulled away slightly and leaned her forehead on his,"Go and lie down, you need rest. Please", she begged. She hated seeing him like this, it sucked and it just made her feel bad.
"Or do you just feel sorry fro me?" He asked softly. He hated that he said it. But it came out anyways. He kept his gaze in her eyes
She looked to him with shock, but then she smiled," It's a little of that too. How can I not feel sorry for you?". She had to be honest with him, she couldn't lie, even if she wanted to.
"I dont need your pity. You and i both know if i hadnt shot myself, you woukd still hate my guts" he told her a little harshly
Eden raised her head and then started laughing," Do you know what you're saying?". She gave him a straight face and then shook her head," Will you stop acting like you know everything and just fucking rest right now?!".
"Im starting to think this is a waste of ti-" his eyes rolled into the back of his head and collapsed into the floor, bouncing his head of of it, opening the wound back up. He was bleeding badly
Eden screamed, she ran to the door and shouted," Help! Help someone!". Suddenly doctors and nurses rushed into the room, bringing in equipment and taking Eden out of the room. Eden was crying while a nurse tried to calm her down," Shh, just sit down and calm down. Breathe".
Breathe!? She couldn't!
After a few more hours, the doctors were able to close the wound back up. He was in a more critical condition now. On top of the surgery, he now has a sebere concussion. He was put back in his room and the doctors told Eden she could come back in. "Please.. He is very, very delicate. He said he wanted to see you. Try not to raise your voicce too much" the doctor begged and let her back in.
