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message 1: by Racheal, The Group Creator :) (last edited Sep 12, 2013 03:13PM) (new)

Racheal Sunshine  (lilrayofsunshine) | 873 comments Mod
I know we have some writers in this group. So why not show off a bit? C'mon and post some of your awesome work!:)


message 2: by Hasnain (new)

Hasnain Bahleem | 8 comments Lol imdraw!


message 3: by Racheal, The Group Creator :) (new)

Racheal Sunshine  (lilrayofsunshine) | 873 comments Mod
Oh yeh? :) that's awesome!! What do you draw?


message 4: by Racheal, The Group Creator :) (new)

Racheal Sunshine  (lilrayofsunshine) | 873 comments Mod
I write poems:)

I first fell in love with his eyes, those deep eyes.
I fell in love with his smile, oh how bright that smile shined.
I fell in love with that voice, soo believable and sweet.
I fell in love with his laugh, how he'd laugh without a care, even when there wasn't anything to laugh at.

I first fell in love with his mystery. Oh how I ached to know more of him.
I then, fell in with his words, how I'd melt with each word he spoke.
I was falling deeper and deeper, but was it true? Could it be, that he spoke love and truth?
No, he was cheating me. I had not known of this other.
He had spoken with such lovely lies that I had put down my anchor and shades.

How could I have slipped this far out? How could I have given into his lies so quickly?
I was blinded by looks, those darling brown eyes had cheated me.
I have nothing but sorrow, but could I, could I let it go? No.
I shall not give in, I will stay strong and move on.
He will learn his lesson, for karma will come knockin at his door.


message 5: by Hasnain (new)

Hasnain Bahleem | 8 comments Mostly fashion illustrations!


message 6: by Racheal, The Group Creator :) (new)

Racheal Sunshine  (lilrayofsunshine) | 873 comments Mod
SWEEET! Do you have any on here? I'd like to see some:)


message 7: by Hasnain (new)

Hasnain Bahleem | 8 comments Um no! But i could upload it!


message 8: by Racheal, The Group Creator :) (new)

Racheal Sunshine  (lilrayofsunshine) | 873 comments Mod
Oh okay! Awesome! You don't have to right now though, unless you want to:)


message 9: by Hasnain (new)

Hasnain Bahleem | 8 comments Its in my photos check it out!


message 10: by Racheal, The Group Creator :) (new)

Racheal Sunshine  (lilrayofsunshine) | 873 comments Mod
Alrighty!


message 11: by Racheal, The Group Creator :) (new)

Racheal Sunshine  (lilrayofsunshine) | 873 comments Mod
You are very talented:) wonderful drawing!


message 12: by Hasnain (new)

Hasnain Bahleem | 8 comments Thanks :)


message 13: by Racheal, The Group Creator :) (new)

Racheal Sunshine  (lilrayofsunshine) | 873 comments Mod
No problem:)


message 14: by Raven (new)

Raven (howlisawesome) that's amazing Anita!


message 15: by Raven (new)

Raven (howlisawesome) *Anika*


message 16: by Hasnain (new)

Hasnain Bahleem | 8 comments hot summer nights mid july
you and i forever wild!
lana del rey!
I EFFIN LOVE HER~


message 17: by Racheal, The Group Creator :) (new)

Racheal Sunshine  (lilrayofsunshine) | 873 comments Mod
Anika, nice poems!! You are a great writer:)


message 18: by Annabeth (new)

Annabeth Rose | 239 comments You guys are so talented ! I wish i was like that


message 19: by Racheal, The Group Creator :) (new)

Racheal Sunshine  (lilrayofsunshine) | 873 comments Mod
Awe:) YOU ARE LIKE THAT!!!! Everyone is good at something and everyone has their own talents!:)


message 20: by Annabeth (new)

Annabeth Rose | 239 comments :) thanks racheal !


message 21: by Racheal, The Group Creator :) (last edited Sep 15, 2013 04:09PM) (new)

Racheal Sunshine  (lilrayofsunshine) | 873 comments Mod
Your welcome! It's the truth:)


message 22: by Annabeth (new)

Annabeth Rose | 239 comments :)


message 23: by Racheal, The Group Creator :) (new)

Racheal Sunshine  (lilrayofsunshine) | 873 comments Mod
:P Blehhh! Aha:)


message 24: by Hasnain (new)

Hasnain Bahleem | 8 comments People looking at me odd!
Looking good is my job!
Mona lisa at the bar,
Pinkies up, hell bazar
Catching you working at my bod!
My physique is my facade!
I'm not another fraud
L.O.L oh my gawd!


message 25: by Racheal, The Group Creator :) (new)

Racheal Sunshine  (lilrayofsunshine) | 873 comments Mod
Ahaha:) nicee, it's catchy!


message 26: by Annabeth (new)

Annabeth Rose | 239 comments Cool !


message 27: by [deleted user] (new)

I like the storyteller-liar one


message 28: by Annabeth (new)

Annabeth Rose | 239 comments That's good


message 29: by inactive account (new)

inactive account (inactiveaccoun) | 23 comments Name: Jadon Hancock
Age: 15
Backstory and powers:Hancock is a member of an almost extinct species of immortals, often called gods and angels. He if he stays away from his opposite he would regain his immortality and along with his other superhuman abilities. But If he is around his opposite for a long amount of time him and his opposite become ordinary humans. He is invulnerable to everything, including bullets, and possesses various superhuman attributes, such as superhuman strength, toxin and poison resistance, fast reflexes, incredible stamina, also has the ability to control the wind, where as His oppostite can control lightning His whole anatomy seems to be superior, with his nails being sharper than razors. He posseses an accelerated healing factor, but as he is invulnerable most time, he almost does not use this ability. Hancock is also able of flying at supersonic speeds, and his landings often destroys the pavement. he is capable of interplanetary flight, , it is he can be affected by alcohol and other types of drugs( he hasn't done any of that but his father has) Even with all his superhuman abilities,
History: the only reason he exists is Because a group of unknown people brought the first two superhumans like him and fused their DNA together and used a random woman to have him . Once jadon was born the first handcock came down drom the moon and took him in and trained him till he was 13.

Appearance: http://rollingout.com/wp-content/uplo...
Weakness: being around his opposite to long makes him human . When someone calls him insane to many times goes berserk
Jadon woke up in the Rv and saw a note on the door and grabs it and reads it outloud " jadon you are 13 today and I have trained you your whole life now you live your life alone like I did.
Ps Your Handcock now "
Jadon curses ripping the paper In half" GOD DAMNIT!" Jadon goes outside and lifts up the rv and throws it as hard as he can and it flies into space " I HOPE THAT FUCKING HITS YOU DAD!" Jadon just sighed and flew away. He fell asleep Inthe air and landed ontop of a mansion and crashed through and a tall old guy with a suit on stood above him" Master wayne looks like we have an unwanted guest.bruce looks over and sees a tall African American kid laying on the ground. Jadon stands up " where the hell am I" Bruce sighs " your in my mansion . I'm Bruce Wayne"
" I'm Hancock " Bruce shakes his head" no your not Hancock is a man"
Jadon smiles" that was my father.... I am the new Hancock."
Jadon handed him the letter and he read it then unfolded it till he got to the section saying Bruce Wayne then he read that " follow me" Bruce says and walks to the clock and slides it over and starts walking down steps and gets to the batcave . Jadon follows and gasps" YOUR BATMAN!" Bruce nods sitting in his chair starting to type on the huge batcomputer


Prologue

On planet melgia ( a world that is million years ahead of us and is beautiful and has amazing things and because there so ahead in technology they help there allie planets

Kalel( Cal - Ell woke up and yells in his sisters ear" IT'S TIME FOR THE FIGHTGAMES" Kaia( Kia with a I saying its name) smiles and kisses her brothers nose and says to the tv" turn on FIGHTGAMES
" yes kaiiiaaaa " the tv turns the FIGHTGAMES on and Kaia winced" where is Soaren I'm going to kill him for making the tv call me that!"
Soaren was Kaia and kalels 15 year old brother. Kaia was 13 and kalel was 7 ." Sissy he managed to fake as a 18 year old and join the fightgames. Kaia gets a face of worry and sits down and rocks back in forth Kalel hugs her
* at the fighting arena*
Soaren held 2 energy blades in his hands and a man walks out he was big and muscular and had 2 alien dogs so were purple and had sharp teeth and wings .
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The dogs flew out at Soaren and he ducked and slammed the 2 swords into one of the dogs stomachs and then spread his arms and the dog was killed. The second clamped into soaren's arm but he jerked back and sliced him with the laser blades .
The man charged with a laser axe but Soaren slid under the man and slammed a sword into his crotch and then stood up and slammed the swords into his neck and then cut his head off. Kalel cheered but Kaia winced.
The head man of the Fightgames bolts up" THIS KID KILLED LAST YEARS RUNNER UP"
Soaren laughed" oh so was he the runner up to the second to die last year."
The head man valentine laughs " AWWW funny and a amazing fighter"
The father of the three children had snuck in" SOAREN I CAN'T BELIEVE HE DID THAT" Kaia flinches " D dad" Inocent kalel jumped up " DADDY SOAREN IS GOING TO WIN I KNOW IT!!! Dad nodded" he is a kristian of course he will!!!!
Kaia jumped up and hugs her dad crying " dad I love my older brother a I don't want him to die" the father frowns" he won't I promise sweety "
Soaren's next match was between the burglar Soaren's next match was between the burglar from planet drogon his name was jerald. Jerald had many knifes made of the sharpest steel and hatchets made of the steel and other weapons. Soaren stomps over the weapons were thrown by Jerald but he dodged " I have trained since I was 3 " he screams and slams a sword into a hatchet and sliced through it. Soaren focuses then his body glows red and he kicks Jerald and he goes flying then he tackles him and slams one of the laser swords through his heart.
The hours of matches went through till the last match at midnight " this will continue tommorow Soaren go get some rest" he says and closes his eyes
Soaren goes home and walks In kalels and Kaia's room they lived in a huge house but Kaia wanted to share a room with kalel and he was fine with it . He accidently walked in there then layed on Kaia's pink bed and curled up and fell asleep.
Kaia stretched when she woke up next to kalel in his bed . She must have fallen asleep watching the fight games . Then she realizes what if soaren's dead but then she looks at her bed and sees him curled in her pink blanket asleep . Kaia kisses kalels head then stands up and kisses soaren's head and whispers in his ear" wake up big brother" his eyes flutter and he wakes ... He never was a deep sleeper . Kaia hugs him tight " I was worried about you yesterday" she says tears forming in her eyes . He hugs her back" you know I would be fine what was it that father said that gave us a advantage sister?"
She nods and then quotes" axel the first child had the power of time control . Soaren the second child has the power of supeor strength strength . Kai the third child has the power of supeor smarts . Kelal The fourth child has the power of destruction and says" see nothing to worry about Kaia Im fine in those games ." Kaia sighs " brother I'm the smart one ... Your chances of winning agaisnt last years champion is 20 to 100" Soaren stretches and says" I destroyed Jerald pretty easily didnt I and I only used some of my inner strength" Kaia sighs and walks away and goes into the kitchen and says" one bowl of malfeasfent flakes please " a bowl of cereal raises from the table and she sits down and starts eating .
Soaren was walking into the kitchen and says" 12 PEICES of bacon how I like it" bacon starts to cook.
Kaia giggles" I can't believe you eat a food that people hundreds of years ago ate... Also it's made of What humans call pig and what we also call them" Soaren looks At her" on earth almost everybody loves bacon and we are a race that looks just like humans and are planet is like theirs just way ahead of them" Kaia nods then says suddenly" Soaren I miss axel". Soaren looks at the ground with a extremely sad look" I do to sis. He was the first super melagian " Kaia hugs Soaren but knocks her cereal over and it spills all over the ground but it is cleaned by the high tech house . Kelal walks in" I SMELL BACON!!!!!!! BACON BACON BACON BACON BACON BACOB" Soaren laughs" I've seen a earth commercial and they had a dog who said the exact same things " Kaia giggles" kelal is our little doggy "
" no I'm not" the bacon finishes and Soaren grabs six PEICES and kelal grabs 6 and they chew it down then soaren's says" the whole family gets front seats right where you can see the battle perfectly and your allowed to come into the locker rooms where many warriors are going to be because its a training fesilaty to" Kaia grins " so we get to go into the boys locker rooms to " Soaren Nods" yes but Kaia you better not go in there!" Kaia smirks" no promises I mean have you seen the teenage traines mmmmmm" Soaren storms out to the arena to get ready. Kelal runs in the bedroom of his mom and dad and jumps on their bed" DADDY MOMMY WE GET FRONT SEATS IN THE FIGHT GAMES!" Inge the mother smiles " wich relative of ours Is competing in the finals" Harold the father rolls out of bed and walks into the bathroom . Kelal jumps up " SOAREN IS MOMMY" Inge bolts up and screams in anger" WHAT IM GOING TO KILL THAT BOY .. If he doesn't die in the Arena" she starts to cry . Kaia ran in and picks kelal up and sets him outside the door then walks in and closes it" mom Soaren is doing fine.. Is it because of axel... Mom he died of a fire not in the fight games." Inge nods" I know but the fight games is a even worse way to lose a child " Harold walks out in says" Soaren will be fine.. All final fighters in the games get armor laser swords and multiple guns . Laser knifes and other weapons depending on their fighting style and sweety he has his powers " Inge makes Kaia go to the fight games with kelal .
Soaren put on his metal armor and slid guns and knifes and swords imo his holsters and other things that came with the armor . A big strong man with all the same things but bigger came and up close Soaren could see he had hard purple skin and wide blue eyes " good luck kid . You might win I've been watching you . You took down people that this words Greatest fighters have trouble with " he puts out his hand and Soaren shakes it and says" good luck to you sir" kelal came up and gawked" THOR LAST YEARS CHAMPION" Kaia went into the boys locker room and flirted with some of the guys.
Thor turns and smiles at the kid" last kid I saw your age was scared of me because I'm a alien who looks a little scary " kelal shakes his head " I don't think your scary and I think your awesome" Soaren nods" he has posters of you " Thor gulps" he's your brother ...." Soaren nods. Thor stares at him he had been there when kelal was born and was told that him and older siblings had abilitys like this and knew thier names and powers because he was friends with the father" what's your name kid " he asks Soaren. Soaren smiles" oh me I'm Soaren and the little ones kelal" Thor's eyes widen this match was going to be hard . Kelal hears his mother calling and goes to her .


message 30: by inactive account (new)

inactive account (inactiveaccoun) | 23 comments It's 2 diffrent stories also of course there are grammar errors I'm only 12


message 31: by inactive account (new)

inactive account (inactiveaccoun) | 23 comments * bows and kisses your feet* WE ARE THE CHOSEN ONES


message 32: by [deleted user] (new)

Lol there are a lot of 12 yr olds on here


message 33: by [deleted user] (new)

Well what's wrong with that? Older kids are awesome too :)) I feel you though, I'm like in the middle, there's like no one my age on here, it's always either older or younger by a year or older by a couple years


message 34: by Dahiany (new)

Dahiany (clockworkocean) | 48 comments Mod
One Moment:

One moment yes,
One moment no,
I love him for eternity,
I can't let go


One glance in his direction
One feeling of fustration
My heart sinks and aches
Thus he won't see me this way

Ocean light blue
is the color of his eyes
Sailing goes my heart till I
can't hold tight

His smile could light up
this world, beyond speech,
beyong the universe
I could die from the beauty of his smile

A simple star,
A second to spare
A simple hello
My heart he's won

Just one look, is all it takes,
My spirit rises, my day is made

But happiness ends,
or things aren't always true
A thought singing in your mind,
A wish waiting to unwind

Love is what is seemd,
More than friendship sees,
a nice person at heart,
and angle's all I see

But I was blinded by,
the willpower of love,
Mistook for what I thought
was love no matter what

And the I realized,
it wasn't meant to be
I stood away in vain,
a whisper in the rain

One moment yes,
One moment no,
I still love him forever
I don't know how to let go

One hopeful glance
One feeling of confusion,
My heart sinks and aches,
This, he will never love me


message 35: by Dahiany (new)

Dahiany (clockworkocean) | 48 comments Mod
*stare, lol


message 36: by Racheal, The Group Creator :) (new)

Racheal Sunshine  (lilrayofsunshine) | 873 comments Mod
Awesome writing Anika:) Love it!!


message 38: by Racheal, The Group Creator :) (new)

Racheal Sunshine  (lilrayofsunshine) | 873 comments Mod
Nice page Julia! I like it:)


message 39: by Wren (new)

Wren  (wrenreaders) Thanks! I need lots of votes, reads and comments!


message 40: by Racheal, The Group Creator :) (new)

Racheal Sunshine  (lilrayofsunshine) | 873 comments Mod
A story I wrote for school:)

Christmas time! Oh what a wonderful season! It's the one time of year where you can run around singing and no one can stop you- even if you sing terribly. The one time of year where friends and family all come together and everyone's always happy. Christmas is the happiest season of all. There's Christmas lights everywhere, carolers singing out their Christmas cheer, candy canes, and so much more! It is certainly my favorite holiday. Why is that? Well isn't it obvious?!

There's nothing better than Christmas, it's all about family, Christ, and cheer. It is the time of year that friends and family cozy up around a warm fire, roast marshmallows, and sing carols with a soothing cup of hot cocoa in hand. Christmas is where everyone's homes are covered with beautiful elegant lights and Christmas trees with shiny ornaments from top to bottom. There's gatherings with food, gifts, and holiday fun.

Every year, friends and family come together and we have a huge Christmas dinner at our house! It's wonderful! Mostly everyone invited brings a dish of their own and we all eat together. Afterwards, we exchange gifts, play games, watch Christmas movies, share stories, and celebrate the glorious day! It's always a holiday to remember; with laughter and everyone getting along peacefully. And no one gets left out- like poor Rudolph was. Christmas is not just a holiday for fun and games you know? Its a time to think of Jesus Christ, our Savior. For he is the whole meaning and reason of Christmas. Our family never forgets that.

Christmas is for holiday cheer and shared with friends we hold dear. It's a special time which only comes once a year. Everyone gives and receives. Everyone one leaves happy and stuffed by the end of the night. In conclusion, Christmas stands for a lot of things, family fun, candy canes, and all sorts of things; but most of all it represents Jesus Christ- and in his name we cheer!


message 41: by Racheal, The Group Creator :) (new)

Racheal Sunshine  (lilrayofsunshine) | 873 comments Mod
~Nobody~♫Take Us Down and We Keep Trying♫~ wrote: "Racheal wrote: "A story I wrote for school:)

Christmas time! Oh what a wonderful season! It's the one time of year where you can run around singing and no one can stop you- even if you sing terrib..."


Thank you:3 I loveeee to write.


message 42: by Iara (new)

Iara | 11 comments I have one poem in goodreads, though it may have some grammar mistakes, 'cause english is not my mother tongue
https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...


message 43: by [deleted user] (new)

I'm starting a book on good reads. I also draw.


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