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message 1: by Suiside (new)

Suiside | 2 comments Need a beta reader for a story i have

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Jasper nodded slightly "I guess you can say that. Are you?"
Stefan looked out over the grass and trees. "No I've been here for about three years now. I found it at a rough time in my life and fell in love with it."
Jasper smiled faintly and looked down at his lap "It seems very peaceful out here."
The far away look in his dark blue eyes was beautiful. "It is. That gets a bit tedious at times but compared to other places I wouldn't trade it."
Jasper nodded slightly and looked over at Stefan. He looked so much better that the picture. Jasper couldn't do this. He looked so happy. He didn't look like the others at all. He looked down at himself again "I think it's perfect."
There was something sad in the boy's voice. Something that sounded familiar like regret. He was too young for the kind of regret that made his voice sound like that thought wasn't he? "Listen, let me show you around. I can pick you up and take you around, show you the sights. It would be nice to see it through new eyes."
Jasper looked back at him and smiled faintly. He fought back the stinging of the tears he felt but nodded "Sounds great. Except I don't have a home yet."


message 2: by Crystal (new)

Crystal Taylor (ctaylor517) | 35 comments Sounds good. I'd read it for you. Prefer PDF for beta reading but can take any file. Email is latsyrc317@aol .com. Do you have a time frame in mind & specific things you'd like me to look out for? If so send then in the email if you decide to use me, if not good luck with your book!!


message 3: by Suiside (new)

Suiside | 2 comments Crystal wrote: "Sounds good. I'd read it for you. Prefer PDF for beta reading but can take any file. Email is latsyrc317@aol .com. Do you have a time frame in mind & specific things you'd like me to look out for? ..."

sure ill email them to you with the information. Thank you :D


message 4: by J.L. (new)

J.L. (jlmitchell) | 5 comments I'd like to read it as well, if you still need help. Email is mitchandmob@gmail.com


message 5: by Natalie (new)

Natalie | 38 comments If you are still looking for someone I would like to beta read it my email is mrsnaranjo@yahoo.com


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