BETA READER PLease

[S.L.]

I am writing a book for the so you think you can write contest with harlequin and I just need someone to read this story I started and let me know if its good and I should go with it. its not completed so it will be a fast read about 20k words so far.
The hero is the main character, Josh Wilson. Book starts of with Josh and his wife arguing about her infidelity and the truth about the father of their son.
He is a firefighter full time, carpenter part time. He has been badly hurt by love in the past and has vowed never to love again. He dives into work and alcohol to drown out his sorrows. His friends and family are worried about him and his fire Chief forces him to see a psychiatrist to deal with his personal issues. enter-> Dr. Cartwright, a beautiful red headed woman with her own issues on love.
eventually together they work out their issues.

I don't want to give to much away since its not very long right now. I have an idea of where I want to go with it its just whether the story so far is enticing enough to continue, any ideas to share.
Contest begins in Sept 2013

Can reply here if interested, or inbox me or email me.
sl_ross@rogers.com

Thanks hope to hear from a few of you.

[[deleted user]]

hi, i would love to read it and give you my thoughts. my e-mail: ladysunrise@gmail.com

[Amy]

I'd gladly beta read for you. KayosAD@aol.com

[Everything]

I'd love to read and provide a review/feedback. visit my blog at www.everythingmarie.com or PM me.

[Kady]

I'd love to beta read for you. It sounds like a good premise. kchap_plow@yahoo.com

[S.L.]

Awesome thanks ladies I have emailed it out to you all. I really hope you enjoy it! :) thanks.

Sabrina

[Everything]

my email is tiffany.baez@everythingmarie com