i wrote a poem need feed back

[Vanessa Eden]

it is called Lust and His Green Eyes
it is explicit. I would really like to know what you liked and did not like about this poem.

[Vanessa Eden]

you can find it on my profile under my writings

[Lela]

Vanessa wrote: "you can find it on my profile under my writings"

Can you provide a link? I'm new here and I don't know how to find your profile.

[Lela]

Vanessa wrote: "you can find it on my profile under my writings"

Okay, I managed to find it. It's got a lot of good points. I'd rather not review it here. If you'd like to message about it, contact me.