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message 51: by Bilal (new)

Bilal Taibzada | 487 comments And at that moment the unicorn of peace...... was sent by god to help her ... to make her stand up and kill everyone


message 52: by Uzair (new)

Uzair | 1172 comments And she did.She killed them.
She carved her song into them,carved with the shimmering white horn she'd taken from her steed.Immortalized and carved away all her misery and confusion.


message 53: by Bilal (new)

Bilal Taibzada | 487 comments But then she woke up from her dream


message 54: by Zarshal (new)

Zarshal Saeed (zarshalsaeed) | 814 comments “Oh, not again!” she cried. She was tired of these dreams within dreams.


message 55: by Uzair (new)

Uzair | 1172 comments In a state of helplessness she shouted for the one person that had always stood by her.
"MAMMYYYYYYYYY"


message 56: by Bilal (new)

Bilal Taibzada | 487 comments And then the police came ... apparently mammmmyyyyyy was is jail. She was psychopath who had committed irresponsible acts and was now on death sentence with no parole


message 57: by Zarshal (new)

Zarshal Saeed (zarshalsaeed) | 814 comments After what felt like years, she opened her eyes. Everything looked so bright. “Is..this.......heaven..?” she thought.
😂


message 58: by Bilal (new)

Bilal Taibzada | 487 comments No it wasn’t . Apparently the whole thing was a test


message 59: by Aakash (new)

Aakash (mistyanon) | 5393 comments Mod
*lol* xD


message 60: by Uzair (new)

Uzair | 1172 comments The test was that when would have to identify this land she found herself in,dream or not.
Get the answer wrong and she' go into a deeper sleep.


message 61: by Ellipses (new)

Ellipses (shortellipses) | 4 comments And once again, she woke with a start, realizing once again that she had been dreaming...


message 62: by Uzair (new)

Uzair | 1172 comments Meanwhile her mother was preparing a balti of water to teach her lazy daughter a lesson for sleeping in.


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