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Is it true that The Mortal Instruments started off as Harry Potter fanfiction?
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She then reworked the stories, eliminated all the controversial phrases, swapped things around, and the Mortal Instruments was born.

The stories are not the same. Rather, I'd say, that she took some of the characters and situations she'd created and used them in her book. Also, some of her witty one-liners.
It is true that she wrote about a sort of reformed, rebellious Draco character very unlike the fellow we know from the actual Harry Potter series. Her Draco is the basis for Jace, right down to the draconian (ha!) father who made him kill his falcon.

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You should because many people have read Draco Trilogy, including me and its even on Goodreads...
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For example, Jace's story about how his father made him train a falcon, then kill it, is in the Draco Trilogy almost word for word, with Lucius making little Draco do the same thing.
Her conception of Draco is the basis for Jace's character: a damaged, quippy trained fighter with a heart of gold with sexy silver hair and leather pants. This "Draco" is entirely her own creation and bears little resemblance to J K Rowling's Draco--a cowardly, privileged bully.
Actually, I think it's nice that Jace got a chance to grow this way.

I never really thought it was anything like HP when I was reading it. I am a fan of both series and there's actually quite a bit of differences between them.
Let's face it, the big difference between HP and TMI is that JK is an amazing author. She too got ideas to her world from all over the place, BUT she didn't steal lines from Buffy the vampire slayer, she didn't steal dialogue from other books and films. She created her characters from scratch and tells an enchanting story.
I read the first book of TMI without knowing it was an idea from a HPfanfic. And well... I really disliked it. It has what a lot of fanfictions have: gaps in them. Whole parts and events that jump and are not properly explained or explored. And in fanfics it works, because you have the original story in the back of your head as you're reading it.
But in TMI there are just holes, with some funny comments and lines inbetween.
Then, when I realized it was originally a fanfic, the resemblence hit me so hard I had to laugh. I think it eas actually what made me almost enjoy the second book, because I love the Draco/Ginny idea so much.
But let's face it. There's no real character building, the few intimate moments that lead to Jace and Clare falling madly in love with each other are so hollow it made me even madder when they pulled the sibling card! I'm sorry, but you can't just adore a chracter because he's had it rough and is hot.
It kills me that this book is so huge when there are tons of characters and stories so much more alive than this! Harry Potter, sure. Percy Jackson! Katniss Everdeen! Those are amazing characters that you actually get to know. And then we have the most amazing ones, that deserve to be much more popular, but are outshone by this piece of soulless writing:
Stargirl. Lennie from the sky is everywhere. Rory from the name of the star. Or even Rosie and Alex from where rainbows end; who are only presented in the letters and notes the ywrite to each other. Read about those characters, and then come back and tell me that this is a good peiece of writing.
Sure, it's a fun story. An amazing world and idea. But well written? I think not.
Sorry about the rant.
I read the first book of TMI without knowing it was an idea from a HPfanfic. And well... I really disliked it. It has what a lot of fanfictions have: gaps in them. Whole parts and events that jump and are not properly explained or explored. And in fanfics it works, because you have the original story in the back of your head as you're reading it.
But in TMI there are just holes, with some funny comments and lines inbetween.
Then, when I realized it was originally a fanfic, the resemblence hit me so hard I had to laugh. I think it eas actually what made me almost enjoy the second book, because I love the Draco/Ginny idea so much.
But let's face it. There's no real character building, the few intimate moments that lead to Jace and Clare falling madly in love with each other are so hollow it made me even madder when they pulled the sibling card! I'm sorry, but you can't just adore a chracter because he's had it rough and is hot.
It kills me that this book is so huge when there are tons of characters and stories so much more alive than this! Harry Potter, sure. Percy Jackson! Katniss Everdeen! Those are amazing characters that you actually get to know. And then we have the most amazing ones, that deserve to be much more popular, but are outshone by this piece of soulless writing:
Stargirl. Lennie from the sky is everywhere. Rory from the name of the star. Or even Rosie and Alex from where rainbows end; who are only presented in the letters and notes the ywrite to each other. Read about those characters, and then come back and tell me that this is a good peiece of writing.
Sure, it's a fun story. An amazing world and idea. But well written? I think not.
Sorry about the rant.


For example, Jace's story about how his father made..."
This is a great example.

But let's face it. Whatever the origins, TMI is not HP. It just isn't. And she obviously removed the bits she'd copied directly from other books (I forget the details), because TMI was published.
So TMI is not plagiarism. Plagiarizing is wrong, yes, but honestly it's kind of nice that she managed to deplagiarize (is that a word?) it and publish it in this way.
As I always say whenever people go on about how a book should never have been published- "they won". :)
Michelle wrote: "It's not something you believe or not, Jeremy. If you read the Draco Trilogy, you can read passages that are the same in the Mortal Instruments.
For example, Jace's story about how his father made..."
Wait... if Draco is Jace ... then who is Sebastian/Jonathan?
honestly based on his physical appearance and how he was in the movies i would say Draco is Sebastian lol.
For example, Jace's story about how his father made..."
Wait... if Draco is Jace ... then who is Sebastian/Jonathan?
honestly based on his physical appearance and how he was in the movies i would say Draco is Sebastian lol.


Any other issues with Clare and what choices she has made as a person aside (she had upset many in the fanfiction community), to say that TMI is the HP fanfic she wrote with plagiarized content taken out and names changed simply is not fact. To ask who was Sebastian renamed from or some such just doesn't work. The stories aren't the same. And as for whether Jace was based on Draco, the Draco she wrote wasn't the Draco in the HP series so who knows. He is what she wants him to be, good or bad.
If you like or dislike the story and quality of TMI and the world she has written her books in, it is still an original story and not a fanfiction.


For example, Jace's story about ho..."
her Draco is different from the original draco so he fits more Jace but i don't think there's an actual character from harry potter that she based on for sebastian....but wouldn't say he's the most unique character either but still interesting though.


Ladycopine wrote: "Atty wrote: "Michelle wrote: "It's not something you believe or not, Jeremy. If you read the Draco Trilogy, you can read passages that are the same in the Mortal Instruments.
For example, Jace's s..."
I thought they said the draco trilogy was draco and ginny and draco has green eyes and pale blonde hair and ginny has green eyes and red hair the same features as Clary and Sebastian , thats why i said it i think she actually originally intended that ending for Mortal instruments which is why she slipped so many hints in it when she realized the fans didnt react well she may have decided on subtext instead before finally destroying her villain. But anyways i think he is original in his own unique way because he isn’t really like Draco but the author also flip flopped a lot on his character but he was still the most interesting character in the series i would say along with Clary if she hadn’t been so cliche. Lol
For example, Jace's s..."
I thought they said the draco trilogy was draco and ginny and draco has green eyes and pale blonde hair and ginny has green eyes and red hair the same features as Clary and Sebastian , thats why i said it i think she actually originally intended that ending for Mortal instruments which is why she slipped so many hints in it when she realized the fans didnt react well she may have decided on subtext instead before finally destroying her villain. But anyways i think he is original in his own unique way because he isn’t really like Draco but the author also flip flopped a lot on his character but he was still the most interesting character in the series i would say along with Clary if she hadn’t been so cliche. Lol
Rachel wrote: "Kaora wrote: "There are so many similarities between City of Bones and HP. Muggles-Mundanes, teleporters (Diagon Alley!), etc."
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How the hell are there so many similarities between HP and TMI?..."
Harry Potter actually has a crucial religious reference biblically but also most of the other references are satanic . Lol
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How the hell are there so many similarities between HP and TMI?..."
Harry Potter actually has a crucial religious reference biblically but also most of the other references are satanic . Lol

It didn't start off as HP fanfiction though, some of the TMI characters are inspired by Cassie's HP fanfiction but TMI itself was never HP fanfiction.
Kaora wrote: "There are so many similarities between City of Bones and HP. Muggles-Mundanes, teleporters (Diagon Alley!), etc."
And the Deathly Hallows(the Mortal Instruments). And the Death Eaters(Circle.)
And the Deathly Hallows(the Mortal Instruments). And the Death Eaters(Circle.)

And the Deathly Hallows(the Mortal Instruments). And the Death Eate..."
I can see the connection between the Circle and the Death Eaters, but the Deathly Hallows and the Mortal Instruments are very different outside of the fact that both are a trio of powerful magical objects. The concept of a set of powerful magical objects has exsisted throughout a multitude of fantasy series though.
COMPLETELY_BOOKISH wrote: "Unicorn wrote: "Kaora wrote: "There are so many similarities between City of Bones and HP. Muggles-Mundanes, teleporters (Diagon Alley!), etc."
And the Deathly Hallows(the Mortal Instruments). An..."
But still, it makes sense, because if City Of Bones was based off of Harry Potter fanfic, then both still include three magical objects, which the heroes had to look for, before Valentine(Voldemort) found them. Cassandra Clare just changed them up to fit the Shadowhunter World.
And the Deathly Hallows(the Mortal Instruments). An..."
But still, it makes sense, because if City Of Bones was based off of Harry Potter fanfic, then both still include three magical objects, which the heroes had to look for, before Valentine(Voldemort) found them. Cassandra Clare just changed them up to fit the Shadowhunter World.

And the Deathly Hallows(..."
City of Bones wasn't based off an HP fanfic though, some of the TMI characters were based on the fanfic, but the story and world itself is not.
COMPLETELY_BOOKISH wrote: "Unicorn wrote: "COMPLETELY_BOOKISH wrote: "Unicorn wrote: "Kaora wrote: "There are so many similarities between City of Bones and HP. Muggles-Mundanes, teleporters (Diagon Alley!), etc."
And the ..."
But still, she borrowed a lot of plot from Harry Potter.
And the ..."
But still, she borrowed a lot of plot from Harry Potter.

Like what? Valentine's Circle? I already addressed that that's the most borrowed aspect because Valentine's based on her fanfic version of Voldemort. Character similarities? Already addressed that too, the characters in TMI are based off the fanfic, but not the world or the plot. The fact that a normal person discovers a fantasy world? That's just an Isekai story structure, this type of story has existed and has been used far before Harry Potter, because it's the most direct way to introduce a fantasy world. Many TMI characters are pulled from Cassie's fanfic, I accept that, but the plot and world are not based off of Rowling's.
COMPLETELY_BOOKISH wrote: "Unicorn wrote: "COMPLETELY_BOOKISH wrote: "Unicorn wrote: "COMPLETELY_BOOKISH wrote: "Unicorn wrote: "Kaora wrote: "There are so many similarities between City of Bones and HP. Muggles-Mundanes, te..."
But large pieces of the plot and world is are borrowed from Harry Potter and her fanfic. BTW, you're discussing this with a 12-year-old girl.
But large pieces of the plot and world is are borrowed from Harry Potter and her fanfic. BTW, you're discussing this with a 12-year-old girl.

What does your age have anything to do with this? Also, please explain to me which pieces of the plot and world are borrowed exclusively Harry Potter and not just common fantasy and plotting tropes.



I agree, especially about the difference between fanfiction and an original story:
"It has what a lot of fanfictions have: gaps in them. Whole parts and events that jump and are not properly explained or explored. And in fanfics it works, because you have the original story in the back of your head as you're reading it."