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August Group Read: Frankenstein
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Jul 31, 2013 06:25PM

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I haven't seen this included in any of the film adaptations I have seen. I have heard that most of the films diverge quite drastically from the novel. Which is good, because that means I have a lot more to discover in this novel.



I'm a couple chapters in now, and I am really enjoying Shelley's writing style.



The prose is the formalistic writing of two centuries ago, and yet I found it quite compelling. I recently read Pride and Prejudice, which was written in the same decade. To me, Mary Shelley's use of language is far superior to Jane Austen's.
One element of the novel I found puzzling was the strange behavior of Victor Frankenstein. He was not a sympathetic character at all. His motivations were arrogant and self-serving. When the creature first came to life, Frankenstein instantly spurned it and then from his revulsion of the creature fell into a feverish delirium, a sickly near-coma that went on for months. Later, in Ireland, upon seeing the murdered corpse of his friend Henry Clerval, he again lapsed into a semi-comatose fever for two months. Odd, indeed.
When he saw the creature upon his return to Geneva, after two years of not even knowing if it still lived, Frankenstein instantly knew that it was the creature who had murdered William, although there was absolutely no evidence to this fact. We, the readers, had no reason to blame the death on the creature, and neither did Frankenstein.
It was Frankenstein's thoughtless and callous treatment of the creature upon his 'birth' that sent it on the path to becoming a monstrous character. The creature was completely naive, truly an innocent. He obviously was quite intelligent, teaching himself to speak and to read in the most adverse of conditions. The instant revulsion of all people upon seeing him and their mean and vicious treatment of him, taught him to fear and hate humans. This was a direct consequence of Frankenstein's rejection and banishment of him. The creature's rage against Victor Frankenstein was because Frankenstein broke his pledge to create a companion with whom the creature could seek exile from the prejudices of civilized men.
After Frankenstein reneged on his promise, the creature, justifiably enraged, threatened Frankenstein saying "I'll be with you on your wedding night." To me his meaning was clear however Frankenstein obtusely failed to see that it was his bride and not himself who was endangered until after it was too late.
In our modern culture, the monster portrayed by Boris Karloff in the movies is commonly known as Frankenstein. This may not be so far wrong. I think in truth that the creature was the victim of the true monster, Victor Frankenstein.


I also have a problem with the fact that the being (I'm not gonna call it a monster) goes specifically to Victor's hometown and encounters specifically his family. I wonder if this is explained but I doubt that it has.

That struck me as well. That the creature showed up in Geneva two years later and just happened to encounter William, and just happened to kill him, was a lot of coincidence. I chalk it up to literary license.
Did you notice that the creature was able to surreptitiously stalk Frankenstein wherever he went, even across seas? I ascribed this feat to his high intelligence and super-human physical abilities. But it did seem a little far-fetched. I decided to take these sorts of things with a grain of salt. They didn't diminish my enjoyment. I quite liked the novel.




I'm not too concerned about plot holes in stories. Often when I am really engrossed I won't even notice them until after I'm done reading, or not at all. If the plot hole impedes my enjoyment of a book, then I have problems.
I think we are more forgiving of older stories because a lot of writing conventions hadn't been set in stone yet 200 years ago. Science and technology wasn't as advanced either, obviously, so you have to give a little wiggle room for incorrect or half baked theories or explanations.

The audiobook I heard was read by Simon Templeman as the explorer Walton, Anthony Heald as Victor Frankenstein, the predominant narrator, and Stefan Rudnicki as the creature. I was already familiar with Rudnicki's baritone - he read a lot of the Ender's Game series of books. I made my choice after listening to samples. My other option was read by Tom Casaletto. I was happy with my choice - no complaints whatsoever.

That bothered me too. He spends months obsessively focusing on creating life and then a few hours after he succeeds, he just washes his hands of the Creature. For two years.
Is this some form of amnesia, or is Frankenstein truly the worst father on earth?

Perhaps an extreme form of denial?-If I don't acknowledge its existence, it will cease to exist.
I wish there was more insight in to Victor's thought processes regarding this. But along with the character's flaws, I think this also has something to do with some loose ends in the writing.

I've only gotten to Justine's death, but at this point he seems to think of the Creature both as his responsibility and as something completely unrelated to him. He's responsible for the tragedies of William and Justine, but somehow not responsible for finding and managing(? educating? controlling?, I'm having a hard time finding the right word for this) the Creature.
Is anybody else getting that or am I out in left field here?


"The mere presence of the idea was an irresistible proof of the fact." This man is a scientist?!?

I guess we should remember that Frankenstein was written by a teenager. Her knowledge of science and behavior under stress surely arose mostly from her imagination. Had she been more mature when she wrote Frankenstein perhaps these flaws would have been resolved. Considering the novel as a whole, and especially that it was truly novel for its time, I'm willing to forgive her. How many young girls her age could today write such a book? Frankenstein would have remarked, upon seeing the monster in Geneva, "I was all like, you know, what-ever."
Adrian wrote: "It bugs me a little that classics are allowed a plot hole or two but in newer books get ridiculed so much for them. "
I think you are right. I wonder if I would be so forgiving of an otherwise good book with similar shortcomings published by a modern prodigy. Usually for me the slightest error is an irritant.

I'm also wondering if perhaps Frankenstein's wishy-washyness isn't intentional on Shelley's part.
"You purpose to kill me. How dare you sport thus with life? Do your duty towards me, and I will do mine towards you and the rest of mankind."
Clearly, the Creature (and Shelley) are aware of the ridiculousness of Frankenstein's behavior.
The meeting in the mountains is as far as I've gotten, so I don't know what the outcome of that exchage will be. I'm really curious to see how we'll circle around from the above quote to Frankenstein hunting down his creation (re: the dog-sled "chase sequence" from Walton's letters) at the begining of the book. Right now, it doesn't seem fair, but since I'm only 45% finished, there's still a lot that can happen.


Good point, Dan. Back in those days I guess, aside from full blown psychosis, insanity, they didn't have our modern concept of mental illness. I think Victor Frankenstein definitely had an uneven keel.


But, the language proficiency and flair that Mary Shelley has for the age she wrote this at is very impressive.


A good analysis. While I didn't share your initial sympathy for Frankenstein, I did share your sympathy for the creature and your later antipathy for Frankenstein. That we are reading this novel in a culture that is two hundred years changed leads me to wonder if that was Shelley's intent, or if Frankenstein's behavior and attitude were acceptable or typical of gentlemen of that time.




I can only speculate on the Shelley's intent regarding the readers feelings toward Frankenstein, but I think she probably did want readers to question Frankenstein's integrity and morality. Does Frankenstein have the same responsibility toward his creature as he would to a human child that he created? Is it his responsibility to provide food, shelter, love, support, etc for his creature? His creature had all the same needs and wants as human beings do so in my opinion he is human in every way except biologically. (I almost feel like its cruel to refer to him as a monster, the more I think about it, haha!) I also think it is interesting that Frankenstein's creature was brought to life with a great sense of morality, goodness, and kindness toward humans and the earth, in the absence of a god or religion. Another thing I really wonder about is why Frankenstein reacted with such disgust after his creature came to life? His creature was such a good, kind being...was is because he was hideous that Frankenstein abandoned him?

I no longer have the book, but if I recall, it was when Frankenstein first saw the creature's eyes, when the creature first came to life, that he reacted with revulsion and immediately spurned his creation. He saw that the creature was hideous, but of course, he looked that way before he came to life. It was the eyes.
Michael wrote: "'It was already one in the morning; the rain pattered dismally against the panes, and my candle was burnt out, when, by the glimmer of the half-extinguished light, I saw the dull yellow eye of the creature open; it breathed hard, and a convulsive motion agitated its limbs.' - What a great sentence. :) ..."
It was right after this, I think, that Frankenstein had his terrible change of heart.


The pokemon Mewtwo reminds me oddly of Frankenstein's creation. I think in both cases you have a being that wasn't born evil but through mistreatment became evil. I think if someone might have looked past appearances the creature might have been 'raised' better.

I think Frankenstein is mostly just unstable. I side more with the creation than the creator.


First - the writing is good I enjoyed the style and the story is definitely a classic. However, M. Frankenstein is perhaps one of the least sympathetic characters of any book I have ever read. As many others have stated it is much easier to relate to the creation than the creator.
I remember being taught that M. Shelley wanted Frankenstein to be a cautionary tale for the scientists of the day. However, we seem to have skipped the part about M. Shelley only being 18 when she wrote this tale. So I now wonder was this truly a warning or was it just a ghost story written "in a waking dream" in response to a challenge between the young Shelley, her (future) husband and Lord Byron? If a cautionary tale was her goal then I believe it is the hubris of Frankenstein, and scientists in general of which she was warning. Therefore I do not think that, as Whit said: "Maybe the dark side of the creature was in fact there all a long" is the case. Rather the all of the creature's actions were a direct consequnce of Frankenstein's actions.
One thing about the writing that really struck me is the relationship and want/need for relations between the male characters. I do not mean this in a bad or negative way so do not flame me, I was simply surprised by how much, how often and how strongly the need for companionship is expressed.
EG: Walton 2nd letter 2nd paragraph: "I desire the company of a man who could sympathize with me, whose eyes would reply to mine."
Not being overly familiar with other works of this period I wonder if this is a common theme or rather just Shelley's style.
All in all a great book and I am glad the group picked this one; I probably would not have read it again with out the push so thank you. To be honest thought I do prefer Dean Koontz's Frankenstein; the creature is even more sympathetic, the science is way cooler and Victor is a villain you can really get into. Prodigal Son

EG: Walton 2nd letter 2nd paragraph: "I desire the company of a man who could sympathize with me, whose eyes would reply to mine."
Not being overly familiar with other works of this period I wonder if this is a common theme or rather just Shelley's style."
I was thinking about that just this morning! Walton wants and then finds a friend (Frankenstein), Frankenstein has a great friend (Clerval), the Creature wants a friend but (so far) no one will be it.

While I see why it is considered the first science fiction novel it doesn't have a lot of the elements I generally think of when I think of sci-fi. It does feature science and inventions way ahead of it's time. It even goes into a decent amount of detail about the research that went into the creation, but beyond the first few chapters it dispenses with that quickly.
What was interesting was the sort psychological analysis that goes on through out the book. Having the Creation as a blank slate completely open to influence is a good plot device. Mary Shelley played a lot with the idea of nature vs. nurture in this story, I feel it must have been quite a head of it's time in this aspect. The duality between Frankenstein and the Creation is amazing too. Shelley causes you to sympathasize with the Creation quite a bit, and the final words of the book show her true intentions.
Another interesting aspect is the story telling. It is essentially a story within a story, and at times, within another story, all told from the first perspective. Which gives us some interesting points of view on the characters, the Creation's view, Frankenstein's view, and finally an overarching view of both the Creation and Frankenstein, from a more unbiased point of view.

In her point of view, the person who would accomplish the task of giving life to a Thing would be so horrified at the realization of what he has done and so he would turn his back on it, hoping it would not live for long. From this preface, she seems to sympathise with the state of Frankenstein than the monster. She doesn't address the change of heart she seems to have experienced, as evinced by Dan's latest comment, of sympathising with the Creation.

Dan, I want to thank you for your astute observation.
I went back and listened to the the last scene of my audiobook, in which Walton encounters the creature standing over the deceased Victor Frankenstein. How could I have glossed over the creature's eloquent soliloquy? It is moving beyond description. In its condemnation of the injustices of humanity, it certainly is the summation of the novel.

I haven't seen the DeNiro version. According to IMDB is follows Shelley's novel.

The original Universal Pictures adaptation and it's sequel are heart moving rendtions of Shelley's story. They are closer in spirit to the novel than in actual story. What I didn't realize until after reading the novel was that parts of Bride of Frankenstein are inspired from the novel. James Whale produces a completely sympathetic creation, and Karloff plays it fabulously.
The Hammer Production ones while good did not stick out in my mind. The first one seems more like a rough remakes of the Universal flick than an adaptation of Shelley's novel. Still a decent horror flick for fans of the genre.

I haven't seen the DeNiro version. According to IMDB is follows Shelley's novel."
I think it's really worth watching Buck. From what I remember it is pretty accurate to the novel. I was familiar with the entire novel while reading it. I also think Victor is more sympathetic in it, which I'm sure affected my reading experience.

I didn't like the letter writing in it. A lot of the story was told rather than showed - certainly in the beginning and I would have liked to experience it more. Scenes like Victor's mother dying could have been a great insight into Victor if we'd been shown how it affected him.
I found it hard to sympathise with either Victor or the monster because of the storytelling style. Sure the monster was in a sad situation, but I didn't feel sad for him because of the murders. While I appreciate what drove him to do it and I loved how he stalked Victor, I couldn't really get behind him.
It doesn't help that I was so familiar with the story. By the end I found the book a bit of a struggle to read.
I'm pleased to have read it once because of it's classic status but I'm not sure I'd read it again.
