Wonderful Beta Reader needed for Erotic Novel

[A.L.]

Thank you for reading my post! I've written the first novel in a two part erotic series and need some Beta Reader feedback. I'd like to know how you feel about the characters and whether there are slow points that should be cut.

I'm willing to give the first four chapters so you can decide if it's a novel worth your time. If you give feedback on the entire novel I would like to send you the outline of the second book that I'm writing so you know how the series evolves.

I will just put it out there, since there are people with very strong feelings about it, this book contains infidelity. It's about so much more than that, but if it upsets you... then this isn't the book for you.

If you're interested please give your email and whether you prefer a Word doc or a pdf. Thank you again!

Here is a link to a sample
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

Monica Waters is a television editor living in Los Angeles reluctantly passing through her thirties in a damaged marriage to the love of her life Alex. They've worked hard since Alex's affair years ago to get to a place of predictable happiness in all areas except the bedroom. She's learned to accept mediocre sex in exchange for a comfortable and hopefully stabilizing companionship. When an artist from New York named Quinn Matthews moves in next door, all of the fire Monica has learned to suppress flares an obsession into a scalding and dangerously secret relationship. Quinn invigorates her lust for art, flesh and a life she hasn't been living and forces her to make the most difficult decision of her life.

[Billie Jo]

Bbillings@comporium.net pdf

[Vanessa Eden]

I really like it! I can't wait to read all of it! keep up the good work. the internal dialogue is very natural and the description really gives the reader a perfect picture in their head
also the anxiety she feels over her husband is powerful especially if anyone has ever had tht problem in a relationship which adds a great level of relateability for the reader.

[A.L.]

Vanessa wrote: "I really like it! I can't wait to read all of it! keep up the good work. the internal dialogue is very natural and the description really gives the reader a perfect picture in their head
also the ..."

Thank you so much for your feedback! I need people like you to give me their honest opinion on the rest. If you would like to be a beta reader, I'll send you the full manuscript. Just give me your email or send one to author.A.L.Goulden@gmail.com