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Bits of Little

Two little Spiderman socks layed out at my bedside. On top of each, placed just so, one littler white ruffled sock. Evidence.

They'd been here. One after the other? Or together?

An m&m on my chair. Red.

Blurry smudges on the monitor.

John Cena and The Boogeyman on my stack of books.

An empty fruit snack packet under my pillow.

The TV tuned to Cartoon Network.

A piece of paper with two little crayoned hand prints.

Little bits of little bits.



message 2: by Bonita, scribbler (new)

Bonita (NMBonita) | 73 comments Mod
I love this Margaret. It shows how comfortable they are in your space.


message 3: by Shel (new)

Shel (shelbybower) | 54 comments I like the eye you see with - that you get all these little details, it's like you're taking a quick survey of the room, noticing what's ... not you or out of place... but all in place, at the same time...


message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

Thanks. I can picture the two little ones putting they're socks like that and giggling. Everything else was probably not intentional.


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