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ShAnnon
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Aug 23, 2013 02:57PM
IT WAS AMAZING IT WAS AMAZING IT WAS ANAZING. There are some big changes but otherwise I think they did t perfectly. They had to rewrite the ending cuz of the damn Mundies but otherwise it was great
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"Now take your pants off and bend over. This is..completely medical."WHY ARCADE? WHYYYYYYY
you attractive aodododi
I know it's late and this is really random but for those TMI fans out there I decided if share a link to my fanfiction on here:) please give advice and tell me what u think!!!:Dhttp://m.fanfiction.net/s/8569656/1/J...
Name: Jadon Hancock Age: 15
Backstory and powers:Hancock is a member of an almost extinct species of immortals, often called gods and angels. He if he stays away from his opposite he would regain his immortality and along with his other superhuman abilities. But If he is around his opposite for a long amount of time him and his opposite become ordinary humans. He is invulnerable to everything, including bullets, and possesses various superhuman attributes, such as superhuman strength, toxin and poison resistance, fast reflexes, incredible stamina, also has the ability to control the wind, where as His oppostite can control lightning His whole anatomy seems to be superior, with his nails being sharper than razors. He posseses an accelerated healing factor, but as he is invulnerable most time, he almost does not use this ability. Hancock is also able of flying at supersonic speeds, and his landings often destroys the pavement. he is capable of interplanetary flight, , it is he can be affected by alcohol and other types of drugs( he hasn't done any of that but his father has) Even with all his superhuman abilities,
History: the only reason he exists is Because a group of unknown people brought the first two superhumans like him and fused their DNA together and used a random woman to have him . Once jadon was born the first handcock came down drom the moon and took him in and trained him till he was 13.
Appearance: http://hypetrak.com/images/2012/09/ja...
Weakness: being around his opposite to long makes him human . When someone calls him insane to many times goes berserk
Jadon woke up in the Rv and saw a note on the door and grabs it and reads it outloud " jadon you are 13 today and I have trained you your whole life now you live your life alone like I did. Ps Your Handcock now "
Jason curses ripping the paper In half" GOD DAMNIT!" Jadon goes outside and lifts up the rv and throws it as hard as he can and it flies into space " I HOPE THAT FUCKING HITS YOU DAD!"
Work a little more on your grammar and sentence structure. Also, your character is a little unrealistic. Try and add a couple flaws to him, to make him a little more believable. (For an example, Superman is really powerful, yet he still is weakened by kryptonyite, so...)
hahahahaha yeah, so many birthdays and celebrations recently, and not to mention glorious edumacation
NOOOOOO TINY TURTLE!!!!!!! LET'S SEND HER FEEL BETTER MESSAGES OR SOMETHING




