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Jun 22, 2013 07:00AM
Murrrr~! :3
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XDDDD erm...ok how about:~ Partytalia
~ Holidaytalia
~ Nagatalia (half-human, half-snake)
~ Supernaturaltalia (XDD woah thats long :P it has nothing to do with the TV series, its just where all the nations are supernatural beings and have powers and stuff? Like being a werewolf, vampire, fairy, shape-shifter, etc)
~ Gaukentalia
~ Any other AU you can think of :P
Supernaturaltalia and Partytalia sound legit to me
Nation name:(can be any Nation you want :3)
Human name:
Age:
(so you can bump it up of down if you want :3)
Type of creature:
(has to be partly-human or resemble a human in way, such as if you want to be a unicorn of something you;ll have to be a shape-shifter or a centur etc)
Appearance:
(for Shape-shifters you will need to put both forms)
Personality and traits:
Powers/Magical abilities:
Nation name: Ontario
Human name: Star
Age: 19
Type of creature: Half angel
(has to be partly-human or resemble a human in way, such as if you want to be a unicorn of something you;ll have to be a shape-shifter or a centur etc)
Appearance: http://www.google.ca/imgres?q=anime+b...
(for Shape-shifters you will need to put both forms)
Personality: happy, free going, a dizty, cheerful
Powers/Magical abilities: Snow powers and mind powers
Human name: Star
Age: 19
Type of creature: Half angel
(has to be partly-human or resemble a human in way, such as if you want to be a unicorn of something you;ll have to be a shape-shifter or a centur etc)
Appearance: http://www.google.ca/imgres?q=anime+b...
(for Shape-shifters you will need to put both forms)
Personality: happy, free going, a dizty, cheerful
Powers/Magical abilities: Snow powers and mind powers
Nation name: RayleighHuman name: Leah Ray Kirkland
Age: 17
Type of creature: Shape-Shifter
Appearance:
Human form:

Shifter form:
((She just looks ya know...much friendlier))

Personality and traits: Friendly, funny, caring, outgoing, stubborn, short-tempered, easily angered.
Powers/Magical abilities: She can breath dark purple fire in her dragon form and manipulate water at her own will in both forms.
((so will I :P I havnt got school anymore, I left 2 weeks ago and this friday is my prom :3 anyway, go check out the Nation's Ball topic, I've left a message for everyone, its nothing big just adorable :3))
((:P ok! I'll post the rest of my charries later, I haven't had a chance too yet! :D How should we start then? What could happen? I mean we could start at a world meeting but almost ever RP starts like that so maybe something different :P))
Nation name: EnglandHuman name: Arthur Kirkland
Age: 23
Type of creature: Naga (half-human half-snake)
Appearance:

Personality and traits: His personality is rather cynical, stubborn, sarcastic, competitive, but
Although he is a rather large Naga (they can range from being able to fit in the palm of your hand to growing to the size of a human) he only eats mice and wont harm anyone unless they make him angry.
Powers/Magical abilities: Nagas can be either venomous (pythons, cobras, etc), Constrictors (crush their prey to death, boas), or not at all. He is a grass snake, meaning that he is nigher venomous or a constrictor but can still give a painful bite. He can however, use magic like his human counterpart.
(I think I got it let me start)
Running forours on end. whatever. lungs aching from shorted of breath. she can deal with it. hearing foot steps behind you comeing closer and closer. run faster that was all her brain was saying, go go you can out run them. or could she she didn't have a choice she had to, she ran until she cxame to a quick stop a cliff was in front of her. they came out their guns pointed at her painting for breath. she gritted her theet and jump, yes jump off the cliff next thing you know was a bundle of fethers and yes, you guess it. fhe flew. she flap her wings and sored up into the sky. She look down a red dot appeared were her heart was and all she heard next was, BLAM.
She woke up her hand over her hart gasping she look around franticly claming her self down mumbling 'im safe.' she got up out of her warm bed and closed the window she smiled. she walk down to the kitchen and started to cook breakfast.
(what do ya think.)
Running forours on end. whatever. lungs aching from shorted of breath. she can deal with it. hearing foot steps behind you comeing closer and closer. run faster that was all her brain was saying, go go you can out run them. or could she she didn't have a choice she had to, she ran until she cxame to a quick stop a cliff was in front of her. they came out their guns pointed at her painting for breath. she gritted her theet and jump, yes jump off the cliff next thing you know was a bundle of fethers and yes, you guess it. fhe flew. she flap her wings and sored up into the sky. She look down a red dot appeared were her heart was and all she heard next was, BLAM.
She woke up her hand over her hart gasping she look around franticly claming her self down mumbling 'im safe.' she got up out of her warm bed and closed the window she smiled. she walk down to the kitchen and started to cook breakfast.
(what do ya think.)
((Its good, much more descriptive, I think you just need to watch out for your grammar, see when you type like this it doesn't flow so much, but when you type like this, it flows much better. For example: "Run faster, that was all her brain was saying. "Go! Go! You can out run them!"...Or could she?"
See? :3 that and you need to put "ed" on the end of words like guessed, flapped and looked.
One last thing, in my opinion I think you might have used out of character a little too much - that's not a bad thing, it just stops the sentence from flowing as easily, its was only the "and yes, you guessed it." part that makes me think that, being out of character can sometimes draw the audience out of the story.
Other than that it's a definite improvement! Well done! *huggles chu* :3 You did great! :3))
(yeah i suuuccckkckckkckckckckckkckkk DX but i got a B- in lungue you probly got a A pluse plse DX
okay thanks :D \
*Hugs you back*)
okay thanks :D \
*Hugs you back*)
((lol dont worry too much about it, I make mistakes too, who doesn't?! XD I just edit my post when I spot one - I'm fussy like that XDDD))
(XD im not I just roll with it, lol :D)
((:P I'm a lil tired tonight to be honest so I'm gonna read some fanfiction then go ta bed, what are your favorite ships btw? :3))
(okay
Germany and Italy (:D)
America and Russia
Canada and Ukraine
China and Japan
England and yes... France)
Germany and Italy (:D)
America and Russia
Canada and Ukraine
China and Japan
England and yes... France)
((XD lol, my favs are:1. 2p GerEng (look at ze adorable pic, they're getting engaged hopefully soon officially on their ask blogs X3)
2. USUK 2. FrUK (kinda ship these two the same amount :3)
3. PruCan
4. PruHun
I'll post any good FrUK fics I find in the fanfiction topic so you can read them if you want, only the fluffyest will do :3))
(lol yeah but I like Canada and Ukraine their so cute I died -yes your typing to a ghost- ;D)
(crazy ghost im a crazy ghost!)
(i did because i saw a cute pictures so i am a ghost but nobody know not even me!)
(okay lets rp)
she pourd some OJ in her cup and flip some pan cakes
she pourd some OJ in her cup and flip some pan cakes
(You pick firs I don't want to take any of your fav charters )


