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message 1: by Tia Todd, I am addicted to Mountain Dew and Adam Gontier's voice. (new)

Tia Todd StJohn (firedancer) | 506 comments Mod
Think of your favorite...let's go with...food. Yes, food.

Describe what it tastes like, but don't stop there.

Cover as many senses as you can: the physical feel of it; the smell; what it looks like; if it's crunchy, describe that sound; and taste, of course.

Think of if you've ever felt like you were starving to death, then you bit into your favorite food. You probably closed your eyes and savored every moment of it. Describe what you felt.

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My favorite food is pepperoni pizza. When I smell a saucy, cheesy, spicy pizza baking in the oven, I can hardly wait to get my hands under a soft, warm slice. I cannot bear not sinking my teeth into the gooey, doughy thick crust pizza, cannot stand to have the round, red little pepperonis taunting me.

I remember one time going from 11:00 until 7:00 without eating even a snack. As soon as that heavenly pizza came out of the oven, I nearly burned my fingers as I escorted the biggest slice to my plate, blanketing it in a snow of Parmesan cheese. At the first hot, steamy bite, I grinned ear-to-ear. That one little slice of pizza was comforting to me...and my starving belly. I enjoyed every last bite, until I reached the crust, and then I started on another slice. It was the most amazing pizza I thought I had ever tasted.

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Grr...now I want pizza.

Make my mouth water!

Peace!
~Tia


message 2: by Bailey (new)

Bailey (baileyr9350) Awesome! Makes me want pizza too! I'm not gonna do a description right now, but I just wanted to say, that is really good, and I also like Parmesan cheese on my pizza! I thought i was the only one!


message 3: by Tia Todd, I am addicted to Mountain Dew and Adam Gontier's voice. (new)

Tia Todd StJohn (firedancer) | 506 comments Mod
lol wow, awesome! Can't wait for your description.

Guess what? After I wrote that, I asked my dad what we were having for dinner, and he said "burgers" so I got all depressed, but then my mom came home with a pizza...

...and the rest is history!


message 4: by Anuhea (new)

Anuhea (anuhearamsey) I have pizza for lunch everyday. The other lines are always too long to wait in.


message 5: by Anuhea (new)

Anuhea (anuhearamsey) I just read your writing again, and it's really good! I love it!


message 6: by Tia Todd, I am addicted to Mountain Dew and Adam Gontier's voice. (new)

Tia Todd StJohn (firedancer) | 506 comments Mod
Thank you...I feel so special.


message 7: by Anuhea (new)

Anuhea (anuhearamsey) Now I want pizza...


message 8: by Tia Todd, I am addicted to Mountain Dew and Adam Gontier's voice. (new)

Tia Todd StJohn (firedancer) | 506 comments Mod
I know, right?

I REALLY want some bacon right now, but instead I have Ritz crackers and a can of spray cheese.


message 9: by Anuhea (new)

Anuhea (anuhearamsey) Lolz. Is your family having a special meal for Memorial Day?


message 10: by Tia Todd, I am addicted to Mountain Dew and Adam Gontier's voice. (new)

Tia Todd StJohn (firedancer) | 506 comments Mod
No.

I want some Mountain Dew...but my dad drank it all *glares*.


message 11: by Anuhea (new)

Anuhea (anuhearamsey) Dun dun dun!!

I want Sprite and french fries. Idk why...


message 12: by Tia Todd, I am addicted to Mountain Dew and Adam Gontier's voice. (new)

Tia Todd StJohn (firedancer) | 506 comments Mod
I'm gonna have some chocolate milk.


message 13: by Anuhea (new)

Anuhea (anuhearamsey) I was reading the book Found, and the character, Jonah, throws up from drinking too much Mountain Dew.


message 14: by Tia Todd, I am addicted to Mountain Dew and Adam Gontier's voice. (new)

Tia Todd StJohn (firedancer) | 506 comments Mod
Too much Mountain Dew? That's a good one.


message 15: by Anuhea (new)

Anuhea (anuhearamsey) Found is a good book. Except it's strange that they talk about Mountain Dew every so often in the book...


message 16: by Tia Todd, I am addicted to Mountain Dew and Adam Gontier's voice. (new)

Tia Todd StJohn (firedancer) | 506 comments Mod
Sounds like the book for me...


message 17: by Tia Todd, I am addicted to Mountain Dew and Adam Gontier's voice. (new)

Tia Todd StJohn (firedancer) | 506 comments Mod
Oh, I LOVE Haddix! No way...


message 18: by Anuhea (new)

Anuhea (anuhearamsey) Haddix is a good author! I love her writing!!


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