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Ilsa, I name me, destroyer of worlds!
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Oct 07, 2014 03:54PM
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Hello, I was wondering if you guys could take a look at my new PJ fan fiction. Its set 16 years after BOO because I wanted to be able to create my own characters. If anyone has a free moment please check it out, I am craving criticism.http://www.wattpad.com/story/25029804...
Don't let the lover's out of my home i'm going too close my heart is so low and we'll be singing Don't let the lovers out of my home
I met this girl late last year she said to me don't worry if I disappear I told her i'm not looking for another mistake I called an old friend thinking the trouble could wait.
The floor spun beneath as the walls disappeared then appeared with blood flowing down them like someone was flicking a switch over and over. I tried to move but I was planting to the ground. The wall closed in on me then became endless. I was then falling through images I didn't recognize, but assumed they were my memories. I had long since forgotten anything before this hell.I would close my eyes but they had already been closed after my head was separated from the rest of my body. That's when I got here about I don't know how many years ago. What seemed like decades though it was probably longer I started not to feel anything. The fear and pain I had felt for so long was replaced by a emptiness.At least emptiness was better than the hatred and insanity then They wanted me to feel. They, They, who were They. I had forgotten who they were, I had been in this place they called 'Your Best Place in the Underworld' for to long. My'Best Place' faded around me and I fell to my knees in front of a man in armor, no a weird smooth thin like clothes and a weird hat. Then a man with a similar suit and a fiery twig in his mouth. The point is he kept changing. The changing man then spoke in the scariest voice.. No voices I've ever heard"There you are! We lost you, now you probably don't recognize Hell anymore it's been a few million years since your death." A few million years, I had been dead that long? Most peo- no demons would have said something like " Well don't lose me next you arse." Or something similar. Me though, I still had a scrap of curiosity" What happened to hellions upstairs on earth." Then the changing man grinned with all his faces, including the scariest face of all of them. Mine." Since your death, your earth has been destroyed. That's why hell got remodeled. We had to expand size for the billions of souls. Also the fact we moved hell from one universe to another." My earth? Universe? Expand? I looked around at the remodeled hell and these new Demons were unimaginative compared to the Old demons.
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