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message 101: by Ilsa, Titania (new)

Ilsa (eruaistaniel) | 14984 comments Mod
"Why not now? He's gone til the morning. Please..."


message 102: by Samuel (new)

Samuel | 735 comments "You will understand in time, I am sorry, I can not save you now, even if I could Drax would burn both of us to a crisp, stay calm and confident, your friends will come, I'll make sure of it" He turned around and conjured a cup of water, he gently set it in her hands


message 103: by Ilsa, Titania (new)

Ilsa (eruaistaniel) | 14984 comments Mod
"You keep forgetting my hands are chained to the wall," she said grimly.


message 104: by Samuel (new)

Samuel | 735 comments "Your right I do...." He lifted the cup to her mouth and poured, he then stepped back and his body collapsed into shadows


message 105: by Ilsa, Titania (new)

Ilsa (eruaistaniel) | 14984 comments Mod
She gasped, but then fell silent. She wondered if that was all the stranger could do, or not. She blinked and lowered herself so her weight was on her arms. It hurt, and she was sure they'd lose their blood flow, but it was the only way she'd be able to sleep.


message 106: by Ilsa, Titania (new)

Ilsa (eruaistaniel) | 14984 comments Mod
She didn't sleep for a long time, and she kept hearing a song from the Broadway Beauty and the Beast running through her head. The song Home. It was hardly a comforting song, either.


message 107: by [deleted user] (new)

Someone was thrown in a cell far away from Fieras. The person was cloaked in darkness. She was bleeding bruised from being beaten. She coughed up a lump of blood.


message 108: by [deleted user] (new)

Legolas snuck back in, hearing Madelaine's scream. "Madelaine!" He whispered.


message 109: by [deleted user] (new)

Madelaine couldn't hear him. Like Frodo, Madelaibe was being engulfed by the darkness. Her eyes weren't brown but black empty sockets.


message 110: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 15, 2013 10:40PM) (new)

((ooh is she turning evil?))

"Madelaine!" He raised his voice to a louder whisper.


message 111: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 15, 2013 10:27PM) (new)

Madelaine let out anothe blood curdling scream. Part of her was fighting the darkness but she was too weak to hold on any longer.


message 112: by [deleted user] (new)

"Madelaine! Oh my god!" Legolas said, horrified by what he saw.


message 113: by [deleted user] (new)

Madelaine looked over at him. Her eye sockets were black her face emotionless. She was beaten up everywhere bruised all over.


message 114: by [deleted user] (new)

Legolas stuck his hand in between the iron bars. "Im going to get you out alright?"


message 115: by [deleted user] (new)

Madelaine didn't say a word. She crumpled to the ground as she grew weaker by the minute.


message 116: by [deleted user] (new)

Legolas swore and managed to reach in just far enough to grab her hand.


message 117: by Drax (new)

Drax RavenKnight (draxhollowknight) ((You guys ruined our plans... *pouts*))


message 118: by [deleted user] (new)

Madelaibe didn't feel it. There was no lock on the cell and no keys. It would be difficult to get her out.


message 119: by [deleted user] (new)

((oooh sorry Drax. What was ze plan? Bitteschoen und dankeschoen))

Legolas took out his sword and tried to cut through the metal, but it didn't help. He swore again.


message 120: by [deleted user] (new)

((Awe, boo hoo. Jk.))


message 121: by Drax (new)

Drax RavenKnight (draxhollowknight) ((To make Fiera evil... She'd turn if your charries hadn't come for her...))


message 122: by Ilsa, Titania (last edited Aug 16, 2013 08:42AM) (new)

Ilsa (eruaistaniel) | 14984 comments Mod
Fiera woke up. "Who..." Her voice was dry. She didn't think they'd hear. "Who's there?" She saw Legolas's silhouette and breathed his name.


message 123: by [deleted user] (new)

There was one lose bar on the cage. If he could move it, she would be able to fit throught it and leave.


message 124: by [deleted user] (new)

((ooh. Pretend she can't see them because the cells are seperated by walls and prisoners cant hear or see others.))


message 125: by Ilsa, Titania (new)

Ilsa (eruaistaniel) | 14984 comments Mod
((I was thinking a bargain. Like, if in a week they hadn't come, she'd turn))


message 126: by [deleted user] (new)

((She could be evil now! Because they hadn't come for so long, she could get angry and try to kill them or something like that!))


message 127: by Ilsa, Titania (new)

Ilsa (eruaistaniel) | 14984 comments Mod
╰☆╮Madelaine Base╰☆╮ wrote: "((She could be evil now! Because they hadn't come for so long, she could get angry and try to kill them or something like that!))"

((That's totally out of character. Even if she were evil, she'd try to keep any of them from dying.))


message 128: by [deleted user] (new)

Legolas shifted the bar, slung Madelaine over his shoulders, and then sprinted down the corridor, away from fiera's cell. he hadn't heard her. Soon Legolas and Madelaine were seated on the Elf's horse and were riding back to the mirkwood.

((happy now drax?))


message 129: by Drax (new)

Drax RavenKnight (draxhollowknight) ((Indeed.))


message 130: by Ilsa, Titania (last edited Aug 15, 2013 10:43PM) (new)

Ilsa (eruaistaniel) | 14984 comments Mod
Fiera called after them, but her voice was too breathy. She started to cry into her arm. They hadn't even looked into any of the other cells for her.


message 131: by [deleted user] (new)

((aww now that makes me want to cry. bad Legolas! I feel so bad for Fiera now. :( ))


message 132: by Ilsa, Titania (new)

Ilsa (eruaistaniel) | 14984 comments Mod
((You should read the end of my second book. ;) ))


message 133: by [deleted user] (new)

((:D The end of my trilogy will end with the main character dying))


message 134: by Ilsa, Titania (new)

Ilsa (eruaistaniel) | 14984 comments Mod
((I'm on book 5 of 8, writing wise. It would have been 4 books, but they would have been too long to be a reasonable choice for an agent.))


message 135: by [deleted user] (new)

((wow))


message 136: by Ilsa, Titania (new)

Ilsa (eruaistaniel) | 14984 comments Mod
((yeah, that's the response I get a lot. :) In book two, I tear the reader's heart apart, tape it back together, then repeat.))


message 137: by Ilsa, Titania (new)

Ilsa (eruaistaniel) | 14984 comments Mod
She felt something inside her crack. It was cold, and angry. Hateful. She yanked against the chains. "I give up, you-" she let loose a string of vulgarities, "-Drax, you win! I can't do this! You monster, I can't!"


message 138: by Drax (new)

Drax RavenKnight (draxhollowknight) Drax began walking down the stairs a while later, whistling softly. He had no idea he'd won her over.


message 139: by Ilsa, Titania (last edited Aug 16, 2013 02:12PM) (new)

Ilsa (eruaistaniel) | 14984 comments Mod
She stood stubbornly, no blood flow in her arms, but somehow maintaining some form of dignity. She met his eyes as he approached.

Her head blazed, as if it were being boiled or steamed. But the rest of her was icy. The -slight- feeling she got from her fingertips was like CO2. And her legs wanted to fall out from under her. She wished she had splints so she could keep them from wobbling so.

"What spell did you use? That couldn't have been real, so what are you doing? Why are you messing with my head?"


message 140: by [deleted user] (new)

Madelaine let out a groan when he picked her up. Her face was getting even more pale by the minute.


message 141: by [deleted user] (new)

Legolas rushed out of the fortress. ((move to the mirkwood palace))


message 142: by [deleted user] (new)

((Ok.))


message 143: by Ilsa, Titania (new)

Ilsa (eruaistaniel) | 14984 comments Mod
((Are you there?))


message 144: by Drax (new)

Drax RavenKnight (draxhollowknight) Ilsa wrote: "She stood stubbornly, no blood flow in her arms, but somehow maintaining some form of dignity. She met his eyes as he approached.

Her head blazed, as if it were being boiled or steamed. But the ..."


"What are you talking about?" Drax asked, yawning. He noticed that a bar was missing on a cage, but shrugged.


message 145: by Ilsa, Titania (new)

Ilsa (eruaistaniel) | 14984 comments Mod
"You're trying to get to me. It's not going to work. You expect me to believe you have the worst security system in either of our worlds?"


message 146: by Ilsa, Titania (new)

Ilsa (eruaistaniel) | 14984 comments Mod
((Back for a bit))


message 147: by Drax (new)

Drax RavenKnight (draxhollowknight) "What are you talking about, I repeat?"


message 148: by Ilsa, Titania (last edited Aug 17, 2013 12:05AM) (new)

Ilsa (eruaistaniel) | 14984 comments Mod
"Legolas was here! He rescued Madelaine! That wasn't real. It couldn't have been."

((Gtg, spending the night at the hospital with Mom and Grandpa))


message 150: by Ilsa, Titania (new)

Ilsa (eruaistaniel) | 14984 comments Mod
((I'm there now. Anyone on?))


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