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Well, first off I love the title lol. I like it, very deep. If you can keep the same riming pattern consistent throughout I think you have a hit ;)
I like it a lot. If you give it a nice beat an a dark, mysterious, beautiful melody then you'll be perfect.
I'm sorry i've just never had any feedback on my songs 
Don't worry!!!! It's really good though. I bet you that you'll probably either be a huge song writer or singer/ songwriter
Dauntless wrote: "Have you recorded any?"No... not at all. I don't own a video camera, and my friends don't either, otherwise youtube would be spammed with my videos.
Onyx { Italian Girls Dont Take No Shit} wrote: "Don't worry!!!! It's really good though. I bet you that you'll probably either be a huge song writer or singer/ songwriter"
Thanks :') I've always wanted to be a singer/songwriter ever since i was a little kindergartener.
Hehe! Well all you need is that dark melody and your good on your way!
I meant if you have recorded one on a device like a recorder. It always helps to hear it back because you catch little things that you miss while doing it live.
Ooh fellow songwriter here! HI!Umm, so is it very slow seeing as it's about 12 lines in 4 mintues? and also, is it on piano or guitar or something else?
I like the lyrics, they're great lyrics!
oh wait, you didn't put all of it up, okay, I understand. Don't worry. Have you jade harmonies to go with it? I can imagine they would make it more prominent in the chorus at least. :D
And is it a fast or slower song? More like, what's the timbre of the song?
I put my answers in the bold.Ooh fellow songwriter here! HI! Hi to you, too!
Umm, so is it very slow seeing as it's about 12 lines in 4 mintues? and also, is it on piano or guitar or something else? All i've got all the lyrics, i've been begging my mom for a while for her to let me take piano lessons, but that is still to happen. So, anyways, I'm planning on it being with the piano, maybe, MAYBE, a guitar, but it seems unlikely.
I like the lyrics, they're great lyrics! Thanks!
Have you jade harmonies to go with it? I can imagine they would make it more prominent in the chorus at least. :D I'm sorry, but can you explain more what you mean. Honestly, i didn't get any of that. Do you mean like an echo?
And is it a fast or slower song? More like, what's the timbre of the song? The timbre is more of a harsh, sad, and confessing quality.
Now that i think of it, i think i'm going to add a few things to my comment explaining it more.
I Feel the fear pass my face,
My mind instantly goes blank.
I know I'm shaking.
I only wish i were faking.
(Chorus)
I feel the waves, crashing upon my soul.
I feel the waves, pounding against what i'm told.
The waves of life,
The waves of life,
The waves- of life.
My eyes flash open from my dreams.
I still hear the echoing screams.
I sit up straight, glancing around.
Fear wakes you up, not shut you down.
(Chorus)
What do you think? *I say this very nervously*
~*More Info*~
-I've timed it, it's about 4 minutes long.
-Timbre of the song:
It has a harsh, sad, and confessing sound.
-The Texture:
The song will probably have only the piano playing, possibly a little guitar in there. It's only going to have one person singing,(me) and I like to do the own echos for the song.
-The Dynamics:
The song is loud at the beginning a line, then gets soft at the end.
The chorus supposed to be sung loudly.