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message 1: by Chloe (new)

Chloe Ok guys. So the aim of the game is to create a story. Each person can add a sentence each. Let's see where we end up shall we?

message 2: by Chloe (new)

Chloe once upon a time there was a little brown field mouse sitting alone in her little wooden house...

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When she heard a howl, she went outside and she saw a dog growling at her

Anupoma Joyeeta Joyee She thought the dog would come ferociously at her, but it just stood there,motionless.

message 5: by Chloe (new)

Chloe she began to tremble at the awful sight, her mind commanding her to run but it was of she was hypnotized by those sharp yellow drooling canines.

message 6: by Mary (new)

Mary (mfernand2010) | 7 comments Just then, the dog began to approach her slowly, its hair on its back raised while its long black tail dragged on the ground behind it.

message 7: by Lauren (new)

Lauren (originally_elle) | 250 comments Cocking it's massive head to the side the dog studied the field mouse intently before opening his dripping jaws...

message 8: by Sandy (new)

Sandy | 2 comments When a little gray elephant lowered his tiny trunk, grabbed the field mouse and placed the terrified rodent on his back as he glared at the big, black dog.

message 9: by Chloe (new)

Chloe the dog slowly looked up to face the giant gray mass, and in making eye contact, the dog began to cower involuntary.

message 10: by Emma (new)

Emma Joy | 15 comments A pack of dogs beastly in size came on sight to aid their friend.

message 11: by Christian (new)

Christian Maria Morgan They pushed forward growling like the beast they were.

message 12: by Betina (new)

Betina (betina1) | 27 comments The elephant wasn't afraid of the dogs - not while they didn't do anything to hurt the elephant.

message 13: by Christian (new)

Christian Maria Morgan Then the dogs leaped toward the elephant and...

message 14: by Katie (new)

Katie (paige_turner_) | 27 comments Connected with a seemingly solid wall which they later found out was the wall of the charming old cottage to the left.

message 15: by Dean (new)

Dean Blake (deanblake) | 21 comments To their surprise, the cottage housed an entire family of angry elephants...

message 16: by Bryanna (new)

Bryanna | 7 comments They needed to protect the feild mouse for she was no ordinary mouse, but one with magical powers.

message 17: by Chloe (new)

Chloe this mouse was the only one who could save the world.

message 18: by Christian (new)

Christian Maria Morgan Squeak! said the mouse.

Samantha ♔ Sam's Book Basket (samsbookbasket) | 10 comments The elephants eyes' burned with fury as they rampaged their way through the pack of dogs, trampling whatever was in their way as their trunks trumpeted their victory.

message 20: by Supreeth (last edited Jun 14, 2013 09:57AM) (new)

Supreeth (uselessperson) Samantha ♔ wrote: "The elephants eyes' burned with fury as they rampaged their way through the pack of dogs, trampling whatever was in their way as their trunks trumpeted their victory."

And the elephant suddenly realized that the apostrophe should've been after The elephant and not after its eyes.


message 21: by Chloe (new)

Chloe the dogs belatedly realised what was happening some managed to grey ot of the way in time, unfortunately the others became rather pancake like.

message 22: by Christian (new)

Christian Maria Morgan There blood like syrup.

(quite gory, I know.)

message 23: by Laura (new)

Laura (laurapie) | 3 comments The dogs retreated in terror, as their numbers had dwindled significantly as the elephants rejoiced in their triumph.

message 24: by Toastedbagels (new)

Toastedbagels (cepheireads) When elephants were rejoicing in their triumph, lions decided to attack at Elephants land.

message 25: by Katie (new)

Katie (paige_turner_) | 27 comments The first faithful elephant took the unharmed mouse to safety in the Garden of Heathy Veggies while the others kept the lions at bay.

message 26: by Sofi (new)

Sofi Corso (soficorso) Nevertheless, even though their territory was momentarily protected, there was an epidemic uncertainty creeping the elephants' backs.

message 27: by Michael (new)

Michael (lovechild) | 280 comments But one elephant wonder what was the mouse's plan to save the world.

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