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Iesha (In east shade house at...)
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May 25, 2013 09:50PM
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This is pretty bad but still :)
Then it all went dark Amy screamed for her mum but got no answer. Then she passed out. When she woke up she was in a white bed a person next round her called the doctor over. Once the doctor had left Amy went to sleep, she was exhausted from answering all the doctors questions. She had a dream that she was flying through the air watching the world go by without a care then the ride ended and her mum token her into the car. Together they rode along the small country road no-one ever used and out onto the motorway.They pulled out just as another car speeded past then the world turned upside down for Amy. Then she woke up,breathing fast drenched in sweat. Looking around Amy couldn't see anyone this time not even another patient or a nurse standing by the next bed. No-one was there at all Amy couldn't see her mum
Then it all went dark Amy screamed for her mum but got no answer. Then she passed out. When she woke up she was in a white bed a person next round her called the doctor over. Once the doctor had left Amy went to sleep, she was exhausted from answering all the doctors questions. She had a dream that she was flying through the air watching the world go by without a care then the ride ended and her mum token her into the car. Together they rode along the small country road no-one ever used and out onto the motorway.They pulled out just as another car speeded past then the world turned upside down for Amy. Then she woke up,breathing fast drenched in sweat. Looking around Amy couldn't see anyone this time not even another patient or a nurse standing by the next bed. No-one was there at all Amy couldn't see her mum
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Everyone else get's this
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but u said 14 hours it's been...13 hours. Oh well. :( I can just keep it for me to read :)
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that's okay! maybe I'll put it in the share writing section... I think it's too long anyways haha! its like 1k
That's the point. Even the worst writing job can ve turned into something so meaningful with a hint of tragedy.
Chloe, how did u get published at such a young age?
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Crazy little thing called self-publishing, darling. Although you don't have to be any age to be published via a company.And out of curiousity, how do you know my age?
It says the year u were born on ur goodreads profile @chloe
And I'm pretty sure I clicked on ur blog thingy earlier. Ur age was there lol don't worry I'm not a creepy stalker pedo or something.
Oh, good, I was freaked out for a minute.
You've said 30 times, Jada xD But there is Camp NaNoWriMo in July.
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