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message 1: by Kyle (new)

Kyle Borland (kgborland) I have two stories that I need some help on which one to continue with and some feedback would be awesome :) Here are the links:

Alori: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

MPIU(its a temporary title, if you get any ideas while reading it just let me know :D): http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...


message 2: by korrinamoe (new)

korrinamoe OKAY. I'll go look. I just need to go do something real quick.


message 3: by Kyle (new)

Kyle Borland (kgborland) Update :D

Alori: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

-on chapter 2 please bear with me, I typed it really fast and wrote it fast so the grammar is bad and the dialogue and descriptions pretty vague but besides that..lol..you'll get the idea I was going for I hope :D-

MPIU - http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

-Same thing as the other one, hope yall enjoy :D


message 4: by Lauren (new)

Lauren (djinni) Hey!

I read it, it's pretty good. :)




message 5: by Kyle (new)

Kyle Borland (kgborland) Thanks :D


message 6: by Lauren (new)

Lauren (djinni) I accepted the friend request. So, now you can get to my writings. :)

Some of it is very random. And weird. >.< I have this thing where I love to write essays. Not in my free time, though. :P I got a lot of stuffz from school. X)


message 7: by korrinamoe (new)

korrinamoe Kyle wrote: "Update :D

Alori: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

-on chapter 2 please bear with me, I typed it really fast and wrote it fast so the grammar is bad and the dialogue and ..."


IT'S REALLY GOOD! I love it!!!


message 8: by Lauren (new)

Lauren (djinni) lol


message 9: by Lauren (new)

Lauren (djinni) KYLE!

He lefted.


message 10: by korrinamoe (new)

korrinamoe Yeah. But the writing IS really good.


message 11: by Kyle (new)

Kyle Borland (kgborland) Update :D

wrong story tho, its on MPIU. I'm still working on chapter 3 on Alori. Later tonight or tomorrow I promise :D

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...



message 12: by Lauren (new)

Lauren (djinni) He return-th! omg

*goes to read*


message 13: by Kyle (new)

Kyle Borland (kgborland) lol yup I am back. I was lazy today and then I come here and people were actually reading my stuff so i thought I better start writing, haha.


message 14: by Lauren (new)

Lauren (djinni) lololol

The only thing I actually update is Musings on Life. I've got, like, 29 now. XD


message 15: by Kyle (new)

Kyle Borland (kgborland) I love your musings of life by the way :) great stuff. I wrote this SUPER long blog thing a while ago that you might enjoy, though its a little confusing so i might have to proofread a little, lol


message 16: by Lauren (new)

Lauren (djinni) :D! Tankque. *bows*

Where is it? LINK plez.



message 17: by Kyle (new)

Kyle Borland (kgborland) in message 11 lol


message 18: by Lauren (new)

Lauren (djinni) blob? blog. blogbloblbolgdiafdknfoiawfnifjnoiwfnoinf

X)


message 19: by Lauren (new)

Lauren (djinni) I MEAN THE BLOG

not ur storyz.


message 20: by Kyle (new)

Kyle Borland (kgborland) ooo ill go post that up right now!


message 21: by Lauren (new)

Lauren (djinni) THEN sendz me link.


message 22: by Kyle (new)

Kyle Borland (kgborland) http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

Here's the blog..i just added it to my good reads account instead :D


message 23: by Lauren (new)

Lauren (djinni) *goes to read*


message 24: by Kyle (new)

Kyle Borland (kgborland) you like it? lol


message 25: by Lauren (new)

Lauren (djinni) I commented.


message 26: by Lauren (new)

Lauren (djinni) It wasn't really constructive, however. >.<


message 27: by korrinamoe (new)

korrinamoe I'm watching the Big Bang Theory right now. (Sorry I changed the topic.) It's hilarious!

*goes to read blog...*


message 28: by Kyle (new)

Kyle Borland (kgborland) lol, I know it wasn't really constructive it was more a rant then anything :P

lol i'm watching the big bang theory too! its hilarious "Thanks for letting me stay here...now im sleeping...get out." lol


message 29: by Lauren (new)

Lauren (djinni) O.o lolol


message 30: by korrinamoe (new)

korrinamoe Kyle wrote: "lol, I know it wasn't really constructive it was more a rant then anything :P

lol i'm watching the big bang theory too! its hilarious "Thanks for letting me stay here...now im sleeping...get ..."


Yeah. I remember that. He's funny. He made her start the song all over when she messed up.


message 31: by Kyle (last edited May 03, 2009 09:25PM) (new)

Kyle Borland (kgborland) I keep forgetting to type up my next chapter :P

Lauren you got to remind me in some of our other groups so I don't forget k? I'll try and write after my chem test tomorrow, it won't take long to do. :D

Here's a short story I had to write this week just want some opinions on it :)
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...


message 32: by Lauren (new)

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message 33: by korrinamoe (new)

korrinamoe Whoa, Kyle. You better start writing. Lauren wants to read more...


message 34: by Lauren (new)

Lauren (djinni) *nods*

I don't like to wait either. I'm very impatient.


message 35: by korrinamoe (new)

korrinamoe DUN DUN DUN! You seem like you're pretty patient to me...


message 36: by Lauren (new)

Lauren (djinni) When I so feel like it, I can be.

Not when it comes to reading however. I am the type to go to a midnight party to get a book.


message 37: by korrinamoe (new)

korrinamoe I wish I could do that. My parents would wait to the next day. There's a book I want, but I wonder if my parents will let me get it...

...maybe I'll just buy it myself...


message 38: by Kyle (new)

Kyle Borland (kgborland) Whats the book?


message 39: by Kyle (new)

Kyle Borland (kgborland) Here's chapter 3 to Alori. Its shorter than the others but I just wanted to give Idraeh a little introduction to her longer chpater in chapter 5. :) sorry its short but hope you enjoy :)

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...


message 40: by Lauren (new)

Lauren (djinni) yay!


message 41: by korrinamoe (new)

korrinamoe *goes to read*


message 42: by korrinamoe (new)

korrinamoe Kyle wrote: "Here's chapter 3 to Alori. Its shorter than the others but I just wanted to give Idraeh a little introduction to her longer chpater in chapter 5. :) sorry its short but hope you enjoy :)

http..."


Your story is like the only one that I have had the time to read. I'm enjoying what you have written so far :)


message 43: by Kyle (new)

Kyle Borland (kgborland) Sorry for the delay on the writing but my Microsoft Word is being a bitch :(


message 44: by Lauren (new)

Lauren (djinni) *represses perverted nature and won't respond to that comment*

Yes, I am weird, and it's all my friend's fault. X)

Well, make it work! D:


message 45: by korrinamoe (new)

korrinamoe Kick your computer. Yell at it. Lauren is losing her patience. Hopefully she didn't already....


message 46: by Kyle (new)

Kyle Borland (kgborland) I guess I could use notepad....and just save it on a USB...


message 47: by Lauren (new)

Lauren (djinni) fno;anfeiorajngfo;irangfkosdjnmgo;ifnsoisdjnfo;nsd!




message 48: by korrinamoe (new)

korrinamoe Yeah, you could do that too. Oh btw, Lauren wants you to hurry up so she can read more. I have cracked her code!! Muah ha ha ha!


Well, I think so.


message 49: by Lauren (new)

Lauren (djinni) fnoas;fnmgjooisng?

fnios;gnringor. *nods*


message 50: by korrinamoe (new)

korrinamoe Woo hoo!


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