Twenty Tones of Red Twenty Tones of Red question


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It's my book - so reviews, questions and comments please
Pauline Montford Pauline Apr 22, 2013 09:31AM
Hi there,
Yes this is my title and I'm interested in any comments or suggestions. Please be honest...but kind. Thanks!
Also I'm collecting ideas for the next in the series. See if you can guess who comes to live with them and what happens... (dot dot dot) Best wishes
Pauline



Fairywitch (last edited May 01, 2013 11:15AM ) Apr 30, 2013 11:06AM   -1 votes
Hi Pauline!
The book sounds amazing. Actually, I dream of writing my own book, I'm working on it :)
I can't wait to read your book!
I have only one comment - in my opinion, the title is too close to "Fifty shades of Grey", and even without reading it - I believe your story can stand as its own, not as a "like-fifty-shades" book.
Good luck!!!
P.S. I LOVE the cover!

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Pauline Montford Hi, Thanks for your comment -I sent one yesterday -did you get it? Let me know if you didn't. Now get that book started! ...more
May 01, 2013 12:48PM · flag

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