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You write extremely well, Dalu! :D I've read the first two chapters and I think it's very relatable, like you were going for. There's a lot of truth to it. Your characterization is well-thought out and descriptive. Marvelous job. ;)
Its about this girl who talks about whats happening to her, about her friends and how she's willing to find love.
I hope its relatable and i really hope you'll like it!
here are the first 5 chapters:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...