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message 1: by Dalu (new)

Dalu  | 2 comments hey guys i'm writing this YA novel called "Dark love symptom", i wrote 5 chapters so far.
Its about this girl who talks about whats happening to her, about her friends and how she's willing to find love.
I hope its relatable and i really hope you'll like it!

here are the first 5 chapters:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...


message 2: by Mel (new)

Mel | 371 comments Mod
You write extremely well, Dalu! :D I've read the first two chapters and I think it's very relatable, like you were going for. There's a lot of truth to it. Your characterization is well-thought out and descriptive. Marvelous job. ;)


message 3: by Dalu (new)

Dalu  | 2 comments Thank you so much Mel! i really apreciate it!


message 4: by Mel (new)

Mel | 371 comments Mod
Keep on writin'. ;) You have a lot of potential.


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