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MOVED - CHECK BIO (izzylightfleur) | 15305 comments Mod
Take it away, Percyfreak. :)


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kalvin wake | 403 comments Here we go I decided to make this a book.a href="http://www.goodreads.com">my link texthttp://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...


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kalvin wake | 403 comments Ever since my mother died Life has been hard he living with his aunts all summer and tomorrow he will be going to a boarding school. Sorry for starting on that sad note but lets stat where things got interesting by the way I am Polan Crane. As usual I get up early to cook my aunts breakfast Toast and Oatmeal we live in Seattle, Washington I will be going to up state New York. Then My aunts the witches came down. My aunt Rellingta always says this to me. "Oh boy you survived the night again we feed you scraps just run away already" he said. "Oh I will be gone tomorrow so don't mind me" I said. waited for my aunt to sit and my other aunt never said anything aunt Fernez. Then I sat down at the table. "Remember boy you leave tomorrow so don't get comfortable you leave at 5 in the morning to catch you flight" Aunt Rellingta said as she stuffed oatmeal in he mouth her mouth. I went to go to my room I had everything packed the only thing that didn't keep me from dying of boredom was the pool down town I love water for some reason. I thought what School would be like. Oh he couldn't forget his best friend Holly Farringta she was go to Boarding school with him on the same plane and everything her mom is soppose to take us there tomorrow. Just then the bell rang."Polan it is that Holly girl again" Aunt Rellingta said. I ran down stairs and he opened the door for Holly she was so smart they will be going to 11 grade with each other. "So what do you want to do today" She asked him with her charming smiled and blonde hair and gray eyes. "How about we just go to the city and say goodbye" I said. She nodded she said my green eyes always distracted her but it is what is. "I am going out aunts" I said to them as he closed the door he heard don't come back. "So you mom is still going to pick us up right" I asked. "Of course Polan were in this together" Holly said. "Good because I can't wait to get million miles away from here" I said. Holly laughed they looked at each other awkwardly then hey snapped out of it. Then their other friend Charles came out of the blue."Aw you guys would be cute couple" He said. Holly blushed." Shut up Charles" I said. "Well can you blame me I won't see you guys for months" he said. "Charles we will see you on Skype and Facebook" Holly said. "Ya okay so what are we doing today?"Charles asked. "Do you guys have your bathing suit on?" I asked they both nodded. "How about swimming?" They nodded and we ran to the pool and swam all day. We said our goodbyes to Charles. Holly was about to go on her street then I hugged her as attempt to say good bye and we kissed she ran home. "See you in the morning" she yelled. I walked to my aunts house and walked in." Go to your room you discraceful boy" Aunt Rellingta said to me. I walked in y room y bags were ready with all my clothes,books,Laptop,and my phone on my dresser I put on my clothes for nighttime and went to sleep.


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kalvin wake | 403 comments That was Chapter one New Beggings.


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kalvin wake | 403 comments I woke up the next morning at 4:30 he brushed his teeth,combed his hair and got dressed. I went down stairs It was 4:54 I went down stairs to get some toast but my aunts were already down stairs and made the toast. "We don't want you to be hungry while your going to the airport by the way when s your flight" Aunt Rellingta asked while aunt Fernez just stood there. "It is 7:15" I said as I bite into the toast. " Well go get you things young man its 4:59 they should be here any second now" Aunt Rellingta said. I went up stairs to my room I put my phone in my pocket and grabbed my two bags. As I went down stairs the door bell rang It was Holly and her mom.I put down my stuff and opened the door. "Are you ready dear?" Mrs. Farringta Holly's mom said. "Of course" I said. I grabbed my things. "Good bye aunts" I said as I walked outside. "You can put your things in the trunk with Holy's things she said with a smiled. I put my things in the trunk and got in the car Holly sat right next to me. Mrs. Farringta got in the driver side and started to car and we were off." When we go to the air port we might have to wait a bit so I hope we can find something to do" Holly whispered. I didn't know what she was hinting at but I just shook my head. We were at the air the airport in about 30 minuets. We all got out the car we grabbed our things and Holly,Mrs. Farringta,and me. A clerk came up to us. "You must walk through the little arc please" She said. "Why?" Holly asked. "Because we must check you alright" The clerk said."Okay"Mrs. Farringta said and pushe Holly and me through the arc it beeped. "Okay you may continue" She said. A sign said put your bags on the convetabelt and get them at the end of the line. Mrs. Farringta,Holly,and me walked to the end. "Well I think it is a good time for me to go back to the car" Mrs. Farringta said. Me and Holly both Looked up. Holly hugged her mom for about 15 seconds then she hugged me. "I want you guys to be good now stay out of trouble" Mrs. Farringta said. We both nodded. She walked the other way. Holly started to tear up I put an arm around her. After 10 minuets our bags appeared. We grabbed ours and went through the door another Clerk cam. "Put you bags down this shoot they will loaded on to plane 4" He said. "That's ours "Holly said. "Oh ya it is pretty crowded in there so watch out" He said. We walked through the door it was terrible packed in there as the door closed we heard just go though door with plane 4 above it. "Stay close to me" I said to Holly. "Okay Polan" She said we went through the floor dodging a squeezing. We walked through the door with Plane 4 above it the Plane was gigantic we climbed the stairs of the plane.


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kalvin wake | 403 comments Chapter two Ready or not New York here we come


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kalvin wake | 403 comments Chapter three A not so good flight


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kalvin wake | 403 comments link: my link texthttp//www.goodreads.com/topic/show1286092-p... secret-narrated--by-polan-crane


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kalvin wake | 403 comments Chapter three A not so good flight



Holly and me boarded the Plane we found a nice place to sit on the plane." Polan I have something to show you" Holly said. As we sat she pulled lout her phone she typed in some word they looked all jumbled up he blinked and read the words 'Poseidon'." This is the Ancient Greek god of the sea I wanted to read you the description, black hair, green eyes, of course loves water, and His children get sick when they go into high altitudes bad things happen" Holly finished. "So what is that soppose to mean" I said to her. "This sounds exactly like you" She said. Just then over the loud speaker a voice said. "This is your pilot speaking we will be taking off in 2 minuets fasen your seat belts we will stop once in Chicago, Illinois thank you and prepare for lift off". Holly and me we put our seat belts on. We could see the plane rise up off the ground after a while something in the back off my head was saying get off the plane get off the plane and I started to feel dizzy. "Um are you okay Polan ya" she said."Just feel dizzy" I said to her. "Well that is normal just calm down" She said to me. "After en minuets of just sitting their the Pilot spoke again." We are now at high enough altitude to move around". Polan looked out the window he saw lightning go in shape of words saying 'You are not welcomed here'. He thought he was going crazy. "Um I am going to the restroom" I said to holly. She nodded. I walked into the bathroom I looked at my self in the mirror. Then the water in the toilet grew a face. " You shouldn't be hear boy get off this plane the first chance you get" it said. "Why what is going to happen" asked it. Then a guy walked in. "Are you talking to the toilet?" He asked. "Of course it has a face" I said before I could stop my self from saying it. he walked by the toilet I looked with him it was still there. " Your insane" He said to me. "What but it is right there" I said really confused. "Get out I have se bathroom. I shook my head and walked out side that is when the plane tilted to the side and I landed on the floor by this random 5 year old and it spilled some type of juice all over my face. I decided not let it be cleaned up so I just left it there and went back to my seat. When I got there Holly raised an eyebrow and just laughed. "What happened?" She asked. " Well basically I am insane now and remembered when the plane tilted A 5 year old spilt some kind of juice on me" I said. "I always knew your were crazy and it is just your luck you weren't sitting when the plane tilted" She said to me with a smile. I just sighed and laid back and thought about all the craziness and went to sleep.



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kalvin wake | 403 comments Chapter four Internet Reunion


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