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Name: Roman Ambrose-Cassisus Delonay↴All things considered, Roman has never remembered much of his childhood. He’s vaguely aware of having been raised by an old woman, but that’s all. Another distinctive notion he can recall is having been close friends with Dmitrius, Wilma, but especially Camille. All four of them grew up together, all identically the same age. He now knows that these three people had not been his sole childhood allies, but an aspect to a greater ability; communicating with the dead.Age: As far as appearances foretell, about eighteen years old.ʀᴏᴍᴇ /ᴄᴀs
Type: NecromancerGrade: Senior ( 12 )⇶ Evil practitioners of black magic. They are not good at hand-to-hand combat, but are able to perform dark rituals causing their enemies to suffer and perish in terrible ways. They have the ability to animate the dead, creating undead servants to do their bidding.Personality: The first thing one might notice about Rome is the fact that he only speaks when he’s spoken to. This fact is true. He generally doesn’t enjoy interacting with others, considering he’s only ever lived in a large home by himself, accompanied by spirits no one else could see. Second, he despises physical contact, it’s foreign to him. It may sound sad, but it’s as if physical interactions is a strange language in itself; he wouldn’t be able to tell you the emotional difference between a hug and a handshake, or a kiss on the cheek from one of the lips. Furthermore, he just doesn’t like people all that much, he’d rather hole himself up in a library, head deep in books than have to suffer ten minutes within a group of chattiness.A P P E A R A N C E
Distant and rather nippy with his choice of words (once more, due to lack of real interaction), I suppose Roman’s heart is made of stone. He’s never held an emotional connection with anyone and wouldn’t know what to do with it even if he did start caring. There’s life, and there’s death, there are no gray areas in Cas’ mind. Plus, the only time he has allowed himself to get close and actually feel, it all turned out to be a hoax, so it wouldn’t be expected from him to trust anyone with the snap of his fingers.
On the brighter side, he’s undeniably protective of those who don’t deserve whatever is given to them; despite his seemingly evil nature, Roman stands up for those who can’t do it for themselves. He isn’t afraid to draw blood, which is why many would mark him off as fearless. Aside from that, not many people have managed to stick around long enough to see his softer, innocent side of Roman.
History: Entry 802
My dear journal,
I fear our meetings are growing few and scarce during these godforsaken times. It’s been two months since our last encounter, hasn’t it? Well, my beautiful Poppy has finally given birth to our beautiful boy, but her life served as a sacrifice. Us, Necromancers, are always in debt with the darker demons; our souls are, and always have been, bound by the contract our race has made with the spiritual darkness. One life withered is another soul’s bloom, as it has been for my beautiful son. His hair is darker than mine, can you believe it? Ha. It brings me great sadness knowing I will never have the chance to install a single memory of myself within my own blood. I wish to be there when his feet hold him upright and bring him into my arms. I wish to be there when he first discovers that his imaginary friends are, in fact, the deceased of the past. Legend claims that upon the birth of a pure-blood necromancer child, three dead souls are bound to the body. I will never live to know, I simply hope it is true.
Nonetheless, I hope these spiritual entities take great care of my son, no matter how much he turns out like me; a rude man with a cold heart. Oh, journal, how it saddens me also to know that this may very well be the last time I write to you. I’d like to thank you for holding the pages I hope one day, my son will come to find. I hope he reads in between the lines, understands the reasons why I was not able to raise him as my own. I love him dearly, but with Poppy gone, I fear Roman’s life, and mine as well.
My insanity has become too strong and it is time for my own sacrifice. With Poppy’s powers installed within Roman’s soul, I feel as if I must do the same and hope that my baby boy prevails.My son, if you are reading this. Your mother and I love you, and always will. Perchance one day we will see each other, I sure hope so.This marks my departure. I bid thee farewell, journal,friend.
The moment his heritage was discovered, it’s all Roman devoted his life to. Coincidentally, that’s when he found an odd book misplaced amongst the many shelves of his library. Out of intrigue and impulse, he began flipping through the pages and within moments, his back was pressed against the mahogany wood, his knees curled up, the spine of the journal cradled in between the indent his thighs made.
Entry 1Flip. Flip. Flip.
I don’t know why I’m even writing this. A friend of mine, her name is Poppy, suggested I start writing in a journal. She’s always telling me how exciting my life is and that I should write about it so someone else will have the pleasure of flipping through pages of my life. So, here I am ---
Entry 100Love stories had never been Roman's thing.
I think,
I think I might be in love with her.
This isn't good, ---
Entry 203From there, Roman actually began to read (skipping all of the lovesick entries) and learned all about this so-called supernatural school. He was astonished, incredulous to the fact that there were others than him in this world. He read for hours until he reaced the very las page.
I hate classes. Always so boring. I can't wait to graduate from this academy. I hate the angels lurking around, the nosy werewolves and the vamps seriously need to do something about their staring. It's creeping everyone out. Glad I smell like death to them, I don't have to worry about getting assaulted by one of them leeches.
Entry 802To this day, Roman is still affected by the revelation. Not only had the keys to his race been uncovered trough this journal, but it had been his father's journal. Poppy, his mother. He consulted his so-called friends and all of them finally decided to explain to him everything he needed to know in order to become a proper necromancer. After this, he trained from the age of ten, but it was at fifteen that his abilities were put to the test.
My dear journal,
Camille, as the history states, had always been closer to Roman than any of the others, and it was for obvious reasons; she had vibrant green eyes whilst the others were a dull brown, she was the spitting definition of beauty, whilst the other two could be passed off as average. One day, Camille began speaking of resurrection and how since he was a pureblood necromancer, held the capability of doing it.
She began speaking of being together, just the two of them. They would actually be able to touch and feel each other. Needless to say, Roman did everything Camille told him to do and two months later, the ritual took place. It never occurred to him how Wilma and Dmitrius had simply left; it was as if he was stricken with a sort of faint amnesia, put under a spell, if you will. He did the pain induced ritual, and despite all the immense pain it put him through, his only thoughts were of the life he was going to be spending with Camille – his one true love. That night had been both the worst and best night of his life. Throughout the entire process, Camille was hugging him and as the ritual continued, he began to feel her warmth. He could feel Camille’s arms braced tightly around his neck as his chest bled, as he screamed in agony; he could feel her breath upon his neck, and then his ear, murmuring the sweetest things.
The second the ritual ended, she was gone. As Roman collapsed to the ground, the moon shining down on him, he caught sight of black wings disappearing in the dead of the night, laughing as the beauty twirled in the air. He watched in shock as the beautiful face he associated with Camille’s beautiful name turned into a hideous demon and off they were.
Never did Roman see her again. Now missing a third of his spirit heart and in deep conflict between his two remaining soul threads, he’s grown to become a changed boy. He’s come to realize that he’d picked evil over the good. He had reincarnated a demon that had used him all along just so she could have a chance to live again. He’s turned to the Academy, the one his father went to, vowing he’d get his revenge, fix his wrongs by condemning the wretched demon he’s released back where she belongs. He’s come here in the hopes of finding more of his father’s history, perhaps even his mother; anything to bring him closer to his roots.
Status: N/A
Powers:
Death Inducement ~ Limited to the amount of pain the user can bear himself. He can only kill by touch and the deed is done mentally; he shuts the brain down and the pain is but an illusion. Even then, the death is still real. Every time Roman kills somebody, the stronger he becomes but the pain induced comes back to bite him half as strong, which is why he is only able to cast the pain he is able to endure. Intense staring will also induce death.Family: None.
Undeath Magic ~ In order for him to contact a spirit, he must have some sort of visual of what they looked like and their complete name. He is able to raise the dead, but has never attempted to reincarnate after the happening.
Necroplasmic Conversion ~ Well, this ability only works if someone near him is dying or necroplasm energy resides on the Earth he stands, meaning that someone had once died there.
Other: Roman did go back and read his parents' love story.
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[ Seera Tybods | Approved ]
Baa: I love your template. Seriously, it might be one of my favorites that I've seen so far (and trust me, that's saying something). The appearance part was genius. Anyways, I didn't find anything wrong with it at all, so I'd say you're as good as golden.
[ Roman Ambrose-Cassisus Delonay | Approved ]




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Full Name:Sapphira Melinda Lazar
Nickname(s):Sapphire, Mel, Linda
Gender:Female
Age:17
Date of birth:June 12th 1995

Zodiac:Gemini

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Time of Birth:12:13PM.
Place of Birth:Romania
Species:⅓ Demigod ⅓ Shadowhunter ⅓ Angel

Appearance:

»» Hair:Sapphira has long wavy blonde locks of her. Her hair is midway down her back as has a slight wave to it that she really loves. Her hair is more of a dark blonde than anything and going more toward her scalp it starts to turn more brown than blonde. She gets her blonde hair from her father, but the brown more toward the scalp is from her mother.
»»Eyes:Her eyes are a dark, but still bright milk chocolate brown color. Even though her eyes are brown and some may find brown eyes dull her eyes are anything but dull. Despite to color her eyes can light up a room when she’s in a happy mood. Of course when she’s pissed off her eyes turn such a dull dark brown that they appear black. She gets her eye color from her mother, but the brightness to her eyes is from her father along with them being almost black when she’s pissed and really bright when she’s happy.
»» Weight:Sapphira weighs 110 lbs. which in her opinion is the perfect weight for herself and she is completely satisfied with her body weight.
»» Height:5’5 which in her opinion is an average height but she likes the height anyways. Yeah some people consider that short, but for her its a good size because she doesn't want to be too short or too tall.
»» Distinguished Marks:Surgery Scar above her heart because she has a hole in her heart which results in her having to have surgery on her heart every year. She also has a bunch of scars on her wrist and arms from cutting.
»»Tattoos:Simple Red Heart with the initials KR on her left wrist where there are not any scars and she makes sure not to cut there.
»»Wings:Has a wingspan of 12 ft.

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Personality:
Adventurous, Calm, Clever, Confident, Creative, Daring, Faithful, Fun-loving, Honest, Loyal, Protective, Witty, Outspoken, Proud, Sarcastic, Blunt, Ignorant, Naive and Secretive, these are all some of Sapphira’s most important personality traits. Some of these is how she see’s herself, some are how her friends and family sees her and some of these are how she and her friends and family see her.
We’ll start with how she see’s herself. She sees herself as mostly Calm, clever and confident. She sees herself as calm because in most situations that are life and death she won’t be the one freaking out she’ll be the one trying to figure things out the smart way. This is also how she sees herself as clever. Well that and she finds any pranks and practical jokes she plays on other as clever as well. Mostly because with those she either doesn’t get caught or she gets out of trouble if she does get caught which some might say being able to avoid getting in trouble for certain pranks makes her clever. She sees herself as confident not because she has the guts to get up in-front of the class and give a speech or anything like that. Her confidence in her opinion has more to do with any tasks she has to do especially if she believes in them. She has totally confidence in her abilities like her flying ability or her water manipulation ability. She also has complete confidence in her fighting ability and her running ability. Now she knows not to mix this up with arrogance. She isn’t an arrogant person who believes she will always win and that she’s better than everyone. She just has to confidence that she can do her best.
How other sees her, but she doesn’t see herself as is Blunt, Ignorant and Naive. People see her as blunt because she doesn’t sugar coat things. She tell things to people the way it is. The reason she doesn’t see herself as blunt though is because she tries to be as nice about whatever she is saying as possible without sugar coating it and some people see that as her being blunt. Her ignorance and naivety, well that is from a few things. She doesn’t see the bad in people, the evil in the world. She has the belief that everyone can be good. That everyone is inherently good and they just chose to be a little bad sometimes. She just doesn’t see anyone or anything as evil. Bad sometimes yes. Rude and mean definitely, but to her no one is completely evil. Her ignorance also comes from the fact that despite that sometimes she can be um dirty minded at times when comes down to it she can be really rather ignorant to anything to do with sex in general.
Everyone including herself see her as loyal, honest, sarcastic, fun-loving, daring, faithful, creative, protective, witty, outspoken, proud and secretive. Well I could tell you a million different reason why Sapphira are always these things and why she and everyone around her believes this, but I won’t. A few reasons though are these. Her loyalty and faithfulness have no bounds. If you are someone Sapphira cares about she will go to the ends of the earth to do whatever it is she can for you. If you need her for anything she’ll do whatever she can and most people know this about her. Her family and friends know she’d die for them in a heartbeat if the situation called for it. Which for them can be a problem at times because that’s the last thing they want her to do so if there is a life or death situation they do there best to keep her out of it so she doesn’t become a martyn. Along with being willing to give her life up for someone Sapphira is also will to kill for the people she cares about.
Then there is Sapphira’s more fun-loving, sarcastic, witty side. Sapphira is a sarcastic bastard. And by that I mean she is always always being witty and sarcastic. During the best and worst situations she will have something sarcastic to say. Sometimes people call her a smartass because of it mostly because when being sarcastic she loves to point out the obvious in the most sarcastic fashion. She has a sharp tongue filled with witty retorts and sarcastic comments just waiting to be said. And she loves joking around and pranking people which is why she’s considered fun-loving. She loves to have fun, whether that is telling jokes, because witty and sarcastic, or pulling stupid pranks on people sometimes just to annoy the hell out of them. Yeah there are people who believe she is really annoying, but she can’t help it. She has ODD(oppositional defiant disorder) and well when one of the “symptoms” of annoying others deliberately what do you expect. Hopefully not some quiet girl who never talks because you're hoping for way too much. I guess in a way this is why people consider her outspoken. She isn’t afraid to speak her mind and tell people what she believes in. She will tell you straight up what she believes and why her belief is right and yours is wrong. She isn’t trying to be rude she’s just expressing her beliefs, but in some ways people believe she is rude for doing so.
Now for her daring, creative and adventurous side. Sapphire is very daring and adventurous. She loves exploring new things no matter how dangerous and daring they may be. She will never but out of a dare (unless it doesn’t coincide with her beliefs) no matter how dangerous it may be. Part of her adventurousness though is just from the fact that she loves nature. She loves to be outside doing new things and just exploring. Or just walking around or sitting and reading, writing, drawing. She especially loves anything to do with outdoor swimming which may have more to do with being Poseidon’s daughter than anything else. Her creative side coincides with her daring and adventurous ways. I say that because most of most daring adventures are her most creative ones. She’s also creative though because she spends a lot of time doing creative things like writing, drawing, writing songs, dancing etc.
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And last her honesty. Sapphira can be known to be brutally honest and she knows this. Some people say she’s too blunt with her honesty because she doesn’t sugar coat things be she had to disagree. In the long run its better to know the truth no sugar coating involved then to find out later when its too late to do anything about the situation. At least that’s her opinion. She hates liars and she almost never lies. The only time she will lie is if it is life or death for her family and friends and sometimes herself.

Family:
Stepmom:Carolyn Lazar[37] (Witch)

Step Dad:Greg Lazar[40] (½ Human ½ Vampire)

Step Sister:Nadia Lazar[19] ⅓ Human ⅓ Vampire ⅓ Witch

Step Brother:Ronan Lazar[21]⅓ Human ⅓ Vampire ⅓ Witch

Step Sister:Talia Lazar[6] ⅓ Human ⅓ Vampire ⅓ Witch

Biological Father:Greek God Poseidon (God of the Sea)
Biological Mother:Maria Carstairs(Shadowhunter)
Biological Grandmother:Chastity(Angel)
Biological Grandfather:Joe Carstairs(Shadowhunter)

History:
Likes:
Chocolate
Reading
Writing
Listening to music
Singing
Dancing
Cats
Dogs
Cheetahs
Dolphins
Mythology
Nature
Dislikes:
Spiders
Bugs
Fire
Her 3 foster families
Her biological parents
Homophobes
Liars
Being unable to help
Phobias:
Arsonphobia- Fear of fire.
Claustrophobia- Fear of confined spaces.
Cleithrophobia or Cleisiophobia- Fear of being locked in an enclosed place.
Philophobia- Fear of falling in love or being in love.

Weaknesses:
Depression
Phobias
Ignorance
Naivety
Courageous
Fatal Flaw:Loyalty
Strengths:
Running
Climbing
Swimming
Reading
Writing
Singing
Drawing
Powers:Mind reading, Astral Projection, Molecular Immobilization, Molecular Combustion, Telekinesis, Pathokinesis, Levitation, Orb-Shield, Teleportation, Healing, Flying and Water Manipulation.

Sexuality:Bisexual
Relationship Status:Single(Just ask!)
Blood Type:AB+
Mental/Physical Disorders:
ADHD
ODD
Depression
Anxiety

Playlist:
“A Place in this World” Taylor Swift
“Breakaway” Kelly Clarkson
“If I Die Young” The Band Perry
“I’m Not a Girl Not Yet a Woman” Britney Spears
“Independence Day” Carrie Underwood
“My Immortal” Evanescence
“Perfect” Simple Plan
“Remember When” Avril Lavigne
“Diary of Me” Taylor Swift
“Brought Up That Way” Taylor Swift
“Welcome to my Life” Simple Plan
“Blown Away” Carrie Underwood
“Demons” Imagine Dragons
“Warrior” Beth Crowley
“When the Darkness Comes” Colbie Caillat
Other:She plays the Piano and Guitar and she is really good friends with Joshua Cadmar. Her favorite colors are blue, purple and green. She has a pet pegasus named Snowball who is 5 years old.
Snowball:


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Shayne Elijah Winchester-Novak Benjamin Morningstar the Yellow - Eyed
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It says right on there, 'Fatal Flaw: Loyalty' it's under the picture of his Dad.... Of course he has more than one flaw, but those will be in the description one it's up.

It says right on there, 'Fatal Flaw: Loyalty' it's under the picture of his Dad.... Of course he has more than one flaw, bu..."
Not the right type of flaw. Personality flaw. You made a list under personality of basically all the things that can be a moral backbone to a blameless hero. You can make the character, but it will be a boring one.
message 412:
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Shayne Elijah Winchester-Novak Benjamin Morningstar the Yellow - Eyed
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It says right on there, 'Fatal Flaw: Loyalty' it's under the picture of his Dad.... Of course he has more than..."
Uhm... Ok then? Thanks? I think...
Name:Asha Stark-weather
Age:looks 17 is about 100
Gender:F
Type(ex: werewolf, vampire, witch, elemental, etc.):Shifter
Grade:11th (i think, but I'm English)
Appearance: Hair:multicoloured and long ,curly.
Eyes :A. Golden honey colour but change often because of her power.
Height:5'7 which she considers the perfect height.
Style : Shorts or jeans and t-shirts and a pendant from her mother. http://www.glamcheck.com/fashion/2011...
http://godsofart.com/sakimi-chan
For the link above it is the 10th picture
Personality:bubbly and bookish not shy at all and mad when you get to know her.She has a fiery temper but tries to stay calm most of the time and has become good at it.She loves small children ,however much some older people can onnoy her.
Flaw: Her temper.things that soark her temper are things like needless noise ,anti-social people ,rude people and other little things.
History:Lived in England until she was 3 and then her family moved to America, a few months after her 5 th birthday though all of her family died in a car crash.She was very upset but tried to get on with her new life going from family to family until she was 16 and could live on her own she lived like that until she was about 59 whens she found out about the scool wich was a relief as she couldn't live in the same place for any amount of time as she did not age. She found the school through another shifter named Kai who left the town 3 days after meeting her.
Crush/Relationship:none
Family: deceased
Other:She speaks six languages ,English, French, German, Spanish ,Italian and Ukrainian.
Power:She can shift into any animal she has seen in person .When she shifts what looks like a multicoloured explosions happens around her. If thwe animal is hurt she takes the animals form as it is when it is injured .She cannot take form as other humans. http://www.wallpapernono.com/Anime/Me...
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Age:looks 17 is about 100
Gender:F
Type(ex: werewolf, vampire, witch, elemental, etc.):Shifter
Grade:11th (i think, but I'm English)
Appearance: Hair:multicoloured and long ,curly.
Eyes :A. Golden honey colour but change often because of her power.
Height:5'7 which she considers the perfect height.
Style : Shorts or jeans and t-shirts and a pendant from her mother. http://www.glamcheck.com/fashion/2011...
http://godsofart.com/sakimi-chan
For the link above it is the 10th picture
Personality:bubbly and bookish not shy at all and mad when you get to know her.She has a fiery temper but tries to stay calm most of the time and has become good at it.She loves small children ,however much some older people can onnoy her.
Flaw: Her temper.things that soark her temper are things like needless noise ,anti-social people ,rude people and other little things.
History:Lived in England until she was 3 and then her family moved to America, a few months after her 5 th birthday though all of her family died in a car crash.She was very upset but tried to get on with her new life going from family to family until she was 16 and could live on her own she lived like that until she was about 59 whens she found out about the scool wich was a relief as she couldn't live in the same place for any amount of time as she did not age. She found the school through another shifter named Kai who left the town 3 days after meeting her.
Crush/Relationship:none
Family: deceased
Other:She speaks six languages ,English, French, German, Spanish ,Italian and Ukrainian.
Power:She can shift into any animal she has seen in person .When she shifts what looks like a multicoloured explosions happens around her. If thwe animal is hurt she takes the animals form as it is when it is injured .She cannot take form as other humans. http://www.wallpapernono.com/Anime/Me...
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Does her power work with people? Can she gather more than one form of the same animal? If she's hurt as an animal, does she keep the wound when shifting? How quickly does she shift?
Personality is too short. Maybe list some of the situations that would spark her temper.
History is too short. How did she react to their deaths? Who did she live with after that? How did she find the school?
Family: Okay, who were they before they died?
Grade: You think? You're English or you aren't.
Sorry about the languages one edit didn't work I'll fix it .


Okay, I'd still like to see these.
If she's hurt as an animal, does she keep the wound when shifting? How quickly does she shift?
Personality is too short. Maybe list some of the situations that would spark her temper.
History is too short. How did she react to their deaths? Who did she live with after that? How did she find the school?
Family: Okay, who were they before they died?

Age:(looks 18 but was born 14,000 years ago)
Place of Birth: Rome,Italy
Type(ex: werewolf, vampire, witch, elemental, etc.):Superhuman Mutant
Grade:12
Appearance: Not the most handsome man out there he look human but is anything but that. ( http://chipchickcom.wpengine.netdna-c... ) .He is considered to look very confident but in reality he is just glad to leave the big city life of normal humans and Join other people like him.
Personality:He is very Childish,Funny,Charismatic,Thoughtful,Caring,Loyal.But get to know this guy and if it ends well or not you can always say you're glad you meet him,Can get mad if buttons are pressed.
History:Danny Solorio was born in The early middle ages.He Didn't grow up with family instead he had This vampire who found him in a burning house. This man saved him.He(Danny)was found by this Wandering man called (Samuel) when he was only 2 years old. He took him under his wing but he wasn't the nicest man to him. He would beat him if he never paid attention or did what he was told you can imagine that they didn't get along. He moved around alot as a kid he never got to stay in one place for too long because (Samuel) always got in trouble. Then around the time Americas they left to there so they can Move on from Europe they where hated everywhere there.Once in the Americas lie was only harder for (Danny).He had to run away a few times and he would go right back because there was nowhere else for him.The it happened(the time was 1920s Find this girl named Rose.Oh Rose was so important to him they knew they were meant to be,it was like love at first sight when they meet.They Did everything together;Danny never had showed anyone his powers he didn't think is was a big deal,but he thought this girl was special he he went on and showed him was he could do;how he could pick up a full blown Model T that he saved up to buy them from working at the corner Speck easy.He lifted it up without his face even tensing up. She just stopped and looked straight at her and he saw her reach for something behind her.He used his e-ray vision not to seer her naked but wondering what was her response to this,She was reaching for a Dagger,not just any dagger it was a Shadow Hunter Dagger. She was a shadow Hunter exactly what hunted his kind. So he loved her to much to kill her so he ran.Ran like he had nothing to lose. He just went back at Samuel's house and found him dead.A dagger cut his head off How could she do this to him...He got his stuff ready to get out of there as soon as possible looking though stuff he saw this letter with a weird stamp and opened it and it said:(invitation to go to Super Natural Academy)He thought anything is better than this useless life and left in a rush.
Crush/Relationship:[OPEN]But pretends to play hard to get
Sexuality:Straight (But Likes Gay people because they are funny)
Eyes :Grey sometimes turn Black when angry
Height:5'7 which he considers the perfect height.
Style : Mostly Suits
Family:Foster Father Samuel:Dead
( http://fast.swide.com/wp-content/uplo... )
Biological Father:Damain Keller(ShadowHunter):Dead
Biological Mother:Sara Keller(Shadowhunter):Dead
Other:He speaks Latin and English
Power:Immortal,Strength(Can lift The 58,000 metric tons or 127,868,112 pounds.) (yes i looked it up lol) ,Super Speed(100/mph),invisibility, X-ray vision
Weaknesses:
Ice crystals
Shadow Hunter Weapons
Angel Blades
Fatal Flaw: Having trust issues and it being hard to make real good friends.

Age: 150
Type: Air elemental from the 891st dimension
Grade: 9th
Appearance: Mia Alexanders originally looked like a mass of wind during her... birth... I guess. Her name was, at the time, Rhiannon. When she was sent here, she was given a body to inhabit. Sadly, not a good one. A used one. In other words, she got one off of someone who had died. She appears as a hag, her pale flesh hanging off of her and her gray eyes jittering as though about to collapse. Her hair has turned white and she regularly trembles from standing with brittle bones that often seem to complain that they'd retired years ago. She is short, breaking, and hoping that the body lasts until the end of her education. There are very few opportunities for wind masses/elementals who are not educated back in her dimension.
Personality: Mia is a complainer, griping about this and that, her main annoyance the rather worn body described above. She tries to learn a lot, get ahead while she can, but sadly the brain of the body she inhabited was senile. Sometimes she cannot force her mind to focus and she will forget crucial information. Fortunately, her adopted mind knows English, though often will put in the wrong formality.
Ex:
"I'm sorry!" -person #1
"You're welcome!" -Mia
Separate from her host, Rhia is very serious, but with her host's senile mind kicking in every once in awhile, she can come off as silly. She yearns for freedom and opportunity, though her host severely limits that, prompting her to be even more cranky than usual.
History: Rhiannon is living a typical wind mass's life. Be born from a hurricane, go to primary education, head to another dimension for the secondary and post-secondary. Her last school was in the 777th dimension, working with the wizard Batillus in the body of a dead enchantress who was kind enough to die young of a fever. Batillus often asked her to spy on other enchantresses for Ba'al, or Idol, who the wizard was fiercely loyal to. She did so, and reported at least a dozen enchantresses to Batill, who wasted no time in informing his master. Usually those people disappeared. She was rewarded for her kindness to Ba'al. She received the best education in mastery over weather that the 777th dimension had to offer, but when that area collapsed into civil war, Batill offered her refuge here. She accepted, but her host body was torn apart en route. She had to get another one. She hobbled into the Academy and enrolled. With a glowing recommendation from Batillus, she made it in and is now studying everything remotely useful to her natural role in wind mass society.
Crush/Relationship: It is implied in Batillus by that she has a crush on our titular character.
Family: She was one of the many winds that branched from the Great Hurricane of the 891st dimension.
Other: She doesn't know of Batill's eventual betrayal of his master.
Power: Rhiannon, who goes by her host's name, can create gusts of wind powerful enough to carry a human body, which she often uses for travel-by-flight because of the brittleness of her bones. With time and focus, she can will a tornado to appear, but has not yet mastered hurricanes. She can abandon her host after it dies, and then she can control the winds with much more strength, reaching the speeds of a powerful tropical storm. For now, though, she is just learning.
Other other: She's going to die.
Weaknesses: Her host body would not be hard to overpower, but the trick would be capturing her after. Just as the host died, one would have to twist the wind so that she ended up in a compressed form that could easily be sealed in a box. Without the ability to blow or move about, she would die in about a week.

Age: 14
Type(ex: werewolf, vampire, witch, elemental, etc.): Witch
Grade: 9th
Appearance: http://s3.favim.com/orig/45/eyes-ging...
Personality: Friendly, but shy in the beginning. She's REALLY sarcastic, and gets VERY angry, though it's rare. She's stubborn and says what's on her mind.
History: She was left in a mansion with no memory when she was twelve. She discovered her powers and came up with the name Dawn Felicis when reading Harry Potter.
Crush/Relationship: None yet
Family: None
Other: She has flashbacks sometimes, which is why she knows she's 14. Her powers work best at dawn (hence the name).
Power: Witchy stuff (Potions, Charms), and she's best at summoning animals and plants.
You can have pets but
> Describe the character's appearance and not just add a link. Make sure it's very descriptive.
> she can't be in 8th grade, since this is a high school

Age: 14
Type(ex: werewolf, vampire, witch, elemental, etc.): Witch
Grade: 9th
Appearance: http://s3.favim.com/orig/45/eyes-ging...
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Name: Pass
Age: Pass
Type: Pass
Appearance: Fail. Be descriptive.
Personality: Fail. Those cannot possibly be her only traits.
History: Fail. Just because she forgot doesn't mean you have to keep it from the rest of us. What's happened in the three years since?
C/R: Pass.
Family: Fail. Either explain why she has no parents (born from clay or something) or tell us who they are.
Other: Pass. Grr.
Power: Fail. Explain her limits and abilities.

You know there's around seven people in the world that look similar to you...and there's the whole 'doppelganger' thing..and I'm using Dylan from the Internship while you are using his appearance from Teen Wolf; with notable differences in the hair and clothing style..but if you really don't want me to use that appearance, I'll change it, also, since your online, I've been waiting months for your reply in the Angel Hall.
Sexy~The~T.A.R.D.I.S. wrote: "₴єaTнёFїёпd puǝıɟ wrote: "I have a character with that appearance already"
You know there's around seven people in the world that look similar to you...and there's the whole 'doppelganger' thing....."
It would be nice if you changed it
You know there's around seven people in the world that look similar to you...and there's the whole 'doppelganger' thing....."
It would be nice if you changed it
[ Alex ]
Please elaborate on what he can shift into. At this moment, it's vague and could easily be rerouted into godmodding
Please elaborate on what he can shift into. At this moment, it's vague and could easily be rerouted into godmodding
₴єaTнёFїёпd puǝıɟ wrote: "[ Alex ]
Please elaborate on what he can shift into. At this moment, it's vague and could easily be rerouted into godmodding"
Sorry about that object and person thing i only wanted Alex to change into animals but my brother changed it, i am sorry
Please elaborate on what he can shift into. At this moment, it's vague and could easily be rerouted into godmodding"
Sorry about that object and person thing i only wanted Alex to change into animals but my brother changed it, i am sorry
Name: Matthew Fuller
Age: 16
Type(ex: werewolf, vampire, witch, elemental, etc.): Mutant
Grade: 10
Appearance: https://p.gr-assets.com/540x540/fit/h...
Personality: Matthew's outlook on life is very positive. He's cheery, outgoing, optimistic, friendly, and makes it a point to be kind to everyone. He prefers to see the good in people rather than the bad, but if he senses elements of pretension, pessimism, or rudeness, his opinion of that person will already be negative. He's very open with how he feels and very affectionate when needed to be, but also very fierce when required, as well. His demeanor from playful and sweet can change quickly to that of anger and ferocity, which gives him an unpredictable feel.
History: Matthew grew up in a motherless home, and as an only child. His father, Daniel Fuller, has taught him many life lessons on morality, purity, and being a leader. His father kept him isolated for his childhood years, because of Matthew's capabilities. A genetic mutation allowed Matthew to be gifted with incredible speed, matched by no man or being. It's unknown exactly how this capability was given to Matthew, but he sees it as a tremendous blessing.
Crush/Relationship: Open!!
Family: Father back home in Colorado.
Other: Matthew has always had a passionate love for music, and hopes to one day pursue a career in it. He uses his power only for good.
Power: Extreme speed.
Age: 16
Type(ex: werewolf, vampire, witch, elemental, etc.): Mutant
Grade: 10
Appearance: https://p.gr-assets.com/540x540/fit/h...
Personality: Matthew's outlook on life is very positive. He's cheery, outgoing, optimistic, friendly, and makes it a point to be kind to everyone. He prefers to see the good in people rather than the bad, but if he senses elements of pretension, pessimism, or rudeness, his opinion of that person will already be negative. He's very open with how he feels and very affectionate when needed to be, but also very fierce when required, as well. His demeanor from playful and sweet can change quickly to that of anger and ferocity, which gives him an unpredictable feel.
History: Matthew grew up in a motherless home, and as an only child. His father, Daniel Fuller, has taught him many life lessons on morality, purity, and being a leader. His father kept him isolated for his childhood years, because of Matthew's capabilities. A genetic mutation allowed Matthew to be gifted with incredible speed, matched by no man or being. It's unknown exactly how this capability was given to Matthew, but he sees it as a tremendous blessing.
Crush/Relationship: Open!!
Family: Father back home in Colorado.
Other: Matthew has always had a passionate love for music, and hopes to one day pursue a career in it. He uses his power only for good.
Power: Extreme speed.

Age: Pass
Type: Fail. Mutant how?
Grade: 10
Appearance: Fail. You have to actually write something.
Personality: Pass. Barely.
History: Fail. How did he come to this school?
C/R: Pass.
Family: Fail. Really? No one else? Uncle, brother, grandparents? Going to tell us why his mother was never there? How about the name of the father?
Other: Grr. Pass.
Power: Fail. How fast can he run? Does it wear him out quickly?
NAME: Nicole Wood
AGE: 15
GENDER: Female
SEXUALITY: Straight
CRUSH: None
RELATIONSHIP : Single
TYPE: Teleporter
POWER: She can teleport anywhere that she has been. Her teleportation is quick as a wink. It makes a rumbling noise when she teleports. She can take people with her. But it makes her tired more quickly
GRADE: 12
APPERANCE: http://www.bing.com/images/search?q=g...
Nicole is slim and fit. She has got electric blue eyes and wavy brown hair. She has a scar from her temple to the corner of her mouth, she doesn't know how she got it. She has really pale skin. She is five foot tall. Nicole's ears are shaped like an elf's.
PERSONALITY: Nicki is calm and collected, she is willing to help anyone or anything in need. She might come of as cold-hearted but she is the opposite she is a kind and caring. She hates to start a fight but she can end one. Nicole isn't violent but she can be quite dangerous if need be. If you want some one to have your back you won't be disappointed. She always manages to find positive in negative situations. Her favorite saying is; Life is to short for negativity so be positive.
HISTORY: Nicole was always bouncing from one foster home to another never knew where she fit in, people used to call her a freak.She had only one friend named Sasha, she misses her terribly, Sasha was run over by a car and she is in a coma but it's not likely that she will wake up. They've known each-other for years, that's why she doesn't want to get close to anyone, because anyone who she gets close to gets hurt or worse. When she was a baby her biological parents dropped her of at the orphanage, she doesn't know why. Ever since she could walk and talk she was on a quest to find her mom and dad. But she never did find them, at the age of 13 she gave up the search. When she was 15 and was in one of her foster homes, a letter arrived addressed to her, surprised at first Nicole opened the letter read it then immediately burned it. Nicki packed her bags and and of to the Academy she went, hopping for a better life. But ever since she joined the Academy no one bothered her in a nasty way.Nicole is lonely and sad but she puts a happy face on to hide it.
FAMILY:Mother: Lillian Wood. Father: Dean Wood
OTHER: She can play the violin.
AGE: 15
GENDER: Female
SEXUALITY: Straight
CRUSH: None
RELATIONSHIP : Single
TYPE: Teleporter
POWER: She can teleport anywhere that she has been. Her teleportation is quick as a wink. It makes a rumbling noise when she teleports. She can take people with her. But it makes her tired more quickly
GRADE: 12
APPERANCE: http://www.bing.com/images/search?q=g...
Nicole is slim and fit. She has got electric blue eyes and wavy brown hair. She has a scar from her temple to the corner of her mouth, she doesn't know how she got it. She has really pale skin. She is five foot tall. Nicole's ears are shaped like an elf's.
PERSONALITY: Nicki is calm and collected, she is willing to help anyone or anything in need. She might come of as cold-hearted but she is the opposite she is a kind and caring. She hates to start a fight but she can end one. Nicole isn't violent but she can be quite dangerous if need be. If you want some one to have your back you won't be disappointed. She always manages to find positive in negative situations. Her favorite saying is; Life is to short for negativity so be positive.
HISTORY: Nicole was always bouncing from one foster home to another never knew where she fit in, people used to call her a freak.She had only one friend named Sasha, she misses her terribly, Sasha was run over by a car and she is in a coma but it's not likely that she will wake up. They've known each-other for years, that's why she doesn't want to get close to anyone, because anyone who she gets close to gets hurt or worse. When she was a baby her biological parents dropped her of at the orphanage, she doesn't know why. Ever since she could walk and talk she was on a quest to find her mom and dad. But she never did find them, at the age of 13 she gave up the search. When she was 15 and was in one of her foster homes, a letter arrived addressed to her, surprised at first Nicole opened the letter read it then immediately burned it. Nicki packed her bags and and of to the Academy she went, hopping for a better life. But ever since she joined the Academy no one bothered her in a nasty way.Nicole is lonely and sad but she puts a happy face on to hide it.
FAMILY:Mother: Lillian Wood. Father: Dean Wood
OTHER: She can play the violin.
Ok, I'll work on it, don't worry ma'am :)

Same goes for the personality and history. We've never met this person, so we have no clue of anything about them. Make us know them inside and out just by reading the template.
Also, you might want to bold the things like 'history', 'personality', and whatnot. You should also put a bit more spacing in there between every section. It just makes it a little easier to read.
And sorry, Sea, if I stepped on your toes there >.<
Oh, what do i have wrong now? I'll fix it right up :)

Same goes for the personality and history. We've never met this person, so we have no clue of anything about them. Make us know them inside and out just by reading the template.
Also, you might want to bold the things like 'history', 'personality', and whatnot. You should also put a bit more spacing in there between every section. It just makes it a little easier to read.
It's still a bit sparse... I'd suggest looking at some of the approved characters.

Age: Fail. Where is it?
Power: Does she have the potential to teleport better? How fast is her teleportation? Can she take anyone with her? Does it make a sound when she teleports?
Grade: Pass
Appearance: Fail. Height? Scars? Distinguishing features? Skin color? Ear shape?
Personality: Pass. Barely.
History: Grr. Borderline. Pass.
Family: Fail. Well, let us know, please.
Other: Pass.
My character in now fixed (sorry for the big wait.)