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message 351: by Lara (last edited Oct 20, 2013 03:21PM) (new)

Lara (laracinaroglu) Name: Celestine Fae Green

Age: 18

Type: witch

Grade: 12

Appearance: Green eyes and reddish brown hair.

description

Personality: She is usually quiet and pays a lot of attention to her surroundings. Because of this she seems very mysterious to people around her. Her friends and people she trusts are the only ones to see the fun and friendly side of her. If one gets to know her, she or he would realize that Celestine is dependable, trustworthy, loves laughing and having fun, and has strong instincts. She can intimidate people she does not like by silence or by short verbal insults that only the target can understand.

History: Celestine was born in 1995 to a rich, respected family in the City of York in North Yorkshire, England. Her mother was Parisian and her father was British. Celestine had a twin sister, Josselyn Rose, but she died with her parents in England at their mansion in 2009. A group of supernatural enemies of Sir Green came to finish off the family. Fortunately Celestine had been late to dinner because of a school research she was completing at the school's library. When she came home and saw her parents' and twin's bloody bodies an the floor she broke down until she picked herself up again and swore to avenge her family. Nobody but here nanny in England knows about the reason she came to Supernatural Academy; she found a clue connecting her family to this academy. She is looking for an explanation and find a way to bring justice.

Crush/Relationship: Single, trying to stay away from boys to focus on her task; it is very hard sometimes.

Family: Her mother is Lilly Maria Green, her father is William Evan Green, and her twin sister is Josselyn Rose Green. They were all killed.

Other: She never takes of her necklace that her mother had given her the day before she was murdered.

description

Power: She can cast spells to transfer one's appearance for five hours, use telekinesis and move objects, and see people's sins. She is also great at archery and sword fighting. Her father has also given her combat fighting lessons.

Hobbies: She loves reading, and hitting targets with a bow on her free time.


message 352: by ۞ ǰ ☯ ɐ ♪ ɖ ♌ ƺ ۞ (last edited Oct 24, 2013 04:20PM) (new)

۞      ǰ ☯ ɐ ♪ ɖ ♌ ƺ     ۞ | 45 comments Name: Valentina Mae Clarence 'Val'

Age: 16

Species: Water Elemental

Appearance:
Height: 5'8"
Weight: 128 lb

Val looks almost unnatural. She has an angular face, with full lips and eyes that appear strangely large paired with her voluminous brown hair. She has a slender waist, and virtually nothing to show. Her body appears to be a funnel when you factor in her slim legs.

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Personality: Val is a spunky and headstrong girl. She won't take no for an answer. She is extremely nice, but very impatient. Val doesn't just 'get emotional and cry'. A natural negotiator, she doesn't back down. Her first answer is her answer. She has high self-esteem and an unforgiving nature. She generates contagious enthusiasm and is moderately OCD. Val is impulsive and violent, and tends to begin quarrels. She is cynical, snide, and makes ironic or sarcastic comments. Val gets frustrated and annoyed easily. She is quick to anger and slow to forgive. She has an overactive imagination, but it helps her analyze situations to make quick plans.

History: Valentine Mae Clarence was born in Paris, France. She was the third daughter in a family of three, born to known criminals Martitia Carla Clarence and Franco Clarence, both of whom were water elementals. When Valentine was five, Martitia and Franco were in trouble with the kingpins of the criminal empire for a reason never known to Val. They were 'gangsters', and killed their enemies and their enemies' allies ruthlessly, thus establishing themselves in a high position. They arrived to kill the Clarence family at midnight. Val's quick-thinking older sister Maretta devised a plan for Valentine to escape, along with her two younger siblings. As they clambered out of the secret passage, Val heard the gunshots signaling the death of her four other loved ones. She dragged her two siblings over mountains and through forests, even stowing away on a private jet. You learned things from unlawful parents. Upon their arrival in the O'Hare Airport, Val's charges were fired upon, and so her two remaining family members died. At this moment, Val's heart turned cold and black. She had nothing to live for. All her pain and grief welled up, and she summoned her strength, so for the first time, she used her water powers. On the run, she starved and sheltered under public stairs and under bridges. One day, as she was on the verge of death, a letter arrived, cheerfully inviting her to join Supernatural Academy. Seeing as she had no other choices, and she was promised a 'place to live' and 'food', Val accepted. Maybe she could settle down, meet some friends, begin dating...

As she stepped into the gates of Supernatural Academy, Val skeptically took in the marvelous landscaping and beautiful castle, not to mention the neatly trimmed hedges. Not her style. With a sigh, she continued dragging her suitcase across the lawn, ignoring the large 'KEEP OFF THE GRASS' sign. That's how Val earned detention for the first, and certainly not the last, time, at Supernatural Academy, which was destined to be her home.

Powers:
Val only possess basic water abilities. However, because her mother and father were water elementals, her abilities her strengthened slightly in certain aspects.

Summoning
Like all water elementals, Val can summon water, but the difference is that she can summon a reasonably large amount of water (not like an ocean).

Control
Val can control water that has not been summoned by her or another water elemental. She can warp the water, solidify it, or turn it into steam.

Cloudbursts
Only when she is incredibly bored, annoyed, or angry will Val summon a cloudburst. If her negative emotion intensifies, an occasional flash of lightning may occur within the area of impact.

Crush/Relationship: Single but looking

Other: Val always wears her sister Maretta's sapphire necklace.

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message 353: by Katherine (new)

Katherine (pandafox) Full Name: Cassandra Clover (Most people call her Clover or Clarissa)

Gender: Female

Age; Permanently: 17

Turned: 1976

Grade:10

Species (Vampire, Werewolf, Mutant, Witch etc.): Vampire

Date of Birth: 1959

Family:
Her parents died during the first outbreak of the Zaire virus in Yambuku, a small village located north of the city of Kinshasa.
Only child
No other family

Appearance:



Personality:
Joyful
Easily entertained
Stubborn
Rational
Intuitive

Abilities, Powers and/or Weapons:
She’s trained herself in Self-Defense and doesn’t believe in violence
Fast
Smart
Strong

Crush/Boyfriend/Girlfriend:
None, but wants a relationship.

Sexuality: (Heterosexual, Homosexual, Bisexual, Asexual)
Heterosexual

History:

For Cassandra’s 17th birthday her parents decided to travel to a small village named Yambuku, a popular destination sight with natural plants and an environmental way of living. During the stay Clover started developing a relationship with a native, dark skinned handsome boy named Mortem. They became inseparable during the first couple months of their stay.

The first outbreak of The Zaire virus stroked this small village during 1976. Cassandra began to develop Malaria like symptoms along with her parents. Close to 15 days after she was first diagnosed, deteriorating quickly, her parents died together on the dirt floor. Afraid she may die; Mortem led Clover into a secluded area and bit her. The venom quickly spread until days later she was turned. They stayed together for close to 10 years until Mortem was hunted down, ripped apart and buried.
She traveled alone through several continents until she came upon an Academy.

Extra/Other:

After she was turned Clover destroyed any documentation on her existence. No exact birthday of her exists.


message 354: by sucre'd fiend, Perfection (last edited Nov 10, 2013 10:16AM) (new)

sucre'd fiend (sucredfiend) | 764 comments Mod
✵ For Clover:

▸ Please elaborate on the personality. Please know that in this Advanced group, you will need to present more than just traits. While you may list traits, please at least add some information as to how she would normally behave, with the traits in mind.

▸Please add at least a few lines of description for the appearance, aside from the picture.

▸ Please state the degree of her intelligence. Anyone can be "smart", but there are usually distinctions.

▸ Please bold the headings, even if you move everything a line down to differentiate them.



message 355: by Jenna ⭐ (new)

Jenna ⭐ (sungkew) ✵ For Alexandra:
▸ Okay, overall, you need way more information than that. Take a look at everyone else's character's and take inspiration from that. Appearance needs to be elaborated on as well as the personality. And you have absolutely no hisotry there. That's a problem. I just want you to know that I'm not trying to be mean, but this is an advanced group and quality is always expected of everyone. So regardless of whether it's a character template and regardless of whether it's a roleplay, things need to be advanced. If you're up for that and can fix the problems with your character that I've detailed, then you shall be fine. If not, then I'm afraid I cannot accept it.
Thanks.



message 356: by Jackson (new)

Jackson Hunter Name: Jayden Price

Age: 21

Type: Werewolf

Grade: 11th

Appearance:

Human form:
http://www.bing.com/images/search?q=2...

Wolf form:
http://www.bing.com/images/search?q=B...

Personality: He's athletic and popular (was on football team until he started turning). He's smart, but can let the popularity get to him. He can change whenever he wants and only fights in wolf form when absolutely nessicary.

History: At the age of fifteen, he was attacked and started turning into a werewolf at every full moon. He then meet another werewolf who taught him how to change at will.

Crush/Relationship: He was dating the head cheerleader, but she broke up with him when she found out he was a werewolf.

Family: His mother died a couple years ago and he had been living with his father ever since.

Other: He carried a picture of his mother in his wallet everywhere he went.

Power: He is unable to age and diseases. Can hear thoughts of other werewolf's.


message 357: by Shuhan [On Leave], I'm beside stoopid<- XD (new)

Shuhan [On Leave] (Inyourclosetinyourhead) | 5357 comments Mod
Okay.
This is an advanced roleplay and, to be honest, I don't think you're too ready for it yet. Your grammar is...lousy and you don't have full sentences all the time. I prefer a description with the pictures. Just scrolling through, the personality looks so short and so does the history.


message 358: by RedAxel (last edited Nov 23, 2013 08:03AM) (new)

RedAxel Name: Zephyr Retna

Age: Fourteen

Type: He's a hybrid of werewolf, vampire, demon, and angel, due to the unlikely coming together of his parents.

Grade: Ninth.

Appearance: Dirty blonde hair with obsidian colored eyes. He has a hat to cover up wolf ears that are the same shade of blonde as his hair, and he usually wears all-black (Depending on whether or not the school has uniforms..) and very pale skin. He's about 5'8 in height.

Personality: He's shy but intelligent, often quiet if not silent. If he opens up, he might talk more, but he's generally quite a silent person. He can be slightly sarcastic sometimes, and cold if you hurt him. He always sticks up for the disadvantaged, and will take a beating for any of his friends, any time. He averts eye-contact constantly because he feels like people will learn too much about him if they see his eyes. He hates bullies, and tries to never betray friends. But occasionally, he does struggle with school work, and he can get colder, distant towards people. Almost rude, in a sense. Not often, but occasionally.

History: His parents were murdered when he was three. His father was werewolf and demon, while his mother was vampire and angel, which resulted in his crazy genetics. He emotionally struggles with the event, sometimes dreaming about it. While he barely knew them, his childhood life was spent dealing with the emotional and mental damage of watching his parents die. He was moved from foster home to foster home, nobody ever wanting him. He was miserable and depressed at that stage in his life, because, as it seemed to him, nobody cared about him. Until he eventually ran away from the foster care, he moved to another town, enrolling in the school there and living in the surrounding forest. Kids in the school picked on him a lot for his eyes, pale skin, and the odd things that sometimes happened around him. He was pretty good in his school work, though occasionally he wouldn't do an assignment and would get told off of it. After school, he would usually find a tree to sleep in that night, put his stuff there and then wander around the forest for a few hours. He never really had any real friends, so he was a loner for most of the beginning of his life. He only started trying to make friends when he turned about twelve, because he was hesitant to burden people around him.

Crush/Relationship: He doesn't currently have any crushes or relationships, though that may change later on.

Family: Most of his family is dead, or he doesn't know of them. He has no way of knowing who they are, even if they are alive. His grandmother on his fathers side was a werewolf, while his grandfather on his fathers side was a demon. On his mothers side, his grandmother was an angel, and his grandfather was a vampire. The grandparents on both sides were very opposed to his parents marriage, but they eventually relented and allowed it.

Other: He has a demon side which tries to take over once a week or more. It leaves him in agony on the ground, and it hurts him greatly. He can use bows, daggers, swords, throwing knives, etc. His eyes sometimes change color according to his mood. (For example, blue could be loneliness, sadness, depression, etc.)

Power: He can turn into a shadow, which isn't really helpful most of the time. He can control the element of lightning, and can best use it through contact or being close to someone, though he can make a few bolts of lightning come out of the sky, maybe a maximum of ten before being exhausted. He can heal, to a very small degree, and it drains him greatly to heal himself and others. He's inhumanly fast, his top speed not quite the speed of sound, though it is incredibly hard and exhausting for him to go that fast. A speed he might be comfortable with for a while would be maybe a hundred to two hundred mph, though he usually just goes at normal speed around other people, only moving that fast when he needs to. He likes being able to take in what's around him, whereas when he's at that speed, some things are just blurs. He's vulnerable to wounds by silver, though touching silver without getting wounded by it doesn't hurt much. Just a bit of a burning sensation. When wounded, he can't go as fast most of the time unless completely desperate.


message 359: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) | 1693 comments Type:
WHAT!?


message 360: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) | 1693 comments Sorry, could you explain exactly how in any universe that happened in the too-short-anyway history?
Or maybe family? You know, the COMPLETELY empty one?

Also, "control the element of lightning." What can he do with it? If you leave it that broad, then his powers technically include causing lightning storms all over the earth, sending so much electricity through the universe that it all explodes, and a bunch of other stuff. What are his limits?

"Inhumanly fast" is similarly broad. What is his top speed? What speed is he comfortable with?


message 361: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) | 1693 comments Oh, by the way, velcome to nuestro group.


message 362: by RedAxel (new)

RedAxel Thanks. I'll get to editting right away.


message 363: by RedAxel (new)

RedAxel Ah, is that better..?


message 364: by Jenna ⭐ (new)

Jenna ⭐ (sungkew) I'm just going to pop in a critique since Maniac's off, but I suppose the only issue I would see is that he seems a little... I don't know, Gary Stu to me, if you know what that means. He just seems a bit overpowered and perfect. Other than his limitations, he doesn't seem to have any really solid flaws, personality wise as well. If you were to ask me, that's something I'd work on :)
Also, it might be a good idea to work on the history a bit more. I know you probably already lengthened it, but you might be able to squeeze in more if you really tried. I mean, what was his life like growing up? How did he take to his parent's death? Are there any emotional scars from that incident? How did he get to the academy? All this stuff you would be well off including.
And I like your name, RedAxel. But that might just be because I have a character named Axel XD


message 365: by Jenna ⭐ (new)

Jenna ⭐ (sungkew)


❝ᴛʜᴇ ᴅᴏᴏʀs ᴀʀᴇ ᴏᴘᴇɴ, ᴛʜᴇ ωɪɴᴅ ɪs ʙʟᴏωɪɴɢ, ɴɪɢʜᴛ sᴋʏ ɪs ᴄʜᴀɴɢɪɴɢ ᴏᴠᴇʀʜᴇᴀᴅ.❞
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( ɪᴛ's ɴᴏᴛ ᴊᴜsᴛ ᴀʟʟ ᴘʜʏsɪᴄᴀʟ 'ᴄᴀᴜsᴇ ɪ'ᴍ ᴛʜᴇ ᴛʏᴘᴇ ωʜᴏ ωᴏɴ'ᴛ ɢᴇᴛ ᴏʜ sᴏ ᴄʀɪᴛɪᴄᴀʟ )
▬▬ ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬ sᴏ ʟᴇᴛ's ᴍᴀᴋᴇ ᴛʜɪɴɢs ᴘʜʏsɪᴄᴀʟ ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬ ▬▬
⋆ ✯ Sᴀωʏᴇʀ Aɴɴᴇ Cᴀʟʟɪɢᴀɴ ✯ ⋆
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Sᴀωʏᴇʀ:
As a girl's name, Sawyer is pronounced soy-ar. It is of Middle English origin, and the meaning of Sawyer is "wood-worker". Occupational name. Literary: most familiar as the name of Mark Twain's boy hero, Tom Sawyer.

Aɴɴᴇ:
As a girl's name, Anne is pronounced an. It is of Hebrew origin, and the meaning of Anne is "He (God) has favored me". The English form of Hannah. A name favored by royalty and commoners for centuries. Made popular by L.M. Montogomery's story "Anne of Green Gables". Longer version of the name “Ann”, a title of the same meaning and origin.

Cᴀʟʟɪɢᴀɴ:
As a surname, Calligan is pronounced Cale-a-gahn. It is of Gaelic and old Irish origin and the meaning of Calligan is 'strife'. Possibly from the Gaelic 'ceallach' or 'ceallachain', both meaning 'strife'.
I ωᴀɴᴛ ʏᴏᴜ ᴄʟᴏsᴇ, ɪ ωᴀɴᴛ ʏᴏᴜ. Aɴᴅ ɪ ωᴏɴ'ᴛ ᴛʀᴇᴀᴛ ʏᴏᴜ ʟɪᴋᴇ ʏᴏᴜ'ʀᴇ ᴛʏᴘɪᴄᴀʟ
▬▬▬ ɪ ωᴀɴᴛ ʏᴏᴜ ᴄʟᴏsᴇ ▬▬ ɪ ωᴀɴᴛ ʏᴏᴜ ▬▬ ʏᴏᴜ ᴀʀᴇ ɴᴏᴛ ᴛʏᴘɪᴄᴀʟ ▬▬▬
ʙᴇᴄᴀᴜsᴇ ᴀʟʟ ᴛʜᴀᴛ ɪ ᴛʀᴜʟʏ ωᴀɴᴛ ᴛᴏ ᴋɴᴏω ɪs ᴄᴀɴ ʏᴏᴜ ᴄᴏᴍᴇ ᴀ ʟɪᴛᴛʟᴇ ᴄʟᴏsᴇʀ?
Rᴱᴳᵁᴸᴬᴿᴵᵀᴵᴱˁ
Aɢᴇ: Sixteen ᒥ 16 ᒧ
Dᴀᴛᴇ/Tɪᴍᴇ Oғ Bɪʀᴛʜ: May 30th ➟ 8:27 ᴘ.ᴍ.
Lᴏᴄᴀᴛɪᴏɴ Oғ Bɪʀᴛʜ: Kanturk, Ireland
Asᴛʀᴏʟᴏɢɪᴄᴀʟ Sɪɢɴ: Gemini ᒥ ♊ ᒧ
Dual-natured, elusive, complex temperament and contradictory are terms that best describe a Gemini. Just like the sign of twins, a Gemini is capable of producing the virtue of versatility and the vices of two-facedness and flightiness at the same time. He can never ever be boring as he loves communicating and gossiping. His talk is not rubbish, rather interesting and informative. He will have lots of friends and neighbors; in fact, he will keep in touch with anyone on his wavelength. Ruled by the Mercury planet, Gemini guys often get easily bored, impatient and frustrated by things that move slowly. Basically, they are intelligent, imaginative, lively and adaptable to any situation and person.

Gᴇɴᴅᴇʀ: Female ᒥ ♀ ᒧ
Sᴛᴀᴛᴜs: Single ᒥ Closed to Requests ᒧ
Oʀɪᴇɴᴛᴀᴛɪᴏɴ : Heterosexual ᒥ Straight ᒧ
Heterosexuality is romantic attraction, sexual attraction or sexual behavior between persons of opposite sex or gender in the gender binary. As a sexual orientation, heterosexuality refers to "an enduring pattern of or disposition to experience sexual, affectionate, physical or romantic attractions to persons of the opposite sex"; it also refers to "a person's sense of identity based on those attractions, related behaviors, and membership in a community of others who share those attractions". The term is usually applied to humans, but it is also observed in all mammals.

Sᴘᴇᴄɪᴇs: Clairvoyant
Aʟʟᴇɢɪᴀɴᴄᴇ: Supernatural Academy
Pᴏωᴇʀs: Precognition
The user is capable of sensing the coming of death, able to determine when someone is dead or dying or if others have died in a specific location. At times, this extends to seeing the names and lifespans of those whose faces the user sees. The user is also capable of perceiving future events while dreaming.
▪ ʜᴇʀᴇ ᴄᴏᴍᴇ ᴛʜᴇ ᴅʀᴇᴀᴍs ᴏғ ʏᴏᴜ ᴀɴᴅ ᴍᴇ, ʜᴇʀᴇ ᴄᴏᴍᴇ ᴛʜᴇ ᴅʀᴇᴀᴍs ▪
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▪ ʜᴇʀᴇ ᴄᴏᴍᴇs ᴛʜᴇ ʜᴇᴀᴛ ʙᴇғᴏʀᴇ ωᴇ ᴍᴇᴇᴛ. ʜᴇʀᴇ ᴄᴏᴍᴇs ᴛʜᴇ sᴘᴀʀᴋ ʙᴇғᴏʀᴇ ᴅᴀʀᴋ ▪


[✦ | Bʀᴏωɴ Hᴀɪʀ || Bʟᴜᴇ Eʏᴇs || 5 ғᴛ 4 || 126 ʟʙs || + | ✦]


Fᴀᴄᴇ Cʟᴀɪᴍ: Barbara Palvin
Though her disposition may turn some people off, Sawyer isn’t terrible to look at. In fact, she’s pretty in her own unique way. Just like every other part of herself, Sawyer tries hard to make herself look different from everyone else. The only average part of her appearance is her long brown hair that is cut just below her shoulders. It’s a light brown pigmentation that has a few natural blonde highlights here and there. Sawyer’s eyes are a bright blue color that shine whenever she’s happy -- which is almost all the time. It’s rare that Sawyer will ever be seen without a smile on her face despite how she may be actually feeling. She doesn’t like to give off a sad appearance. It doesn’t suit her.
▸ Pʜʏsɪϙᴜᴇ: (view spoiler)
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❝sᴘɪʟᴛ ᴛʜᴇ ᴍɪʟᴋ ᴀᴛ ʙʀᴇᴀᴋғᴀsᴛ. ʏᴏᴜ ʜɪᴛ ᴍᴇ ᴅᴏᴜʙʟᴇ ʜᴀʀᴅ ᴀɴᴅ ɪ ɢʀɪɴ sᴏғᴛʟʏ.❞
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬ ʙᴇᴄᴀᴜsᴇ ɪ'ᴍ ᴀ ғᴜᴄᴋɪɴɢ ωɪʟᴅ ᴄᴀʀᴅ ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬
( вυт ɪs ᴛʜᴇʀᴇ ᴍᴏʀᴇ ᴛᴏ ʟᴏsᴇ ᴛʜᴀɴ ɢᴀɪɴ )( ɪғ ɪ ωᴇʀᴇ ᴛᴏ ɢᴏ ᴏɴ ᴍʏ ᴏωɴ ᴀɢᴀɪɴ? )
▬▬▬▬▬▬ Inside The Outsider ▬▬▬▬▬▬

Dᴵˁᴾᴼˁᴵᵀᴵᴼᴺ
Dᴇᴛᴇʀᴍɪɴᴇᴅ
↳ Sawyer is the definition of determined. This is extremely obvious when someone first meets her for she will do whatever it takes to make someone smile. She doesn’t let others tell her how to live her life and, quite often, she will just do whatever she feels like doing no matter the circumstances. If there’s a serious conversation going on, you can bet she’ll be saying something that is extremely random and unpredictable. In many ways, she can be considered stubborn, though most people don’t fault her for this. For the most part, people like to think her insane and Sawyer always seems to be okay with that. She’s never fought against that fact even if it might not be true. The only thing she’s ever said in response to it is: ‘Crazy is in the eye of the beholder.’

Sᴀɴᴇ
↳ Many people do not believe this pertains to Sawyer. And, really, this makes sense. On all accounts, she really should be mentally unstable with the way she acts and her sporadic activity. However, much to everyone else’s digression, Sawyer is actually a very healthy, clear minded person. She knows how odd she acts and understands that it’s not normal, and yet she still does it. She has her reason that no one knows of, but even if one did, she wouldn’t tell a living soul. Hell, no one that’s close to her knows yet -- not her grandparents, not her best friends, and no one. No, Sawyer just keeps her little secret bottled up inside of her, just waiting for someone to appear that she can actually tell. She’s contemplated spilling the secret to her closest friends, but she’s never gotten the chance to. And, strangely, Sawyer is somewhat glad she hasn’t. She knows he thinks of her in the same manner as anyone else and telling them this secret doesn’t seem right. It never does.

Uᴘʟɪғᴛɪɴɢ
↳ Happiness is Sawyer’s middle name. There’s hardly ever a time when Sawyer is seen without a smile on her face and she refuses to let others feel the same. She will always try her hardest to make sure that the ones around her are happy and smiling their brightest. One of her sayings is the infamous, ‘For every second you are sad, you lose sixty seconds of happiness.’ She holds true to this statement, never letting anyone feel blue around her. Sadness is something that she never wants to experience -- ever. However, she knows how the world is. She knows just how dark it is and how easy it is to fall into depression. Perhaps this is the reason why she tries so hard not to ever make sense. Maybe she doesn’t want to have her mind clouded by reality like everyone else.

Rᴀɴᴅᴏᴍ
↳ Of all the adjectives in the whole wide world, this one describes Sawyer to a T. Every word that comes out of her mouth doesn’t make a lick of sense. Her catchphrases include, ‘Awesome-sauce’, ‘Holy flying fudgesickles of death’, and ‘What the guacamole just happen, ya’ll’. Needless to say, she doesn’t exactly have normal speaking habits. On top of this, she rarely ever performs an action that is normal as well. For example, she’ll often wave to random strangers or wink at everyone on a particular day just because she can. She likes to draw attention to herself for reasons that no one cares to look into and calling out random people is the perfect way to do that.

Sᴛʀᴏɴɢ
↳ Though one may not expect, Sawyer is a very strong being. Perhaps not in the way that most people would assume -- she’s not tough or rugged -- but she’s very strong in her mind sense. She can take nearly anything that anyone throws at her because, in her mind, she’s already gone through the worst of it. So what if someone thinks she’s strange? She can take it. So what if her family doesn’t understand her? She doesn’t want them to. She’s fine being herself and no matter what anyone says to her, she’ll be fine. She’ll be just fine...
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Cᴏɴᴛɪɴᴜᴇᴅ Bᴇʟᴏω ↴
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message 366: by Jenna ⭐ (new)

Jenna ⭐ (sungkew)
Cᴏɴᴛɪɴᴜᴇᴅ Fʀᴏᴍ Aʙᴏᴠᴇ ↲

▸ ɪ ᴊᴜsᴛ ωᴀɴᴛ ɪᴛ ᴛᴏ ʙᴇ ᴘᴇʀғᴇᴄᴛ. ɪ ωᴀɴɴᴀ ʙᴇʟɪᴇᴠᴇ ɪᴛ's ᴀʟʟ ʙᴇᴇɴ ωᴏʀᴛʜ ᴛʜᴇ ғɪɢʜᴛ.

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬ ʟɪᴇs, ʏᴏᴜ ᴅᴏɴ'ᴛ ωᴀɴᴛ ᴛᴏ ᴋɴᴏω ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬

Hᴵˁᵀᴼᴿʸ
↪ Contrary to what many would like to believe, Sawyer has not always had a happy, peaceful life. Though, in the beginning, it almost was. Born on May thirtieth to seemingly perfect parents, Sawyer life growing up in Kanturk, Ireland was just like everyone else’s. She was a shy girl, one that didn’t talk very much even when approached. She didn’t like to make much conversation with people as she’d never known what to say. All the words that came to her mind were either ones of extreme randomness or ones that didn’t make sense even to her. And so, Sawyer remained quiet. No one bugged her and no one foreign bothered to talk to her. But in that time, Sawyer had been happy. She was content living a quiet life for the longest time, all the way until she turned eleven.

It was the year of the double ones when Sawyer’s life did a one eighty. The day was a simple one, a trip to her grandparents’ house with her parents. They’d been driving there on the expressway, a path that Sawyer had always enjoyed. She relished in tempting the truck drivers to honk their horns or sticking her stuffed animal up to the window just to see the other drivers’ reactions. However, while Sawyer was paying attention to this, others were distracted as well. Another driver on the road, a woman in a black convertible, distracted herself with the falling of her phone. Reaching down to pick it up, the car swerved directly towards the car Sawyer resided in. Within a mere five seconds, impact was made. Sawyer’s scream echoed through the car as it crushed down on them all, the world going black in the eleven year old’s eyes.

It was a month later that Sawyer awoke. The room she was in was sterile white, no one there with her. Fear had set in then as she glanced around. Something was on her mouth, feeding her air that she hadn’t been able to breathe for herself. It wasn’t long before she began to fuss in her hospital bed, a nurse coming in to calm her. But Sawyer didn’t want a nurse: she wanted her parents. However, they were two people that she would never see again. They’d died in the crash, her grandparents told her as they came in to give their granddaughter comfort. And so, as Sawyer recovered from both the effects of the car crash and the comatose she had undergone, Sawyer went on without her parents. It hurt so badly, but she went on. But by then, she was already a changed girl.

Sawyer soon realized that the events of her life had changed her. No longer was she a quiet, lonely girl. Now she made herself happy and outgoing. She refused to be depressed; she absolutely refused. Her words were now jumbled, her sentences incoherent. Her grandparents, whom she was now staying with, thought her now to be strange due to the accident. She was distorted, they supposed, and though they always showed her love and affection, they didn’t treat her the same as before. And Sawyer saw this. She could see the way her grandparents didn’t think of her the same way; she could hear the quiet conversations they had about her when she was meant to be sleeping; she could see the distant look in their eyes as they told her they loved her and that she was the same as everyone else. But they were wrong, and Sawyer knew it. She could see things; she could see more than just the detachment of her peers and her grandparents. Future events played out for her, little visions came to her in the dead of night and in the middle of the day. People didn’t seem to care when the strange girl dazed off into her own world or when she got a vision so strong that she screamed. Just typical Sawyer antics. No one noticed the difference. Or at least, no one noticed until one day.

It was on November third that Sawyer received her letter to the academy. Having not been as inclined to her powers as she’s found herself nowadays, she didn’t see it coming, didn’t know what journey her life was about to embark on. She ran away from her family, leaving to go to the school without even mentioning it to her grandparents. Sawyer is sure they haven’t really noticed anyways.
▸ ɪ'ᴍ ᴠᴜʟɴᴇʀᴀʙʟᴇ. ɪ’ᴍ ɴᴏᴛ ᴀ ʀᴏʙᴏᴛ. ɪ'ᴍ ʟᴏᴠᴀʙʟᴇ, sᴏ ʟᴏᴠᴀʙʟᴇ. ɪ'ᴍ ᴊᴜsᴛ ᴛʀᴏᴜʙʟᴇᴅ.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬ ɢᴜᴇss ωʜᴀᴛ? ɪ'ᴍ ɴᴏᴛ ᴀ ʀᴏʙᴏᴛ ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬

Fᴬᴹᴵᴸʸ
Fᴀᴛʜᴇʀ: Jensen Calligan Bɪᴏʟᴏɢɪᴄᴀʟ
sᴛᴀᴛᴜs: Deceased ║ ᴀɢᴇ: 39 ║ʟᴏᴠᴇ: ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤♡
There is no doubt that Sawyer misses her parents. In fact, she misses them more than anything, believing them to be the only two people capable of understanding her for the girl she is. She’s never had anyone so close to her as her father. The man, Jensen, was a great father, taking care of his daughter throughout the short time that he spent with her. When she was sick, he stayed home and nursed her back to health. When she couldn’t see over the tops of other people, he would lift her up onto his shoulders and smile up at her like a young father should. In many ways, he was perfect and Sawyer just wished he could have been alive longer to let more of that shine through.
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Mᴏᴛʜᴇʀ: Renee Calligan Bɪᴏʟᴏɢɪᴄᴀʟ
sᴛᴀᴛᴜs: Deceased ║ ᴀɢᴇ: 38 ║ʟᴏᴠᴇ: ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤♡
Much in the way of her husband, Sawyer’s mother was an amazing woman. While Sawyer never got to see her as much as she did her father, the mother was wonderful even if she had to leave to teach school in the middle of the day. Sawyer and her mother, Renee, were just as close as she was with her father. They shared their every secret and ate ice cream together on days when things just didn’t seem to go right for either of them. They cared for one another, Sawyer taking care of her mother while Renee did the same back. They were partners. Partners until the end.
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▸ ᴅʀɪɴᴋɪɴɢ ᴄʜᴀᴍᴘᴀɢɴᴇ, ᴍᴀᴅᴇ ʙʏ ᴛʜᴇ ᴀɴɢᴇʟ ωʜᴏ ɢᴏᴇs ʙʏ ᴛʜᴇ ɴᴀᴍᴇ ᴏғ ɢᴀʙʀɪᴇʟ.

ᴅʀɪɴᴋɪɴɢ ᴄʜᴀᴍᴘᴀɢɴᴇ ᴍᴀᴅᴇ ᴏғ ᴀɴ ᴀɴɢᴇʟ's ᴛᴇᴀʀs ᴀɴᴅ ᴘᴀɪɴ, ʙᴜᴛ ɪ ғᴇᴇʟ ᴄᴇʟᴇsᴛɪᴀʟ.
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Fᴬᵀᴬᴸ Fᴸᴬᵂ
↪ The fatal flaw that Sawyer posses is not something anyone would ever expect of her. She keeps her biggest weakness hid deep inside her, far away from the reaches of wandering eyes. She doesn’t like anyone to know what she is really feeling and buries it under layers of smiles and laughter. Her flaws are concealed with her talk of things that don’t make sense, even to her sometimes. Sawyer likes to say that she knows what she’s saying every time she opens her mouth, but sometimes she doesn’t. Sometimes the words pour out of her mouth with little control. It’s luck that she hasn’t spoiled her secret thus far. If only she can keep this luck up much longer...

Lɪᴋᴇs & Dɪsɪᴋᴇs: Sawyer loves a wide array of things and she dislikes quite the same number. While she’s never been inclined to hating things, one thing that Sawyer cannot stand is sadness. She hates it when people are down in the dumps for it reminds her of herself. Thinking that someone may be depressed upsets her and she’ll always try her hardest to make sure that they’re happy as soon as possible. This draws back to her likes. The main thing that Sawyer loves is happiness. She loves the euphoria of being happy all the live long day and will make it her quest to have another person be happy. No matter what, you can trust that she’ll try to cheer everyone up when they’re down.

Sᴛʀᴇɴɢᴛʜs & Wᴇᴀᴋɴᴇssᴇs: Sawyer’s strengths and weaknesses are wavering. While she is an amazing treasure hunter, she has an acute fear of spiders and insects alike. She doesn’t like creepy crawlies, thus rendering her useless in their presence. Not that Sawyer is much of a warrior anyways. She may be able to see bits and pieces of the future, but she’s not very good with preventing it. She’s come to learn that she can’t. Perhaps she may see how a being dies, but she won’t be able to stop it. It’s physically impossible as the future will just happen anyways. Thus, it is the future, after all.
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ɪ'ʟʟ ғᴀʟʟ ᴀᴘᴀʀᴛ ωɪᴛʜ ᴀʟʟ ᴍʏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛ.
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message 367: by Jenna ⭐ (new)

Jenna ⭐ (sungkew) Kyleigh: You're getting there, but there are a few more things that would be good to include:

1. Could you elaborate a bit more on her powers in the bio? Like, does she just magically know when someone is about to hurt her or is it almost like Sawyer's power where she has seen it happen? Or perhaps is it something where she's knows it only the second before it happens, giving her a minimal amount of time to react? Whichever it is, it would be good to tack on some limitations there too since that could be a pretty extreme, omnipotent power and that should kind of be avoided ;)

2. Her history is still a little on the short side. You should probably explain more in it. For example, how did she become a werewolf? Was she born like that or was she bitten? Also, I think it might be a good idea to tell on more of the adolescent times in her life. Like what her life was like growing up, you know? Things like that. If you could include these, you'd definitely be on the right track to getting approved ^_^

Sorry if I sound really picky in this. I just want to make sure the characters are top notch before they are approved. Nothing personal at all ^w^


message 368: by RedAxel (last edited Nov 22, 2013 08:49PM) (new)

RedAxel Editted again. Is the history better..? I'm not used to forum roleplays much, I usually just do live ones, so I never had to come up with bio's, people just found out later. I really am trying to get used to it, though. Oh, also created more flaws in his personality and more weaknesses and exceptions to his powers.


message 369: by Jenna ⭐ (new)

Jenna ⭐ (sungkew) Kyleigh: Okay, I'd say you're pretty good. It all pretty much checks out for me, so I'd say you're approved.

RedAxel: I'd say you're fine with what you have now, but seeing as I didn't originally address the character, I'm going to let Maniac see if he has any extra commentary before it's completely accepted. I wouldn't want to overrule anything that he's already said, if you know what I mean. Anywho, he should be on tomorrow, I sure. If you're not in a rush, I hope this is okay :)


message 370: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) | 1693 comments I'd still like to know how in the world he happened. Could you maybe put how he became so... not... possible... in the family section?


message 371: by RedAxel (new)

RedAxel Ah, can you elaborate what you mean by that..? I'm slightly confused by what you mean..


message 372: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) | 1693 comments Okay. He's a hybrid of werewolf, vampire, demon, and angel.
Were his grandparents on his mother's side the werewolf and angel while his grandparents on his father's side were vampire and demon? Other way around? Different pairing?


message 373: by RedAxel (new)

RedAxel Alright. I'll edit again.


message 374: by RedAxel (new)

RedAxel Is that any better..?


message 375: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) | 1693 comments A P P R O V E D


message 376: by RedAxel (new)

RedAxel Thanks. Wow..that took more editting than I thought it would..but yeah. Still, thanks for the constructive criticism, guys.


message 377: by Ruby (last edited Nov 27, 2013 09:38AM) (new)

Ruby (rsr13) Name: Sapphire Opal Garnet

Age: 13 but often mistaken for much younger

Type: Dark Sorceress

Grade: she's been in eighth grade for a while

Appearance: Sapphire is super tiny ,really about the size of a skinny nine year old even though she's 13. She has long dark black hair that she keeps in tight ringlets, it reaches about to her hips. She in often mistaken for a vampire because of her pure white skin. She has the appearance of a china doll with tiny wrists and feet. She has small red lips and huge eyes. Her eyes change color sometimes they can be black and the next day red and so on. She has thin black high eyebrows.

Personality: Sapphire might look like an innocent child but she has quite a temper. She hates that people always seem to look down at her (literally) and pity her because of her past. She is secretive and If anybody gets even a little bit into her business she gets super defensive and rude. She is very insensitive and can be pure annoying but those traits she uses as a shield. If you really get to be her friend (good luck with that though) she would be protective and helpful. She never says anything about her past and only ask her about it if you are ready to meet her tiny fists. She uses her powers for mostly getting back at people.She has a dark aura that makes good witches feel sick around her.

History:( be prepared this is long) Sapphire has a very traumatic past. She was born over in the medieval times as a princess. Her father the King was disappointed to have a baby girl because she could never ascend the throne. He never cared for her. She grew up strong though until when she was 7 years old when her first signs of magic started to appear. Her mother saw her turn a red flower pitch black and ran screaming that her child was cursed, a vicious witch. Sapphire wasn't sure what was going on because she thought her magic was a perfectly splendid thing. Her father ordered the guards to seize her, they has to pull her of of her mother because she was clutching her skirts as if she would protect her. But the queen just kicked her of and left her. The guards grabbed her and thats when it happened. Sapphire started screaming and the guards all fell to the ground clutching their ears in pain. Later after more reinforcements came and locked Sapphire in a cell/carriage and carted her away they found that the soldiers who has collapsed where all dead there eyes bleeding from her screams. They put Sapphire in a cell in the middle of the square like some animal in the zoo to be googled at. There was a label on her cage that said
Danger: Evil Witch
Maintain a five foot distance at all times
She was kept there for three years. Sometimes people would throw rocks and even broken bottles and jeer at her, calling her witch and freak and other cruel names. One day soldiers came and brought her to a platform to be executed. Her mother and father where present neither of them shedding a tear even though she called out to them to help her. She was strapped down and the executed raised the scythe when Sapphire sobbed and the platform caught on fire and burned down. The people desperate to escape the flames and left her to burn but miraculously she survived. She went on the run and lived in several different cites never staying in one place more than a month. Then a year before she got the letter (now in modern times) she was kidnapped by ransomers that hurt her when she said she was worth nothing. They demanded to know where her family because the way she talked they suspected she must be rich. Finally when she refused to say anything the leader lost patience and made to stab her. He exploded literally. She escaped though with a struggle and she still bears the scars of her “stay” there on her arms ( whip marks and cuts ). She was found bleeding in an alley by an old woman that helped her to the nearest orphanage. She spent another 5 years there until she was taken by government people because they had noticed she wasn't aging. She was actually examined like a science project, they drew blood samples and ran test because she was so different. One day she lost it and caused the entire hospital to be filled with a suffocating black liquid. She flew off of the top of the building with black wings and used this method to escape. She then finally got the letter and came to the academy.

Crush/Relationship: No.

Family: Father and Mother both dead. She has a sorceress aunt she never knew about that is still alive

Other: She hears voices in her head ( ghosts) that give her advice (not very
good advice) but only when she's alone

Powers:
-Whenever someone tires to hurt her something horrible happens to them
She can sprout black angel wings
She can talk to ghosts


message 378: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) | 1693 comments Take out "her screams can kill" and "she can force you to do her bidding." She can send her consciousness at you and try to take over your mind, fine, but no forcing. If there's a particular spell, explain the process. Maybe she needs to mortally injure you first and then only her magic can keep you alive, or a particularly-shaped wound can get them.
"Other dark magic"
NEVER ANYTHING THAT BROAD.
"Dark magic" for example, could equal instantly killing everything ever.


message 379: by Ruby (new)

Ruby (rsr13) Is that better? I just those powers out because they were unnecessary and I was not going to use them often.


message 380: by Drax (new)

Drax RavenKnight (draxhollowknight) Full Name: Aidan Marc Trial

Gender: Male

Age: 17

Species: Oni Neko (Cat Demon)

Grade: Junior

Date of Birth: 12/21/1996

Appearance:
description
Aidan is a handsome young man, in any standard, only with cat ears and a cat's tail, of course. He is about 6'5'', and weighs only 120 pounds. He's lined with lean, hard muscle from his years as a fight club member since that was his only way to survive and make money. He's agile, like a cat, of course, and, overall, is simply appealing.

Dressing Style: It's in the picture, pretty much.

Family: His parents' names have no Human Translation. They are both deceased. However, he is the cousin of Shinata Hazumaki, a different demon. His clan and hers lived close, and when they tied to banish her, he was the only one who objected.


Personality: Aidan's a real ladies' man cat. He's a flirt. That charm he was born with tends to get him in trouble, either with jealous men or prudish women. Deep down, he has some form of a heart, but it only arises when he's near children, or someone who proved trustworthy to him. The latter hadn't appeared for awhile. He hates clingy girls, because that makes him afraid that they actually love him. He's afraid of love, since SHE came into his life all those years ago. A night's worth of foolery? Yes. Commitment? No. The memories he has of it leaves a bad taste in his mouth.

Abilities, Powers and/or Weapons:
-Aidan can control a strange, silver fire. He can alter its heat and size, and it seems to burn nothing unless he wants it to. Its maximum heat is 1,500 degrees Fahrenheit. It resists all attempts at control or absorbance, completely loyal only to him.

Crush/Boyfriend/Girlfriend: Open, but DIFFICULT.

Sexuality: Heterosexual

History:
Aidan was born into a clan of ordinary cat demons, to two very loving similar demons. His father's fur was gray and speckled with spots, but his mother had white fur, like he did. White fur was EXTREMELY rare. When he was growing up, they were his world. As a child, he followed them everywhere. But then, as he grew and changed, he ventured around more. He fell in love with a Wolf Demon, and then his life got stranger and stranger.

Aidan and his lover met in secret, away from their kind, so as not to be judged and ripped away from each other. He adored her like no other. Then, one day, she stopped coming. He didn't get an explanation or warning, but she just disappeared, and his heart shattered. He didn't want to see anything to remind him of her, after several weeks. Their kind began to fight once more, and his parents were killed. His clan, only months after banishing Shinata, found out about his forbidden relationship and banished him, abandoning him as they had her. As he left, he could not bear to look upon their disgusted faces.

Aidan lived on his own, doing anything he could to survive. When he made it to a human city he used a hat to cover his ears and baggy pants for his tail. He looked around for jobs, and found a flyer for professional underground fighting. As it happened, he was a very good fighter, and all of the audience thought that his tail and ears were part of his get-up.

One day he found a letter at the apartment he was staying in. At fifteen, he decided that school would be better than staying in a dangerous, illegal enterprise, and sneaked out of his town to go to the Academy.

Other: Like I said, his tail, ears, and fur are white.


message 381: by Jenna ⭐ (new)

Jenna ⭐ (sungkew) And I'm going to call it good. I read through the whole thing and didn't find any issues. Good job, Draxy!

[ Aidan Marc Trial | Approved ]


message 382: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) | 1693 comments Sapphire Opal Garnet:

A P P R O V E D


message 383: by sol (new)

sol | 382 comments Disclaimer ☟
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❝Life. Life is a prison until you die.❞



Full Name:
♧IRIS || CHRISTINE || SMITH♧

▪ █ ▌ ᴇᴛʏᴍᴏʟᴏɢʏ:
♧Iris is one of the bouquet of turn-of-the-last-century flower names that is gradually beginning to regain its appeal: it is now at the highest point it has been since 1956.

♧ Part of this is due to its celebrity power: Jude Law and Sadie Frost, Renee O'Connor and Judd Apatow and Leslie Mann all chose Iris for their daughters.

♧ In Greek mythology, Iris was the goddess of the rainbow, a messenger for Zeus and Hera who rode the rainbow as a multicoloured bridge from heaven to earth. In ancient times, the Iris was considered a symbol of power and majesty, the three petal segments representing faith, wisdom and valor. This colourful image led to the naming of the flower and to the coloured part of the eye.

Age: Seventeen Years [ 17 ]
Birthday: November 22nd
Zodiac Sign: Scorpio ♏
Grade: Eleven [ 11 ]

Species:
Necromancer
Iris can see, communicate with, and banish ghosts. There can be ghosts anywhere and everywhere. She can also raise the dead, but this is very tiring and probably not the best idea.

Gender: Female ♀

[Appearance]
▪ █ ▌ ᴘʜʏsɪᴄᴀʟ ᴀᴘᴘᴇᴀʀᴀɴᴄᴇ:
✏ DESCRIPTION
Iris was born with long, golden blonde hair, exactly the same colour as her mother's. She dyed it purple to get a new look though, so now it is a pastel purple or violet. Her hair is very wavy, and falls in loose ringlets. She has bright blue eyes, framed by dark lashes, and perfectly arched eyebrows sit perched above her eyes. Iris's lips form a natural pout, giving her a mysterious look. Her nose is perfectly sloped; and her skin is a flawless pale white, almost like porcelain. She is very tall, standing at 5 ft 11", and not underweight, but very skinny.



Distinctive Markings Iris has scars on her arms that she covers up by wearing long sleeved shirts and sweaters.
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Crush/Relationship: Single
Sexuality: Heterosexual (view spoiler)

Personality:
▪ █ ▌ ᴛʀᴀɪᴛs:
➊ qυιєт
Iris is a very quiet girl. She doesn't like to speak up, and in school she was thought of as the super shy emo girl. She doesn't mind though, and even if she has something important to say, she doesn't really see the point. She is quite introverted and antisocial, and is horrible at making friends.
➋ ℐηтєℓℓιgєηт
She is surprisingly intelligent, and even though she was quiet in school her average stayed in the high eighties to high nineties range. She thinks outside of the box, and is amazing at solving riddles and puzzles. She has solved a Rubik's cube once before, for a young kid in the orphanage.

➌ creαtινє
She is very gifted at playing the guitar and singing. She likes to write her own songs, and she keeps a song book which is basically her diary. She is also a very good artist, and she sketches in her spare time when she's bored (which is often). She expresses herself through her music and artwork.
➍ ∂єρρяєѕѕє∂
Iris isn't happy. She hates her life. There are only a few things that keep her with the world of the living, such as music. Music is her passion, and in her eyes, her whole life. It's the only thing keeping her from taking that away. She hardly ever smiles, and if she does, then you know she likes you. She often cries herself to sleep. Iris cuts, and she knows she should stop, but she's been doing it for so long now... She just doesn't see the point.
➎ ℌonest
Iris is almost brutally honest. She has no filter, and although she's quiet, if you're talking to her she won't lie. She keeps secrets, sure, but she doesn't lie to people's faces. She may avoid telling the whole truth, but that doesn't count as lying, right?


❝Instead of speaking, I sing. Music is the passageway into my soul.❞


History:
When Iris was four years old... she killed her own mother. Her mother had abandoned Iris, left her with her father when she was only a baby, and when she came back there was a huge fight. Her mom was packing bags frantically, and Iris was in the closet, hiding. Her father came into the room and there was a fight. Her mom took a gun from a drawer. Iris's dad hit her arm and the gun slid across the room to just outside the closet. Iris opened the closet door and picked up the gun. She wanted to help mama. Iris shot it and then... Her mother dropped to the floor. Iris knows that it was an accident, but it's still her fault. For as long as she can remember, Iris has been surrounded by death.

Iris was born on November 22nd, to Lilly Wendel and James Smith, in the suburbs of Madison, Wisconsin. People said she was the most beautiful baby they'd ever seen. After her mother's funeral, she saw the ghost of Lilly. Her mother told her it wasn't her fault that she had died, and that she was coming back for her. That she loved her. James didn't want to see Iris ever again and dumped her at an orphanage. They took her in and that was that.

The orphanage wasn't bad, there were good children and a caring administrator, but the ghosts wouldn't leave her alone. She saw them in her dreams, at school, at the orphanage, everywhere. What especially traumatized her were the imprints of violent deaths (wherever a violent death took place, it would run on repeat forever). When she was 12, and in middle school, she was severely bullied by her classmates. Iris was shoved in the halls, called multiple names: freak show, goth girl, head case, being some examples. In high school, the bullying got worse. Rumours spread like wild fire, about how she was a slut, a schizo. Her mental state, already fragile, definitely took the toll of the bullying. She had no friends, and no one ever listened to her. Everyone just believed the lies they were told.

Iris started self harm when she was 14, in her freshman year of high school. She would poke herself with knives, bite her arms, and sometimes cut when she felt she needed to feel what real pain felt like. Something worse than the pain and emptiness she usually felt. Iris is a very gifted musician, and loves to write her own songs on the balcony of her bedroom at night when no one is around. Her guitar and her songs are the only thing that keeps her alive, literally.

Iris ran away from the orphanage because she knew that she was too different for this place. That there was something wrong with her. She met someone like her, someone different who told her about this academy. Iris decided to give this place a try... Well, there really was nowhere else to go.

Family:
Lilly Camille Wendel

Lilly fell in love with James when they were both twenty. She loved him dearly... but her love faded after another year, while his stayed. Realizing she was pregnant, Lilly felt she had no choice but to marry him. When she was 23, she gave birth to Iris. About a year later, she got sick with depression. She fled to live with a relative in New Orleans, leaving Iris with James. When she came back for Iris, having recovered from her illness, James was furious, demanding why she left.

James Smith
James fell in love with Lilly at first sight. He was distraught when Lilly left him and Iris, and angry when she got back. She was going to take his daughter away from him. She told him that she didn't love him anymore. That was the night Lilly was shot by young Iris, leaving a devastated, grief stricken James who could no longer take care of his daughter.

Other:
Her favourite song is Bohemian Rhapsody by Queen, she loves the movies 'Schindler's List' and 'American Beauty'.




(view spoiler)



message 384: by Jasmine (new)

Jasmine (jasminethetallirishflower) Iris Christine Smith
- Is accepted by me and is free to use.


message 385: by [deleted user] (last edited Dec 17, 2013 12:48PM) (new)

“A trip is the most fun before one sets out on it. With dogs, the bark and not the bite is more frightening and women are almost always prettier when they are shrouded in mystery. I can never be as pretty as you imagine and I would never do something like that to you. Would it not be better to imagine?”



Name: Holo

Name Meaning: Whole in Greek

Nickname: Has been called Horo instead of Holo before

Gender: Female

Age: 19

Date of Birth: January 19, 1994

Place of Birth: unknown

Species: Wolf demon

Sexual Disposition: Heterosexual

Religion: None

Philosophy: “I stay not where I am not needed, go not where I am not wanted”



Appearance:

In her human form, Holo appears as a young girl with long orange hair and red eyes, although she still retains her wolf ears and tail, which appear remarkably like those of a fox, they are brown and the tail has white on the end.

Holo's 'true' form is a giant brownish golden wolf. In her wolf form, her eyes and fur are the same colour as her eyes and hair in human form, and she is much larger than normal wolves. In her wolf form, Holo is still able to talk normally, and is capable of reaching unimaginable speeds.

Hair: In her human form, she has long orange hair that flows past her chest.

Eyes: Holo’s eyes are a startling red color, but can appear to be more of a honey amber shade in certain lighting.

Height: 5’2”

Weight: 94 lbs.

Fashion of Choice: Holo typically wears a pale silver wolf cape that goes down past her rear, and an outfit made from some kind of animal hide fashioned into a skirt and a black top made of who knows what thats sturdy enough to take some blows without injuring her. Now that she attends the academy however, she has made an effort to ‘blend in’ so to speak and wears things that are loose and flowy to allow a freedom of movement that tight clothing restricts. Most deem her a ‘hippie’ in that sense, but she ignores them.



Personality: Holo is what one would call a Tsundere, she is soft on the inside and has a deep fear of being alone. But at the same time, she can be flirty or manipulative, as well as childish. She seeks to enjoy the simple pleasures in life and wastes no time pursuing that which she holds no interest for. Some would say that she is selfish in that regard, but she pays them no mind. She is loyal to friends, and a menace to her enemies. She is one who would fight to the last breath without a seconds hesitation.

Motivations: She is mostly motivated by either personal gain or interest. Everything she does happens for a reason.

Disposition: “Remember when I spoke of men being kind to women? Men should be measured by their kindness. However I am not your charity, and I have a tendency to consider things from only my perspective. A blink of an eye in my world is a lifetime in yours. A year or two is understandably precious to you. I forgot. I do not wish to waste your time.”

Outlook: Most would say she has a selfish outlook on life, but in reality she cares more than she lets on and just chooses to follow her own whims instead of being influenced by others.



Relatives:
Mother (Deceased)
Father (Deceased)

Enemies:
Anyone who doesn't like her or the Wolf demon species

Likes:
-Bread, honey, apples, sweets, and meat cooked rare
-Traveling, exploring new places
-Camping out in the woods
-Fire
-The night sky/stars
-Cooking (to an extent)
-Singing

Dislikes:
-Rain
-Thunder/lightning
-Swimming
-Getting hurt
-Seeing her friends get hurt
-Burnt food

Strengths:
-Enhanced smell and hearing
-Fast
-Cunning
-Smart
-Learns fast
-Great memory

Weaknesses:
-Is afraid of being alone
-Slightly afraid of the dark
-Picky eater
-If given money she would spend it all
-Has been known to get drunk and start fights



"I am not so grand, not as a god. I am Holo, and Holo is all that I am."

History: Holo was born and raised in a tribe nearby Aidan's and Shinata’s tribes. One day, she grew curious and ventured beyond the wolf demon tribes borders to spy on the cat demons she had heard about. It was on that day she met Aidan, and the two became fast friends and soon more. They were together every chance they got, until one day Holo’s tribe decided to move on, and she had to leave before she got the chance to tell Aidan.

Thousands of miles from where she used to live, her tribe was attacked and she came out as the lone survivor. Distraught over the loss of her family and kin, she wandered for days in shock from her injuries and at the sudden loss of all that she had known. She collapsed in the woods and was found by some Fox demons, who believed her to be one of them due to her tail. They took her back to their home and treated her wounds. When she woke up, they explained where they found her and, after hearing her tale, offered her a place with them. But she refused and explained she had someone she wanted to find again. After thanking the couple for helping her, she left.

Holo traveled for years searching for Aidan, never able to find the old tribe grounds she used to live in. Finally, she guessed that Aidan would have moved on by now with his tribe somewhere else and had to give in to the fact that she would never see him again. She made a home for herself in the woods and survived on her own, until one day she found a letter for a Supernatural Academy. Thinking it could be a chance to find Aidan, she accepted and has just joined a week ago.

Crush/Relationship: She has had a long standing crush on Aidan, but they didn't get a chance for a relationship before getting separated.

Powers: Can shift to her large ‘true’ wolf form (Usually requires a lot of energy to shift), tracing (The ability to move so fast it seems like you teleported from one place to another or made an object appear in your hand), and enhanced senses (Sight, Sound and Smell)

Other: She hopes to find Aidan here.




message 386: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) | 1693 comments A P P R O V E D


message 387: by Haven Angel (new)

Haven Angel Name: Senna Peregrin

Age: 18

Type(ex: werewolf, vampire, witch, elemental, etc.):
Water Elemental
Grade: Senior/12 grade

Appearance: http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/56...

Personality: Senna has a caring personality and is very loyal. Some times shes hard to motivate but once shes doing something shell finish it to the end.

History: Senna grew up in a relatively normal life. Bother her parents were also water elementals

Crush/Relationship: open

Family: A mother and a father

Other:

Power: Has the power to control water


message 388: by Jenna ⭐ (last edited Jan 01, 2014 06:05PM) (new)

Jenna ⭐ (sungkew)
Haven: Alright, you know this is advanced, right? I'm not trying to be rude, but if you really want to be a part of this, you're going to need a lot more detail not only in your characters, but also in your writing.
So if you'd like to get approved, I'd say that you should bold all the headings, add more to the personality (take a look at some other people's templates; there's a lot of info there. You probably need a good ten sentences or more for that), more on the history (Twenty sentences or more is what I always aim for), and definitely more in the powers and family. What are her parents names? What are the limitations on the powers? Also, I think you forgot to even mention what gender the character is. I shouldn't have to infer by the information presented. It should be stated.
So if you can do all this and meet the standards of advanced roleplay, you'll be fine. If not, then I can't really approve you.
Hope you understand.



message 389: by Jacquel (last edited Jan 05, 2014 09:24PM) (new)

Jacquel (clairevioletthorpe) Name: Marissa DeLion

Age: 17

Type: vampire

Grade: sophomore

Appearance: she has pale skin, blood red eyes, and dark red hair. She is short and slightly thin.

Personality: loyal, smart, and brave, but stubborn and can be sometimes insensitive.

History: Marissa was born in the year 1777, but her family lost their home during the French Revolution. Marissa's mother was beheaded and her father vanished without a trace. Marissa was changed by Count Xandros DeLion when she was 17 years old.

Crush/relationship: currently unattached; she's not very interested in dating

Family: lives with Xandros DeLion and his wife, Miranda


message 390: by Jenna ⭐ (new)

Jenna ⭐ (sungkew) Jacquel: .... You should read what I said about Haven's character.


message 391: by Jacquel (new)

Jacquel (clairevioletthorpe) I'll be redoing the character when I get on my computer


message 392: by Jenna ⭐ (new)

Jenna ⭐ (sungkew) Okay, thank you. Make sure you just follow all that stuff I listed above and I'll try and get you approved.
And I just want to reemphasize that this is advanced. I'm not saying either of you can't do that, but it's expected that things are really well done. Even if that's just a basic one, I'm kind of expecting really good content (proper grammar, spelling, and detail; things like that). Just make sure you're prepared for those things, y'know?


message 393: by Lizzie (last edited Jan 03, 2014 09:36PM) (new)

Lizzie (ruemen) Name: Seera Tybods

Age: 16

Type: Fire Element

Grade: 10

Appearance:
description
Seera Tybods

Description: Seera has a darkish sort of orange hair. Her hair goes down to the middle of her back. Her hair is right between curly and wavy but is mostly wavy. She has bluish green eyes, which she hates because she doesn't like blue. She's average height about, 5'4. She's fairly skinny and has peachy tan kind of colored skin.

Type of Clothes: Seera usually wears skinny jeans with a blouse. She always wears dark navy blue jeans with any colored blouse except blue. She also wears black flats.
Skinny jeans
Blouse
Flats

Personality: Seera truly is a nice person. She loves people and animals, but she seems to sometimes have trouble with her power. If she gets somewhat emotional, she can get out of control and even hurt a person if she's not careful. She's scared of what she can do and is afraid of getting a relation. She's one of those people who would like to help but just can't. She doesn't really have any guts, causing an issue with bravery. At times, she can be silent though she can also be loud when she wants to, but it doesn't happen very often. She hates the cold and seems to get feverish or feels really bad when winter comes. Though other than that she never really gets sick. She also listens to a ton of music. Her music is her only friend, though she usually listens to sad song, as they describe her the best. She's one of those very emotional person which is unfortunate for her.

History: Seera was raised as a normal child, raised in the mountains, unaware of the powers she had. She grew up like a normal child. Going to school and learning to grow up and live her life. But when she turned thirteen, she got angry with her parents and ended up burning them. They survived, but we're also scared for life. Seera practiced controlling her emotions, but she frequently had to go out to a body of water and let all of her emotions out. Her parents thought she was doing fine, but they didn't know she was going to let all of her steam out. Soon her parents figured her secret out when she didn't get out in time, destroying thankfully just their couch. She didn't want to hurt their home or her family anymore. She begged her parents to send her to the Supernatural Academy, and after a long discussion, they agreed.

Crush/Relationship: She's not planning to, but there can if anyone wants to.

Family:
Mom: Greta Tybods
Father: Tom Tybods

Likes:
Fire
Heat
Storms
Animals
Art

Dislikes:
Winter
Cold
Rain
Rivers
Any body of water
Heights
Spiders

Other: None

Power: She can control fire.

Fire: Seera has not yet tested her limits, though she has learned that she can control orange and blue fire. If she gets brave enough and willing to go into a cold enough climate for her to use her powers safely, she would test her limits in seeing what she can truly do. She is able to move or control fire and even create it out of thin air. Though, when she does figure this out, she could control or create black fire. She can rage to a spark up to flaming up a giant city. When she wants to, she can create herself become fire. Though only part of herself, not her whole body. It allows her to have multiply fires going coming out of her legs or arms, with her hands. Though she can also have her body heat up in a higher temperature than normal, could be scorching hot if she didn't control it. The body heat is a big issue for her. She constantly has to focus or have no feelings at the time to keep her temperature at a normal rate.

Black Fire: Black fire is basically black fire. It's color is black but if touched by it, it hurts ten times worse than real fire. It's a burning sensation and is very painful. Yet Seera has not yet come upon.


Limits: Seera is pretty limited. If she does anything huge(destroys city, forest etc.) she will feel sick or feverish for a couple of days, also like she does in the winter. She gets this feeling often since she has yet to control her emotions/power. If she practices her fire, her consequence will be less hurtful. Though if she he does something new or hard or to strong for her, her energy could drained out of her until she regains it back.

Emotions: Her emotions are her most common cause of her fires. For example, she looses control of her fire when she's mad. She doesn't mean for her fire to come out of her, it just does because of how she's feeling. For human, sort of how they get mad, another term is they get hot. In this case, her hot is released, and the hot is the fire. If she's scared the fire comes out as protection or an attack to her opponent. For examples, main emotions underneath.
Mad: Her fire comes out fast in anger, scattering wherever like a normal uncontrolled fire.
Sad: The fire comes out of her, flames on her legs, arms, face, etc.
Happy: Normal temperature and body could get hot if not careful.
Excited: She will get scorching hot.

Winter: In the winter it's her weakest but most controlled season. The cold usually gets her feeling feverish or makes her sick. Any cold or watery area. Whenever she touches water, it's like a different fire to her. It burns her like fire would if she he didn't control it. Her body doesn't need the liquid in her system. Though she can have food with water in it, just not water specifically.


message 394: by Jenna ⭐ (new)

Jenna ⭐ (sungkew)
Willow: There are just a few little things that I'm going to address. One, the picture didn't work. It says there's an error. Two, could you elaborate a bit on her powers? I mean, I know she can control fire, but that's a pretty broad range. There are a lot of powers and subpowers involved with that, so it would be a good idea to either bring that down or to write what she can and cannot control. For instance, what about blue fire? Is that under her control? Or Holy Fire, or dark fire, or... you know what I'm getting at? It might also be a good idea to say what her limits are. Like, it would be awesome if she could become completely embodied in flames, but it could have disastrous aftereffects. These are things that would be good to take into consideration.
Past those things, though, everything else checks out (even if I think you could include a bit more, but I'm a perfectionist so I shouldn't talk).



message 395: by Lizzie (new)

Lizzie (ruemen) Ok I'll work on that


message 396: by Jenna ⭐ (new)

Jenna ⭐ (sungkew) Thanks :) Just tell me when you finish.


message 397: by Lizzie (new)

Lizzie (ruemen) Ok think I'm done


message 398: by Shuhan [On Leave], I'm beside stoopid<- XD (new)

Shuhan [On Leave] (Inyourclosetinyourhead) | 5357 comments Mod
Personality:
I see two 'though's in a sentence.

History:
Give more?

Crush/Relationship:
Word spelt wrong.

Powers:
I don't like the amount of fires she could control...But what do I know about fire! I'M LEAVING JENNYLYNNY TO JUDGE THAT!


message 399: by Jenna ⭐ (new)

Jenna ⭐ (sungkew)
Lol, thank you, Shu XD

Willow: You should probably follow Shu's advice ;)



message 400: by Shuhan [On Leave], I'm beside stoopid<- XD (new)

Shuhan [On Leave] (Inyourclosetinyourhead) | 5357 comments Mod
Ah! So refreshing to dump the dirty work on Jennayyy!! Research? Pffft! What the heck is that?
Altah: I dunno, Shuhan...


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