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Name: Jessica RoweAge: 18
Type: Immortal Hybrid (consists of Warlock, Werewolf, Vampire, Mutant {with many powers}, and Shape-shifter)
Grade: 12
Appearance: Long wavy blonde hair that reaches her waist. Beautiful blue eyes that change to different color blue with her mood. Stands about 5'4 at the moment. Has pearly white teeth that have been straight since she was born. Wears a sea green crystal that she got from her mother when she was 4. She is also slightly tanned from living in the woods all her life.
Personality: Is shy around boys and is scared when shes angry because she thinks she will hurt someone with one of her powers (Neon, Video, Smoke, and Concrete). Is kind and caring when shes happy. Is funny and smart, she usually gets A's when in her classes. She is very brave and loyal when it comes to friends and enemies. When angry is can be a bit harsh but her friends know what she says is not true when shes angry.
History: Parents died trying to protect her from a powerful warlock when she was 6. Shes usually been scared of most warlocks all her life except Mark. Reggie her older brother, (Jessica's first older brother with no powers) lives in a small town near Seattle tries keeping in touch with her but she never talks to him. Delsin (Jessica's second older brother has powers and can take powers from others for a short time) protects his sister against those who think she doesn't belong because shes a hybrid who has powers.
Crush/Relationship: Mark Pevans and Nial Sohirtery
Family: Dad: Jacob Rowe
Mom: Melisa Rowe
First brother: Reggie Rowe
Second brother: Delsin Rowe
Jessica Rowe
Power: Has super speed, hearing, smell, and strength. She can drain video from computers or phones to turn invisible, grow video like wings, and to call video like angels and demons for help. She can also use her concrete powers to form armor and shields around her but can also seriously harm someone with it. She can use her neon powers to move swiftly without anyone noticing she can also use it to mark someone for later use. She can shape-shift also. But most importantly she can use her smoke powers to use vents move quickly but not without vault in movement she can also use it to harm others (not her most frequently used so doesn't have much control over it).
(I'm very tired due to me being at Insomnia 52. I just got home this morning and i was signing stuff and I'm just very tired but here's Jessica's Description.)
Name: Veille Age: 15
Type: Fairy
Grade: 9th
Appearance: Veille has long brown hair that she braids so it's a little past her shoulder blades. She's 5" nothing, and has bright green eyes. She has a few freckles and farmer tanned skin. She has this fairy wing tattoo that has the top two wings go under her shoulder blades and around her arms, the tips ending at her wrist. She usually wears the gloves clarinet members in a marching band would wear, as she has a size too big. It covers the tips up, and she would wear a jacket to cover up her arms. She doesn't really pay much attention to her leg wear, for it's usually shorts. Her top is usually a T-shirt of some kind, always being a random solid color or design.
Personality: Veille is a small, quiet girl. She tends to put her head in a book, whether it be a textbook or a sketch book, she doesn't care. She speaks softly, mumbles to herself a lot, and is sometimes goofy.
She likes to be unnoticed, where she has been for most of her life. She hates getting up in front of people, meeting new people, and she's socially awkward. She would rather not have people see her when she's in her room all alone, where she might draw and listen to the music and sign along with the radio, or danced as she's walking around trying to wake up her leg. Usually if people see her do stuff like that she gets embarrassed.
History: Veille was left at an orphanage in Paris. When her parents adopted her, she was only a baby. She grew up not knowing she was adopted for a few years until she was 10, and she started having to learn new things like shaving. She had noticed this wing like tattoo that was on her back. It started from the middle of her back, with four sliver like wings. The bottom two wrapped around her stomach. The upper wings went under her shoulder blades and up to her shoulders, where they would eventually wrap around her arms and end at her wrists.
She knew her parents didn't have that, and she knew it wasn't a tattoo, though it looked like one. She eventually guessed that she was adopted, and asked them that when she came home with an assignment about her family history. Her parents had a talk with her about how they were her real family, which she understood.
She never really found out about her tattoos until she turned 13. She was just spending another day home alone in her pajamas, shorts and a tank top, when she thought about her tattoos being wings and flying around and thinking about what that might look like. The next second, she felt something lift from her arms and a chill go from somewhere above her back, and down through her body. She glanced behind to find out that her tattoos where really wings, and that she was a fairy.
The next thing she had to do was figure out how to control her wings, which took a long time. She'd have to concentrate on what she was doing and her wings at first, but in a year she got used to it and it was just natural. She even found out once that she could shrink, but she couldn't make herself taller than her regular height, and shorter than three inches. She found out about some other powers too, like being able to shrink others.
When she got the letter to the school, she started learning English.
Crush/Relationship: She's single, she hasn't been in a relationship yet.
Family: Her adoptive parents, and her Scottish fold kitten, Sugar.
Other: She's allergic to nuts. She's fine unless she eats them. If she eats something with nuts, she has trouble breathing and her face turns red.
She's also from France and knows some English, and mumbles to herself in French.
Power: Veille has two powers but only knows about one of them. She knows she can shrink herself and others, but she doesn't know about her body magic.
She can shrink as long as she thinks about it or feels like being small, this is one of her hardest powers to control as she always feels like being small when she's embarrassed. She can also shrink other people too, going along with her body magic.
And her unknown power: a magic that effects your appearance. She calls it body magic. With body magic..it's where she just concentrates on what someone wants. If you want her to change your appearance, or change the one thing or make you a different animal or the opposite sex, she can. She just has to concentrate, but she's never actually done this on anyone, but she can if she thinks about it and tries.
In all, her powers take a toll on her. Body magic does the most on her, so she tends not to do it that often. Which is also why she's really bad at it. Sometimes she would pass out from doing too much, or she would get really dizzy and might fall.
Chloe wrote: "Name: Jessica RoweAge: 18
Type(ex: werewolf, vampire, witch, elemental, etc.): Immortal Hybrid
Grade: 12
Appearance: Long wavy blonde hair that reaches her waist. Beautiful blue eyes that..."
Power is too vague. I have no idea what she can do.
What exactly constitutes as an immortal hybrid? I'm curious cause there are a lot of immortal supernaturals and so what would they be a hybrid of?
I'm just curious cause when I see Immortal hybrid, a million possibilities come to mind.
Sorry if my comment is unwelcome by the mods btw, I just wanted to know
I'm just curious cause when I see Immortal hybrid, a million possibilities come to mind.
Sorry if my comment is unwelcome by the mods btw, I just wanted to know
Okay is there anything I should add that I seriously need to add or work more on? Cuz I feel like my character stuff is very bare.
But you didn't say WHICH supernatural beings. She could be a mix of anything with that saying with you adding more as you go along or something.
Stephanie: I would say to tone down the powers a bit :) Maybe pick like one or two instead of the number you have now. Perhaps have her specialize in one kind of power (like water or fire or something like that, or a specific mental ability). Also -- just a little nitpick -- sixteen might be a bit too old for a ninth grader. I'm sixteen and I'm a senior in high school (twelfth grade), so that might be something to consider altering. Most ninth graders are around thirteen/fourteen years old. :) That's just a little thing though, and it's not like you have to change it. I just didn't know if you were aware of that age range or not. So yeah ^_^ Hope that helped. Other than those two things, I'd say your character is pretty good :) I love her name. It's really gorgeous~
Thanks it supposedly means Eve.
Stephanie wrote: "So uh how's it look now?"
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But that's just me you don't have to change it.
Oh and that's to Chole, not Sakura.
Chloe wrote: "Name: Jessica Rowe
Age: 18
Type: Immortal Hybrid (consists of Warlock, Werewolf, Vampire, Mutant {with many powers}, and Shape-shifter)
Grade: 12
Appearance: Long wavy blonde hair that re..."
O_o wow. She has a LOT of powers...
Age: 18
Type: Immortal Hybrid (consists of Warlock, Werewolf, Vampire, Mutant {with many powers}, and Shape-shifter)
Grade: 12
Appearance: Long wavy blonde hair that re..."
O_o wow. She has a LOT of powers...
Stephane I haven't seen that video yet so I didn't know that they were the same but I guess now I'm gonna have to watch it to see.
Haha that's awesome! And okay sorry if that came out super mean or bossy.
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Stephanie I meant it's not mean or overpowered.
"Shy, quiet, kind, caring, loyal, tricky, cunning, strong willed, smiles a lot, gamer, nerdy, rager."You just listed character traits, some of them contradicting each other and one of them not even a real word.
"abel to cast spells" That would make her power limitless. I don't do that sort of thing.
"She was born and raised in the frosted of Canada when it suddenly burn down killing her mother. her father was able to save Hannah. Later on when she was 10 she learn she had magical powers. her father sent her to this school to control them."
This basically tells me that she existed and has powers. I could have guessed that, thank you.
I don't think any of this can be salvaged. This is not a good group for you to start in.
Ok so this is my first time, and I hope it isn't that bad.
Name: Alec Levran
Age: 1,400 years old.
Type: Warlock
Grade: 11th
Appearance: His host's body has jet black hair, pale skin, and black irises. He is tall, thin, and has natural charm. He has normal clothes, and several runes appear on his skin when angered.
Personality: He is normally devoid of emotion, being an immortal being. He has slowly started to show feelings towards others. When angered, more of his natural power escapes, causing arcane effects on his environment.
History: He was a being who was feared and worshipped among mortals. A council of magical beings punished him by putting him into the mortal body of Alec Levran. He is slowly adjusting, and he is going to this academy for a little less punishment in this host.
Crush/Relationship: He doesn't feel this is a necessary emotion, so nothing right now.
Family: None, as he has never had one.
Other: He is constantly in fear of him being doomed to this body.
Power: He is skilled in spell-casting, potion-brewing, divination, etc. He is gifted with manipulating the elements, necromancy, and illusion-casting.
Name: Alec Levran
Age: 1,400 years old.
Type: Warlock
Grade: 11th
Appearance: His host's body has jet black hair, pale skin, and black irises. He is tall, thin, and has natural charm. He has normal clothes, and several runes appear on his skin when angered.
Personality: He is normally devoid of emotion, being an immortal being. He has slowly started to show feelings towards others. When angered, more of his natural power escapes, causing arcane effects on his environment.
History: He was a being who was feared and worshipped among mortals. A council of magical beings punished him by putting him into the mortal body of Alec Levran. He is slowly adjusting, and he is going to this academy for a little less punishment in this host.
Crush/Relationship: He doesn't feel this is a necessary emotion, so nothing right now.
Family: None, as he has never had one.
Other: He is constantly in fear of him being doomed to this body.
Power: He is skilled in spell-casting, potion-brewing, divination, etc. He is gifted with manipulating the elements, necromancy, and illusion-casting.
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New members...shouldn't be beginners though.
Ok Shuhan. Would this be better?
Name: Derek Seren
Age: 360
Type: Warlock
Grade: 11
Appearance: Long black hair, pale skin, reddish-purple eyes, and a black tattoo of a raven wing on his cheek are all main features of him. He is tall and thin.
Personality: He is extremely cold and distant, but is compassionate for all life (or unlife). He doesn't trust others, until they have bonded. He is intelligent, and hates to lie.
History: Derek was born to priest's daughter, and was abandoned in 1654. He lived in hiding for 13 years, because of his unnatural eyes. One day, a man with the same colored eyes came up and led him to his home in the woods. He said his name was Samael, and he took him in. He taught him in the ways of arcane magic, and trained him until very recently. As of a year ago, Samael is dead. Derek was sent to the Academy, and will continue Samael's legacy.
Crush/Relationship: None, and is not looking for one.
Family: None as of now.
Power: He is skilled in potion-making and basic necromancy.
Hope this is better.
Name: Derek Seren
Age: 360
Type: Warlock
Grade: 11
Appearance: Long black hair, pale skin, reddish-purple eyes, and a black tattoo of a raven wing on his cheek are all main features of him. He is tall and thin.
Personality: He is extremely cold and distant, but is compassionate for all life (or unlife). He doesn't trust others, until they have bonded. He is intelligent, and hates to lie.
History: Derek was born to priest's daughter, and was abandoned in 1654. He lived in hiding for 13 years, because of his unnatural eyes. One day, a man with the same colored eyes came up and led him to his home in the woods. He said his name was Samael, and he took him in. He taught him in the ways of arcane magic, and trained him until very recently. As of a year ago, Samael is dead. Derek was sent to the Academy, and will continue Samael's legacy.
Crush/Relationship: None, and is not looking for one.
Family: None as of now.
Power: He is skilled in potion-making and basic necromancy.
Hope this is better.
Appearance: Describe him. Don't just list attributes.Personality: Every antihero ever. You could just write that down.
History: Why is he still in grade 11? Tell us.
What is Samael's legacy?
Family: Who were his parents?
Power: What is 'basic necromancy?' What sort of potions does he make?
Thank you Subservient. I will add this later when I get the chance.
Name: Derek Seren
Age: 160
Type: Warlock
Grade: 11th
Appearance: Derek has skin as white as now (Like Snow White). He prefers to keep his long, black hair wavy and to his neck. He has no blemishes, and has a long, 6'1'', thin frame which usually adorns itself with a sweater and jeans. His most noticeable features are his reddish-purple eyes, and his cheek tattoo of a raven wing.
Personality: He cannot feel emotion, an effect of a curse. His most noticeable facit of a almost nonexistent personality is his intelligence. He can easily surpass warlocks twice his age in a contest of wits.
History: At England in 1854, a priest's daughter was in labor. Hours later, the midwife handed her the baby. He did not cry, but instead opened his eyes. The daughter screamed, and the priest gave him to a local abbey. That lasted for five years, a new nun tried to drown him.
For the next two months, Derek lived in the local woods. One day, a man with the same eyes brought him to his cabin. He explained that his name was Samael, and that they both are warlocks of the Seren bloodline, carriers of the Mark of Cain. The Mark of Cain punishes anyone who attacks them will die and go to the deepest pit of Hell. Also, the carriers can never stay in the same place for a long time.
That began the brightest chapter of Derek's life. Samael taught him in the arcane ways of magic, and provided the best life for him. He took him around the world and everything was fine. For awhile.
In Italy, 1907, Derek accidentally angered a local witch. She placed a curse on him, so that he could never feel emotion. Samael was just in time to allow the curse to fluctuate. He could only feel emotion to someone who he has bonded with. Life went on almost as normal.
Eventually in 2013, Samael and Derek had settled down in a small town in Pennsylvania. Samael had sent him out to get a amount of mushrooms in a field close by. When he came back, he saw Samael on the floor with an arrow in his chest. All that was left of his attacker was a pile of salt. As Derek cradled Samael, his last words directing to cure the Mark of Cain.
For a year, Derek spent half of his time researching, and half of his time grieving. Finally a lead suggested that the Supernatural Academy was a hallmark of the knowledge required in his quest. Derek hypnotized a official, obtained a acceptance letter, and is prepared to avenge Samael.
(Note: Warlocks mature slower than humans. If he were 120 years old, then he would be in the 6th grade.)
Crush/Relationship: None, and is not looking for one.
Family: English priest: grandfather, deceased.
His daughter: mother, deceased.
Unknown father: maybe deceased.
Samael: adoptive father, deceased.
Power: Potion-brewing: Derek's favorite type of magic is potion-brewing. He is able to brew class 2 potions (Love philtres, future seeing ointments, etc.)
Basic Necromancy: Speaking to the dead, and raising small minions to do remedial tasks.
Flight: His tattoo allows him black wings for a limited amount of time.
Other: He has an cat familiar named Thanatos.
Age: 160
Type: Warlock
Grade: 11th
Appearance: Derek has skin as white as now (Like Snow White). He prefers to keep his long, black hair wavy and to his neck. He has no blemishes, and has a long, 6'1'', thin frame which usually adorns itself with a sweater and jeans. His most noticeable features are his reddish-purple eyes, and his cheek tattoo of a raven wing.
Personality: He cannot feel emotion, an effect of a curse. His most noticeable facit of a almost nonexistent personality is his intelligence. He can easily surpass warlocks twice his age in a contest of wits.
History: At England in 1854, a priest's daughter was in labor. Hours later, the midwife handed her the baby. He did not cry, but instead opened his eyes. The daughter screamed, and the priest gave him to a local abbey. That lasted for five years, a new nun tried to drown him.
For the next two months, Derek lived in the local woods. One day, a man with the same eyes brought him to his cabin. He explained that his name was Samael, and that they both are warlocks of the Seren bloodline, carriers of the Mark of Cain. The Mark of Cain punishes anyone who attacks them will die and go to the deepest pit of Hell. Also, the carriers can never stay in the same place for a long time.
That began the brightest chapter of Derek's life. Samael taught him in the arcane ways of magic, and provided the best life for him. He took him around the world and everything was fine. For awhile.
In Italy, 1907, Derek accidentally angered a local witch. She placed a curse on him, so that he could never feel emotion. Samael was just in time to allow the curse to fluctuate. He could only feel emotion to someone who he has bonded with. Life went on almost as normal.
Eventually in 2013, Samael and Derek had settled down in a small town in Pennsylvania. Samael had sent him out to get a amount of mushrooms in a field close by. When he came back, he saw Samael on the floor with an arrow in his chest. All that was left of his attacker was a pile of salt. As Derek cradled Samael, his last words directing to cure the Mark of Cain.
For a year, Derek spent half of his time researching, and half of his time grieving. Finally a lead suggested that the Supernatural Academy was a hallmark of the knowledge required in his quest. Derek hypnotized a official, obtained a acceptance letter, and is prepared to avenge Samael.
(Note: Warlocks mature slower than humans. If he were 120 years old, then he would be in the 6th grade.)
Crush/Relationship: None, and is not looking for one.
Family: English priest: grandfather, deceased.
His daughter: mother, deceased.
Unknown father: maybe deceased.
Samael: adoptive father, deceased.
Power: Potion-brewing: Derek's favorite type of magic is potion-brewing. He is able to brew class 2 potions (Love philtres, future seeing ointments, etc.)
Basic Necromancy: Speaking to the dead, and raising small minions to do remedial tasks.
Flight: His tattoo allows him black wings for a limited amount of time.
Other: He has an cat familiar named Thanatos.
*squirms with need to fix grammatical errors* merr.....
I am so sorry if my character profile has a lot of grammatical errors. I was kind of rushed, but I know that this subject is no excuse!
Don't mind me, I'm not a mod though I do get bothered by grammatical errors.I am, however, a little curious about the age rate of a Warlock. You say that at 120 years he would have been in sixth grade, but at 160 years he is in 11th? I'm not sure I understand the rate at which he ages. If one were to assume that the age rate doesn't change while he is growing, would he not be closer to 240 years old by 11th grade? Or is it that after he reaches 120 years, he ages in increments of ten rather than whatever rate he aged before? Though if that were the case....wouldn't he be older even in that case?
I'm going by the general age range to do the math, with the ages for 6th graders being between 9 and 12, which means he ages anywhere from 10-13ish years for each regular year of human growth, which would mean that by 11th grade, which has an age range of 14-17, he would be somewhere between 170 and 190 years.....
I would absolutely love to have some clarification on this in general, as you can see I've thought about it at length.
Oh! And here is the link to what I used to find the general ages for each grade btw:http://notebook.lausd.net/pls/ptl/doc...
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For Shuhan.
No, I have never roleplayed before. I previously asked for help for the general correct way to roleplay, but I received no reply. I looked over the character template, and I attempted to create one. I would love if you could help clear some things up!
For (I'm sorry that I cannot use your name).
For the first few years of a warlock of the Seren line, they develop like a normal human. But when they hit around 10, the development stops for the next 90 years. When the Seren warlock (Let's call them Serenites) hits around 100, every ten years act as one normal year. So Derek has the physiological age of 16.
No, I have never roleplayed before. I previously asked for help for the general correct way to roleplay, but I received no reply. I looked over the character template, and I attempted to create one. I would love if you could help clear some things up!
For (I'm sorry that I cannot use your name).
For the first few years of a warlock of the Seren line, they develop like a normal human. But when they hit around 10, the development stops for the next 90 years. When the Seren warlock (Let's call them Serenites) hits around 100, every ten years act as one normal year. So Derek has the physiological age of 16.
Just curious.....if you have neither roleplayed nor created a character before, why join an advanced group with high requirements? Would it not be wiser to start in a beginner level group to master the basics and then work up to an advanced level group?Okay, so what your saying for the age is that at 10, they stop aging until they are essentially 100 years old, then they age in 10 year increments, right?
You are correct on the age progression process :D
When I joined Goodreads, I stumbled onto this RP group. I thought it was interesting. When I discovered that it wasn't as easy as I expected, I decided I would learn and adapt to this new situation.
When I joined Goodreads, I stumbled onto this RP group. I thought it was interesting. When I discovered that it wasn't as easy as I expected, I decided I would learn and adapt to this new situation.
Can I ask why their age suddenly stops at ten for ninety years then starts aging them in 10 year increments? It seems rather....idk jumpy? Spontaneous, Random?Ah well....I suppose one could commend you on trying to learn and adapt, but it still wouldn't hurt to join some more beginner level groups to help with mastering the basics, as it would help with your learning and adapting to an advanced group.
Thank you for the advice, and do you have any groups to recommend while helping me with this group?
I derived the aging process from an Celtic folktale of a fairy whose son was doomed to stay young for a century.
I derived the aging process from an Celtic folktale of a fairy whose son was doomed to stay young for a century.
Depends on what kind of interests you have bookwise. Cause honestly as I prefer advanced rp over beginner level, I'm not really in any starter level groups and I only know of one that would be a good starting level if it would start getting active again.So you used a Celtic folktale about a fairy for your warlock? That's it?
On the aging process. The rest either came from books such as the Mortal Instruments, RPG's such as World of Warcraft, and basic mythology.
Is that an interesting ”hmm" or a “omygod that is so weird hmm"
just a hmm....it doesn't mean anything...
OK. Do you have any tips so I can improve my character profile?
~Bold the headings (most people do it)~Fix grammatical errors
~Definitely add more to personality. Elaborate on stuff, ya know?
~Perhaps elaborate on the age thing in a spoiler next to his age so it makes sense? Cause these posts are likely to be deleted eventually to clean up the spam.
~A little elaboration on the first parts of his history might be a good idea (and idk if that Mark of Cain, anyone who attacks him will die and burn in hell thing will fly honestly, cause if someone rped with you and hadn't read your profile and attacked, having them have no choice but to die is god-mmodding? either that or its just too powerful)
Thank you for the advice. I will add more details to the history, and the Mark of Cain.
<.b> goes at the front of what you want to bold and <./b> goes at the end of what you want to bold.Just remove the periods.
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^_^ thanks!