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message 601: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) | 1693 comments Their histories are rocky. Could you link them into this setting somehow?
Furthermore, you didn't expand on their powers like I asked.


message 602: by [deleted user] (new)

How about mine? If you have time to look of course :D


message 603: by dreaмcнιld (new)

dreaмcнιld They don't have much of a history to tell about themselves because they don't know much about their life before foster home.
What exactly else do I need to describe their powers.


message 604: by [deleted user] (new)

Name: Blaze Knight
Age: 16
Type: Elemental. Produces fire powers
Grade: 10
Appearance:http://th04.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i...
Blaze has purple hair, pale skin & calm green eyes. Her hair goes up to her waist. She keeps it out.
If she is mad, Blaze's eyes will become cold black & her hair will go red. Of course, this is very rare.
http://vgmania.webs.com/photos/vg-pic...
Blaze can also turn into a human like cat.
Personality: Blaze keeps to herself. She hides her feelings- the one thing her father never wanted her to do. It takes her closest friends to see the real her, which is bubbly, kind & sweet.
History: Her mother died when she was very young.
Blaze was raised by her father to become the next queen of Emerald Valley. On her 8th birthday, her father went on a ship with- and I mean with- all her family, leaving her with the maids. The ship was destroyed & her father died.
She was raised by the maids. At age 15 they enrolled her into the school for her safety- she was constantly in fights & one even said they saw her eyes go black. She slowly managed to make friends- and even meet her love.
Crush/Relationship: She's with Jake
Family: Like I said before, they all died on a ship.
Other: Blaze is very good at sketching.
Some people say when she's in cat form that she looks like someone...
Power: Blaze has fire powers. She can also shape-shift into a human like cat.


message 605: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) | 1693 comments Samantha wrote: "They don't have much of a history to tell about themselves because they don't know much about their life before foster home.
What exactly else do I need to describe their powers."


They don't know it, but I'd like to.

CLacey:
A P P R O V E D.


Fire queen:

Is that a serious attempt? Take a look at the approved character profiles, then tell me if you can see ANY similarities to what you have.


message 606: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) | 1693 comments Samantha wrote: "They don't have much of a history to tell about themselves because they don't know much about their life before foster home.
What exactly else do I need to describe their powers."


What you told me was fine. We just need it in the profile.


message 607: by [deleted user] (new)

Yaya^.^ thank you so much! Hehe!


message 608: by dreaмcнιld (new)

dreaмcнιld I'm just gonna delate them and start over.


message 609: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) | 1693 comments That's fine. Werewolves are overdone anyway.


message 610: by dreaмcнιld (new)

dreaмcнιld Ok


message 611: by dreaмcнιld (last edited Jul 27, 2014 01:51PM) (new)

dreaмcнιld Name: Cato Price
Age: 17 years old
Type: Erebokinesis
Grade: Junior

Appearance: http://media-cache-ec0.pinimg.com/ori...

Personality: He's charming and sweet. Loves to party and have fun. He's a big Jokester and smart off. Also he's very athletic and strong.
History: Cato grew up with a human family. He was spoiled and always got his way. In school he was call a freak and bullied. One day a group of kids followed him from school as he came to the forest the jumped on his beating him up that was when he learned about his powers. The shadows came out and pulled the kids off him. A shadow spirit told him he was a royal erebokinesis. That they were also very rare gifted people. He went home and locked himself in his room talking to the shadow spirit. His real parents were in danger and had set him on the steps of the Grissom family to protect him. His rare ability to create, manipulate, and materialize darkness had develop and he had no control. So he ran away when he was thirteen doing odd jobs here and there in one of the cities of Germany.
Relationship Status: Single
Crush: None
Family:
Mother-May Price
Father-Gib Price
Other: Tattoos line his arms and some on his back.
Powers: Create, manipulate, and materialize darkness.
Stages:
1D Infravision: The character can now see changes in heat, making out shapes and colors by the warmth of what is in their line of site.
2D Minor Shadow Manipulation: With this discipline, the psion can manipulate existing shadows, molding them to move on their own and take new shapes, and even become corporeal.
3D: Dark Visage: The character can use the darkness around him/her to make themselves more intimidating and eerie. This works like the “Fear” special ability.
4D: Shade Adaption: Much like the cold penumbra of a moon, the character is very use to cold environments, earning +3D to strength or stmina checks to resist ill effects from cold (as the Special Ability, “Environmental Resistance).
5D: Darkness: As the Special Ability “Darkness”, this allows the psion to project a field of darkness around themselves, adding a minimum of +5 to difficulty of any sight based skill totals.
6D: Blackout: With this ability, the psion can cause surrounding shadows to snuff out the light of an enclosed area.
7D: Silhouette Storage: By bending the very mysterious powers of dark matter, one can store an allotted amount of equipment in their own shadow so long as they are in an area where a shadow is casted.
8D: Gloom Ray: The psion can now create an icy beam of shadow, that freezes targets, harming them with cold.
9D: Shadow-Port: Can move throughout shadows within the psion's line of site.
10D: Shadow Immersion: The psion literally turns into shadow, keeping themselves safe from most physical attacks or enivornmental hazzards.


message 612: by Chouko (new)

Chouko | 4 comments Name: Chouko Aka

Age: 17

Type(ex: werewolf, vampire, witch, elemental, etc.): vampire

Grade: 11

Appearance:http://www.wallmu.com/wallpaperstock/...

Personality: She is lively and fun to be around. Don't mess with her! She gets into arguments easily and argues agressively. But soon after she cries where noone can see her, if the arguments actually hurt her. She's a fierce fighter, and is loyal to her friends, (at least she tries to). She is sweet to her closest friends but usually doesn't go further than that. She falls in love easily and in that case she'll do everything for that person.

History: When she was five, an evil werewolf attacked her family and killed her mother, father and brother. He tried to kill her to, but as she was the only vampire of the family (besides her long dead grandmother) and the werewolf didn't know it, she cast a weak shield which prevented him from killing her, but instead let through a curse which would kill her 2 years after. So basicly she managed to delay her death. She went around town to ask for an antidote and people indicated a small spell shop. An old lady was there and she studied the curse. She discovered a peculiar side effect of the curse. It was that Chouko would be really weak when it rained, but once it stopped, her power would be at its fullest. So the old lady managed to cure part of the curse, but only managed to stop her from dying. The weakness of the rain couldn't be cured. Therefore from then on, Chouko became afraid of the rain.

Crush/Relationship: None yet.

Family: None left.

Other: None.

Power: Fovee-wa style. Includes:
-She can cast a shield
-She has super strenght
-She has teleport
-She has healing powers too


message 613: by Daniel (new)

Daniel Andrade (dandradeg) Name: Prince Daniel Rangel



Tittle: Shape shifter angel, Prince of the light.



Nickname: Dani, Prince Dani, Prince Daniel, Range, Dang.



Gender: Male



Sexuality: Bisexual



Relationship Statues: Single



Type: Holy



Age/Birthday: 15/ July 31 (Last day of summer)



History:

His mother is an Angel, a queen in his world, she had sex with a mortal and leave pregnant, when she knew it, she invented to her husband, the king, that she was carrying a son of him... Even if it was a lie. When the gods get notice of this they punish the queen by killing his husband and taking the wings off the queen, but they feel sad for the son, so they give him the ability to shape shift in any animal that is already known by mortal humans. When he was 10, his girlfriend, was killed by the Queen, when he was 13, his boyfriend was killed by the queen, in this moment his rage was release and with his powers their wings grew to full size and her mother died by his rage... Now he's in the academy.



Appearance:

When his bf died:





Final form:





With the rage he's blonde hair got brown, he have hazel eyes and his wings are big. 1.83 meters, 75 kilo.



Powers:

- When he's in angel form he can create fire and lighting with his hands, but he can't control well this power, plus he can create a fire-ball or a lightning bolt each minute, but it’s very powerful, so he don’t like to use it except in extreme occasions.

- He can control light, can light a place or can make it more or less illuminated momentarily, also he can transform to light himself and appear in other place where is light, but its limited, he can’t move to places more far that 10 meters (After all he's the prince of light) (A power he consider useless)

- He had the useless (That's what he said) power to change color of things momentarily to, this is because light creates colors (Yeah, it's kind of useless)

- He has ability to shape shift in any animal that is already known by mortal humans (Explanation in the history)

- He's incredibly skillful with the Bow and Arrow, also with the trident. He has a necklace that can make seem any of these two weapons. It was the last gift from his father.



Personality: Daniel is a very pensive person, he over think things sometimes. He's a very happy person, he loves to smile, but not a lot of people make him. He likes classic music, pop and rock. Have a lot of imagination and its very intelligent. He is overprotective, but not jealous.



Family: He had a cousin, Now-a-days is consider the king of his world, at least, until Daniel is ready to take the throne.



Likes: He loves to fly

He loves to swim, but only in shape shift form, because otherwise, he's scare that her wings get wet.

He loves archery.

He love being around people.



Weakness: His wings.

His rage.



Pet: He has a pet name Luna and she's a cursed creäture from the death called Wolpertinger. When she found the way out of hell, the death cursed her. Luna is very loyal to Daniel, he save her from died again, she can fly, fight, she can suck blood and his antlers have telekinetic powers. Luna is always flying at Daniel's side protecting him.





Others:

Demon Form: When he is in this form he can't tranform in other animals, but his other powers get a bit more strong:



Rage form: The one he can't control and hate with his life and after that he aways pass out:

If he pass from demonic:

If he pass directly from angel:


message 614: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) | 1693 comments Ashleigh wrote: "Name: Andrea Thatcher

Age: 16

Type: Were-Hellhound

Grade: Sophomore

Appearance: Pitch black hair with a dark orange streak that reaches mid-back. Honeycomb gold eyes with a tint of brown. Moder..."


We need a LOT more in powers. The extent of her pyrokinesis and the point of her hightened senses and abilities to be exact. Furthermore, we'd like to know her appearance as a hellhound, as it seems that everyone imagines them differently.


message 615: by dreaмcнιld (new)

dreaмcнιld Is Cato approved?


message 616: by Chouko (new)

Chouko | 4 comments Is there anything I can change about Chouko which would make her valid?


message 617: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) | 1693 comments Chouko wrote: "Is there anything I can change about Chouko which would make her valid?"

Everything, honestly. I don't think that it's well suited to an advanced group.


message 618: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) | 1693 comments Ashleigh wrote: "The link to what the hellhound looks like: http://xchickenmonkeyx.deviantart.com...

Her pyrokinesis only stretches out to a fireball the size of a microwave ..."


Okay. Put it in the profile.


message 619: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) | 1693 comments Samantha wrote: "Is Cato approved?"

Personality: He's charming and sweet. Loves to party and have fun. He's a big Jokester and smart off. Also he's very athletic and strong.

Not when his entire personality can be summed up like that.


message 620: by Lyssa (last edited Aug 17, 2014 03:37PM) (new)

Lyssa | 7 comments Name: Bo Roussea

Age: 17 (in appearance)

Date of Birth: September 1st, 1848 (Virgo)

Type: Sol vampire or reverse vampire (She feeds off of plant blood instead of human or animal blood)

Grade: 11th (Junior)

Appearance: [http://vi.sualize.us/tumblr_lg83canv8...]
Like most Sol vampires, Bo has bright green eyes that pale and become darker whenever she's deprived of sunlight. She does have fangs, but those only show when she's feeding, or when she's deprived of sunlight. Bo also has light brown hair that reaches to her mid back which she usually keeps in a haphazard bun. She has a hard face and small mouth, which kind of makes her seem a bit older than she is. Bo’s a bit tall, standing at a full 5 foot 9 inches.

Personality: Most people would peg Bo as a goody two shoes from her intense attitude and unwillingness to break any sort of rule. In reality, Bo just prefers not to get herself in trouble. If something important came up, she'd practically set fire to the metaphorical rule book.
At the same time, Bo is actually pretty fun to be around, although her sense of humor is slightly out of date. She doesn’t make friends easy (especially with vampires as most of them want to kill her for being able to walk in the sunlight), but is loyal and reliable to the few she has.
In some cases, Bo is really shy. She dislikes confrontation with other supernaturals, because most of them react weirdly when she tells them she’s a sol vampire. Instead, she prefers to just say vampire, and hope they don’t probe her about it.

History: On September 13th, 1865, Bo and her family were visiting Morgan City in Louisiana. On that day a hurricane hit the state, killing her parents. She and her sister were swept away by the storm, and the two were attacked by one of the offspring of the only plant in history to be 'brought over' by a vampire (this vampire being the first sol vampire).

Crush/Relationship: none

Family: Bo's only living relative is her big sister, Allison. The two are extremely distant as even though they can't consume human blood, Allison enjoys spilling it. The older sister is constantly messing with and kidnapping humans.

Other: Bo can only be killed by beheading or complete incineration (although flames must be near 4000 degrees Fahrenheit to do any damage). Most flames won't light sol vampires on fire as their cells are highly resistant to flames and will begin healing instantly. As a sol vampire, most things that harm normal vampires don't affect her, such as holy water and wooden stakes. A hunter's best bet is to carry unholy items.

Power: Bo has the average strength (she can bench press 500lbs), speed (while running, she can hit 100 meters per second), agility, enhanced senses and above average intellect as normal vampires.

About Sol Vampires: Sol vampires are a rare breed of vampire that thrives in the sunlight. Instead of drinking human or animal blood, they drink the blood of plants. That is to say, they drink the chlorophyll of plant life. This is because hemoglobin (the main component of human blood) and chlorophyll have similar atomic structure, although human (and vampire) blood can poison and even incapacitate sol vampires. Sol vampires can drink from any plant on Earth, including poisonous ones.

Unlike other vampires, sol vampires sleep during the night, but only for about 2 hours due to the suns regenerative effect on them. Without sunlight, sol vampires become severely weakened.

Legend goes that the first sol vampire was a Lord in the Babylonian King Nebuchadnezzar II's royal court. The vampire fell in love with a woman who rejected his advances due to his penchant for blood. The vampire went to a wizard and asked him to remove his blood lust, but keep his powers. The wizard granted his request, but the vampire did not know that he was now supposed to feed on plant life. Nights passed as he wasted away, and almost died, until we saw a giant Venus flytrap in the Hanging Gardens Of Babylon. He bit into it, and the chlorophyll he drank tasted like sugar to him. His strength returned, but he unfortunately didn't realize his power was now linked to chlorophyll, and once it wore off, he died in the sunlight.

The plant that the vampire bit was said to have been the only plant to be 'brought over'. It began to attack any human who came near it, turning those on the brink of death into sol vampires. Once people found out what it was doing, they sent it downriver, where it settled into a swamp. It continued attacking people, uprooting and re-rooting itself to find human victims. It's also said that there are other plants like this, and that the original was able to reproduce.


message 621: by sucre'd fiend, Perfection (new)

sucre'd fiend (sucredfiend) | 764 comments Mod
What are these extra senses? Are you saying her senses are enhanced?


message 622: by Lyssa (new)

Lyssa | 7 comments Yes


message 623: by sucre'd fiend, Perfection (new)

sucre'd fiend (sucredfiend) | 764 comments Mod
Then please stated that they are enhanced, rather than extra senses. Extra implies that she has more senses than the usual five.


message 624: by Lyssa (new)

Lyssa | 7 comments Okay, done.


message 625: by sucre'd fiend, Perfection (new)

sucre'd fiend (sucredfiend) | 764 comments Mod
Can you go into more detail about Sol Vampires? You also didn't finish whatever you were typing in the "Other" section.


message 626: by Lyssa (new)

Lyssa | 7 comments Done and done. anything else I need to do?


message 627: by Nox (last edited Aug 11, 2014 03:34PM) (new)

Nox Reads (nox_reads) Name: Acacia "Ace" Masters

Age:16

Type(ex: werewolf, vampire, witch, elemental, etc.): One of the Cursed

Grade: Junior

Appearance:
She's short, around 5 foot 5 inches.
Her skin is tan, having lived in California for most of her life.
Hair is normally long and brown, in a braid.
Eyes are normally brown, she wears glasses.
She has a dragon tattoo on her right shoulder that is usually in black ink. The dragon is missing one wing.

Her hair, eyes, and tattoo change color depending on what psionic constructs she is using.
Ex.
When she uses love, her hair, eyes, and tattoo glow pink, the darker the color, the stronger the shade.
When she uses fear, the glow black.
Hope is purple, and anger is red.

Personality: She's shy in the beginning, but eventually warms up. She can be very protective of others that she cares about. She has trust issues, and when she makes friends, she sort of imprints on them. She tends to put others needs ahead of her own, because her energy is affected by that of those around her. Ace is an open-minded person. Friendship is one of the things she values the most. She can be very energetic (considering her abilities feed off of energy).

History: Her mother upset a powerful sorceress while pregnant with her and her brother. The sorceress, upset, cast a curse on Ace and her brother. Their mother died in childbirth, their father ran out on them, and they were kicked out of an orphanage in Arizona when her brother Max accidentally set on fire.

When they left the orphanage, Max and Ace headed to California. A drunk man attacked them, and Ace blasted the man into a brick wall with a Fear Construct, accidentally killing him. This alerted a secret organization of their existence, and they started to hunt for the twins.

Max and Ace were on the run for 5 years. Finally the men cornered them in a warehouse that manufactured matches. Max had Ace put a barrier (using the Fear Construct) around herself, while he burst into flames and lit all of the matches. Ace was the only survivor of the warehouse. She has been wandering around for 2 years.

Crush/Relationship: None yet

Family: May Masters (Mother, Deceased) Jace Masters (Father, Unknown)Maximus Masters (Twin Brother, Deceased)

Other: The dragon tattoo she has is missing one wing. Her brother had a matching one on his other shoulder, and when he died, the right wing on the dragon faded away. The things she creates using her powers also change color depending on the construct she's using.

Power: She was cursed with psionic manipulation.

http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Ps...

There are certain psionic abilities that she has mastered, such as:

~Psychic Constructs (she can create armor, barriers (her strongest), restraints (her weakest) and weapons, based on her psychic energy)
-Fear (Most common
-Love (Strongest, but the rarest one)
-Hope
-Anger

*Please don't steal. My friend and I are using her in a project.


message 628: by Jenna ⭐ (new)

Jenna ⭐ (sungkew)
[ For Acacia ]
Alright, just a few things that need to be addressed.

[1] Do you think you could bold the different titles and stuff (like history and personality and name) as other people have done beforehand? It's just a lot easier to read when that information is clear.

[2] So... gonna need more personality, history, and appearance :P She needs to be a bit more fleshed out is basically what I'm saying. Keep in mind that it's an advanced roleplay. Not harping on her or anything (because I seriously love the ideas you've got going (along with her name because it reminds me of one of my favorite songs)), but I'm just saying that the group is advanced and, you know, detail is necessary, even in the character sheets. So like a few paragraphs would be awesome.

[3] This might crush everything you and your friend are doing (awesome idea doing a project like that ;) ), but I feel like she's a bit... overpowered, you know? Like, I feel like she could be unstoppable and practically indestructible. And while maybe that could work in a book or movie or video game (ie. the game Two Souls), it doesn't really work for an RP. You'd have to tone things down to one big power or two smaller ones to make it fly. Just how things work :P I'm sorry about that. Really, I am.

[4] This is just criticm on my behalf (because I'm a nosy boob), but the whole idea has some little flaws. Like, if the sorcerer wanted to curse her, why would she give her a whole bunch of powers, you know? I feel like if you wanted to make it realistic, she would have only one power and it would be really devastating, something that she couldn't control or something that was damaging to those around her, yeah? Like, why not give her the sole power to... I don't know, take someone's memory whenever she touches them or... you could have her late brother have the issue of setting fire to literally everything he touched. Something that would be a detriment rather than an advancement. (Think Rogue from X-Men or Juliet from Shatter Me even though she's a Rogue rip-off and I hate that book.) If you did that, I think you would have a much more engaging story as well as a character fit for RP :)

Hope this helped a bit ^_^ Bottom line, the first few things are what you need to fix to get approved and the bottom is my own little advice.
And now that I read all this, I realize this is more than a few little things XD Sorry about that.



message 629: by Nox (new)

Nox Reads (nox_reads) J e n n a l y n wrote: "[ For Acacia ]Alright, just a few things that need to be addressed.

[1] Do you think you could bold the different titles and stuff (like history and personality and name) as other people have don..."


1) My computer won't let me bold it for some reason.
2)Alright, I added to history, appearance, and personality.(By the way, I never heard the song Acadia before, and now I'm addicted. So thank you.)

3)I understand that's extreme for a RP. It's a book, so it kind of works.

4) The thing about her being cursed is that Ace and Max's powers are difficult to control. Along with the general curse of bad luck, they were two lonely kids dealing with supernatural powers. And we were actually doing what you said with Max, he pretty much set everything on fire.

Thanks for the advice.

By the way, I hate Juliet and Shatter Me too.


message 630: by [deleted user] (new)

you bold stuff by putting <.b> at the beginning of what you want to bold and <./b> at the end of it, just remove the periods


message 631: by Nox (new)

Nox Reads (nox_reads) ☥ SΛҠƱŔΛ ßƐĿĿΛŔ♡SƐ ~~ ƜӇЄƝ ƬӇЄ ƜƠƦƊƧ ƛƦЄ ԼƖƘЄ ƁƲԼԼЄƬƧ ƛƝƊ ƬӇЄƳ ƁƦЄƛƘ ƬӇƦƠƲƓӇ ƳƠƲƦ ƧƘƖƝ, ƛƝƊ ƬӇЄƦЄ'Ƨ ƝƠ ƜƛƳ ƬƠ ƓЄƬ ƬӇЄM ƛԼԼ ƠƲƬ ☥ wrote: "you bold stuff by putting at the beginning of what you want to bold and at the end of it, just remove the periods"
Thanks!


message 632: by [deleted user] (new)

^_^ No problem.


message 633: by Jenna ⭐ (new)

Jenna ⭐ (sungkew) Greekgeek99 wrote: "J e n n a l y n wrote: "[ For Acacia ]Alright, just a few things that need to be addressed.

[1] Do you think you could bold the different titles and stuff (like history and personality and name) ..."


Whoa-kay :) Thanks for bolding it ( and thank you Sakura for showing how to do that ;) ) and you're welcome ^_^ Marianas Trench is pretty amazing <3

And I completely understand it being for a book (hell, I can think of a few of my book characters that haven't been the most tame when it comes to abilities), but, yeah, for an RP, I guess what I'm saying is that I can't really approve it seeing as we don't want anyone to be too overpowered, you know? Not saying that I don't trust you or anything (because you seem awesome :) ), but I know I've run into some people that, even accidentally, take their characters bit too far when it comes to abilities. *Cough* me once or twice I'm just, as a mod, saying that for the RP, it would need to be toned down :)

Sounds awesome! ^_^ If you two ever get published or anything like that, lemme know because it sounds really cool ;)

No problem :)

I couldn't even get through that book XD I was just so angry at it.


message 634: by [deleted user] (new)

^_^ no prob Jenz I tend to like to help others regardless of what group I'm in so *shrugs*


message 635: by Shuhan [On Leave], I'm beside stoopid<- XD (new)

Shuhan [On Leave] (Inyourclosetinyourhead) | 5357 comments Mod
Hey, could everyone add descriptions to appearance please.


message 636: by Nox (new)

Nox Reads (nox_reads) J e n n a l y n wrote: "Greekgeek99 wrote: "J e n n a l y n wrote: "[ For Acacia ]Alright, just a few things that need to be addressed.

[1] Do you think you could bold the different titles and stuff (like history and pe..."


So do you want me to change the powers still? Because I can do that.


message 637: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) | 1693 comments Yes. Change them.


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Name: Jordan

Age: 16

Type: Fallen Angel

Grade: 9th

Appearance:

Personality:

History:

Crush/Relationship:

Family:

Other:

Power:

Human Hunters

Name:
Age:
Gender:
Appearance: 5 full sentences and/or an image.
Personality: 5 full sentences.
History: 10 full sentences.
Relationships:
Family:
Weapons/Skills:
Other:


message 639: by Lyssa (new)

Lyssa | 7 comments Um, is my charrie Bo approved?


message 640: by Shuhan [On Leave], I'm beside stoopid<- XD (new)

Shuhan [On Leave] (Inyourclosetinyourhead) | 5357 comments Mod
Lyssa, I still don't know what she looks like from your description....
And is that all for personality? Goody two shoes? Doesn't she have some more...traits?
Is it possible to have fire at 4000 degrees F?


message 641: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) | 1693 comments 4,000 degrees fahrenheit is equivalent to 2200 degrees celsius. Does that help at all?


message 642: by Lyssa (last edited Aug 17, 2014 03:38PM) (new)

Lyssa | 7 comments ☠Shuhan✈Cᴏᴡs ᴀʀᴇ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴇsᴛ ᴛᴏ ᴛᴀʟᴋ ᴛᴏ... wrote: "Lyssa, I still don't know what she looks like from your description....
And is that all for personality? Goody two shoes? Doesn't she have some more...traits?
Is it possible to have fire at 4000 de..."



Actually, you can. Fire over 3600 degrees F (2000 degrees C) is called oxyhydrogen fire.


message 643: by [deleted user] (new)

*is called not are called


message 644: by Lyssa (new)

Lyssa | 7 comments ☥ SΛҠƱŔΛ ßƐĿĿΛŔ♡SƐ ~~ Nσ мαттєя нσω мαηу ∂єαтнѕ тнαт I ∂ιє I ωιℓℓ ηєνєя ƒσяgєт Nσ мαттєя нσω мαηу ℓινєѕ тнαт I ℓινє, I ωιℓℓ ηєνєя яєgяєт ☥ wrote: "*is called not are called"

Thanks.


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message 646: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) | 1693 comments Stephanie wrote: "Name: Calypso Abigail Montana (goes by Cala)

Age: 16

Type: Mermaid

Grade: 9

Appearance:

tail: http://th01.deviantart.net/fs46/PRE/i...

Comb..."


No real description on power, a one-sentence history and personality. It makes me cry.


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ρℓєαѕє яєα∂ тнє ƒσℓℓσωιηg мєѕѕαgє --> (view spoiler)



“There are far too many silent sufferers. Not because they don't yearn to reach out, but because they've tried and found no one who cares.”



(view spoiler)

░║пıcκпαмεƨ You can call her Aurai or Aura

▒▌∂σ тнєу єиנσу тнєѕє/тнιѕ иι¢киαмє(ѕ)؟ She doesn't really mind and even if she did, she wouldn't tell you.

░║ɢɛռɖɛʀ Female

░║αɢɛ 17

░║ɔαтε σғ вıятн November 27th

░║ѕρε¢ιεs Air Nymph (view spoiler)

▒▌zσ∂ια¢(єαѕтєяи) Sagittarius

▒▌zσ∂ια¢(ωєѕтєяи) Dog

░║ ρℓαcε σғ вιятн The Stratosphere

░║ sεxυαℓ ∂ιsρσsιтιση Heterosexual

▒▌ ρнιℓσsσρнү I still think about everything I thought about those nights. I had hoped that the fear would fade in time. But that hasn't happened. Instead, the things that I remembered, those little details, seem to grow stronger, to the point where I can feel their weight in my chest.




Ŧคςє ςlคเ๓: Chloe Grace Moretz

░║ αρρεαяαηcε ║░







Body build(slim, muscular, etc.): Aurai has a rather slim build that is not very muscular looking. She doesn't have any apparent muscles and is mostly soft curves, but looks are deceiving in that she is stronger than she appears, but cannot seem to get rid of the curves on her body and replace it with muscle.
Extra extremities(Another arm, tail, horns etc.): Aurai has a single pair of wings on her back, they are Barn owl (Tyto Alba) wings, or at least they resemble a pair of barn owl wings. They are white on the underside/inner wing and have tan feathers on the outer wings. The feathers are styled like a Barn owls in that she can fly silently with them.

Bird DNA: Barn Owl (Tyto Alba)

Back of wings:


Underside of wings


Does the extremity cripple them or is it helpful?: Her wings both cripple and assist her. In area's where there are high ceilings or, even better, no ceilings, she can fly away and evade attacks or capture. But, in areas where she cannot stretch out her wings or fly up, they can become a hindrance in that if someone breaks them, the pain is intense enough to cause her to falter and thus puts her at a higher risk of capture.
Describe how they walk(Fast, slow, weak step, etc.): Aurai is not big on being seen, and as such she tends to mimic the walking of whoever is around her to blend in and keep her head down. She knows that if she is careful then she can seem like any of the countless 'moody' teens that roam around cities and streets.
Why do they walk this way?: She is worried about being found by the one who captured her, if he still lives which she fears that he is, and as such prefers blending in rather than standing out.
Do they limp?: Only if she is injured
Scars: She has four long, wide scars that stretch from her left shoulder down across her back to her right hip. There is a fifth, smaller scar that stretches more along her side down to her hip. The wound looks like maybe an absurdly large wolf or bear dealt it, or maybe they are scars from harsh blows of a whip, she won't say.
Birthmarks: A small, dark purplish splotch on her left hip that looks like a bruise shaped like a wolf head.

▒▌ нαιя She has long, silky blonde hair that falls down to her shoulders in soft waves. She rarely does anything with her hair other than brush it out, but will throw it up in a ponytail or tuck it under her hair if the weather gets hot enough. Despite the lack of doing anything with her hair, it is always incredibly soft.

▒▌ εүεs Her eyes are a stormy gray with little flecks of blue in the depths. When she gets upset, her eyes darken. Other than her eyes darkening, she never gives any outward inclination to something like anger.

▒▌ нειgнт 5'2"
▒▌ ωειgнт 101 lbs





▒▌ρεяsσηαℓιтү

Aurai has a tendency to hide her true feelings, and as such she is often not entirely aware of her real feelings or rather, she cannot handle them in their entirety because she has pushed them away for so long. She is a slightly skittish young woman who tries hard to pretend nothing's wrong as she is not one who wants others pity or sympathies.

Before the kidnapping and warping of her DNA, Aurai was a carefree girl who was often seen as immature due to her playfulness and seemingly lack of maturity and ability to be serious. She was a budding artist and a loyal friend. She was fun to be around and well liked by many of her friends in kindergarten up to second grade, which was when she was taken.

((this is just a general thing, it is entirely possible that she will not, in fact, stick to this personality at all, my characters tend to ignore the personality I create for them))


░║вιggєѕт fєαяѕ:
☣ She has a deathly fear of her Captor
☣ She has an intense fear of the dark
☣ Suffers from Claustrophobia, a fear of enclosed spaces
☣ Arachnophobia, fear of spiders
☣ She's afraid of being underground and enclosed by dirt (which is understandable seeing as how she is a being of the air rather than the ground)

{CONTINUED IN PART TWO}


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{PART TWO}

▒▌яєℓαтινєѕ:
Boreas (Father; God of the North Wind)


▒▌ѕкιℓℓѕ:
♅ Excellent at drawing, painting, sketching and taking photos.
♅ Good handle on her emotions (though that is not necessarily a good thing)
♅ Can use her Animation ability extremely well thanks to her artistic skills giving her an abundance of things to bring to life at any point in time.
♅ Very flexible and acrobatic
♅ Is good at blending in with a crowd, to the point that no one would ever know she was there.





“The terror takes you. The cage is locked and the curtain drawn. Fingers dance along as blades, carving memories into your flesh that will leave scars long past being healed.”

▒▌нιѕтσяу:
Aurai was kidnapped from her home at the age of 2 by a man she only knew as Sir or Master. He never told her his name and beat her when she asked it the first time. For years, she was trapped with her captor, a mad scientist who experimented on her for his own selfish desires. Before she turned three, he used his knowledge of DNA and animals to integrate Barn owl wing DNA into her and used dangerous gamma rays and growth hormones to force the wings to grow, ignoring her screams of pain as he did so.

As the years went by, he continued to experiment on her, attempting to unlock some secret within her mind that she knew nothing about. All she knew was the pain that he was putting her through and the seal he had somehow placed on her aerokinesis.

Then, he unlocked a power within her mind that turned the tables on him. Her animation ability kicked in and brought to life the countless statues that he had littered around his home. They turned on him and tried to attack him while she struggled to free herself from the chains binding her to his latest contraption. She escaped while the statues drew on her strength to trash the building, stopping only when she lost consciousness several miles away.

Since then, she has been mostly on the move, to afraid to stay and afraid to leave and be alone again, feeling always on the run and second-guessing her decisions. After running for a while, she came upon the Academy and enrolled, hoping to find answers as to how to use her powers without losing consciousness, and maybe even find some answers as to who kidnapped her and why.

▒▌¢яυѕн/яєℓαтισиѕнιρ: None, but open

▒▌тαℓєитѕ/αвιℓιтιєѕ:

Animation- Aurai can bring to life inanimate objects/drawings, making them move/act on their own accord while working in tandem with her. The things she draws tend to listen to her more than a painting from a wall in a museum, because of the connection as she is the drawings creator.

Downside/disadvantage-
⋆ If she falls unconscious, anything she brings to life will revert back to their original state.
⋆ Bringing giant toys, life sized statues, etc. to life will exhaust her. She can bring to life little figurines or small toys, but anything bigger could cause her to lose consciousness.
⋆ If she tries to bring too many things to life at the same time, she will either lose control of them and the items will possibly go into a rampage(which is not very likely), or she will lose consciousness and the items will revert back to their original state(which is the most likely and most common thing that happens if she pushes her limits).
⋆ She can only bring to life things that already exist, which means no making world destruction items.

Aerokinesis (Also known as Air Manipulation)- Aurai can shape and manipulate air and all forms of wind from tornadoes(she can only push them away from her and it would leave her exhausted), hurricanes (same as tornadoes, except she would lose consciousness), vertical drafts, micro-bursts and other devastating forms of wind. Naturally can also create any less extreme air/wind movement. (Or at least she will be able to when she masters her power; as of now the most she can do is redirect a gentle breeze)
She will also be able to enhance her speed by using compressed air pressure for supersonic bursts (Another thing she has yet to master)
She will eventually be able to make a wall of high pressurized air to defend herself like a shield against certain items(again with her disadvantages to this power, the right person could break through her shield and overpower her)

Downside/disadvantage-
⋆ Ineffective in a vacuum: atmosphere must be present. Variations in air-pressure tends to complicate things for her as she is a beginner when it comes to this power.
⋆ She can only manipulate the air in a twenty foot radius around her with intense concentration, ten feet with normal concentration, and five feet if she is making minimal effort.
⋆ If she is exhausted, physically or mentally, she cannot create her own wind and has to draw on already existing sources to manipulate.
⋆ Is weak against anyone with Fire manipulation, as fire is fueled by oxygen in the air and would make the opposing flames stronger
⋆ High level Electricity manipulators can use electrons to detonate the various compound molecules within the air and overwhelm her.
⋆ Even if she has completely mastered her aerokinesis, she is still limited by her mind and body. She will only be able to do so much without pushing her limits, and if she pushes her limits too far, she could kill herself or put herself in a coma.

▒▌σтнєя:
➳ She knows how to shoot a gun
➳ She has a sketchbook and pencil on her at all times, though if she's not on the run, then she has a backpack that is filled with sketchbooks, colored pencils, pastels, portable paints, paintbrushes, markers, erasers, and a pencil sharpener.
➳ She is not very experienced in using her air manipulation ability, despite being a wind nymph.
➳ She is still learning about flying since the wings were grafted onto her body rather than her being born with them.




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I'm not thrilled about her history but here she is ^_^


message 650: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) | 1693 comments The history has potential. I'm sure you can develop it into something amazing.

Approved.


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