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May 07, 2014 04:37AM
Making a solid is making an actual substance, which would not be making an illusion.
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Name: Faylinn FlowerAge: 118 years old, but its unknown to the fairies because they don't keep track of ages in their realm.
Type: Nature Fairy
Grade: Freshmen of course.
Appearance: Faylinn is an usual looking Nature Fairy. She is shorter then most coming at a height of 3 feet and five inches. She has this long, wavy red hair that ends at her butt. Her eyes are what brings her the most attention. They are a vibrant emerald green, but inside the pupils she has this little flame in them that flares and gets brighter every time she tries to use her magic. Her wings are the most beautiful. While most Garden Fairies have dull brown or green ones, Faylinn's are a shimmering golden color.
Personality: She is very hot tempered for a nature fairy. She becomes mad at the slightest things. She ends up exploding on people for no reason. she is a very closed up person, but deep down she has a deep caring heart.
History: Faylinn was born on the 5th full moon of the year. When she was born, she was all by herself, but she got lucky because her Garden Fairy mom was just walking by when she heard her crying. Her mom took her in but never told Faylinn about it.
Faylinn never felt like she fit in. She was always the outcast. The one little kids stared at because of the radiant shine she put off. She also was the one people gossiped about because she couldn't use any garden fairy powers. She hated it. So when she got the letter to Supernatural academy, she immediately accepted it. Her first thought was its time for a new change.
Crush/Relationship: none at the moment.
Family: She never knew her real parents but she has a foster mom.
Other: All she wants is love and acceptance.
Power: She doesn't know of her real powers at the moment, but she is able to use fire powers in the most powerful ways. also makes the sun rise and set. she can't do this until she connects with the firey part of her heart.
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Powers are far too over the top. If she can cause the sun to rise and set, she can speed up the planet's rotation or reverse it. If the planet were to abruptly stop spinning and start going the other way, I'm pretty sure that would kill absolutely everything.Except roaches.
The most powerful way I can think of to use fire powers is burning away the entire universe. When you say "the most powerful ways," that's an automatic overpowered character.
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Not advanced.
Lack of information.
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☠Shuhan✈Cᴏᴡs ᴀʀᴇ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴇsᴛ ᴛᴏ ᴛᴀʟᴋ ᴛᴏ... wrote: "Over powered.
Not advanced.
Lack of information."
My phone was going dead so I had to act quick and sorry if I overpowered him, I will take off being smarter than all humans and add being smarter than most kids at his school. I will add more info, and what do you mean I'm not advanced?
Not advanced.
Lack of information."
My phone was going dead so I had to act quick and sorry if I overpowered him, I will take off being smarter than all humans and add being smarter than most kids at his school. I will add more info, and what do you mean I'm not advanced?
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Okay I get it now I will fix and then can I get accepted.
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Name: Elspeth GangwayAge: 23
Type: forest nymph
Grade: 12
Appearance:
Personality:
+ Gentle; Soft in both tone and appearance, Elspeth has a natural ability to calm others. Everything from her voice to her bone structure makes her presence feel like watching waves of grass gentle sweep from side to side upon rolling hills. Her gentle demeanor makes her easy to trust, for children and adults alike.
+ Tolerant; She is kind and understanding to everybody right off the bat. Elspeth is not quick to judge, and will first try to place herself into someone else's shoes before forming an opinion of them. Still, that's not to say that she extends her patience towards everyone. She is stern and dismissive to people who have proven themselves to be ignorant and/or spiteful without cause.
+ Decisive; Elspeth's sharp intellect enables her to evaluate a situation quickly and clearly see most of the possible outcomes of each solution. This makes her a viable candidate for positions in which she is responsible for making the best possible decision in the shortest amount of time.
+ Strong; Despite her fragile appearance and quiet persona, Elspeth is one of the strongest people you could meet. She handles challenges and potential dangers with confidence and grace, not daring to bat an eyelash at the thought of likely harm. Her highly logical mindset allows her to easily assure herself and others in her views, and she has no trouble sticking to her morals and decisions even when fiercely disagreed with.
History: Elspeth ascended from the earth itself, so she has no family that holds her same blood and flesh. When she was just a baby, however, an older couple had been hiking in the wilderness when they found her cradled in a bushel of long waxy leaves, and decided to bring her home. They raised the small child as their own, giving her a name and integrating her into the rest of their family. Elspeth has since been nurtured by their affectionate care.
Crush/Relationship: N/A
Family:
-Luanna (adopted mother)
-Harrison (adopted father)
-Isabel (aunt on mother's side)
-Ford (uncle on father's side)
-Luke (Isabel's son)
-Angelina (Isabel's daughter)
Other: Because Elspeth can only control plants that are already on the earth, she almost always wears robes that are lined with many pockets for holding various kinds of seeds. That way, if she needs to grow a certain plant, she can just pick a seed, drop it on the ground, and do her thing. This takes less energy than having nearby plants drop their own seeds onto the ground.
Power:
+ Communication with Animals; This is a rather simple gift, but Elspeth has difficulty explaining it to other people due to the fact that, obviously, since animals think differently than humans and don't have any specific language, she and animals can't necessarily speak directly to one another. However, she is able to easily sense their emotions and understand their behavior, as well as use her own emotions and body language to let her intentions be clear to them. It's through this vague communication that Elspeth and animals tend to understand each other. She can use this ability to attempt to get a certain animal to act/ think differently than they currently are, but the animal never loses a grip on its free will, and still must decide how to act on its own. For example, if a bear was going to attack some campers, Elspeth could try to deter the bear, but if it really wanted to attack then nothing she could do would stop it. In that case, Elspeth would just use her outside knowledge of the bear's weaknesses to get it to back down while harming it as little as possible.
+ Plant Control; Since Elspeth was born of nature itself, she has always had a natural ability to nurture plants. As time went on, she experimented with this power, and discovered that as long as their is an existing plant or seed in soil, she can coax it into growing at any which speed and in any which way she likes. That's not to say, however, that it doesn't take a lot out of her. In order to get plants to grow in certain ways, Elspeth must donate some of her own energy for it to use. Because she is a nymph instead of a human, she has plenty of energy to give, but can still get tired out if a copious amount is used in a short period of time. For example, Elspeth will have no trouble growing a couple vines for fun, but raising an oak tree from the ground up will push her to the brinks of exhaustion if she does it over minutes instead of days. No matter what the plant is, however, she can not manipulate it from too far away. The closer the plant is, the easier it is for her to transfer her energy.
THE TWINS
Names: Malakai and Stellan Chardon
Aged: 18
Type: fire elementals
Grade: 12
Appearance:
Malakai-
Stellan-
Personalities:
+ Stubborn; Both Malakai and Odyssey are, together, fiercely independent (not counting their dependence on each other, of course), and stick to their guns no matter what. When they've decided to do something, almost nothing will deter them from what they want to do. It will take a serious amount of talking to and some sort of miracle to get them to change their minds on anything.
+ Cocky; A little confidence is a good thing, right? Yeah, these two don't just have a little bit of confidence--- it leaks from their pores. Together, this dynamic duo feel unstoppable, and practically are. Their years of playing and training together have given them an easy edge over an opponent, even if you don't count the fact they they are working with a partner they know better than anyone else. Needless to say, these two are very powerful and aren't afraid to show it. While this "confidence" may help them overcome obstacles, it also allows them to get into some sticky situations!
+ Humorous; Despite their arrogance, if you're on their good side, it's hard not to enjoy these two from time to time. Their lighthearted views of things allows them to make even the worst situations more enjoyable. Malakai and Stellan seem to be in a perpetual state of amusement, often running around and playing like large children on a playground. Nearly everything is funny to them, so they don't tend to take many situations very seriously.
+ Determined; The twins share an aggressive sort of determination of such a standard that they are highly value on anybody's team. Once they've set their eye on a target, Malakai and Stellan won't relent until they've completed their goal or have exhausted themselves to the point of near unconsciousness. This impressive yet frightening display of focus never fails to get the job done.
History: Since day one, the twins have been a force to be reckoned with. The fire-wielding capabilities that've been passed down to them through their bloodline proved to be a difficult gift to be kept from the world, and has been a challenge that they've had to deal with daily. Still, that doesn't mean they weren't able to reveal their fiery personalities. Malakai and Stellan have floated somewhere between the class bully and student saviors at their schools, struggling to divert their heavy emotions away from random peers and rather towards those who deserved it. Over the years, they began to channel their energy into sports, earning their teams an astounding amount of victories. They would have ridden a sports scholarship to a free college education, had they not received an opportunity to go to this supernatural academy.
Crush/Relationship:
Malakai- N/A
Stellan- N/A
Family:
Andrew (father- artist)
Melany (mother- police officer)
Arty (grandfather on father's side)
Alyssa (grandmother on mother's side)
Jeremy (grandfather on mother's side)
Other:
Power:
+ Pyrokinesis; Now's for the fun part. Malakai and Stellan can create and control flame. It's easier for them if the fire is already there for them to manipulate, but over the years they have mastered producing licks of flame just by using sheer will. They can control the length and heat of this flame, along with where they aim it and how long it can burn. Note that using this talent does require a bit of energy--- not as much as when they were younger, since their ability is like a muscle that they have toned and perfected with exercise and training, but an excessive amount of usage will tend to tire them out. How long they can continue to produce flame without resting depends on how much and how vigorously they are using their talent.
Name: Walden MudleyAge: 19
Type: human
Grade: 12
Appearance:
Personality:
+ Quiet; Unless prompted to, Walden keeps his mouth shut. Even as a baby he hardly made a peep. His silence partakes in his effort to go unnoticed, because he feels uncomfortable with just about any attention.
+ Gloomy; Generally, Walden is in a rather glum mood. He can't help but feel badly about himself and his situation, summing his lack of personal relationships to his own faults. His normal facial expression is comprised of sad eyes that glance from corner to corner, and a very vague frown. You must be some sort of genius if you can get him to crack even the smallest smile.
+ Attentive; Because he is so quiet, Walden is able to notice more than others might. He also holds a certain curiosity and an ability to maintain focus that allows him to effectively absorb an entire scene and jot it down accurately into memory. Because of this valuable skill, Walden has decided to study journalism, a career in which he can employ his talent and share his views from behind the scenes.
+ Caring; No matter how hard he tries to appear cold and aloof, at his core, Walden is a real softy and truly cares about others. Once he opens up to someone, he will always make sure that they are safe, healthy, and happy. He will invest his full trust and loyalty into those who are willing to be honest and patient with him.
History: Walden was born into a wealthy family, or at least what was a wealthy family. His grandparents on both his mother and father's side gave birth to only one child, so his family was never all that big to begin with. The companies that they owned continue to run successfully as control was passed down to Walden's parents after all of his grandparents had passed away, his mother following them after a long battle with cancer. Walden lived with only his distant father in their large and empty mansion, lacking the social skills he needed to create friendships that would help him through these tragic times. When he had the chance to escape to a smaller dorm at a mysterious academy, he figured he'd rather start new somewhere than continue to live in the same old desolation he felt every day.
Crush/Relationship: N/A
Family:
-Marvin (father)
-Michelle (mother- deceased)
-Eaton (grandfather- deceased)
-Andrelle (grandmother- deceased)
-Drew (grandfather- deceased)
-Louise (grandmother- deceased)
Other:
Power:
+ Shadow Bending; Quite possibly the lamest power ever. Walden can bend small amounts of light to create and/or move shadows, whether to different areas, into different shapes, etc. It can only be used on shadows relatively close, but not necessarily right next to, Walden. Keep in mind, these shadows are only manipulations of light, and cannot physically touch/ harm anybody. This gift doesn't have much practical use besides being able to become practically invisible during the nighttime, which just about anybody could do by dressing in and painting themselves black. A useful talent? Not really, but it can be entertaining.
+ Mood Manipulation; Here's where it get's a bit more interesting. If Walden focuses hard enough on a certain mood (e.g joy, sadness, anger, etc.) then he can impose this feeling upon certain individuals of his selection. Note that this talent only works on those about 20 feet or so around him, and even then he is still struggling to master this talent so it doesn't always work. When it does, however, he can use this emotional distraction to his advantage.
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₴єaTнёFїёпd ‹ʙᴇʟᴏɴɢ ᴛᴏ ᴛʜᴇ ᴡᴏʀʟᴅ› wrote: "Please elaborate on the abilities, as well as the limitations."Okay, all done!
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the sound of Autumn wrote: "Name: Elspeth GangwayAge: 23
Type: forest nymph
Grade: 12
Appearance:
Personality:
+ Gentle; Soft in both tone and appearance, Elspeth has a natural ability to calm others. Everything from..."
A P P R O V E D
Name: Hinoko SeikoAge: 17
Type: Hi no Kitsune
Grade: 11th
Appearance:
Personality:Hinoko, though in the past was cruel and vicious, is very shy and sensitive, but once you get to know her you see that she is really childish, playful, and extremely flamboyant. She loves toys such as dolls and such. She also loves all things shiny and/or sparkly. She loves to chase butterflies. Though her foster parents were Niads, she dislikes water sprites and water spirits, because when they touch her she sizzles. She loves to just lay out in the grass and relax. She also craves attention. She wants to be held and pet and told that she is loved. If you yell at her she will most likely burst into tears. When she gets angry, she becomes as heartless and cruel as she was before. She is also very proud and protective of her tails. (She has 5)
History: Hinoko was born in Kyoto, Japan and when she was 3 years of age, demon hunters killed her family as she had to watch them get all of their tales cut off with garden shears and was found by an orphanage, but every foster home she was put in mysteriously burnt down (She sneezes fire by accident sometimes. As the years passed she wallowed in her anger sorrow and pain of losing her parents until she was about 12 years of age when she developed her 5th tail due to the power her strong emotions gave her. She then became an extremely happy, sensitive, childish person, who becomes easily offended and cries a lot. Then, she was eventually brought here by a pair of foster parents who had just so happened to be water sprites and couldn't keep her.
Crush/Relationship: Sad and alone
Family: Foster Parents - Aqua and Adrian Silverdew
Weaknesses: She can't swim.. like at all.. in fact she can't touch water unless she concentrates really hard or puts a bunch of herbs in the water. If you throw water on her she will sizzle and seem to burn. Also she will never seek help if she is gravely injured. She would sooner crawl in a hole and die.
Power:
Attack- throws fireballs; my sneezes
Defense- Wall of flames that can go 3 yards away from her location; Can make you hallucinate that you are on fire (pain included)
Special- turns into a fox
Before I accept your character, I must ask you to fix the few pints mentioned below. :)• Please add in more detail in personality: It's a bit too short. Try and outline other things she likes, or add in her dislikes, ect. Place in weaknesses and strengths, and things like that. Also think about things such as these; Is there any reason for the way she acts? Is she loyal or conniving? Is she a good ally? Stuff like that.
• Please lengthen history: Again, it's a bit on the short side. Just try and re-write it, putting in as much detail as you can.
• Highlight weaknesses: From what I can read, Hinoko dose not have any noticeable weaknesses, either in personality or power. No one likes the "perfect character", so please try and work at this.
Much better. The history is long enough now but the personality, I'm afraid, is still to short to accept. Just try and add a bit more detail and I'll be able to pass you though. (Sorry; we're very picky about characters in this group.)
I'm afraid that's the best I can do :(
I added a bit more to the personality but I'm not sure its enough :(
That'll do. { Hinoko Seiko / A P P R O V E D }
Someone already used Holo's appearance, however.
The powers are too general. How far can the wall of flames go? With the knowledge we have now, we have to assume it can stretch all the way across the planet, exterminating perhaps thousands of lives in a single second.
Drax -- Who?Sub -- I'm pretty sure she didn't mean it like that...
Hinoko -- And I've just noticed something; on a few areas, you've written in text talk and in some areas their are errors in your grammar. These must have escaped my notice. I'm sorry to bother you again, but can you please fix these matters?
I'm sure she didn't mean it, but we're forced to conclude it from what she wrote.
Helen wrote: "Drax -- Who?Sub -- I'm pretty sure she didn't mean it like that...
Hinoko -- And I've just noticed something; on a few areas, you've written in text talk and in some areas their are errors in yo..."
Sakura used it for Holo.
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~POWER~
Pyrokinesis: the ability to manipulate or produce heat and fire. This allows one to change temperatures, conjure fires, and have an immunity to heat. Dean himself can produce flame from his own hands when his body is strong enough, or use other sources of heat to make his fire (e.g. Lights, campfires, stoves, electricity, etc) stimulating it with his mind. This is the more common way he produces his flames, and they vary in size and strength. He never really uses his powers unless absolutely necessary, preferring to keep them hidden.Type: Elemental
{First Name} Dean
{Middle Name} Mateo
{Last Name} Romano
{Age} 16
[Birthday] July 7
[Zodiac Sign:] Cancer
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{Gender} Male
[Sexuality] Heterosexual (straight)
{Appearance}
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[Hair] messy/unkempt, brown
[Eyes] hazel-grey
[Height] 5'10
[Weight] 143
[Skintone] medium
[Build] some muscle, but fairly scrawny
{Piercings, Markings, etc} his ears
{Personality}
Dean is your average teenager, with his interests in music, food, and the usual teenage culture. However, he is one of those kids who never talk unless spoken to, and avoid eye contact with even classmates. Dean is awfully shy, sometimes going by a day without having a real conversation with anyone besides the closest friends. He is introverted, keeping everything and anything to himself. It's a sort of defense mechanism, in his irrational fear that something will happen to him. Living with his dyslexia and learning problems has made Dean the target of bullies, having an effect on his sanity and thought process. He sits in the back of classrooms, walks with his head down, and tries to stay out of the way. He never shows his powers, as he hates the attention he fears he'd get.
Living in Boston, with his small group of dance buddies, the real side of Dean had been the regular. The silly side, where he makes lame jokes, teases people, and says random things to make his closest laugh. He was openly friendly, and could feel comfortable with himself. At the Academy, Dean has completely shut himself down with anxiety, with a peculiar, quiet personality. It is most difficult to get through his mental walls, to get him to open up about feelings and such. He fears being left alone to fend for himself, or solitude for the rest of his life.
Dean is overall a harmless creature, sometimes basically nonexistent. Towards his mother, Dean is the sweetest, always helping her out and going the extra mile to make her happy. After all, each other is all they have, with no close relatives on his mother's side, and an empty father's side. Dean tends to stress about what people will think, have a hard time with school, and shelter himself. He is seen as defenseless, allowing others to walk all over him, and obeys those who threaten him. He just wants to fit in again, to be happy and worry free.
{History}
Dean Mateo Romano was a love child. His parents, Allise, a young native Spanish woman and Matthew, a wealthy business man, fell in love at a bar, and were tossed in the whirlwind of a seven month questionable romance. When Matthew found out that his girlfriend was pregnant, he jumped ship and disappeared. No note, no trace. His phone number had changed, leaving Allise no way to contact who she had thought was the love of her life. Allise was left distraught, suicidal, with the child she hadnt even wanted from the beginning. Drugs, alcohol, and even suicide attempts were involved. She had no way to earn money, having been fired only weeks earlier from her job, and she had just come from high school. She was lucky the landlord had been nice, assisting with loans and counseling. Alisse picked herself up after a good cry on the phone with her mother, who had convinced her to keep the child. Dean. The boy was born on a hot July night, in a run down hospital in downtown Boston. She had vowed to take care of her new son to the best of her ability, regardless of what her friends told her.
Between hiring babysitters, finishing up real estate classes, and working three jobs, Allise managed to raise the unstable child. He had acquired a learning disability since birth, and speech as a child had come slow. Not to mention her newborns tendency to set his crib on fire, or heat up to such temperatures where she couldnt touch his skin when he was upset. Allise never told anyone about her son's unique abilities, with fear of what they'd do to him. Doctors, when they could be afforded, were avoided at all costs from birth to when Dean could control himself at around age 7.
School was a major issue for Dean, as he couldn't focus with the addition of ADHD caused by neglect and boredom around the apartment growing up. The two lived together in a crummy apartment in Boston, Massachusetts, for the remainder of Deans childhood, both working together to put food on the table and live another day under a roof. This taught him to be very modest, as well as spiteful towards the topic of fathers. His mother never said a words about Matthew, and pretty soon, Dean couldn't care less.
In school, Dean was enrolled in the special education program, or in other words, the handicapped class. This distinctive separation from his peers at such a tender age caused a rift in between dean and the other kids, who looked at him as some kind of poor freak. Not only did he wear the same clothes repeatedly, but he was retarded. It didnt take long for kids to pick on him, and Dean put up with it for all ten years of schooling. He never told his mother, not wanting to place an added stress on the busy young mother.
Somewhere in middle school, Dean had met Evan. Evan had been somewhat quiet, like him, but took the nerve to talk to dean one day, who was sitting alone on a bench for lunch, per usual. The Evan kid persisted in talking to him, even when Dean hardly answered, and the tradition continued for several days. Evan would sit by him at the bench, talk while he silently listened. Eventually, Evan was able to bring Dean from his shell, soon developing the same interests. The two became best friends, and Dean was introduced to Evan's world. The world of dance. It distracted him from his thoughts of being not good enough, or being a complete freak. His pyrokinesis was easier to handle, with his mind balanced. Dean took a passion to dance, often coming to Evans practice sessions to watch in the mirrored room. He couldn't afford lessons, like Evan, but his buddy had learned to teach him. Dean would hide outside an open door in the studio, and Copy Evans instructor. Soon, Dean would dance in secret at home, at school, or even in the market. Evan lent him an iPod, and that had boosted Deans new interest. Over the years, dean had been invited to Evans dance studio, to perform for free due to his natural talent. He was still quiet in school, the same shy dean, but there was a purpose for him now, not just an accident trouble child.
Then the letter came in the mail, the one from Supernatural Academy. It offered academic programs and a safe learning environment for other kids like him, and Alisse couldn't e more excited. She could finally give Dean a chance to be with his own crowd, one that was richer with experiences. She wouldn't have to worry about the cuts on Deans face, she could feel that dean would be absolutely safe here. As much as her son argued, Alisse persisted, claiming she didnt want her son to grow up without a future. Evan would be left behind, that one bully who always made it a point to push him in the halls would be left behind, his Favorite history teacher would be left behind. Dean was transferred to Supernatural Academy, alone and terrified. The principal proved friendly enough, but he just wished he could be back at his old school, bullies and mean teachers and all.
[Strengths]
+music
+manners
+dance
+creativity
+gentleman
[Weaknesses]
-speaking
-ADHD
-pizza
-crowds
-shy
-school
-dyslexia
[Likes]
*red
*basketball
*his mother
*rap, hip hop
*warm weather
*dance
*sweats
*italian food
*spicy
[Dislikes]
•peanut anything
•cold
•camping
•lying
•argument
•seafood
•jeans
•classes/academics
•winter
~[Relationships]~
Family:
-Mother, Annalise Rose Romano, 34, Real Estate Agent
-Father, unknown
Friends:
None, he is fairly new and hardly speaks to anyone.
Girlfriends/Crushes:
None, Open
{Relationship Status} Single
{Other}
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How can he himself manipulate fire? How powerful is the flame? How much of it can he summon?
Samantha wrote: "Name: Zakk HowellAge: 17
Type(ex: werewolf, vampire, witch, elemental, etc.): Werewolf
Grade: Junior
Appearance:
Human: 6'2" 222lbs Tall, very muscular, and athletic. http://www.pinterest.com..."
Samantha wrote: "Name: Dakota Howell
Age: 17
Type(ex: werewolf, vampire, witch, elemental, etc.): Werewolf
Grade: Junior
Appearance:
Human: 5'9" 185lbs tall, curvy, bigger bust/chest for her age. http://www.co..."
How enhanced? How much better is (s)he than normal while in wolf form?
Girl of Light:
Can change and create energy? Can see energy? So she can see electricity? How are we defining energy? How much energy can she create? What kind of energy? We have nothing to work with on her powers here.
Name:Amber ClarkAge:16
Type(ex: werewolf, vampire, witch, elemental, etc.):Lycan
Grade:10th
Appearance: Um she looks like me :3
Wolf Appearance: http://www.trbimg.com/img-5336005d/tu...
Personality:enthusiastic, Gregarious, Sociable, Local, Smart, Adaptable
History:Amber was born a Lycan. At the age of six, her mother moved into the country to homeschool her so many people won't have knowledge of her condition. For the next decade, Amber finally convinced her paranoid mother that the Supernatural Academy would be safe.
Crush/Relationship:none at the moment
Family:Little brother, Mother
Other:She's musically inclined.
Power: becomes a wolf. nothing else
Alright, fine. Let's see. DANIEL:
His weakness is supposed to be rage, but he's describes as pensive.
Similarly, that's about his only personality trait. We need more there.
Amber wrote: "Name:Amber ClarkAge:16
Type(ex: werewolf, vampire, witch, elemental, etc.):Lycan
Grade:10th
Appearance: Um she looks like me :3
Wolf Appearance: http://www.trbimg.com/img-5336005d/tu......"
Your character is not nearly developed enough for an advanced roleplay, and in my experience most of the people with this level of character cannot keep up in an advanced roleplay. I'd recommend you try this group out. It's similar, but it's not advanced.
https://www.goodreads.com/group/show/...
HARLEY:
As for her body, she lacks a curvy figure, causing people to mistake her for her real age. Especially with her height and scattered freckles.
They mistake her for her real age? So they mistake her for the age she is? Isn't that the opposite of a mistake?
Just a little nitpick that bugged me.
For power, you gave us a great description for the rare talent that about half of the students here have, but haven't told us anything about what Harley can do with it.
Similarly, her entire personality is summed up in barely two sentences. No one is THAT boring.
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Age:16
Type(ex: werewolf, vampire, witch, elemental, etc.):Lycan
Grade:10th
Appearance: Um she looks like me :3
Wolf Appearance: http://www.trbimg.com/img-5336005d/tu......"
Stating that she looks like you does not give us much on her appearance. Please put an actual description and/or image.
♥│▐Name▐│♥
First Lorraine
(Origin:) French: From Lorraine, the name of a province in France and a French royal family
Middle Carina
(Meaning/Origin)
French: Pure
Swedish: Pure
American: Pure
Italian: Dear, beloved. From the feminine form of the Italian 'cara' or the Latin 'carus'.
Latin: Keel; Little darling.
Last Salazar
◘│▐Age▐│◘ Sixteen Years Of Age
○│▐Species▐│○ Aquakinesis (Water Manipulation)
♥│▐Grade▐│♥ Sophomore (10th)
◘│▐Power▐│◘
Capabilties: Can shape and manipulate water, inorganic compound with liquid, and gas (such as water vapor) states, including changing them from on state to the other.
Applications:
○Create/Generate/Increase, shape and manipulate water.
▬Whirlpool Generation. (Lorraine is working on these skills. They take a lot of energy and she hasn't been able to complete it.)
○Move/Lift water
▬Elemental Flight Using Water (she hasn't master this skill)
▬Water Attacks (Her water attacks aren't nearly as powerful as it sounds. Due to her size it is only enough to knock you off your feet.)
▬Water Walking (This takes a lot of concentration form Lorraine. If she is disturbed or breaks the concentration she falls into the water)
Techniques:
○Drowning
○Hydrokinetic Combat
○Water Portal Creation
Limitations
○Unable to create water, limited to manipulating only already existing sources
○Can manipulate water from 0-100ft away. She cannot if she is further away.
○She can only hold up to 150lbs of water when shaping, or manipulating the water
○When trying to Manipulate large bodies of water she becomes exhausted and most likely passes out.
○Susceptible to Electricity Manipulation
○Can be opposed by Fire Manipulation, Magma Manipulation, and/or Ice Manipulation.
Weakness
○Lorraine cannot breath under water like some would think. Due to this she is able to drown and isn't all powerful.
○She also gets very sick around fire. It makes her feel dried out. Like she is dying in the way a fish does when out of water.
☺Appearance☺
Lorraine is a small girl. She has straight, thin, long, blonde hair that hangs down to the middle of her knees. She also has bangs that hang a little bit below her eyebrows. She has a small bottom and a flat chest. She may not be the most sexy but she does have a cute kid like face. Which makes it even more cute with her bright blue eyes that hold all her emotions inside.
▬☺▬History▬☺▬
Lorraine was born in water. Her mother was an Elemental while her father was a normal human being. Lorraine's mother did not notify her father that she was an Elemental which caused multiple problems in the future which would be troubling for both the parents and Lorraine herself.
Lorraine was a smart child. She understood her mother and her fathers commands. Also, she had a great skill to learn things quickly. With those in handy it was still hard when her mother told her she could control water and not to tell her father. Lorraine told her father everything. Even when she had a bad day or if she was angry with him. But no matter how hard it was, Lorraine seemed to pull it off. For a little bit anyway.
Through the ages 5-10 Lorraine went to a regular school. She worked hard and made the teachers proud. But one day when she wasn't thinking about it she blurted out what she was to her father. Her father thought she was crazy. That's when the problems began. In the middle of the night for more then three months her parents would argue and scream at eachother. It hurt Lorraine because she knew it was her fault. One day though, her father left. He never came back. It destroyed Lorraine and she was speechless for a year.
At the age of Eleven Lorraine's mother was killed. A drunk drive hit their car head on. Lorraine only survived because they were by a lake and her mother transported her into the body of water. Due to the paper work and her mothers death Lorraine was sent to the Academy and has been there ever since she was Eleven.
│☺│Personality│☺│
Lorraine is quiet. She keeps most things to herself. But if you give her some kind of attitude she can be pretty feisty, and sometimes a bit of a brat. But, is you are kind to her she most likely will be kind to you. She tends to mimic others attitudes. She's like an echo. Lorraine can't say no though. It's a default. She can sometimes if it's an absolute crazy thing but if you ask her for a cookie she'll go get you one... (a HUGE default)
♣│▬Relationship▬│♣
None. Zero! Lorraine has no crushes and hasn't had any crush or attraction to anyone in her whole life. She tends to kind of not realize when someone is asking her out... One time a guy asked her out (she didn't know) and she said she couldn't because she had to go watch some Soccer.
◘▬▐Family▐▬◘
☻▬☻Father☻▬☻ Martin Lewis Salazar. He is a very disturbed man and can be cruel. The only people that he wasn't cruel to in the past were his family.
☺▬☺Mother☺▬☺
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