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message 451: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) | 1693 comments We still need family.


message 452: by [deleted user] (last edited Jan 29, 2014 03:03PM) (new)

{Name} Remy Lee Marshell
{Age} 17
{Grade} 11th
{Type} Elemental

{Appearance}
description 

Remy is 5'8". She has bright blue eyes, that can be very breath taking. Remy also has short blonde hair, and bangs that hang down in her eyes. Remy is a very beautiful girl. She has ear peircings also.

[Height] 5'8"
[Hair Length] Mid neck
[Hair Color] Blonde
[Eye Color] Bright Blue Eyes
[Skin Color] White

{Personality}
If you are not looking forward to a bloody nose and a mouth full of water, I recommend not messing with Remy. She can be cruel sometimes. She also is very aggressive. Just warning you. Remy can be nice... hint on the word can. She most likely will not be that nice. If it sounds like she is, she most likely is being sarcastic. Remy tends to be.. very realistic, so another warning... she might burst your bubble sometimes, she is very truthful. For example, if you asked her if someone liked you, she'd be honest and tell you, that they probably won't and that they deserve better then you...Sorry.. that's just how she is.. truthful.
Truthful
Aggressive
Sarcastic

{History}
Remy grew up along the streets when she was ten years old. Her parents.. how good they were, threw her out because she forgot to do the dishes. Remy walked and took care of herself, sleeping in abandoned houses and stealing food (She was very good at that). Remy started to get used to her powers at age thirteen. She thought at first that it would be very logical if her powers was the reason her parents, threw her out.. If they really were her real parents. Remy had finally been picked up by services and put in foster care. That's when the letter came. Remy, honestly was relieved. She ddidn't have to deal with those other stinky, bugery, slobbered kids anymore...

{Crush/Relationship}
HA! Good luck with that Fellows

{Family}
She doesn't consider her... "Parents" Family... She doesn't even know where they live anymore.
{Mother} Lucinda (Dead to Remy)
{Father} Markus (Dead to Remy)

{Power} Controls the element of water.
-She can breath is water
-Control it (Form water balls)


description


message 453: by sucre'd fiend, Perfection (new)

sucre'd fiend (sucredfiend) | 764 comments Mod
[ Remy ]

- Please add on to Appearance
- Elaborate a bit on her powers


That's all I see so far, but the other mods may see something


message 454: by [deleted user] (new)

Yeah sorry... I added the appearance. And I'll work on her powers:)


message 455: by sucre'd fiend, Perfection (new)

sucre'd fiend (sucredfiend) | 764 comments Mod
Please describe it, too.


message 456: by [deleted user] (new)

Ok will do


message 457: by [deleted user] (new)

Okay!
Done!!


message 458: by sucre'd fiend, Perfection (new)

sucre'd fiend (sucredfiend) | 764 comments Mod
I'll let the other mods take a look at it ^-^


message 459: by [deleted user] (new)

Okay:)


message 460: by Jenna ⭐ (new)

Jenna ⭐ (sungkew) I'd say that you're good though Manny might contradict me at some point. I don't really see anything wrong with it or anything that might be questionable towards something, so I think you're fine.
I'd say it's good enough to be approved :P


message 461: by [deleted user] (new)

Yay!


message 462: by [deleted user] (last edited Jan 30, 2014 02:44PM) (new)

{Name} Evangeline Lu Montijo
{Nickname} Eva
{Age} 18

{Grade} 12th

{Type} Telekinesis
{Appearance}
description

[Height] 5'6"
[Hair Color] blonde
[Hair Style] straight
[Hair Length] hangs lower back
[Eye Color] ocean blue, green
[Skin Color] white
Eva is 5'8" in height, short in a way. She has long, straight blonde hair that hangs to her lower back. Eva has a short torso of about a foot. The rest is her legs. Eva has a counter glass figure, but very small feet with a size three in kids. Eva has medium sized ears that stick out. Eva has big sea green eyes that have a little sparkle in them. Usually if you see Eva she will be wearing very bright colored clothes, even yellow jeans! Eva also has a blue bow in her hair that she keeps with her everywhere.

{Personality}
Eva is a very talented, smart, athletic, competitive, and funny girl. Eva, is a happy teen. She can be very enthusiastic, and fun to be around. Eva may talk a little too much though. She usually talks a lot when she is nervous or, when she is thinking a lot. In this case she speaks what she is thinking and that can be bad.. For either you, or her.
Eva can be very independent. She liked being independent because she was used to being alone. Her parents were there... But never home. So she was always alone.
Eva is someone you can depend on. You tell her a secret she will never tell, even if her life is at risk. She values people's trust and loves to be trusted.
Eva is the type of person that you can lay your head on her shoulder and she'll comfort you. She is a comforter. She loves to comfort people and tell them it's okay.
Eva does have a little bit of a flirty side. Though, sometimes she hardly realizes that she is flirting until like a day later
Athletic
Smart
Talented
Competitive
Funny
Enthusiastic
Talkative
Independent
Trust Worthy
Comforter
Flirty

{History}
Eva was a beautiful baby! She had a happy childhood... Her parents were rich! But, they had a job.. And they left when Eva was 10. She was stuck with the babysitter. Sometimes they were gone a couple hours, then it was days, weeks, months.... She hated it. But she grew very found of Jesse, her babysitter. When Eva turned thirteen was when she discovered she was different... When she discovered the reason her parents always kept her in the house... She had powers! Eva was absolutely scared, and hid in her closer for days! She blew up the plant when she was angry!
When Eva turned 18 was when she got the letter. Throughout the years, Eva had gotten used to the idea of her parents gone. But the thing that hurt the worst was leaving Jesse. Eva burnt the letter and packed her belongings. She told Jesse she was leaving for college, which in some way was a huge lie.
Eva then took her bike and rode it to 4444.22 Castle Road. That's when she arrived to the Academy.

{Family}
[Mother] Courtney
[Father] Connor
[Real Family] Jesse (babysitter)

{Crush/Relationship}
N/A

{Powers}
Eva has the abiltiy to move objects with her mind. Athough she does have her limits. For one, she can not lift up larger objects like, a mountian, buldings.
Eva can lift, and move meduim bolders, and all other smaller objects.


message 463: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) | 1693 comments Name: You told us her first, middle, and last name... twice? I feel patronized.
Nickname: Pass
Age: Pass
Type: Fail. There are too many types of mutants.
Appearance: Describe. I can, after all, only see a fourth of her. Less.
Personality: Remove first two sentences. They exclude each other and are also redundant, adding nothing.
History: How did she find this school?
Family: Pass
C/R: Pass
Powers: Blow things up with her mind? Do you know how general "things" is? She has no limits. She could blow up the sun with her mind given the information present. Or the earth!
Move things with her mind: Also too broad.
Eva: *Harmlessly moves Earth INTO THE SUN.


message 464: by 『ᴡɪᴄᴋʟɪɴɢ ᴛʀᴀsʜ ● ɢᴏᴏᴅʙʏᴇ』 (last edited Feb 01, 2014 12:34AM) (new)

『ᴡɪᴄᴋʟɪɴɢ ᴛʀᴀsʜ ● ɢᴏᴏᴅʙʏᴇ』 (wickling) | 54 comments "Do not call up that which you cannot put down."
— H.P. Lovecraft, "The Case of Charles Dexter Ward"


Name: Damian Gaius Solomon Bianca Phoebus Dunwich-Widdershins
Nicknames: 'The Gatekeeper' 'The Keymaster' 'Abdul Alhazred' 'Dean Winchester' 'Kid Lovecraft' 'Abysmal Exorcist'

Age: 17
Birthday: 19, September 1997

Type: Summoner Mage - Able to craft spirits or summon beings to do his bidding. Commonly uses odd animals called Dhabi, which are offspring of the Astral Djinn and Earth's Animals.
Powers:
Summoning
•The power to summon forth an object or organism.
-Dhabi Conjuring
(view spoiler)
-Misc Summoning
Banishment
•The power to banish an object or being from a specific place.
-Dhabi Banishing
-Misc Banishing
Key to the Door
•The ability to create or be a gateway or "key" to a certain location, artifact, entity or event.
Access and Occlusion
•The power to toggle between a mechanical objects security system without the need of any type of key.
Portal Creation
•The power to create portals for transport between two non-adjacent locations. Sub-power of Dimensional Manipulation, and Spatial Manipulation.
-The Silver Key: Able to open a gateway to another place; plane or realm beyond 'our reality'i.e. The Outer Realms.
-The Silver Lock: Able to close a gateway to another place; pane or realm beyond 'our reality' i.e. The Outer Realms.
-The Silver Gate: "Door Projection" The ability to use doors as portals to go anywhere.

Grade: 10th

Ethnicity: 50% Irish 25% Italian 12.5% English 12.5% Spanish
Appearance:




Face claim: Bryce Wikman
Distinguishable markings:
 photo mark_zps10944103.png
Style:
(view spoiler)

Personality:
|| Cunning || Flirtatious || Slow-Minded || Hyperactive || Gluttonous || Stingy ||
Damian is often very shy and reclusive. After the tragic Sapphire Incident in Arkham, he learned to distance himself from the world. He blames himself for his friends deaths and has had a hard time coping with the great lose. Upon moving to San Francisco, he slowly began to blossom back to life once again. Damian is worried when using his abilities, fearing another Sapphire Incident, and thus more blood upon his hands. Once he opens up, he will be snarky, sarcastic and sometimes downright rude. He was 'the one who always figured it out,' and always came up with Plan B.

History: First off, Damian is a huge nerd and could have been found playing D&D with his inner circle of four other friends. One day, rumor spread that a book bound in human skin was unearth in Iceland and brought to the local museum. The book was made by Bishop Gottskalk Nikulasson the Cruel of Holar, and was called the Raudskinna or 'Red Skin Book.' Mistaking the rumors to be of a possible Necronomicon, the gang broke into the museum and stole the book. Damian was the first to lay a finger on it, and as he did, pain shot through his arm as a luminous glow ran through the veins on the arm.

After regaining consciousness, he found himself back at his basement, the gang standing around him. Sitting up, he found the book wrapped in his jacket, no one dared to touch it with their skin, believing the book to have harmed anyone who touched it, as it did to Damian. Looking down on his left arm, he found a strange tattoo, no, scar, that had grown across it, starting from the shoulder, spreading down to his hand and across his left peck.(See Appearance)

Damian found he was able to manipulate the God Yog-Sothoth, who was the force that kept the Outer Realms separate from our world. With this came the ability of magic and with a 'Black Book' within his grasp, his group of geeky outcasts began dabbling in the Occult; something no one should ever do, especially when forces as powerful as the Old Ones and Outer Gods are in play. With five members of this 'cult,' they were able to form a pentagram, and able to channel energies of the five elements: Earth, Air, Fire, Water and Spirit. However, Damian's own powers soon manifested, able to summon creatures from the Astral Realms that lied beyond the Silver Gate; these creatures were called Dhabi.

The Cult, as they called themselves, began delving deeper into the reaches of the Outer Realms and on the night of Samhain(October 31st), they attempted summoning a Demon-Spawn of the Ancient Gods. These amateurs were not capable of binding this demon, being an advance level of magic, the demon wreaked havoc on them all. In the midst of the rumble laid four bodies, Damian pronounced them dead. With his last bit of strength, he forced the Silver Gateway closed with what he called 'The Silver Lock', forcing the demons they unleashed back into the abyss between the stars. This was one year ago, and since then moved to San Francisco, California.

Crush/Relationship:

Sexuality: Heterosexual Bisexual - Not Accepting his sexuality

Family:

Father Joseph Dunwich

Mother Annabelle Widdershins

Other: Damian is in contact with three spirits from the Outer Realms who came to prevent another Sapphire Incident; they are He-Who-Walks-Behind(Spirit of the Past), He-Who-Walks-Before(Spirit of the Future), and He-Who-Walks-Beside(Spirit of the Present); they appear as humanoid figures cloaked in mist or blurry apportions out of the corner of your eye.

Arkham as in Arkham, Massachusetts. The Arkham-Salem Cult consisted of Damian Dunwich, Gwendolyn Argent, Stephen Argent, Crystal Chase, and Jasper Evans.

Please do not use my background or characters. It may seem stupid to ask, but it has happened before and it irritates me. Ask before you get your character's history involved with mine.


message 465: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) | 1693 comments Alex wrote: "Name:Alex
Age: 15
Type: Shapeshifter
Grade:9th
APPEARANCE : Alex is slim and quick. She has long light brown hair, with turquoise eyes with pale skin, is very pretty.
DRESSING STYLE: wears jeans..."


R E J E C T E D


message 466: by Evelina (last edited Feb 02, 2014 06:42PM) (new)

Evelina (EvelinaOfTheElves) | 26 comments Name: Aly Amelia Ivanka

Age: 14

Type(ex: werewolf, vampire, witch, elemental, etc.): Fire Elemental

Grade: 9th

Appearance:

Aly has ocean blue eyes, and angular nose, and freckles. Her flaming red hair falls down in a messy sheet to almost her waist. She is of average height (5'3") but is also quite slender and toned, from two years of living alone in the wilderness. She weighs about 110 pounds. When she uses her powers, her hair flares up and glistens; it looks like a fierce flame.

Personality:
Aly is usually calm, respectful and reserved, but when she feels that something is wrong, she is very easily provoked. She can be extremely aggressive when offended or attacked, and isn't afraid to get into a fight. She is resourceful and intelligent, but is rather oblivious when it comes to romance and social activity. She always stands up for what she believes in. She can be a wee bit sarcastic at times... and has a great sense of humor.

History: Her parents discovered her powers when she was 11 years old. They had always found her to be disrespectful towards the Christian faith, as she had shown an unwillingness towards attending church. She was actually atheist, but had never told her parents this. But when they had caught her hiding in the basement instead of going to church, it was the last straw. Then they noticed the small flame that was hovering above her right hand. They thought that surely she was possessed by a demon; it would explain her irreverence to the Christian religion. So they sent her away to an orphanage, scared that she would affect her younger brother, Cole. She ran away from the orphanage when she was 12, and lived alone in a dense forest until the age of 14. Then, she was given a letter by a mysterious man. This, of course, was her acceptance letter.

Crush/Relationship:
Single, and doesn't really "like" anyone.

Family: She has a younger brother, name of Cole. Her parents gave her to an orphanage when they discovered her powers. Cole never knew why, but he's been searching for her since. He also has powers: powers of water, which he's hiding.

Other:

Power: Aly can create fire, and extinguish fire. It takes up time and energy depending on the size of the fire that she conjures or dissipates. She can also enlarge, shrink, heat up, or cool down existing flames. The amount of fire she can create actually depends on a few factors. If the temperature is warmer, it is considerably easier to create massive amounts of fire: a bonfire, about the size of a small house. The colder it is, the more limited her powers are. Hydration can also affect her powers: if she is well hydrated, it is physically easier to create fire (as the fire depletes her hydration)... but if she isn't hydrated when she attempts to make fire, the effects can be devastating to her body. When she uses her powers to create fire, it uses up a certain amount of water in her body, depending on the amount of fire she creates. On average, the largest flame she can create is the size of a large car, but on warm days, she can create one the size of a small house. Similarly, on cold days, she can make a flame that measures about one cubic yard. (These are all assuming that she is fully hydrated.)


message 467: by sucre'd fiend, Perfection (new)

sucre'd fiend (sucredfiend) | 764 comments Mod
[ Aly ]
☒ Her power is kind vague in respects to how much she can create. There doesn't seem to be limit in the way you wrote it out. That could be a serious problem, when you think about it. Maybe find a steady area in which that she can have it.

☒ How did her parents find out about her powers? You said they thought she was possessed by a demon, so maybe go further in the religious background.

☒ I don't think you mean she's "stupid" as more so oblivious to romance.

☒ Her body type is kinda odd. She's somewhat slender and toned? But she's built shortly? How tall is she? How much does she weigh?

☒ She's an Elemental, okay, but maybe add that she is centered around fire?



message 468: by Jenna ⭐ (new)

Jenna ⭐ (sungkew) Aha, I've done that before XD
Anyways, I think you're all good to go. I don't see anything else that needs correcting sooo...
Approved :)


message 469: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) | 1693 comments Sexy~The~T.A.R.D.I.S. wrote: "Subservient wrote: "Alex wrote: "Name:Alex
Age: 15
Type: Shapeshifter
Grade:9th
APPEARANCE : Alex is slim and quick. She has long light brown hair, with turquoise eyes with pale skin, is very pr..."


A C C E P T E D


message 470: by Liliana (last edited Feb 02, 2014 10:01PM) (new)

Liliana | 1 comments Name: Adara "Adi"

Age: 16

Type: Fire Elemental

Grade: 10th

Appearance: She has fiery hair that she wears in a pixie cut. It shows up easily in a crowd, especially against her pale skin. Her eyes are blue, almost purple, and she has a roundish face. She is short at 5'2, and slim. She doesn't usually wear make up, and prefers to wear tattered jeans, worn sneakers, and a hoody. Tattoo of flame wrapping up her right leg.


Personality: Adi has a short fuse, and a fiery personality. When she's angry, she could kill you, and when she's happy, she's very kind. She is fiercely loyal to those she loves, and will protect them to her last breath. She is very transparent and doesn't care what other people think of her. If Adi doesn't like you, you'll know. Some people she doesn't know dislike her because of her bluntness. She is very intelligent, but prefers training in controlling her magic or fighting techniques to traditional school. If she wants to hurt someone, she is more than capable.

History: Adi was born to a fire elemental woman and a human man. Her father deserted them when he learned of his wife's powers, and her mother left her on the street, for she wasn't a very kind woman and hadn't wanted a child. She never knew her parents. A group of homeless kids found her and took her in. She grew up on the streets of Brooklyn, avoiding authorities and the foster system at all costs. She learned to fight tooth and nail, and didn't learn of her magical capabilities until she was cornered by a police officer and accidentally set fire to the his clothes. She quickly managed to put it out, but scared herself, the police man, and the kids she was living with badly. She was deserted by all but her best friend, Fern, and learned to control her powers to some extent, although not as much as she would've liked. A few years later, she received the letter inviting her to the school. She accepted eagerly.

Crush/Relationship: None, as of now

Family:
Mother- Serafina Flare
Father- Jonathan Mantle
She never knew her real family, but was basically sister to a girl her age on the street named Fern.

Other:

Power: Can send fire bolts, and form a lion out of fire. When she does this, she can control the 6ft tall, 10 ft long, lion to devour objects, humans, animals ect. Can put out her own fire.


message 471: by Orc (last edited Feb 10, 2014 01:16PM) (new)

Orc (orcgoth) Name: Candra Finn

Age: 16

Type(ex: werewolf, vampire, witch, elemental, etc.): Semi manifested Reaper

Grade: 11

Appearance: http://limelollibomblee.deviantart.co...

Candra's face is thin and skull like. Their nose nothing but a concave triangle with almost no function anymore. Eyes are white and faintly luminescent , made to stand out on Candra's pale, bluish skin with excessive amounts of dark makeup. Half a head of brown hair shaved, the rest is dyed a patchy blue. Candra favours to wear baggy clothes and/or things with spikes, reasoning that, if they're a creature of eternal death, they might as well look the part.

______________

Personality: Candra is an optimistic, somewhat jittery individual who prefers to watch and blend quietly into the background.. and theorise about how people may look as cadavers.

If you can get past having your corpse complimented, you could, potentially hold a pleasant conversation with them. Candra is an avid fan of games like Pokémon, and is rarely without a console with which to immerse themself in.
A lover of horror films and ghost stories, Candra is hard to frighten without taking them by surprise. Their true fear however, lies in dogs, causing Candra to become exceedingly anxious in the presence of them.

______________

History: Candra comes from a small, coastal, town in England, where their family ran a bar. Around the age of 13 Candras developing powers caused them to fall terribly ill, confining the blossoming reaper to the house for almost two years.

Born Natalie Alyssa Finn, Candra struggled with their gender identity throughout most of their life, and it was during this period that Candra began researching gender identities and experimented with pronouns and various names online. By the age of fifteen, Candras' illness had subsided, however left them with a bizzarely formed face.

Confined to home once more, only allowed out with a bandana, and some seriously complex explanations about fake skin conditions and body modifications, Candra wished to rebel. Wanting nothing more than to roam the streets with a skull full of metal and clothes covered in spikes. It was Candras atempted (and eventually sucessful) self peircings that caused them to discover their regenerative ability.

However no amount of punk-ness could really justify Candras apearence, thus forcing them to accept defeat at the hands of their own, bizzare apearence.

Hope came to Candra in the form of a letter arriving to the family while visiting their aunt in America, Candra burnt the letter and left as instructed, waving goodbye to their sister and mother as they hurried off through the dark.

______________

Crush/Relationship: none yet, but pansexual.

Family: Linda Finn (mother), Daniel Jacob Finn (father), Rebecca Yasmin Finn (sister).

Other: FtN Neutrois (agendered) preferred prounouns: Ne/nem/nir(s)/nemself they/them/their(s)/themself (I will be using the second set while writing for the sake of avoiding confusion).

Power: Degenerative regeneration. If injured Candra's body rapidly substitute’s energy, sugar and body fat to heal themself. The main disadvantage to this is that if the injury is severe enough (ie: Brain damage, limb loss, major arteries being pierced, damage to their nearvous system, that sort of severe.. Anything that humans can't really heal properly, even over a long period of time), Candra's body could completely waste away in the process of trying to heal itself. As a result Candra eats a lot of sugary and fatty foods to try and prevent this.

Candra also has the slowly developing ability to summon residual spirits from the vicinity of their death place, however they can only call up small things, like animals.



"If I gotta be a creature of death, I wanna look punk enough ."


message 472: by [deleted user] (last edited Feb 06, 2014 03:28PM) (new)

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●◉○Name○◉● Thisbe Lee Parker
◌◎Nickname◎◌ Isby
●◉○Age○◉● Seventeen~
◌◎Birthday◎◌ March 17th, 1996
♣Grade♣ Junior

●◉○Gender○◉● ♂ || ♀ Female
◌◎Sexuality◎◌ Straight
◌◎Relationship Status◎◌ Single

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●◉○Species○◉● Fox Shifter
Thisbe's one and only power is turning into a fox. Nothing more or less. Just a simple change.

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▪▣▫History▫▣▪
♣March 17th, 1996. 12:45am♣
Thisbe was born on a rainy March Spring day. Her mother's cries feeling the air, her father's comforting words called out over her mother's cries as he held her hand. Soon, at exactly 12:45am March 17th 1996 Thisbe Lee Parker. Courtney, Thisbe's mom laughed with joy as did her father, Mason. Together they held little Thisbe in their arms. Thisbe was a perfectly healthy baby girl... But Courtney thought it was best to leave early before further exams. She made this decision when she noticed a little red fox tail slightly sticking out from underneath Thisbe's baby blanket. Mason and Courtney made their way home with little Thisbe at 1:30am.
♣Ages 5-15♣
Through ages five and fifteen, Thisbe was homeschooled due to the little red fox tail on her bottom. Thisbe wasn't at all embarrassed about her tail she was more.. proud of it. She was very happy to be like her father. Thisbe is a very talented and clever young lady. She is very good with mathmatics, science, history, and English. Thisbe only problems was the control of her changes. She randomly changed based on her emotions.
♥First Change♥
Thisbe was five years old when she had her first random fox shift. It was horrible. She couldn't speak and she ran into the corner waiting for her parents to wake up from their sleep. Courtney woke up first and yelped seeing Thisbe in the corner. Mason was the one that helped her change back... Giving her comforting words and telling her she would get ice cream.
○♣The Practice♣○
Thisbe started training with her father at age six to control her changes. She worked hard and her fathe was proud of her. She was excited to make him proud! She still doesn't have the control fully down, but she does know how to change back to her human form when she randomly shifts.
○○The Death○○ July 3rd 1:45pm
Is was a cold afternoon. Thisbe was inside making some hot chocolate for Mason and Courtney. It was a couple of months after her sixteenth birthday. There was a loud bang and Thisbe froze. She heard a gun shot and her eyes grew wide. She remebered ever single moment. How the men came barging in. Guns held high. Firing shots at her mother... and at her father. She screamed and instantly changed. Her mother saying run... and so she did. That same day she got a letter to go to the supernatural Academy on 4444.22 Csatle road. She didn't tell her parents but she burnt the letter as said. When she arrived she was curled up and sobbing over the lose of her parents.

▪▣▫Family▫▣▪
♣Mother♣ Courtney ~ Deceased
♣Father♣ Mason ~ Deceased

▪▣▫Personality▫▣▪
Thisbe is a very happy at some points she does have her break downs. But mostly she is a happy, cheerful gal. Thisbe is a very quite and shy girl. But she can be talkative, but it's only usually if she knowns you are if she's very nervous which means she rambles... A Lot. Once you get to know Thisbe she is a very funny and sometimes sarcastic young lady.

▢▩Notable Traits▩▢
⇢Funny
⇢Kind
⇢Sarcastic



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▪▣▫Strengths▫▣▪
♚ || ♛ Changing back to her human form
♚ || ♛ Drawing
♚ || ♛ Cooking

▪▣▫Weaknesses▫▣▪
♟ Combat/fighting
♟ Talking when nervous
♟ Controling her fox change

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*○♣Human Form♣○*

◌◎Appearance◎◌

description

◌◎Height◎◌ 5'4"
◌◎Hair Color◎◌ Dark Red
◌◎Hair Length◎◌ Lower Back
◌◎Eye Color◎◌ Bright Green

♣♥☺Description☺♥♣
Thisbe is a small young lady with the height of 5 foot four inches.Thisbe is very curvy for her small self. Thisbe has bright sparkling green eyes, that capture everything. Thisbe has a long Dark red fox tail that shows it self all the time. Thisbe has long, soft, shinny dark red hair the hangs down to her lower back. Thisbe has soft four inch fox ears.

*○♣Fox Form♣○*
Thisbe is a small fox when in her fox form. She has dark red fur and a long fox tail and high pointed ears.

◌◎Size◎◌ Foot tall
◌◎Fur Color◎◌ Dark Red
◌◎Tail Color◎◌ Dark Red with a white line for the tip.
◌◎Eye Color◎◌ Bright Green

♣Capabilties♣
○Thisbe can run extremely fast for a fox, at the maximum speed of miles per hour.


message 473: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) | 1693 comments A P P R O V E D


message 474: by [deleted user] (last edited Feb 06, 2014 03:33PM) (new)

Name: Luna Kieth

Age: 15

Type(ex: werewolf, vampire, witch, elemental, etc: Teleporter- She can teleport to anywhere she has been, it wares her out. It makes a sucking noise (Like when you suck in air) She can take multiple people with her but it makes Luna more tired. She can also take item's with her, she doesn't have to wear a suit because it doesn't effect the move, her or the items.

Grade: 9

Appearance: Luna is tall, slim but muscular. She has long black hair with dark blue highlights. Her eyes are green blending in with brown. Luna is pale, she has a scar on her cheek caused from childhood abuse she also has a nose piercing.
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She likes Rock music, Horror films and reading.

Personality: Luna is loyal to the core. She can be quite she shy and often avoids any conversation. If you manage to get close to her she can be funny, caring and sweet. Just don't make her angry, she has major anger issues. It can be hard to gain her trust but, when she does you will be safe for as long as you live. Luna is a big book worm and nerd she isn't afraid to show it.

History: Luna was born on the first of April 1999. Her mothers name was Lilith Kieth (she was 23 when Lilith had Luna). She died when Luna was 4. Her father was a drunk, drug addict and criminal. His name is Zack Lucian, he r**ed Luna's mother. When he found out he had a child he went after Luna, caught her (more like kidnapped her) and abused her, physically and mentally. He used to punch, cut, burn and starve her. One day Luna had had enough and ran away when she was 14. She discovered her powers when she was running from police (because she had painted graffiti on a wall on a Hotel), she kept thinking of her old home that she had lived with her mother. In a heartbeat she was in the house, problem was it was owned by an elderly couple. They called social services and sent her to an orphanage. A couple of weeks ago she received a letter. Once Luna had read it then burnt it. She packed her rucksack and traveled to the Academy.

Crush/Relationship: None/ Open

Family: Father- Zack Lucian

Other: She can sing. Don't make her angry or she will Karate chop you.

Power: She can Teleport or 'Fast-travel' to places she has been to.



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Shayne Elijah Winchester-Novak Benjamin Morningstar the Yellow - Eyed (shaynethedemonhunter)









Name: Joshua Cadmar "The Warrior" Drew


Etymology:
Joshua: Leader

From the Hebrew name Yehoshu'a meaning, "Yahweh is salvation".
Joshua was one of twelve spies sent to Canaan by Moses, (The story is told in the Old Testament), and Joshua succeeded Moses after he died, as leader of the Israelites.
As an English name, Joshua has been used since the Protestant Reformation

Cadmar: Brave Warrior

A name variant of Cadmus, (Greek), meaning "From the east".

Drew: Wise

Welsh origin, meaning "Wise".
English origin, meaning "Wise".
Anglo-Saxon origin, meaning "Wise".
American origin, meaning "Wise".
Scottish origin, meaning "Manly".

Nicknames:
Josh - Common usage among those who knew his real name
Joshie - as used by his mother, Thalia, before her death
Drew - as used by his Father, Benjamin, before his death
Warrior - as used by those who only know him as, "The Warrior"
Stubborn - as used frequently by Sapphira and those who only know him as, "The Warrior"
'Angel of Time' - as used occasionally by Sapphira in a most sarcastic fashion

Gender: Male
Age: 23
Time/Location/Date of Birth: Original Birth: Stratford-upon-Avon, Unites Kingdom [UK]; November 1st, 1534; Year of the Rat; 11:11am // Current Birth: Marseille, France [FR]; April 8th, 1990; Year of the Horse; 4:47pm
Zodiac Sign: Original: Scorpio, October 23 - Novermeber 21 Current: Aries, March 21 - April 19
Element(s): Original: Water; Current: Fire
Ruling Planet(s): Original: Pluto; Current: Mars
Symbol(s): Original: The Scorpion; Current: The Ram
Stone(s): Original: Topaz; Current: Diamond
Life Pursuit(s): Original: "To survive against all opposition."; Current: "The thrill of the moment"
Vibrations: Original: Resilient; Current: Enthusiastic
Secret Desire: Original: "To triumph"; Current: "To lead the way for others."
Sexuality: Gay

Grade: Sophomore in College
Allegiance: The Supernatural Academy
Height: 6'8 1/2
Weight: 150.2 lbs
Wings: 37 ft.
Crush/Relationship: Single
Way Of Dress: Goth/Punk Rock - Comparable to Adam Lambert, Mitch Lucker, Oli Sykes or Austin Carlisle
Friends: Sapphira Melinda Lazar (This character belongs to a close friend of mine in this group and has given me full permission to add her to my list of friends and use the picture of her character.)


Family: Mom - Thalia Alison Grace, Angel
/ Dead
Dad - Benjamin Clave "The Tutor" Drew, Timelord
/ Dead

Fatal Flaw: Loyalty

Likes & Dislikes:Likes - Food, Friends, Family, School, Relaxing, Reading, Writing, Adventures, Mythology, Demonology, Life // Dislikes - Hateful people, Negative emotions, Not having the answer, Being unable to help someone

Strengths: Reading, Writing, Singing, Sports, Drawing/Painting, School

Weaknesses: Fear

Personality Traits: Flamboyant, Realist, Optimistic, Dedicated, Ambitious, Determined, Independent, Reliable, Responsible, Fair, Intelligent, Trustworthy, Hardworking, Energetic, Perceptive, Practical, Curious, Creative, Organized, Flexible, Compassionate, Caring, Kind, Loving, Generous, Patient, Cautious, Loyal, Faithful, Nice, Outgoing, Funny, Cuddly, Helpful, Careful, Thoughtful, Peaceful, Calm, Leader, Carefree, Easygoing, Laid-back, Lively, Talkative, Active, Excitable, (Can be) Restless, (Can be) Aggressive, Anxious, (Can be) Quiet, (Can be) Reserved, Open-minded, Considerate, (Can be) Emotional, Protective, Honest, Agreeable, Brave, Charming, Cooperative, Cheerful, Free-spirited, Opinionated, Dependable, Clever, Stubborn, Clumsy, Childish, (Sometimes) Immature, Over- Confident

Personality Type(s): The Balanced, The Leader, The Realist, The Helper, The Optimist, The Purposeful

Species: Timelord/Angel Hybrid - purebred line of Angels on mothers side and a purebred line of Timelords on fathers side // Timelord is the CoDominant Species

Powers: Travel through Time/Space, Compulsion, Illusion, Night-Vision, Speed, Heightened hearing, Flight, Conjuring up Fire and Water

Distinctive Markings: The Mark of the House of Grace -

Mental Disorders:
OCD
Schizophrenia
PTSD (Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder)
Anxiety
ADHD
Social Anxiety

Physical Disorders:
Muscular Dystrophy
Hand Twitch
Neck Twitch
Lazy Eye
Trick Knee
Scoliosis
Hand Tick

Role Model: Mitch Lucker



Other:
Favorite Color: Black
Lucky #: 6
Favorite Music Genre: Heavy Metal
Favorite Game: Cribbage
Favorite Animal: Llama
Blood Type: O+
Jewelry: Gauged Ears
Instruments He Plays: Saxophone, Flute, Guitar, Bass, Cello, Violin, Clarenete, Viola, Banjo, Harp, Ukelele, Voice - (Screams), Drums, Turn-Tables, Trombone, Trumpet, Keyboard
Hobbies: Reading, Writing, Painting, Sculpting, Drawing, Composing, Song Covers, Trying new things, Running/Jogging, Breakdancing
Sports He Plays: Track & Field, Soccer, Baseball, Basketball, Kickball
Clubs/Activities He Is In (Before the Supernatural Academy): Wrestling, Kick-Boxing, Tickwando, Gun-Training, Archery, Sword-Fighting, Jazz Dance
Favorite TV Show(s): NCIS, House, CSI, Pawn Shop, Lost Tapes

Playlist:
"Don't Go" - Bring Me The Horizon
"Suicide Season" - Bring Me The Horizon
"No Pity For A Coward" - Suicide Silence
"Teenagers" - My Chemical Romance
"Welcome To The Black Parade" - My Chemical Romance
"Whore" - In This Moment
"If You Were Gay" - The Avenue Q
"I Hate Everything About You" - Three Days Grace
"Here Without You" - Three Days Grace
"Pain" - Three Days Grace
"Riot" - Three Days Grace
"Kryptonite" - Three Doors Down
"Fake It" - Seether
"Remedy" - Seether
"Fine Again" - Seether
"Carry On My Wayward Son" - Kansas
"It Wasn't Me" - Shaggy
"Diary Of Jane" - Breaking Benjamin
"I Will Not Bow" - Breaking Benjamin
"Fade Away" - Breaking Benjamin
"Heat Of The Moment" - Asia
"Eye Of The Tiger" - Survivor
"Gas Pedal" - Sage The Gemini
"Backseat Serenade" - All Time Low
"Terrible Things" - Mayday Parade
"Remember The Name" - Fort Minor
"Headstrong" - Trapped

(Part 1)


Shayne Elijah Winchester-Novak Benjamin Morningstar the Yellow - Eyed (shaynethedemonhunter) (Part 2)
History:
Alexandria Knightly, a purebred Angel, in the year of 372 B.C. married another purebred Angel named Saint Gabriel. They had four children, who in turn had four children each to their names. Their grandchildren, and their grandchildren's children each had four children to their name. This line of purebred Angels became the house of Grace, the first direct household under God's wing. This was not to say that they had a very easy life, because this House of Angels was constantly working on a new project or such for God. The House of Grace was always given the most important jobs that God had to offer. They were his go-to House for anything and everything. And after the infamous 'War of Sin' in 654 B.C., their jobs became twice as hard. And in the years to come after it, their loyalty to God would be tested. As such, they continued to prosper and raise beautiful children who were fastened under the belt of God's law like little ducklings swimming after their mother. In 900 B.C. The House of Grace became the last House of Angels to remain pure to the Angel bloodline. This, however, cost them dearly. Because of their fastened beliefs on purity, they had to separate into different levels of Houses within their main House. This allowed them to interbreed within the family. Unfortunately, this displeased God. And so he turned his back on the House of Grace, cursing them to infertility for 500 years. This sent the Angels into a frantic panic and caused a great depression throughout all of Heaven. Their sentenced lasted until the year 1400 B.C., which also left the Humans on the earth below to fester about on their own, without the guidance of the Angels of Heaven to send God's word to them.
This proved fatal, as without God's love, the earth grew cold. The world he created became a frozen wasteland the Angel's called, "The outer depths of Hell". The majority of God's beloved creatures died, along with many Angels, who fell from Heaven in their despair; unprotected from the cunning and deadly hands of sins. Even the House of Grace had lost many of their own. In a new attempt to save all that was left of God's creations, in 1776 A.D. God proclaimed a bonding between the House of Grace, and the House of Holy, which consisted of the descendants of the first fallen Angel, The Angel Lucifer himself.
At first, The House of Grace refused. They were appalled at the thought of their kin sharing the same blood as that of the first to doubt the almighty God. But God would not have it. The bond was made between the youngest male from the House of Grace, Alexander Grace; who was only 12 in Human years, but 117 in Angel years; and the youngest female of the House of Holy, Mary Holy; who only aged two years younger than he.
Not long after the bond was made, in the year 1789 A.D., only four years after God re-calibrated his design, did the second "War of Sin" began.
This War, however, was made to last the rest of the Century. The free-will that God had allowed all of Human kind to have had been tainted by Lucifer's army of fallen Angels. They began to defy God, or stop believing in him all together. The Angels fought along side God, opposing Lucifer, but were unable to defeat him. He had grown too powerful, feeding off the raw energy that held together God's masterpiece. He simply could not be confined. He was, in a sense, steps away from becoming a God himself. This spread fear among the Heavens. At the turn to Twilight, when the Angels that had been held back from the fighting for the night and went to bed, Alexander and Mary talked about the fighting.
Unlike popular beliefs from both Houses, Alexander and Mary got along well. They learned that they had similar views on most topics they discussed. This proved true for the topic of the War. Both Alexander and Mary felt that the fight was futile, and they were stronger in numbers. The most dedicated of Angels were falling through death and being snapped back to their broken forms in order to join Lucifer's Army. Their quantities were failing, and their faith was dwindling.
On this particular night, however, on the humid and stickily luke-warm dusk of August 21st of 1847 A.D.; after fifty-eight years of War, Mary had a thought that inspired Alexander to find an end to the War. He spent countless hours studying the Angels fighting. Asking them questions about their efforts and their thoughts on the War. Most ignored him, believing that he had gone mad. His family soon left him, fearing that God would mistake his madness for their own.
But Alexander didn't care. He kept pushing on. But the War was moving faster than he could keep up with. The Angel's numbers had dwindled to an all time low, and fear ruled the Heavens. The Angel's faith was minimal, and many had even given up on God. Some even fell purposely, convinced that it was easier than fighting the inevitable.
Lucifer was winning. Heaven was on the brink of being overrun. The rise of Lucifer seemed to be the future. And no one seemed willing to fight it anymore.
But Alexander never gave up. In the year 1900 A.D., he finally came to a conclusion.
Only an Angel who was pure at heart could save Heaven.
He began to examine every Angel left in Heaven. During this time, Mary stuck by him, offering any help that she could. They had believed her infertile for many years, but was pregnant with their first child. What started off as hate and distrust of someone from a different House, became a strong bond of love none like any other in Heaven. However, Mary's thin frame became sickly from her Pregnancy. This never stopped her from doing everything in her power to stick by her Husband, but it did prove fatal. As she was teetering on death's doorstep.
Alexander searched for nine months, restlessly trying to find the answer. But it was soon to late. Mary clung to life after the birth of her child, but it seemed to only make her condition worse.
Holding his beautiful baby girl in his arms and holding Mary's hand, Alexander cried out his grief. It cried about how it wasn't fair that Mary was doomed to die when she was nothing but good and kind to others. He cried out his pain to the point where his emotions were radiating off him in waves. These waves only grew in strength as Mary took her last breath. His pain and anger was so extreme, it caused a rift in the Heavens. This rift broke open to the black emptiness of the Universe that God had not yet developed. This brought in waves of sin that had not yet been cleansed by God. The strength of the sin destroyed the Golden Gate of Passing that allowed those who received good judgement into Heaven. The Fallen Angels came marching in, with Lucifer right on their heels.
Alexander heard their screams. Heard the chaos in Heaven. But he didn't care. He just smoothed his thumb over Mary's now cold hand and cradled his sleeping child in his arms. He didn't even look up when Lucifer himself came barreling into the room, staring down his nose at him.
"So..... You're the last true blood member of the House of Grace?" Lucifer's voice was like nails on a chalkboard. Alexander didn't respond. He didn't care. He just waited for the inevitable. Without another word, Lucifer raised his hand, preparing to strike. Alexander inhaled a sharp breath as his daughter opened her pale blue-grey eyes. They were filled with curiosity and wonder. He'd never seen eyes so beautiful.
He'd also never seen a child glow as brightly as the child in his arms did.
She felt lighter somehow. As if she was floating in his arms. He saw the shadow of Lucifer's hand coming down, but he never felt the blow. Only the dull ache of his final goodbye to his smiling baby girl.
"Thalia Alison Grace.... Here my voice. Know that I love you. Know that your Mother loved you. God will care for you until the end of time...."
Alexander closed his eyes, prepared to die. He only just missed the beautiful glow that began to surround his daughter.
This was an unusual glow that kept her safe even as the killing blow to her father sent her body flying. She watched the blood pool from her father's wounds, even as his body remained still. She turned her little head at an odd sound that filled her ears. She looked at Lucifer with odd wonder and curiosity. She reached out a small, grubby, and glowing hand as he approached.
Lucifer reached out his greedy hands, intending to kill the last Angel of Heaven. But, as his fingers skimmed the edge of her bright glow, his hand caught fire. He yelped in pain, and drew his hand back, but the blue-green fire was growing and traveling up his arm. Thalia frowned. This is not what she wanted. She wanted to be held and cuddled and this man was playing with fire.
'Silly man... Come play with me!' She thought. But the man wouldn't come near her. She pouted at him, saddened that he wouldn't approach her.
God saw this action, and was displeased. This Angel was young. And as such, she was meant to be happy. God then sent a blast of light so great, that it was meant to wipe out all life on the planet. But this Angel, young Thalia; daughter of the Houses of Grace and Holy; was stronger than this wave that God sent down to earth. She pushed the wave back, and only allowed it to hit the heavens. God was astounded and watched on with intrigued interest. The light was blinding, and kept the darkness of night away, making the twenty-four hour timeline, into a single day; with no break for the moon to shine. When the light died down and gave way to darkness, Thalia stood tall. She stood in the form of a young woman. The light had made her age well into her young adult years. God was displeased, and commanded she went back to being a child. But Thalia was curious. Thalia was full of wonder. And Thalia was full of power that no Angel had ever had before. She refused and disobeyed God. She cast her shadow over him and over heaven. And she pushed them to the edges of Oblivion. She created a mighty armies of Men and Monsters that would live throughout the ages. She intended to cause a revolutionary race that consisted of all kinds of strengths and abilities. But her mind was still young. And many of her creations turned dark and changed into monstrous forms, that were to one day be feared by all.
But God was not finished. He may have been locked away, but he still had one trick up his sleeve. And so, he created the Timelords. The race that was meant to destroy the abominations that Thalia had created. And to bring Thalia back to the light. They were in no way capable of taking her on full-force. Only God could stop her, once and for all.


Benjamin Clave Drew lived his entire childhood, (2000 Years), on Gallifrey, the Planet of Timelords. Benjamin was born into a small, poor family, and had fought in the Great Time War, The Time and Dream Battles, The war between the Timelords and the Dalek Race, and the war between the Timelords versus the combined forces of the Daleks, the Cybermen and the Sontaran Races. Benjamin was only 2788 years old, and he had grown mentally and emotionally to a 10,000 year old Timelord. His life has been war and hiding. He wasn't known for his name. No, the Timelords were born with names; but only the child, the child's mother, and the child's partner were allowed to know his or her name. Everyone else knew Benjamin as "The Tutor". He taught future Military Officers. He built Armies and planned attacks on planets. He helped wipe out entire Races from the whole of Time. And his unpolitically trained mind earned him an honored seat on the Timelord Council as the advisor of the Emperor of Time and the head of Council, "The Leader". Most of his history was unknown to even his closest friends and family. The only one who he could confide in and who knew everything about him was his Mother, Danielle "The Mentor" Brenton.


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Shayne Elijah Winchester-Novak Benjamin Morningstar the Yellow - Eyed (shaynethedemonhunter) (Part 3)
Danielle married into the Drew family in the year 789 A.D., to Alec Drew. They had seven children together: Alistair Brads Drew, the eldest; Brady Tanner Drew; Roxanne Horous-Bane Drew; Thatch Robert Drew; Robyn Drake Drew; Terra Beth Drew; and the youngest; Benjamin Clave Drew. Her husband, Alec was a big-shot Politician on the Timelord Council, so he wasn't home very often. But when he was home, he was sleeping or glowering at everyone. No one really liked to talk to him because they all thought he was intimidating. Whilst Alec was preparing for Wars and making important decisions, Danielle made her living by raising her kids and helping them grow into the world. Alistair left home at the age of 2,117, and married into a rich family. Brady left home at the age of 2,014 to work in the Archaeology Mines. Roxanne and Thatch - Twins - both left on their 2,000th birthday, to work together in a Science facility. Robyn married young, at the age of 1,977 to an older man and hasn't been seen since. Terra moved into her own place on her 2,100th birthday and created her own in-home daycare. She would visit from time to time, but she never stayed long. Benjamin stayed home well into his 2,000's to help his Mother and keep an eye on his Father. He never liked Alexander, and he was always worried that one day he would snap and hurt his Mom.
In the year 3456 A.D., when Benjamin was 2,756 years old, he caught Alec cheating on his Mother with a young girl, no older than 1,000; whom he had been paying heavily for her services. He learned that she came from a large family with little money and had resorted to selling herself to higher up Politicians for whatever she could get. His Father was the only reason that her family was being fed. When he confronted his Father about it, Alec kept his cool, calm facade. Benjamin struggled with his anger and longed to throw a punch at his Father, but he remembered his Mother's words and stayed as rational as he could as he explained that Alec should leave and never return. Alec laughed at him and took out his Sonic Screwdriver, in an attempt to threaten him. But his words were cut short, as blood gurgled in his throat and spilled out his mouth. Benjamin stared on in shock, as Alec fell to his feet, and his Mother stood in his place. He blinked at her, unsure of what was happening. She gave him a small smile, a tear rolling down her cheek.
"I've always... Hated... Him." She choked out through sad hiccups. She reached out her hand and traced the line of his jaw.
"So young.... So wise... Go, my child. They're after us all. Run. Discover the truth." She pressed something cool and hard into his hand. "Don't let them catch you."

And so he ran. He didn't know where he was supposed to be going, but the object in his hand, a small key, glowed bright the more southward it faced. So, he followed it. He came to an old warehouse, probably long since abandoned. Inside was a large, seemingly empty room. But at it's center, there was a door. He walked around it, but there was no wall to surround it. Just a door. The key was glowing so bright, that it hurt for him to look at it. He put it into the lock and turned it. The door opened slowly and he stepped through, squinting through the brightness.

"Hello?" He called out, curiosity coursing through him.
"Whose there?" A small and timid female voice asked. Benjamin's hearts began racing in his chest. The voice was like a song in his ears. Beautiful and strong, yet tragic and drawn tight with fear.
"My name is Tutor. Who are you?"
With a sudden flash there was a woman standing mere inches from him, causing him to scramble backward in surprise.
"Thalia Alison Grace. Daughter of Alec Grace of the House of Grace and Mary Holy from the House of Holy. I see you, Benjamin Clave Drew. I see you, and I see your past and your future. I see that God never meant for you to be here. You were never meant to live through today. And your Mother saw that. And she sent you away. You're safe here. You cannot be harmed here. And God cannot see you while you are here. Stay here with me, Benjamin Clave Drew, and you shall be the greatest that you can ever be."
Benjamin backed up farther, scared for his life. 'She knows my name...' He thought. 'How is that possible?!'

Thalia's thick, wavy, brown hair swirled as she turned around abruptly. Her long olive green dress twirling around her thin, pale legs. "Come." She said. "There is much to be discussed." Her sky blue eyes burned into him as she glanced back at him, their eyes locking together.

(Incomplete - Will be finished soon!)


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Kendra (madamejade) | 1693 comments So part of his history is the Creator of the universe and all of heaven being defeated and cast away without any form of adequate explanation.
No.
Plus every other sentence had a grammatical error.

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Isha Sharma (ephemeraltranquility) Name: Alexis

Age: 15

Type: Witch

Appearance: Brunette. Has blue eyes. She has a star shaped mark on the back of her neck. She is strikingly beautiful and her smile is mesmerizing.

Personality: She is a very quiet girl on the outside but there's always a storm raging inside of her. She is not a very social person but she is open with her friends. She loves animals and plants. Like a true witch, she maintains balance of the nature. She has a passion for music and drama.

History: She was raised in New York by her Grandmother. Her parents died when she was just 3 years old and since then she has been searching for the truth; she is searching for their killer. When, she was 13 years old, her grandmother died of heart attack and she has been living alone since then.

Crush.Relationship: Single

Family: Dead.

Other: She can be really aggressive sometimes.

Power: She possesses all the magical qualities. She knows all the spells ever made in this world. She is working on her own.


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Add more to Personality, Appearance and History.
Even though her family is dead, name them and say they're dead.


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It asks if she has a Crush/Relationship and you said 'Single'.


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And the Other. That should be under Personality.
The powers are god modelling. I don't think Harry Potter even knows all the spells.


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Kendra (madamejade) | 1693 comments What type of witch? Witch from Harry Potter, like Shu assumed, or one of the million types of other witches?
"All the magical qualities?" You mean she can do EVERYTHING?
If you can't be bothered to list them, then we can't be bothered to approve your character.
Just because her family's dead doesn't mean they didn't exist. How did she come to the academy?


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Kendra (madamejade) | 1693 comments Liliana wrote: "Name: Adara "Adi"

Age: 16

Type: Fire Elemental

Grade: 10th

Appearance: She has fiery hair that she wears in a pixie cut. It shows up easily in a crowd, especially against her pale skin. Her eye..."


How big are the fire bolts? How hot does her fire burn?


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Name: Charlotte Blossom Parks

Age: 13 turning 14 on September 28.

Type: Has water powers

Grade: Freshman

Appearance: Charlotte has flowing mocha hair. IT commonly has a copper look to it in the sunlight. It falls loosely in waves down to her waist. She has small bangs pushed to the side. She has loyal deep brown eyes that are very round. She has long eyelashes, creating no need for makeup. She has a small smile with her pale pink lips. She is average sized, but skinny.
description

Personality: Charlotte is usually bouncy, daring, and fun when she is with her closest friends, but since her powers were discovered, she had to move away from her two best friends, Olivia and Violet, to come to this school. Now she is quiet and shy. It is very hard to make friends for her. She isn't interacted with much, but longs to have someone to talk to soon at this school.

History: Charlotte is an orphan. She was found in the streets of a small town. A woman took her to the only orphanage in cities. There were only 2 other kids there. 1) A baby boy named Thomas who had a serious illness which nobody knew what it was or how to cure it. 2) A girl named Vanessa who has short black hair, but it always covered her grey eyes. She always looked out the window at nothing in particular. The one guardian of the orphanage never took proper care of the three and sometimes snuck out at night to go to parties and such. A couple who had never noticed the place decided to stop in. They really wanted to have children someday. They saw how horrible the orphanage was. They felt bad and adopted the little Charlotte, giving her her full name. Later her parents became divorced because her father thought that the supernatural academy was for the best, but her mother didn't agree. She thought that having a normal, proper education was best and let her powers be in the past. Her mom moved to California after a big decision. Her mom promised that every 12 months Charlotte can visit her. Recently, her mother got married again and had a little brother named Michael. Charlotte longs to see Michael and her step-dad, but recently after her mother gave birth to Michael, she was in a car accident. Luckily, her step-dad and brother didn't get hurt at all (they weren't in the car), but her mother was. She had a broken leg, a sprained/twisted ankle, and a broken arm. This accident delayed Charlotte's trip, and she hasn't been able to go to California since.

Crush/Relationship: No one but wants one very badly

Family: Lives with her dad and a dog named Tar (black lab).

Other: Has a British accent.
Power: Has the element water. She can freeze things, make water with her hands, make snow, and more. Her powers are getting harder and harder to control as she gets older.


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Julia Name:Jessie Mia Tanner

Age:15

Type:Shape-shifter

Grade:10th

Appearance:She has dark brown hair witch turns dirty blond when wet.She wears brown glasses with white polka dots on them.She has many freckles and a tan skin tone. She usually wears jeans,whatever shirt she can find,and her sneakers.Her eyes are light blue but turn a dark brown when nervous.

Personality:Jessie hates doing girly stuff.She would rather playing a game of basketball,or run in a race.She HATES being bossed around if you boss her around prepare to be frozen in the next 2-3 seconds.She also hates when people don't be them self's,she always says it is not right to not be your self.

History:She was born in Florida and went to a private school till she was 13. When she turned 13 her parents took her to the supernatural academy.Her parents were both doctor's in Florida.Her younger sister Amy died by getting run over by a truck.Her mom was a shape-shifter to and teached her the powers of it when she was only 8.

Crush/Relationship:None,but is looking

Family:Mom:Danielle Dad:Matt (both alive)

Other:Loves pickles!!! Used to have a best friend named Andy.(girl)

Power:Her powers are freezing people,slowing down or speeding up time,and shape-shifting.


message 489: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) | 1693 comments Ella
Everything is borderline acceptable except for appearance (add more) and powers. It's too general. What can and can't she do? On what scale do her powers operate?

Julia
Name: Pass
Age: Pass
Type: Pass
Grade: Pass
Appearance: I still have no idea what she looks like. Fail.
Personality: Riddled with grammatical errors and there are apparently only three personality traits that she has. Fail.
History: Grammatical errors, unclear on how she came here.
C/R: Pass
Family: Fail. There are spaces after colons.
Other: Pass
Power: Fail. What's her freezing power/temperature? What does being a shifter have to do with speeding up or slowing down time? How does her shape-shifting work?

Final verdict:

R E J E C T E D X 2


message 490: by Shuhan [On Leave], I'm beside stoopid<- XD (new)

Shuhan [On Leave] (Inyourclosetinyourhead) | 5357 comments Mod
To add to Ella: Freshman? What's freshman? Include the grade too. You could be talking about any fresh man here. ;)


message 491: by Drax (new)

Drax RavenKnight (draxhollowknight) Freshman year is always the first year, though.


message 492: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) | 1693 comments Yeah, 9th grade.


message 493: by Shuhan [On Leave], I'm beside stoopid<- XD (new)

Shuhan [On Leave] (Inyourclosetinyourhead) | 5357 comments Mod
Freshman seems too...like an expression. Maybe include the grade also to add the...factual....


message 494: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) | 1693 comments Well, while she's at it, I guess, but if that were the only problem I'd pass it.


message 495: by ʟ ᴀ ᴜ ʀ ᴀ (last edited Feb 15, 2014 03:20PM) (new)

ʟ ᴀ ᴜ ʀ ᴀ Name: Anastasia (Ana) Grace

Age: 15

Type(ex: werewolf, vampire, witch, elemental, etc.): Water/Ice Nymph

Grade: 10th

Appearance: http://www.cinesnob.net/wp-content/up...
http://www.movpins.com/big/MV5BMjMxNT...
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Personality: Ana is a fun-loving girl, but she usually hates doing anything too girly, and she loves sports. (I'll finish the rest later)

History:

Crush/Relationship:

Family:

Other:

Power:


message 496: by [deleted user] (new)

oh ok ill do 10th grade. I apoligize


message 497: by [deleted user] (new)

I will edit mine later


message 498: by [deleted user] (new)

She is in 9th grade and is turning 14 soon.

Her cheeks are free of blemishes or freckles and is very fair. Most of her skin is very pale. In the summer her skin doesn't tan at all. She has tiny, graceful feet with a size 2. Insanely small feet for her age! She blushes a light pink often. She has brown bangs that are slightly lighter than the rest of her long wavy locks. The bangs are a bit overgrown and pushed to one side. She has dainty ears that are round and are free (not fully connected to her head) She always wears small sapphire earrings because it is her birthstone. She has a stout nose that perks out at the bottom. She has convincing brown eyebrows that are the same shade as her bangs.



Powers:
Charlotte learned that she had powers when she was around 12. She accidentally froze part of her bed-frame. She began to keep it a secret from her parents, petrified on what would happen in the future. It became getting out of control. She couldn't control her powers. They just naturally did so. She zoned away from her friends, scared she would injure them. She tried avoiding practically everyone. One day she froze the door when approaching the handle and her father had to tear it down with an ax. That was when they discovered her secret. Her parents knew something had to be done. They argued what to do about it, resulting in a divorce.

Power statistics and more!
-She can freeze things at varying temps from 25 degrees Fahrenheit to -75.
-She can freeze things, melt ice, create snow, and sometimes shoot water out of her hands. All of these happen in an accidental way, except for freezing. When she concentrates really hard she can freeze stuff with a thin layer of ice. Normally her powers happen to her in the worst ways. She has no control over them except for freezing.


message 499: by sucre'd fiend, Perfection (new)

sucre'd fiend (sucredfiend) | 764 comments Mod
Please edit it into the original form


message 500: by [deleted user] (new)

Ok I will do that today. Other than that, it's good?


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