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Saving Embar (The Fourth Book)

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message 1: by [deleted user] (last edited Apr 05, 2013 04:59AM) (new)
Apr 05, 2013 04:56AM

I have finally posted the book on creative writing. Its five chapters, and when I have more to write, I will update it.There is a cliffhanger at the end, but I would like to know your opinion about the book. Feel free for any suggestions. Thsi is the roughest of rough drafts.


message 2: by Anna (new) - rated it 4 stars
Apr 05, 2013 05:00AM

Anna I hope you don't make Peeta the perfect guy though..


message 3: by Marie (new) - rated it 4 stars
Apr 05, 2013 05:05AM

Marie But Peeta IS perfect ;) x


message 4: by Anna (new) - rated it 4 stars
Apr 05, 2013 05:09AM

Anna I mean the Edward Cullen kind of perfection:))I


message 5: by Marie (new) - rated it 4 stars
Apr 05, 2013 05:11AM

Marie Edward Cullen is the furthest from perfect you could ever get! He is a sparkly fairy princess ;) :P xxx


message 6: by Anna (new) - rated it 4 stars
Apr 05, 2013 05:13AM

Anna Hahaha, well u get my point.


message 7: by Gaby (new) - rated it 5 stars
Apr 05, 2013 05:44AM

Gaby Testa Edward Cullens a weirdo vampire. Peeta Mellark is the perfect guy. Plus Edwards depressed all the time and he doesnt even drink blood(what kind of vampire doesnt drink blood??!?)
At least peeta isn't afraid to get some blood on his hands. and peeta isn't ALWAYS depressed like edward.


message 8: by [deleted user] (new)
Apr 05, 2013 06:06AM

Who is Embar?


message 9: by [deleted user] (new)
Apr 05, 2013 07:14AM

Embar is the daughter of Katniss and Peeta


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)
Apr 05, 2013 07:16AM

Ooo what's their sons name??


message 11: by [deleted user] (new)
Apr 05, 2013 08:21AM

Ryen like "Rye" bread. You know, Peeta comes from Pita. Also Katniss was the Girl on Fire, and a smaller version of fire is ember. So Embar and Ryen.


message 12: by Alan (new) - rated it 4 stars
Apr 05, 2013 09:10AM

Alan Smith Any chance you could post a link? The site's search can't seem to find it. Thanks.


message 13: by Rachel (new) - rated it 5 stars
Apr 05, 2013 09:25AM

Rachel How did you find out what their names were? It didn't say in the book did it? Ooohh. Haha Just realized, did you just make up those names?


message 14: by Rachel (new) - rated it 5 stars
Apr 05, 2013 12:43PM

Rachel I like those names too by the way :) So you made them up I assume?


message 15: by Line (new) - rated it 3 stars
Apr 05, 2013 03:38PM

Line Elebu61 wrote: "I have finally posted the book on creative writing. Its five chapters, and when I have more to write, I will update it.There is a cliffhanger at the end, but I would like to know your opinion about..."

Could you give a link?


message 16: by Marie (new) - rated it 4 stars
Apr 06, 2013 02:16PM

Marie just go to their profile and scroll down until you get to the 'writing' section - it's right there :) x


message 17: by Line (new) - rated it 3 stars
Apr 07, 2013 12:44AM

Line Rosie wrote: "just go to their profile and scroll down until you get to the 'writing' section - it's right there :) x"

Okay, I'll try that...

Thanks, Rosie...


message 18: by Ashley (new) - rated it 5 stars
Apr 19, 2013 11:55AM

Ashley Me gusta!!! I'm going to read it write now!!!


message 19: by [deleted user] (new)
May 19, 2013 08:54PM

wow, thats really good!


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