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message 101: by Jasmine (new)

Jasmine (calibaby27) i sm do confused


s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§» It's just random things, 'tis all. I think, I type. That's pretty much it! Oh... you made me want a hotdog.


s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§» LLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§» lol!

Well anyways, I g2g. Ciao!


message 110: by Jasmine (new)

Jasmine (calibaby27) DANG i got over my craving for a hotdog now i want one again!


message 111: by Jasmine (new)

Jasmine (calibaby27) bye


s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§» INT. DINING ROOM - NIGHT

A cute chunky girl squirms impatiently in a chair in front of a cake with six glowing candles. The flickering candles are the only source of light in the room and the shadows they cast on the walls are huge and menacing. The little girl points at the shadows and laughs. She’s MIRI [LITTLE:], a happy, sunny child.

MIRI [LITTLE:]
(cute)
Can I blow the candles?

A stunningly beautiful lady smiles down patronizingly at the child. The lady smoothes her pale green dress and pats her hair again, to make sure everything is just right. This perfectionist is CHALISE.

CHALISE
(fond)
Just a few more minutes, Miri. Your father said he’d-

A car door slams shut. Heavy footsteps sound beyond the door, in the hall. The door swings open and a heavy-set man enters the room. He’s dressed in a light-coloured business suit and is carrying a briefcase. He drops the briefcase to hug Chalise, giving her a quick peck on the cheek. This is EDWARD, Miri’s father.

CHALISE
How was work Edward?

EDWARD
Same as always.

MIRI [LITTLE:]
Daddy!

Miri [Little:] jumps from her chair and runs to her father. She flings her short arms around his knees and hugs them fiercely. Edward laughs and picks her up. He holds her tightly, as if she were going to disappear.

EDWARD
(still holding Miri [Little:])
How was our little girl today, Chalise?

CHALISE
An angel.

Miri [Little:] beams happily.

MIRI [LITTLE:]
Now cake?

Edward sets Miri [Little:] down with a laugh.

EDWARD
Yes, we can do the cake now.

Miri [Little:] settles herself in the chair again and notices a candle is out. She grabs the box of matches lying nearby on the table and tries to relight the candle.

EDWARD
(whispers to Chalise)
They found us. They’re coming.

Chalise glances at Miri [Little:] worriedly.

CHALISE
(quiet)
How long do we have?

EDWARD
I don’t know.

Candle relit, Miri [Little:] turns around, eyes traversing her parents’ troubled faces.

MIRI [LITTLE:]
Something wrong?

CHALISE
(quick, changing subject)
Be careful with the matches don’t burn yourself.

EDWARD
How old’s my little lady turning?

MIRI [LITTLE:]
(proud)
Six!

Edward smiles at his little girl.

CHALISE
Ready?

Miri [Little:] nods enthusiastically, bouncing in her seat.

CHALISE & EDWARD
(harmonizing)
Happy birthday to you!
Happy birthday to you!
Happy birthday dear Mirali...
Happy bir-!

Candlelight glints off the metal barrel of a gun. A gunshot interrupts the festivities. Edward falls to the floor, a dark patch quickly spreading across his chest. Miri [Little:] spots the murderer, with his cruel grin, and shrieks. The killer is KIRIL, a young man of about twenty-eight or so. He lowers the gun, aiming at Miri [Little:]. Chalise yanks her away right before the bullet hits her chair, exploding it into a billion tiny pieces. Vines sprout from the wall behind Kiril and wrap around his arms and legs, making it impossible for him to move. Chalise kneels next to Edward, holding Miri [Little:] in her arms. Miri [Little:] is sobbing into Chalise’s shoulder.

EDWARD
(faint whisper)
The matches... I can give you five minutes... Keep our girl safe.

Chalise nods and grabs the box of matches from the table, reverently handing them to Edward. They smile at each other sadly, tears in their eyes. Kiril slowly melts into the shadows and vanishes, unnoticed. Carrying Miri [Little:] awkwardly, Chalise walks out the door.


EXT. STREET – CONTINUOUS

Chalise runs down the dark street, holding Miri [Little:] close. Behind them, their home explodes and burning debris showers down upon them. Chalise continues to run, and despite the tears rolling down her cheeks, never once looks back.


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This is the beginning of a screenplay I'm writing. What do you think?


message 113: by Jasmine (new)

Jasmine (calibaby27) wow thats really good


message 115: by Jasmine (new)

Jasmine (calibaby27) yw


message 117: by Jasmine (new)

Jasmine (calibaby27) boorrreeed


message 118: by Jasmine (new)

Jasmine (calibaby27) you?


s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§» Movie scripts. A pointless hobby, but whatev.


message 122: by s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§» (last edited Apr 18, 2009 09:19AM) (new)

s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§» You lost me there... Clarify?


s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§» Since no one else is here, I shall just sit here and talk to myself while driving anyone who might eventually read this insane.


s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§» Starting with... random facts that have hardly anything to do with nothing but I find oddly intriguing and fascinating.


s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§» And my topic shall be...


s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§» I love that stuff!


s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§» So cool and weird because we know so little about it!


s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§» McClintock, Jeffrey E. "Black hole." World Book Online Reference Center. 2004. World Book, Inc.


s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§» That's where I got the following information.


s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§» Sorry if this doesn't make any sense, I'm trying to simplify it so I can understand it.


s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§» Okay, so a black hole is an area in space with really strong gravity that basically pulls everything nearby into it.


s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§» They're invisible becuase they even pull light in.


s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§» Einstein published his theory of general relativity in 1916, from which the basic descriptions of black holes were formed.


s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§» You should just read this article.
http://www.nasa.gov/worldbook/blackho...
It would make so much more sense than me trying to explain it. But I'm bored... so I shall continue.


s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§» I'm not sure what I'm going to do yet.


s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§» The mass of a black hole is found using the radius of the event horizon. I'm not sure how, but I will let you know when I find that.


s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§» I found it!

"Astronomers use the radius of the event horizon to specify the size of a black hole. The radius of a black hole measured in kilometers equals three times the number of solar masses of material in the black hole. One solar mass is the mass (amount of matter) of the sun."

Confusing?


s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§» My head's starting to hurt, but each time I read that paragraph, it makes more sense!


s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§» I'm going to quit now, now that someone is here!


s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§» Of course! That's what happens when I'm bored! I have to entertain myself one way or another.


s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§» A bit. I'd only analyzed the first four paragraphs.


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