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Mar 2013: Daughter Smoke & Bone
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Wonder if I'll get the the main pick this month. =P


Ky and Gem were great to follow and I really wanted to see how that turned out, but it didn't just wrap up. That was literally divine intervention making everything as perfect as it could possibly be. I understand the need to tie it up, but it was off-putting.
3rd book was a great ride though. The overly sappy ending was a bit much, but I saw it coming. I really enjoyed it as a whole.

Unlike some of the other comments here, I have to say Gem and Kynan's story was super obnoxious me. I would have preferred not to have that storyline all together, but I thought wraith's personal story arc was good.
I started getting a little irritated with inconsistencies in the story. So, charms can be stolen through sex, but then once someone steels them they can't be stolen anymore? Also, the degree to which the nature of sem demons changed from book to book was irritating. In shade's book he literally MUST fulfill the needs of any woman who strongly needs something, but then both eidolon and wraith could trapes about smelling various people's arousals but not having to do anything about it?
Also, I thought the bad guys in books 2 and 3 were two one-dimensionally bad. The Aegis wasn't given too much dimension in the first book but then both Roag and Bysamoth were basically just pure evil. It started getting old after a while.
Final gripe, having wriath's life force be tied to the hospital and then whoops! Also to the other brothers was irritating.
All that said, some of the sexy times with wraith were some of the sexiest I've read.


Also I would totally buy one of the pendants that the brothers wear with UG's symbol. :p


*I say "what they needed" because the book told me he had the ability to divine that. Not that he decided what they needed, but that he could actually "read" it from them.

@Serendi - read it as slightly different... that he was compelled to to act out his partner's fantasy, and tended to look for sex among a subset that had many masochists. i could be wrong, but that is what i read it as. largely seemed like something that was established as a character trait (that he had kinky sex) early on, then was twisted to make a more interesting character foil (he must beat women who want it) but didn't really work out in the story at all.
But now I need to know something from someone who has read the next book or so of this series. The thing about Wraith at the end.....what the hell? They just left that completely untouched! It was the whole reason behind EVERYTHING that happened. And it was just left to nothing.
As much fun as the book was, I need to know if it gets resolved or explained. I don't need to know how they explain it. I just need to know if I should spend anymore time with the series. Ending the book with a "this thing happened and that's why everything is messed up! We don't know what it is, and we can't figure it out, so let's move on with life!" just gets to me.
I'm not expecting world class literature, but that seems broken. Unless it gets addressed later.