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message 101: by Niran (new)

Niran | 1842 comments Dante looked at Raven sharply, he looked straight at her with a scowl. Then without thinking he grabbed her wrist and pulled up her sleeves roughly," And what about you? You don't need to resort to cutting, not anymore, Raven. I'm here. You can escape from that place but you still stay and suffer!". Then he let go of her wrist and walked away, trying to get away as fast as he could.


message 102: by Niran (new)

Niran | 1842 comments "You have me!!", Dante shouted. He turned around with a sad yet angry look on his face.
"Don't you get it, Raven? I am here for you. Whatever it is. Whether you need to borrow money, or stay at my house to get away". Dante just looked at her and shook his head slightly, he didnt know how else he could explain to her that he was here. Even Dantes sister was there for her.


message 103: by Niran (new)

Niran | 1842 comments Dante watched her face slowly go from sad to depressed. He didnt know what she was thinking but it wasn't anything good. Dante stepped forward and brought her all of a sudden into a tight, warm hug.
"It's okay", he said softly," I-I shouldn't have gone that far. I'm so sorry".


message 104: by Niran (new)

Niran | 1842 comments Dante held the back of her neck and and held her waist to pull her closer. He felt comfortable. He felt like he could definitely get used to this. His heart started to pound even more slightly as he held her close.
"No, don't try to say it was okay. It wasn't", he pulled away slowly.


message 105: by Niran (new)

Niran | 1842 comments Dante looked deep into her eyes and then look down as he blushed from how intense the state was. He rubbed his hand against his jean pocket and then looked back up to realise the halls were empty.
"Hey, come with me", Dante grabbed Ravens hand and dragged her along.


message 106: by Niran (new)

Niran | 1842 comments Dante looked back at her as he pulled her along,"there's no point of going to class, so I'm taking you somewhere better". Then he pulled her out of the back of the building and walked through the football field.


message 107: by Niran (new)

Niran | 1842 comments Dante laughed," Would I, of all people, take you to a football field?". Then he saw the abandoned part, it was like a jungle. He dragged her along again and there was a huge gate that blocked the entry to the real forest. The beautiful, majestic forest.
Dante looked at her with a grin," Lets clime shall we?". Then dance started to put his fingers into empty spaces on the fence and he did it with his feat, slowly climbing up.


message 108: by Niran (new)

Niran | 1842 comments (Sorry!)

Dante looked down a few times at Raven with a slight smile on his face. He climbed up and up, until he reached the top and climbed over the other end. He checked up on Raven and asked," You alright?".


message 109: by Niran (new)

Niran | 1842 comments Dante climbed down with Raven and as he reached the bottom he stepped on the thick, grassy ground. He turned around to see trees, bushes and tall grass everywhere.


message 110: by Niran (new)

Niran | 1842 comments Dante laughed and said jokingly," Something like that". He walked through the jungle like forest, pushing branches out of the way as he did. Then suddenly they reached the meadow with a lake behind it, it had flowers and fresh, green grass. It was breath taking.


message 111: by Niran (new)

Niran | 1842 comments Dante looked at her and smiled slightly, nodding and saying," Hmm, truly is". Then he coughed slightly and looked back at the meadow, walking forward and sitting on the soft grass.


message 112: by Niran (new)

Niran | 1842 comments Dante looked around the meadow and then looked back at Raven with a smile on his face.
"I was just wondering around and saw this big huge gate. I wanted to know what was behind the gate so I climbed it, started walking and found this place".


message 113: by Niran (new)

Niran | 1842 comments Dante looked at her as she lay on the grass, her hair blending in with the grass slightly. She looked so peaceful, at ease with the world.

((Got to go))


message 114: by Ladybooksalott (new)

Ladybooksalott (silverstake) ((They deleted it. Again.))

Raven sighed and closed her eyes for a moment. She felt him looking at her and smiled slightly. "Do I amuse you?" She chuckled.


message 115: by Niran (new)

Niran | 1842 comments ((Oh my god? How come they keep deleting you account? Stupid mothertuckers


message 116: by Ladybooksalott (new)

Ladybooksalott (silverstake) ((Apparantly, I did something wrong on my first account, and they deleted it without a warning. I mean, give me a warning first or something... I've sent them an email.. but yeah it really sucks that they won't even give me a second chance. Well, I'll just make a new account ))


message 117: by Niran (new)

Niran | 1842 comments ((That's so fricking rude! It's your account, exactly, at least give a warning))

Dante looked at her with a soft grin and nodded," Yes you do", he laughed slightly. The truth was. He was just starring at her because he could, because he wanted to.


message 118: by Niran (new)

Niran | 1842 comments ((Got to go))


message 119: by Ladybooksalott (new)

Ladybooksalott (silverstake) ((Yeah, same here... well, I'm just trying to keep calm and not becone angry. Lol.))

Raven smiled, opened her eyes and looked at him. "Thanks I guess," she chuckled. She liked watching him too. Eyeing his features.


message 120: by Niran (new)

Niran | 1842 comments (( Don't worry about it, even though your probably pissed. Just don't think about it))

Dante placed his hands behind him to lean on, he breathed the fresh air in and out while his eyes were closed. He sighed and said," Raven, tell me about yourself. Your likes? Your dislikes?".


message 121: by Ladybooksalott (new)

Ladybooksalott (silverstake) "My likes and dislikes," she repeated, looking up in the sky. "I like... being outside, drawing, writing, reading... playing football," she laughed softly.

((Trying x) ))


message 122: by Niran (new)

Niran | 1842 comments Dante looked at her and smiled, then he laughed slightly," Football, that's awesome. I like reading and writing too". Then he asked," Dislikes?".


message 123: by Ladybooksalott (new)

Ladybooksalott (silverstake) Raven looked back at him. "Good," she chuckled. Then, she frowned. "Dislikes... cutting," she said softly. "Getting bruises... Carrots," she added randomly.


message 124: by Niran (new)

Niran | 1842 comments Dante looked at her sadly while she said cutting and bruises. He really wanted things to get better for her, but how could they when she wasnt open to any help. "You know me and my sister can help, Raven".


message 125: by Ladybooksalott (new)

Ladybooksalott (silverstake) Raven sighed. "I know.. but I can't leave," she told him softly, running her fingers through the grass.


message 126: by Niran (new)

Niran | 1842 comments Dante looked away, placing his hand on his knee. "Why not?", he asked. He wanted to know why she was willing to suffer.


message 127: by Ladybooksalott (new)

Ladybooksalott (silverstake) Raven closed her eyes. "I'm the only one he has got left," she said softly.


message 128: by Niran (new)

Niran | 1842 comments "Then why is he treating you like this?", he asked softly. He didnt really know what else to say, he didnt know how to change her mind.


message 129: by Ladybooksalott (new)

Ladybooksalott (silverstake) Raven sighed. "He... thinks I ruined everything for him. I wasn't supposed to be here.. I was an accident."


message 130: by Niran (new)

Niran | 1842 comments Dante scoffed and said bitterly," He sounds wonderful, now I know why you wont leave him". He wasnt trying to be rude to her, he was angry at her father for being like this.


message 131: by Ladybooksalott (new)

Ladybooksalott (silverstake) Raven sat up and frowned at him. She crossed her arms. "That's not what I'm saying. I know that this is wrong, but I'm the only one he's got left," she told him. She immediately felt miserable at his words and started to get up. "Well, let me get back to my wonderful dad," she added sarcastically.


message 132: by Ladybooksalott (new)

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message 133: by Niran (new)

Niran | 1842 comments Dante closed his eyes as she got up, he put his hand in front of his face and ran it down his face. Then he sighed and said," I keep snapping at you because I know you don't have to live like this. I used to be you, Raven!". But not anymore, he was happy.


message 134: by Ladybooksalott (new)

Ladybooksalott (silverstake) "You're not like me," she told him. And without another word, she walked away. She walked home and stuffed her hands in her pockets. Nobody could help her. She was just mad, but more at herself.


message 135: by Niran (new)

Niran | 1842 comments Dante watched her leave, he wasnt going to chase after her or try to talk to her. She needed her space. He only said those things because he wanted her to escape from all this, she was young, she had dreams she can accomplish. Yet she doesn't believe in them.


message 136: by Ladybooksalott (new)

Ladybooksalott (silverstake) Raven got home and to her surprise, her father wasn't there. He must be to a bar. She went upstairs to her room, secretly hoping he would not come back tonight, because if he would... he would be drunk.


message 137: by Niran (new)

Niran | 1842 comments Dante had gotten a ride from Vee and had said his thanks.
He opened his front door with a heavy sigh," Im home", he shouted. Alisa came to Dante slowly and with a worried look on her face. Dante looked at her confusingly and asked," What's wrong?".


message 138: by Ladybooksalott (new)

Ladybooksalott (silverstake) Raven sighed and sat down on her bed. What was she supposed to do now? For Dante's sake... she wouldn't talk to him, because she was mostly mad at herself.


message 139: by Niran (new)

Niran | 1842 comments Dante slowly walked into the kitchen with Alisa behind him. And what he saw, he never wanted to see in his life.
His father.
He had dark brown hair that almost looked black, green- hazel eyes that were emotionless, a straight face, strong jaw structure and a scar on his eyebrow.
As soon as his father saw him, he got up as fast as lighting, Dante stepped back and had a worried look on his face, angry and worried.
"Get away from me!!", Dante screamed, fragile and scared, all his worst memories rushing back to him.
His father tried to step forward but then just stopped and held his hands out," D-Dante, I'm not going to hurt", he stuttered.


message 140: by Ladybooksalott (new)

Ladybooksalott (silverstake) A little while later, she just sat on the couch in the living room, watching a TV program. She heard the door slam. She gulped. "Hi dad," she managed to get out before he came in. She was right, he was drunk. His eyes were red and he could barely stand. "What are you doing here!" he yelled at her. Raven bit her lip and stood up, helping him stand. "Dad..." she trailed off. But before she could say anything else, he had hit her with the bottle in his hand. She fell to the floor, crying out in pain as the pieces of glass made cuts all over her chest and right shoulder. "Raven, I'm so sorry," she heard him sob before blacking out.


message 141: by Niran (new)

Niran | 1842 comments Everything was wrong, everyone was rushing around. Dante was pacing up and down, saying,"Get him out of here get him out of here". While Alisa was trying to calm him down by saying," It's okay, Dante". Dantes father had no idea what to do, no idea how to respond.
"P-please, please just let me explain myself", His father stuttered, holding his hands up defencelessly. Dante didnt respond, he was shaking with fear and anger while Alisa was holding his hand tightly.
Alisa slowly went on," Dante, just-just give your father a chance".
Dante ripped his hand away from Alisa's and shouted," Give him a chance!?! Why!?! After all these years he's treated me like nothing but shit!!". No, Dante would not allow him another chance.


message 142: by Ladybooksalott (new)

Ladybooksalott (silverstake) Raven woke up in cold sweat, blinking at the pain in her head. She noticed she was still laying on the floor in the living room. She didn't see her dad but she noticed the pieces of glass were already removed from her chest and shoulder, but it was still bleeding. She felt dizzy, it hurt so much. She began to sit up and tried to think of what to do.


message 143: by Ladybooksalott (new)

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message 144: by Niran (new)

Niran | 1842 comments "Son-".
"Don't call me that! I was never your son and you were never my father!", Dante shouted. He didnt want him here. His life was just beginning to become as he wanted it to, why did his father have to come and screw things up!?
Alisa looked at him as she gave him a worried look," Dante", she said softly," Calm down, take a deep breathe and think this through". He had thought it through, he didnt have to think anymore.


message 145: by Ladybooksalott (new)

Ladybooksalott (silverstake) Raven was so dizzy. She groaned and reached for her phone on the table, because she really didn't know what to do, she decided to call Dante. She waited for him to pick up, but she could already feel herself slip away.


message 146: by Niran (new)

Niran | 1842 comments Dante heard his phone ring but didnt pay no mind, instead Alisa went to get it.
"Frank, just get out!", Dante shouted, he would not call him father. "Hello?", Alisa asked slowly, covering her other ear so she could hear.


message 147: by Ladybooksalott (last edited Mar 12, 2013 02:52PM) (new)

Ladybooksalott (silverstake) Raven felt herself slip away. "Dante..? Something.. happened.." she trailed off, not being able to keep her eyes open. "My dad..." she croaked before dropping the phone on the groand and slipping away again, her head dropping on the ground.


message 148: by Niran (new)

Niran | 1842 comments Alisa's forehead creased," Hello? Raven?".
Suddenly Dante stopped shouting and stopped what he was doing. Raven?
"Raven?! What's wrong?". Dante moved towards the door and got his jacket. His sister ran after him and asked," Where are you going?". Dante just got in his car and drove as fast as he could.


message 149: by Ladybooksalott (new)

Ladybooksalott (silverstake) Raven's head hurt a lot. She was unconscious and bleeding a lot. She wanted to wake up, but couldn't. She tried to fight the darkness, but it was overwhelming.


message 150: by Niran (new)

Niran | 1842 comments As soon as Dante reached Ravens house, he did not hesitate to walk up her front porch and repeatedly hit the front door with his fist.
"Hey!", he shouted," Open up!". He needed to get in there quickly.


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