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WOW LAV WAY TO BUILD ME UP NOW WHAT IF THE REST OF IT IS AWFUL AND I DISAPPOINT ALL OF THESE NICE PEOPLE??Juuust kidding. We all know it's going to be fantastic. Thanks, Lav.
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But yeah, it really is cool.
:DDDHOWSABOUT YOU POST SOME MORE OF YOUR NOVEL, TOO, THEN?
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IT IS COMING I AM LAZY AS BALLS SHUT UP AND BE PATIENT
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Lav wrote: "Psst. Colby. You should space your paragraphs."THAT REQUIRES WORK, THOUGH. *cringes*
You should probably expect a new chapter today.
Chapter 3 is up.http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...
WELL MY FREAKING BAD.Lol, here's a quick list of things that have happened so far.
1. Donald is hit with a strawberry milkshake
2. Donald whines about how he needs a hot girl, a car, etc.
3. Donald's computer craps out on him.
4. Donald calls creepy computer guy who says there's nothing that can be done.
5. Donald realizes he's going to have to spend a bunch of money and will not be getting his dream car/girl/etc.
6. Chapter 3 happens.
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...Chapter Four is up! This one is fun because after it the exciting parts are coming.
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Hey, I prefer feedback that actually gives me something to fix to WOWZ THIS ROCKZZZ any day. XD
HEY GUYS I HAVE WRITTEN A NEW CHAPTER SHUT UP NO IT HASN'T ALMOST BEEN A MONTH WHAThttp://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...
I moved this to Urban Fantasy because of reasons.
Chapter seven is up!http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...
Be expecting chapters somewhat more frequently. I have begun putting myself on a 500 word minimum schedule for each day, so that's definitely helping me write more. I plan to finish this novel in the fall.
Chapter Eight is up!http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...
Woooo the story is moving along and I more than doubled my word count goal today. :D
Chapter Nine!https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...
I hit 10,000 words on this story today! Woot woot.
Technical Issues, people.http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...
It's been so long. Because college. And work. And friends. BUT NO WORRIES BECAUSE NOW MOST OF MY FRIENDS HAVE MOVED TO THEIR SCHOOLS AND I CAN BE ALONE NOW YAY
Chapter Seventeen of Technical Issues is up! I would love it if some of you would give this book a read, I've just hit what I feel is about the halfway point and I'm really excited about this story. I'm getting all of the kinks worked out to build up to the ending!http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...
Two chapters in two days because I REALLY wanna finish this before NaNo starts. It's looking more and more possible with every page.http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...
Donald Atkinson's main goals in life are to go to a good college and have an actual car, thus avoiding getting splattered by strawberry milkshakes from the Creamy Cow and cementing the possibility of his dating the girl of his dreams. But that all changes when Donald's computer breaks down and he has to spend his entire savings account on a new laptop. The laptop is much better than his old computer, but it seems to possess strange powers, like messing with time and having overly personal knowledge about people, causing Donald to question the line between truth and lie.
Anyways, yeah, please read and give feedback! One think I keep catching myself doing is switching to present tense.
Ex: "blah blah blah de blah," Nic Cage said.
That is how it should be.
Sometimes, though, I accidentally switch to this.
"Omgeez, I totes agree," Miranda Cosgrove says.
So, yeah, if you catch a switch like that, let me in on it.
I present the link:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...
And in case anyone cares, the writing is PG-13 due to cussing (Though not a ridiculous amount) and sexual content.