The Lightning Thief
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help us write a scene part 2
"Uh, Percy?" said Nico. "I am going to take the girls back to the horse...." And despite their protests, Nico pulled Thalia and Rachel away."Yeah, sorry dude, but I gotta keep Pipes away from this." Jason scooped her up and ran out.
"I am ready to kill you,"she said, putting her knife closer on "kill"
taken aback annabeth hesitated then she heard a voice in her head"what are you doing you supid girl KILL HIM!!!"
it was the voice of Mania
Then her head felt like it was going to explode as Mania screamed"KILL HIM!!!!!" in her head
suddenly angry Annabeth screamed back "if you want him dead so badly DO IT YOURSELF!!!!"
(what should we do now are we going to skip the part of them being torured together?)
"I'm your lady and I said KILL HIM NOW!!!!!!" Mania yelled back but there was no point in arguing with Annabeth with hopes of winning.
(maybe fail -> torture -> try again?)
(maybe fail -> torture -> try again?)
Mae *Deathbringer* wrote: "Sarah wrote: "(what should we do now are we going to skip the part of them being torured together?)"just wait, ill make it good."
(all right)
(there has been SO much torturing. how about "i would rather die than kill u" chat+ kiss= remember!!!)
"This doesn't make sense," she said out loud. All the gears in Annabeth's mind were spinning. "What am I doing here?" she wondered out loud.
"I know you don't trust me," he whispered. Then, seemingly talking to himself, he said, "Why would you choose a memory that would make you forget me? Why am I your greatest fear? Why am I so terrible to you?"
(its too easy shes only been with Mania for like a day we have to make it harder like Mania unleashes a monster on both of them and since Annabeth is like broken she doesnt know whats going on so Percy protects her but gets hurt cause he cant do it alone and for some reason everyone else cant help him so Mania takes him then Annabeth is like all depressed cause shes so depressed and confused so she finds him again in a dungeon while shes walking around the castle all sad and then all the sad stuff happens)
(great idea! see Sarahs are just totally awesome!)
Sarah wrote: "(its too easy shes only been with Mania for like a day we have to make it harder like Mania unleashes a monster on both of them and since Annabeth is like broken she doesnt know whats going on so P..."
(That sounds good)
Annabeth was about to go have talk with this Percy to see if he knew anything more about her (she had a feeling they would get along well), but there was a growling sound right behind them...
(That sounds good)
Annabeth was about to go have talk with this Percy to see if he knew anything more about her (she had a feeling they would get along well), but there was a growling sound right behind them...
Percy's eyes widened. "ANNABETH!" he screamed, and leaped in front of her, holding Riptide once more in his hand.
(because he is just that awesome)
Annabeth just stood there with her knife ready. She was surprised her reflexes didn't tell her to stab at Percy. Wasn't she just in a situation like this?
Jason yelled from behind them. The monster was giant, as big as the Minotaur, but unlike the Minotaur it looked like it was fished out of the sea. It looked like a fish Nereus would throw crackers at but much more intimidating and scaly
(thanks guys :) and Annabeth cant be having any sane thoughts cause shes going crazy :P she has to look sorta helpless and lost)
It had scooped up Annabeth and Percy and carried them away.
Percy groaned as he tried to keep his consciousnesses but it was too late the edges of his vision was already clouded in black
Is the boss alright? Blackjack asked. If I need to stomp on someone, I will, for the boss at least.
Blackjack then resorted to doing charades, but that didn't work out so well for a creature with hooves and four legs.
Suddenly, there was scream from inside.
Suddenly, there was scream from inside.
"I hate to say this guys but we barely made it out alive i think we should go back to camp and come up with a plan with Chiron" Thalia said even though it pained her to leave the two behind
(pipers with nico and thalia and jason)
( i thought they ran in)
( thats what i thought. anyway continue)
(So Thalia and Nico are outside telling Blackjack, and Piper Jason and Percy and Annabeth are inside?)
(That's what I just read. Percy and Annabeth are inside and just got taken by the monster, and piper and Jason were in there too)
Suddenly Jason came running out of the tunnel carrying Piper.
"They took Percy and Annabeth!" He shouted.
"They took Percy and Annabeth!" He shouted.
(ok then i guess i got confused then sorry but Jason and Piper get away right?)
"Who's is this?" Nico asked. Jason and piper looked fine, so it had to be either Percy's or Annabeth's.
the room was empty except for Piper and Jason staring in horror at the puddle of blood in the center of the room
(I thought they were gonna get out?)
"Not today Mania," Jason yelled back.
(lool bye and gtg finish atleast SOME hw)
Jason pulled out his sword and slashed at Mania
Nico pulled his sword out of his belt.
"You want a piece if the underworld, lady?"
"You want a piece if the underworld, lady?"
She laughed. "Mere mortals cannot hurt me," and flicked her hand. Nico and Rachel went crashing into the wall behind them.
An unseen force grabbed Rachel and started dragging her towards Mania....
"Stop this!" Piper yelled, pouring her heart into her charmspeak.
(sorry guys! I can always delete mine, you know.)
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Jason looked up in surprise.
"Percy?"
"Jason?"
"Rachel?"
"Piper?"
"Nico?"
"Annabeth?!?!?!" said Percy.