The Lightning Thief
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help us write a scene part 2
"Oh you've got to be kidding me." Jason groaned, "Piper, please, wake up while she's still out!"
"Piper!" Jason yelled. "Please wake up, please wake up!! Piper!!"
She began to stir.
At least she's not dead, Jason thought.
She began to stir.
At least she's not dead, Jason thought.
(are they in the cell or out? Should they have another setback?)
(I'm pretty sure they're in the cell. I suppose we could add one and Jason gets taken away and then Annabeth comes snooping and finds Piper.)
(i think theyre still in the cell and how about piper gets hurt or something but they still get away cause weve put them through too much already :P)
groaning Pipers eyes slowly opened"Jason? is that you?"
"oh thank the gods piper your alright come on we need to run do you think you can do that?"
(But wasn't piper gonna remind Annabeth about who she really is and stuff?)
She looked up at him helplessly. She guestured to her legs and shook her head. "What happened to your voice?" he asked.
She pointed to her throat and mimicked screaming.
Jason's eyes softened. "I will carry you," he whispered.
((Wait isn't Piper mute right now?))
(k i edited it that better? sorry i forgot)
Sarah wrote: "groaning Pipers eyes slowly opened"Jason? is that you?"
"oh thank the gods piper your alright come on we need to run do you think you can do that?""
she can't talk, so say that she like mouthed it or something
((okey dokes!))
Piper shook her head furiously, and pointed towards the door, telling him to go now.
Piper shook her head furiously, and pointed towards the door, telling him to go now.
He shook his head and slid a hand under her legs. Piper groaned, the world was tilting.
"Sorry," Jason murmured, "It might hurt, but it'll hurt more if we stay here."
She shook her head again. She pointed to herself, motioned walking slow, pointed to him, and then downwards."Slow me down?" Jason clarified.
She nodded.
"I don't care. Put your arms around my neck."
Piper pursed her lips and crossed her arms.
"No matter what you do, I'm not leaving without you. Either we leave together, or we stay together. Take your pick."
"No matter what you do, I'm not leaving without you. Either we leave together, or we stay together. Take your pick."
Jason knew what she would pick, but he didn't budge from his proposition of they staying together.
She rolled her eyes and mimicked writing. Jason nodded and held out his arm. Piper traced,Fine, but if Mania is gaining on us, drop me. Deal?
He nodded, "Deal." Liar liar, pants on fire.
Piper looked at him funny, but wrapped her arms around his neck. He picked her up and ran out as fast as he could.
Running through Mania's dungeon was like being a rat in a maze. There were many unexpected turns, drops and dead ends. Jason guessed Mania didn't like sunlight either because there were only torches of Greek fire every couple of feet. The green light shone eerily across Piper's face.
She looked like she was ready to hurl.
"Just hold on Piper, we'll be out soon..."
She buried her face in his chest and traced, "I'm sorry," on his arm. "It's all my fault."
"No Piper! Don't think that way," Jason said to her.
"We'll be out before you know it and then we can go back to camp and start looking for the others..."
Jason could feel her tears dripping down his shirt. She sobbed in a way that broke his heart. "You almost died," she traced.
"But I didn't, and neither did you. That's what matters."
(she should get her speech back cause the tracing thing doesnt really seem practical seeing as hes running for thei lives and shes holding on to his neck and i reeeallly have to go im supposed to be asleep :P)
(what about this?)Jason leaned down and kissed her quickly and softly. Amazingly, she cleared her throat and started speaking again, hoarsely.
"I'm sorry," she whispered.
(Good transition)
He smiled at her, "It's not your fault, Piper."
He smiled at her, "It's not your fault, Piper."
Jason couldnt beleive it it was like in a fairy tale true loves kiss DID break the spell and a goofy grin found its way on his face and then he burst out laughingpuzzled Piper looked at him then shrugged her shoulders but began to laugh with him and they both ending up on the tunnel ground shaking with laughter
(my absolute last post so if it doesnt work ignore it and ill delete it tmrw bye guys)
Piper turned to look at him. "Jason," she said, "why did Mania want to capture me anyway?"His grin faded and he swallowed.
"I don't know, Pipes," Jason said slowly. "There was this weird dream and you were in it, but I don't know really. Helping save the world once does come with it's prices though. Mania knows your strong..."
Piper was staring at him. "You had a dream about me and you didn't tell me about it?" she said slowly.
He shrugged guiltily.
"Sorry piper," he said, "I thought that maybe if I didn't tell you nothing would happen."
"Sorry piper," he said, "I thought that maybe if I didn't tell you nothing would happen."
"what happened?" Jason gave her a brief summary and then said, "Mania is the goddess of insanity and fear. and she knows my greatest fear is losing you."
Piper couldn't help but smile at that.
Jason sighed. "I know." He tensed suddenly. "Piper," he said, very softly and slowly, "we have an unexpected visitor. Get behind me."
i don't know what are you talking about
(like the story? or is Jason actually saying this?)
"I dont know yet," he whispered back,(it is gonna be Annabeth)
"Annabeth?" both him and Piper gasped in unison."Well, thank Lord Zeus," said Piper. "Hey, no offense, but we need Percy even more than you right now. Do you know where he is?"
"Why does everyone keep calling me Annabeth?" Annabeth asked. She sounded unsure of herself. "And who is this Percy?"
Jason laughed nervously. "The demigod who is an idiot but awesome fighter who is also..... your boyfriend? Ring a bell?"
He shared a nervous glance with Piper. "Do you think Hera...." he trailed off. Piper's eyes widened in understanding.
Jason pinned himself against Piper. Clearly Annabeth wasn't herself. "Don't you touch my girlfriend," he threatened.
He turned to whisper in Piper's ear. "Can you run?""I can't even walk," she whispered desperately.
"Crawl, then. As fast as you can."
And that is when Percy saved the day.
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