The Lightning Thief
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help us write a scene part 2
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(okii this is gonna be so awesome and why dont we make it worse by letting annabeth (while still under the spell) point out percy hiding then mania takes him but doesnt tell her where just says she took care of him but he wasnt hurt so that way annabeth feels worse and mania can taunt her with that while shes locked up?)
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(What should Annabeth's new name be? Should it be symbolic, random, something like Annabeth or Athena?
Mae *academy princess* wrote: "Sarah wrote: "(okii this is gonna be so awesome and why dont we make it worse by letting annabeth (while still under the spell) point out percy hiding then mania takes him but doesnt tell her where..."
That would be a good idea because it's kind of like what Kronos did to form his army/followers
That would be a good idea because it's kind of like what Kronos did to form his army/followers
(hold on a sec let me catch up)
(I'm literally looking through my Greek mythology book - had to get it for English)
(hey i have an idea. just an idea. Mania sends Annabeth to kill Percy, and Percy gives up and gives Annabeth his weapon and says, "Kill me, if you want to, Wise Girl," and then she gets overwhelmed with one single memory that makes her hesitate and in that moment he kisses her)
Sarah wrote: "(hey i have an idea. just an idea. Mania sends Annabeth to kill Percy, and Percy gives up and gives Annabeth his weapon and says, "Kill me, if you want to, Wise Girl," and then she gets overwhelmed..."
(That would be good at end after torturingIt's so Divergent)
(That would be good at end after torturing
(What about Psyche for Annabeth's new name. From the myth Cupid and Psyche when Cupid is sent by his mother Venus to make Psyche, who's really pretty, fall in love with someone ugly and they fall in love. Sort of goes with Sarah's idea)
u guys like my idea? ok!
Mania paused. "Phsyche," she said.
(mania to annabeth)
"hmm...thats interesting name but it doesnt sound right are you sure? Cause Annabeth sounded a whole lot better"A mixture of emotions flashed over Manias face but were gone in an instant.
"Yes, i am sure, why would you doubt me?"
(omgg i am so excited i cant wait this story is gonna be epic!!! *happy dance* ok back to writing sorry)
"I don't remember you," Annabeth reminded her.
(Okay so we have that Annabeth is gonna be wandering around doing mania's dirty work and she sees Percy sneaking around in Manias castle or even lair or whatever and the she tells Mania (she doesnt know what shes doing)then mania tells her that she "took care of him, but didn't hurt him. Then Annabeth starts to question whether mania is really trustworthy then mania throws Annabeth in a cell next to Percy's. Then she tortures Percy and Annabeth can hear his screams and all that drama. THEN mania will realise she needs Annabeth do one more thing for her or something and she sends her to kill Percy and Percy gives her his sword and say "kill me if you want" and Annabeth is overwhelmed and hesitates they Percy kisses her and we'll go from there. After he kisses her Annabeth realises mania is the evil one.
Mae *academy princess* wrote: ""No reason, your the most trustworthy person ive met so far." said Physce.(Idk how to spel or pronounce that)"
Call her Annabeth or we're all gonna get real confused real fast. She just thinks she's physce or whatever
Call her Annabeth or we're all gonna get real confused real fast. She just thinks she's physce or whatever
Sarah wrote: ""I don't remember you," Annabeth reminded her."
"You will dear. Just give it time," mania says sweetly.
"Okay," Annabeth says not really believing her.
"You will dear. Just give it time," mania says sweetly.
"Okay," Annabeth says not really believing her.
"alright then if you say so. now i can do something im going to waste away if sit in this chair for a moment longer""that wouldn't be so bad" muttered Mania under her breath
((Wow!!! LOts of comments!!))
Annabeth eyed her suspiciously, but shrugged it off.
Annabeth eyed her suspiciously, but shrugged it off.
(what sort of things is Mania going to make Annabeth do? like cleaning her house or killing her enemies?)
(No idea.)
I suppose I should just go with it, Annabeth thought. I'm stuck here either way. That made her think....
"Where are we anyway?"
I suppose I should just go with it, Annabeth thought. I'm stuck here either way. That made her think....
"Where are we anyway?"
(could u guys like delete the posts with no writing ecept for the explaination ones cuz I am so confused)
*****************************************************Percy sat on the ruins of the gate to Tartus, looking bummed.
Nico came up and sat beside him. "Hey, man."
"Annabeth's greatest fear was me," Percy said, whirling to face him. "What a great boyfriend, eh?" He cracked a smile, but it had no warmth.
"That can't be right," Nico said, "Why would Annabeth be scared of you?"
Sarah wrote: "(k i deleted all my random comments. did everyone else? just keep the ones that are funny or important :P)"
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"I don't know" Percy said in despair "She wouldnt look at me and she even went with Mania willingly! Its all my fault!" And while Mania was torturing all she could say was, "its not spiders, its you"
He covered his face with his hands in anguish
Nico felt awkward. He'd never exactly been good at consoling people...
"Er... it's gonna be ok..." He said, patting Percy's shoulder.
"Er... it's gonna be ok..." He said, patting Percy's shoulder.
"Brave Annabeth.... why would she be afraid of me? And how could she just forget?"
Nico sighed and shook his head, "I don't know man. Mania said one memory, but Annabeth's completely forgotten everything!"
Rachel, obviously seeing that Nico wasn't helping swooped in and put her arm around Percy."Don't worry Percy, Annabeths fine shes smart she probably already had a plan and is on her way home as we speak with Manias head wrapped in a bow"
She left out the part about her having a horrible feeling about the situation too.
"No," Percy muttered, "must have been some memory.'
"What could make her forget everyting?" Thalia asked.
He jumped up. "When we first met!!! I bet that is the memory she chose. But why? I know I was covered in sewage from Clarisse's toilet accident, but it wasn't that bad of a memory."
(Hm... maybe Mania takes away a memory, and when she does that she also takes anything associated with that memory so that Annabeth can never remember it again. And since Percy's connected in some way/shape/form to all her memories whether he was there or she told him about it, she forgot everything. ))
(okkk ya thats right!!! cause maybe she loved him so much or something he was always a part of her life and she always thought about him i'll delete my post)
(lool ya lets go to them we havnt seen them for a while lets end chapter 2 first tho)
(lool sarah that works :P)
When he finally opened his eyes he thought he was dead where ever he was, was so dark he couldn't tell if he had actually opened his eyes or not. If not for the throbbing pain in his head he would have definelty believed himself dead
Jason tried to sit up, finding it difficult but not impossible. It was dark, but there was enough light to make out his surroundings. It looked like a jail cell, but he couldn't remember how he'd gotten there.
Piper, he thought, I was looking for Piper!!
Using the wall, he stood up.
Piper, he thought, I was looking for Piper!!
Using the wall, he stood up.
(okay reposting) *******************************************************
Jason found out that Piper was in the cell next to him. Turns out, she was in so much pain, she couldn't even talk to him. So, he had mostly been talking to himself, just to keep his sanity. Piper finally whispered one word, but it sounded like that word killed her to say.
"Jason."
(should we make it harder for Jason to find piper?)
(lol so r we going to make it harder or not?)
(but we should at least write how he finds her cause its like theres gonna be a window into her cell)
(make it a little harder like he has to convince Mania or digs a hole or steals a key something like that)
He had found her by looking through the bars before Mania threw him in his cell. She had made him wake up to walk, but Jason had seen Piper. "Piper!" he yelled.
Her head snapped up. He gripped the bars and looked at her dirty tearstreaked face. As Mania pulled him away, he screamed,
"I WILL GET YOU OUT! I WILL COME BACK FOR YOU!!"
A shock came into Piper's cell as if Jason was using his powers against his will.
(It kind of hurts to write about these awesome characters like this)
(It kind of hurts to write about these awesome characters like this)
(I think Jason woke up in one of Mania's dungeon cells, he saw Piper, who's very hurt, and Mania just dragged him away screaming, Piper got hurt again somehow to distract Jason and Piper screamed to Jason.)
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