The Lightning Thief
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help us write a scene part 2
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Little did she notice, whenever the ring was touching her, it warmed very slightly and a tiny voice was calling her, warning her. It twisted very suddenly in one direction and pointed down a path that led to certain doom, for all of them.
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(now, setting up the scene where they meet the rest of the Forgottens. You guys can each play your part or whatever)
(im speechless..really. you guys are that good)
(you are too :))
Annabeth was thinking of briefing Percy about what to say or not to say to these "Forbiddens" when they met them. Seaweed Brain was bound to tell them all the intel on what's been happening on Olympus to help them. Annabeth thought better of this idea since there was one of these goddesses in their mist.
Annabeth was thinking of briefing Percy about what to say or not to say to these "Forbiddens" when they met them. Seaweed Brain was bound to tell them all the intel on what's been happening on Olympus to help them. Annabeth thought better of this idea since there was one of these goddesses in their mist.
"Thank you for um throwing those rocks." Percy gave a small grin. Phillia nodded like it was no big deal."This is the Temple of the Forgottens" Phillia gestured to some gods and goddesses behind her staring blankly at the floor or window,frowning.
"Forgottens?" Percy asked.Annabeth rolled her eyes.Seaweed brain.
"Yes" Phillia sighed unhappily "There was Diabetes,Diarrhea-"
Percy stifled a laugh. Annabeth glared pointedly at him.
Phillia continued to name the gods and goddess[sorry i don't know them, i just got into mythology in 4th grade..]
When Phillia had finished giving the names of all the Forgotten gods that lived,Percy explained the situation and problems of Olympus.
Sarah wrote: "Jason was having the same dream again. He could tell by the way cold fear gripped his insides with icy hands as he entered the land of sleep. He was in pitch black, the darkness consuming him. He f..."NOT............SO.........MUCH! YESH!
[what should they do now?]
(not sure)
(i out of ideas)
OJ wrote: "Sarah wrote: "Jason was having the same dream again. He could tell by the way cold fear gripped his insides with icy hands as he entered the land of sleep. He was in pitch black, the darkness consu..."sorry....
Philia looked at him in a strange way. "Percy, have you heard of a god named Lieon?
Percy mentaly ran down the names if greek gods in his mind.
Percy mentaly ran down the names if greek gods in his mind.
Annabeth answered for him. "The god of tatararus. Yeah. You could say we've been framilairized." Her tone was scathing. She had no love or affection for that one.
Philia halted to a stop.
Percy and Annabeth stop when Philia stops
"What?" she choked.
"He imprisoned me," Annabeth said bitterly. "Beat me."
Philia stayed there as she heard Annabeth. "You're wrong." She said
"No," Annabeth said flatly. "I'm not wrong. He's a monster."
"That can't be true," Philia choked. "Please tell me you are joking."
Percy glanced at Annabeth. "You can't be serious."
"How-how is he?" Philia stutters.
"Why does it matter to you?" Percy asked. "He's the god of Tartarus. What good is he?"
"Nothing. Forget it. We are here," she announced.
Percy and Annabeth stare at the building as Philia leads them to it.(hows it look again?)
(Gorgeous)Their mouths are agape, and they stare at the beautiful, golden palace before them.
(do you guys think I could write a book?)
(yeah, you could, i could, you can write a book)
Philia walks up the steps, and Annabeth and Percy follow her
Philia walks up the steps, and Annabeth and Percy follow her
"Welcome," she says, gesturing her arms widely, "to the Temple of the Forgottens."
Annabeth gazed around in awe, Lieon forgotten. "This is amazing! Percy! Look at this architecture!!!"
He mumbled something under his breath.
Annabeth continued to gave at the temple as Philia lead them into the temple. Percy followed, but didn't forget about Lieon, unlike Annabeth who already forgot
"Philia?" he asked softly.
((I hope this is okay of me to do.))
"Yes?" she asked, turning to him, an open look on her face.
"Yes?" she asked, turning to him, an open look on her face.
"What's wrong?"(yeah its fine)
"I'm fine," she lied, her tone unconvincing.
(I don't know where you're going with this.)
(I don't know where you're going with this.)
(oh... Percy is confused about her big thing with Lieon)
(I gathered that much, but I don't know what you want to be said about it. Philla is your character after all.)
(Oh. Have fun! I don't care. :) )
"Lieon, he's sort of-"She was interrupted by a booming voice.
Percy jumped, but kept his eyes trained on Philla.
"PHILIA!!!! WHO IS THIS???" (which god is this?)
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