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message 801: by Serena (new) - rated it 4 stars

Serena Jason couldn't help his small smile, Piper was pretty great like that - even if he hadn't wanted to put her in harms way. She had come anyway. He should have known better - they were better together.


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"C'mon Grace!" she said. "Focus here! we got monster butt to whoop!"


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"There are more?" Jason asked.


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"Move it Sparky!"


message 805: by [deleted user] (new)

Piper then remembered the promise she'd made to Chiron. She needed to find Nico di Angelo.


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"Nico," she whispered. "Jason! Where's Nico?!"


message 807: by [deleted user] (new)

"Not sure. There was a big face-off between him and a monster a little while before. I think the dude got confused with the Cyclopes ability to mimic voiced. He said something about Percy. He might be in the infirmary now with Rachel or out in the woods fighting more monsters."


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(was piper there when Nico had his whole mortal shpeel?)


message 809: by Serena (new) - rated it 4 stars

Serena Piper frowned towards the infermy - it was closer - but she felt a tug towards the woods that felt like a ache. She decided that was the way to go.


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Erin *Arwin Livingston* wrote: "(was piper there when Nico had his whole mortal shpeel?)"

(yeah...love the word shpeel :))


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(isn't it a great word?!)
"Percy," she said to herself. "Oh gods!! Please tell me it wasn't about killing him!" She sprinted for the woods.
"Piper!"


message 812: by [deleted user] (last edited Mar 05, 2013 08:13PM) (new)

"Move it or lose it, Jas!" Piper shouted. This was bad. Really bad. Like falling into Tartarus bad.


message 813: by Serena (new) - rated it 4 stars

Serena Jason finished off the monster, following her. Toiler rolled his eyes toward the lightening heavens - Eos with her rosy arms was rising in the east. At a slower pace he followed the lovebirds.


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Piper stopped at the edge of the forest.
"Okay. Okay. If I were a Son of Hades in a panic, where would I be?"


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"Nico," Piper muttered, "Nico. Where are you?"
(Why does she need to find Nico again?)


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(to watch him for Chiron to make sure Nemesis isn't in his brain making him do her will)


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(right. thanks Cara!)


message 818: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah That's when Piper's hurt foot started giving her pain. She was getting black spots in her vision.


message 819: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah She staggered backwards. "Yeah," she croaked.


message 821: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah "Jason, I'm fine." She started walking again, staggering slightly.


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"Piper."
"I need to find Nico!"


message 823: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah "Piper." He rushed forward to catch her as she fell back, dizzy.


Isabella (All Da Ladies Luv Leo) Thomas "I'll find Nico. Toilers can you take Piper to the infirmary?"


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"Thank you! SOMEONE got my name right. And sure, I'll take your girlfriend."
Toilers hailed a Party Pony like he would a cab and they were off.


Isabella (All Da Ladies Luv Leo) Thomas Jason frowned Did they call him Toilets?


message 827: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah Piper shot him a death glare. "Find Nico," she pleaded over her shoulder even as they rode away.


Stephanie (THANK YOU GUYS SO MUCH! I am in love with greek stuff and almost stayed up all night to read this. Can I join this?)


message 829: by [deleted user] (new)

(Absolutely!! We love new people!!!)


Stephanie (yay!:D.)


message 831: by [deleted user] (new)

(WELCOME!!! :))


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Jason scanned the edge of the forest. He couldn't think of where he might find Nico? Then it hit him. Find Rachel and he would probably find Nico.


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Trying to wave his way through the sea of orange and bronze, he spotted flickers of red hair running around in circles trying to figure out what to do.


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"Rachel!" he shouted and she whipped around looking to see who had called her name. Jason ran up to her.
"Have you seen Nico?"
"I thought he was with you?!"


message 835: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah "No," sais Jason.


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"Oh Zeus! What now?! We have to find him!"


message 837: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah "I'm trying," said Jason.


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Rachel gave him a look that said "I doubt that."
Jason ignored her.
"Where do you think he'd be?" he asked.


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"Whoa," Jason said leaping back as a stray slice from a Demeter kids with a sword came wizzing past them.
"Let's look by the Big House!" Rachel shouted. "I heard him muttering something about his destiny."


message 840: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah "Um, okay," Jason muttered.


Isabella (All Da Ladies Luv Leo) Thomas They went to the Big House


Stephanie (does this fit?)
Nico took a step closer to them.
"Nico, stop!" yelled Rachel


message 843: by [deleted user] (new)

(I think so)


Isabella (All Da Ladies Luv Leo) Thomas Nico looked at her, but his eyes were bloodred and his mouth was foaming with black.... something


message 845: by [deleted user] (new)

(That's a frightening image)
"Nico?" Rachel took a step back.


Isabella (All Da Ladies Luv Leo) Thomas (Why thank you)

Nico moved closer to her, a knife in his hand. His hair turned gray and his sking withered and turned a dark shade of purple....


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Jason stepped in front of Rachel, holding his sword in front of him.


Isabella (All Da Ladies Luv Leo) Thomas Inhumanly -or demigodly - possible he swiped at Jason, leaving a bleeding cut.
Jason inspected it, jumping out of reach, and saw it was turning black rapidly.


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"Rachel," he said trying to stay calm, "run."


Isabella (All Da Ladies Luv Leo) Thomas "But what about you?" She asked
Jason looked at his arm and saw that the whole thing was black and was moving to his abdomen, where his heart would push the venom faster than it was moving before
"I'll be right behind you" he said.
Nico suddenly doubled over, gasping. His eyes returned to normal, his mouth stopped foaming, his skin smoothed itself and tuned to while like always, and his knife clattered to the ground.


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