The Lightning Thief
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Jason glared at her and started hacking.**********************************************
Piper managed to Iris-message Chiron, who was still at the far side of the Camp, and told him about Nico.
"That is very serious" he finally said.
(the photo is wrong but it could be allergic to sunlight)
"I think this may have been sent against us as a warning, but by whom, Nemesis or otherwise - or why, I can not yet say." Chairon frowned, staring into the distance with narrow eyes. (is it just one monster, or many of the same kind?)
(It could be like cyclopes, there's always more than one)
"Well then what do we do now, Chiron?" Piper asked desperately, "If we don't even know where it came from..."
"The only thing we can do. Fight it. Do not allow it to get into the camp. As for Nico, we need to be on our guard. I hate to say it, but having-him in the camp could be very dangerous."
"Because of Nemesis?" Piper asked.
"Yes. I suggest we keep an eye on him for any unusual activity."
"Like a detail?" Piper asked.
Chiron gave her questioning look.
"Someone on his tail. Will do."
"Like a detail?" Piper asked.
Chiron gave her questioning look.
"Someone on his tail. Will do."
Piper nodded, "I'm on it, Chiron.'
She waved her hand in front of the Iris message to make it disappear. Time to find Nico.
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Nico's sword slashed through the air, turning a monster to dust.
Nico's sword slashed through the air, turning a monster to dust.
Gods, he thought, it feels good to be out here. The woods were an excellent place to forget about what was going on outside. They were the perfect place to stop thinking about Rachel.
Nico hadn't wanted to talk to Leo after he'd mentioned girls. Fighting was much more relaxing than talking.
A strange chill crept up his spine...
Suddenly, the monster's face morphed and Nico felt his mind freeze. The face of Percy was on the monster.
Come and get me, Nico the monster/Percy hissed in Nemesis's voice
"No..." Nico said backing up. No one was in the forest with him so if he tripped, fell, got eaten, etc., no one would hear.
(should he kill it?)
(should he kill it?)
(Probably. It wouldn't be very manly of him to go running out of the woods screaming like a little girl.)
The Percy Monster snapped towards him COME GET ME NICO! it yelled.
Nico stood his ground as it advanced. He stood in a clearing, sunlight glaring down as if waiting. It crept to the edges and sneered with Percy's mouth. It hurt to see his friend's features twisted in disgust while looking upon him.
(sunlight burns this king of monster?)
"I don't want to hurt you, Percy." Nico said firmly. In the back of his mind, he knew that this wasn't Percy, but something told him to just keep talking, "You're my friend."
"Am I?" Fake-Percy asked, "I got your sister killed when you were only ten. That doesn't sound very friendly to me."
"Am I?" Fake-Percy asked, "I got your sister killed when you were only ten. That doesn't sound very friendly to me."
Nico froze.
"That was an accident," he said.
"That was an accident," he said.
"Face it Nico, we're not friends. You're just a little boy running from your problems. You want to kill me," Not-So-Much-Percy said like Nemesis would.
This isn't real, Nico thought. She's just trying to get n my head.
Unfortunately, it was working.
Unfortunately, it was working.
"You know what else you weren't there to see, Nico?" PErcy thing asked, "Me and Rachel's first kiss."
Ok, now I know that she's trying to make me mad. But he couldn't help the twinge of jealousy in his stomach.
Ok, now I know that she's trying to make me mad. But he couldn't help the twinge of jealousy in his stomach.
Nico's fingers quavered on the sword hilt. This was personal now but between him and Nemesis.
Nico lifted his sword, but that thing had Percy's face, he couldn't attack it.
The Percy thing sneered, "Weak!" It spit
Not-Percy's eyes rolled, taunting."Can't come to me?"
"I'll come to you!" Not-Percy pounced.
Nico knew he would have died a messy death, if not for the screams that were not his.
The cyclopes had mimicked Percy's voice and lots of campers were streaming in. Percy Jackson in trouble? Big news.
Among them was a bloody Jason and a scowling Clarisse."Nico?"
(so, ugh, the monster burning - it has Percy's face still?)
Nico's head whipped around to face them, and they jumped back from his expression of anger, fear, and confusion.
"Can you see him?" Nico asked, his voice wavering.
"See who, di Angelo," Clarisse said annoyed.
"Percy," Nico whispered.
"See who, di Angelo," Clarisse said annoyed.
"Percy," Nico whispered.
"I see a big, dirty monster you need to kill!" Clarisse said irritably.
"Percy?" Jason said. "I didn't know he'd gotten back."
"H-he didn't really..." Nico said, "Ugh I have a headache..."
"I, I don't think I can kill it." Nico pointedly didn't look down to where he smelt burning.
"Nico? Are you okay?" one of the campers asked. Nico didn't recognize him.
The monster continued to advance. Apparently, he didn't like being called dirty, a monster, or anything involving the word "kill" except if it was to make a demigod sandwich. Big was okay, Jason guessed, because he yelled, "Big Bob will destroy you all!!!!!"
(lol, Clarisse smash?)
"Shut it Big Bob! The boy's having a moment!" Clarisse hissed and spat as she split Big Bob's skull."Ew. Overkill, much?" A boy with Athena's grey eyes muttered.
(lol :))
"You too, Malcolm," Clarisse shot him a dirty look. She focused her attention back on Nico.
"You too, Malcolm," Clarisse shot him a dirty look. She focused her attention back on Nico.
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Blond, blue eyed, not every bright.
Clarisse's smile promised blood and pain.
"Don't try that again, huh?"