The Lightning Thief
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help us write a scene part 2
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Feb 28, 2013 06:03PM
( Are we making this as we go along; ideas? What's going to happen~ )
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"Do you need me to do anything besides watching him and making sure he doesn't burn the whole place down? Wait, I'll gladly oblige to throwing water on him then."
"Hey Pipes, how's Jason? Last I saw he abandoned me" Leo said.
(Toiler could be Clarisse's brother? Is that a last name?)
"He was off rescuing us," Piper said, not going into details.
(no, his first name, and yes he could be clarisses brother)
Rena (Greeksays) wrote: "(Toiler could be Clarisse's brother? Is that a last name?)"
(Possibly :) Toiler la Rue. Toilet la Rue. It's catchy. He could also be the last person who saw her and hold the knowledge to where she is)
(Possibly :) Toiler la Rue. Toilet la Rue. It's catchy. He could also be the last person who saw her and hold the knowledge to where she is)
Cara wrote: "Rena (Greeksays) wrote: "(Toiler could be Clarisse's brother? Is that a last name?)"(Possibly :) Toiler la Rue. Toilet la Rue. It's catchy)"
LOL
(It looks like we have the next plot!)
****************"So" Percy said. "Remember anything else?"
"You drool when you sleep, you have weird dreams and you said "Eat my pants" to the Furies" Annabeth said, still overcoming shock.
"Everything, I think," said Annabeth. "Percy, you knew what I was going to do, right?" She thought of the relief in his eyes.
"Umm yeah, anything else?"
"What are we going to do now?" Annabeth whispered. "I don't think I can just sit back after what happened. I almost killed you."
"Try to get out. Live"
(you know when Annabeth was screaming and Mania was attacking about at the beginning; and Annabeth said it was about Percy, what if it wasn't that she was afraid of him - but for him - as in losing him)
(yea)
"Living isn't easy for us is it, Perseus?" Annabeth asked, even though she knew the answer.
"Annabeth." Percy swallowed. "Are you... am I really your greatest fear?"
(GTG!!)
His face fell. "Why?" he whispered.
"It's complicated Percy. You know that I haven't had a solid family. I thought Thalia and Luke were - they are - , but they're both gone now. I can't lose you."
His head snapped up. "So... you aren't scared of me?" he sounded hopeful.
"How could I ever be? With those seal sea eyes... Your brave, your loyal."
"Thank the gods." he breathed.
"You ready to blow this joint," Annabeth asked. "I've had enough time in here."
"I hope you don't mean literally..." Percy sounded wary. He had enough for one day.
"I hope you don't mean literally..." Percy sounded wary. He had enough for one day.
"That's my girl, alright," he said.
( Looking at page 2:You shall meet the goddess that seeks revenge
And hang from a cliff edge.
The son of Poseidon must stop the goddess of fears
Across the ocean filled with tears
Find the island where sailors meet their doom
Enter the way to the wailing tomb
A brother, a traitor and a friends sacrifice
To find the sword buried deep in his eyes.
What if someone sought revenge for Mania? Just tossing ideas out...)
(awesome! back to the story now)
(So Phrike is now after Percabeth and is willing to ravage them into pieces... COOLIO (not for Percy and Annabeth but still). It's awesome how you know everything about mythology Rena! Prophecy says friends sacrifice... What if we go all Rick Riordan on this and have Percy chose between saving the world or saving Annabeth from Phrike?)
There was Greek Fire in the dungeons. Percy thought of the last times they were in contact with Greek Fire. Explosions, demon cruise ships and Beckendorf. Chrysaor, pirates, Argo II. Not good times.
When they exited the castle (which had awesome architecture, Annabeth noticed) they were somewhere near the ocean. East coast perhaps, Percy thought, smelling the sea salty air.
There was Greek Fire in the dungeons. Percy thought of the last times they were in contact with Greek Fire. Explosions, demon cruise ships and Beckendorf. Chrysaor, pirates, Argo II. Not good times.
When they exited the castle (which had awesome architecture, Annabeth noticed) they were somewhere near the ocean. East coast perhaps, Percy thought, smelling the sea salty air.
One never did knew where they might end up coming out of the Underworld. In the distance was a cliff edge that Percy felt uneasy about. He could smell the sea but he could not yet see it. Percy knew when he saw the sea he knew where he would be. (I sent Sarah my ideas for the prophesy; so as not to clutter up the thread to much.)
"Do you think Mania'll notice us gone?" Percy asked. "Duh Seaweed Brain! We were the only ones in the cells!" "Will she go after us?"
"She's been weakened so she'll most likely send someone after us"
"Oh goody!" Percy said sarcastically.
****************************************************
I'm dead meat Nico thought as he bearly dodged the monster's razor sharp wings. They may be pretty, but they were deadly. As the monster lunged, it's teeth bared, he saw Rachel with a sword, hacking and swinging. "No!" he yelled but Rachel had it under control, amazingly. She climed the monster's spiney back and plunged her sword into the monster's heart -which he had discovered was between it's wings- . Nico stared in awe. Rachel had never had any type of training. Then he remembered a myth, back when he played the silly game, that the spirit of Delphi was a talented fighter, and he realized that any moment the spirit would wear off and since Rachel was still on the thing's back, she would fall and break her neck. He was in no position to save her so he grabbed the nearest camper and told her to grab Rachel, kidnap her if she had to, but get her off the monster's back.
(Sarah's asked that we put things on hold for tonight with Annabeth / Percy, goodnight everyone!)
(Okay. I think we can do that.)
Nico watched the camper climbing up the monsters back out of the corner of his eye, at a painstakingly slow pace. "C'mon, c'mon," he whispered as he dodged the monsters tail and globs of gross blackness.
Suddenly, there was a scream and Nico's head snapped up.
Nico watched the camper climbing up the monsters back out of the corner of his eye, at a painstakingly slow pace. "C'mon, c'mon," he whispered as he dodged the monsters tail and globs of gross blackness.
Suddenly, there was a scream and Nico's head snapped up.
((Bye!))((Can anyone continue with Nico and Rachel? Matbe Rachel can explain that she couldn't be with him, and Nico would stubbornly keep vying for her love))
((Well right now Rachel's on the monsters back, so I really don't think that would be greatest place for that type of discussion.)
(ya sorry guys I have been doing some research to help us and will send all of the consistent writers all of the info tomorrow. Feel free to continue at camp halfblood though. Remember, Chiron and the party ponies have joined the picture.) Of course, it was Rachel
(I meant after that. I didn't see your post)The monster, after a few weak swings, finally died. The camper grabbed Rachel before she collapsed. Nico's head turned to the screan and he saw and Aphrodite girl sobbing becouse her nail broke.
"Seriously!" He muttered. "Save the screams for something important."
He hurried over to Rachel.
He hurried over to Rachel.
(can't sleep)
"Someone get Rachel to Will Solace, NOW!"
"What about me," cried Drew. "I broke a nail and my mascara is smudged!"
"Hop on," a Party Pony from Miami said to Nico and Rachel.
"Someone get Rachel to Will Solace, NOW!"
"What about me," cried Drew. "I broke a nail and my mascara is smudged!"
"Hop on," a Party Pony from Miami said to Nico and Rachel.
Rachel blinked back to reality, the spirit gone. "What happened?" she asked. Nico smirked. "You single-handedly slew the wierd shadow monster."
"REALLY?" She loomed at his suspiciously.
"Well your body, but the Spirit of Delphi inhabitated your mind"
"Why do I see three of you right now?" Rachel asked. She was swaying back and forth but that wasn't from the trotting of the Miami Party Pony.
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