Some feedback would be greatly appreciated :)

[Jemma]

So recently I've finally started my "urban fantasy" (only way I can think to describe it thanks to shelving at my local bookstore) novel. Just a measly 4/5,000 words at the moment but getting there. I'm posting my drafts as I go along. Hoping to drum up some advice and interest respectively. I'd like to think the genre is similar to some of the things we read with the group so I'd be really grateful if you guys would check it out! I apologize for the occasionally typo, as I said its in a really raw draft state at the moment. The prologue and first chapter are up so far so remember to scroll down to the first entry. The second chapter should be up tonight with any luck.

Beforeiforget13.wordpress.com

[T.S.]

Where do I find this, Jemma? I am far too lazy to search through every topic on VFH.

[Serendi]

She has the url: it's http://Beforeiforget13.wordpress.com

And I've now learned it only makes a link when you have the http thing in front.